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Birdy91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Part-2
haaayyyeee superbbb... romaaanticcc yaaarrr... rainy love of raya.. Issshhh beautifullyyy written agn..👏

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Birdy91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Part-3
Ommmggg The way u described d whole scene... mannn sooo beautifulll.. justtt wowww *clap clap* perfect words, movements, emotions, romance... haaayyeee was jst p.p.p. perrrfeccttt... whole write up is sooo mesmerizing...

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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
its simply beautiful, the way you played with words to describe the serene atmosphere and perfect ambiance to make these love birds drenched in their own love is amazing, take a bow from me, all kudos to you, will wait eagerly for next part, update ASAP

Thanks dear for your beautiful words...😊

And for PM u r welcome😊

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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: chillpc
beautiful...!!!
the description of the unisionand the nature helping them... penned really well...!!!

contn soon...

Thank you so much...😊

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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: leena04
Part 3

it was way too gud the way u discribe everything was the bestjust awesome... i just loved ityaar too gud the way u r taking it to held RaYa on sizzling mood they r just awesome do post next soon waiting... ...

Thanks so much for ur beautiful comment...

Will be counting soon...😊

Edited by devmohan - 11 years ago

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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: tulshan1989
full of raya romance
fab update continue soon

Thanks for liking it...😊

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SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Superbly written..i can feel each nd every moment of raya...ghoshhh romance in telephone boot thud thud totally dead...its jst jst mindblowing...yaar when u bring thz idea...cant wait 4 next

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devmohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: luvbalh
beautifull... wow.. ram started in booth wonderful.. wanted to see rain n raya but never happened thanku . this is so hot like raya
thanku

Thanks so much...

and please dear don't thank me...I'm Glad u like it...😃