OS:MY LOVE....PREVIEW IN Page6 - Page 2

good start

Awsome starting..very nicely written...waitting 4 next..if it possible thn pm me next time :)

Originally posted by: shavii

hey u have started an os👏

nice name my love😉

btw it is soo confusing😕

looking more for ur os as want to see how story unfolds😊
may be next part make it clear😊

thnks for commenting,ur confusion will get cleared in subsequent parts

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Wow advitha nimmolgu obba adbhut kaviyitrI. Tumba chennagide. Thumbs up especially priya's everlasting beauty description.

Yenu doctre malegu preetigu vihshesh Nantide alva. ganesh movie thara aagoytu.😊
I really liked the way u described nature n its bliss, priya her posture her eyes n cherry lips (adbhuta kalpane) her charm n ram loosing himself in her eternal beauty just to know whom she I waiting why she is sad feeling very sad seeing her sad face. His disappointment of not getting the Focourge n bechaini fabulous advitha.
Story start superb, description amazing n end shocking n lil consfued but hopes alive just bcoz of 100 missed calls.
I feel ram is waiting for her only bt just lost himself in her.
Continue soon.
I started reading b4 u pm. Thanku for. The pm.
I happily and humbly accept your dedication. It's an honour for me thank you dear. Thank u so much.
Bareeeta iri. Naavu ododikke sada siddha. 😊

thank u very for commenting dear i wil continue soon...full kannada comment super malthi...thnks dear

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Hey Advitha..good to see u writing.. 👍🏼
Nice start...little confusing though..may be picture will get clear in next..
Beautifull description of nature, Priya's beauty nd Ram's thoughts nd feelings.. 👏
Looking forward to it..
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..

thnks for commenting viro...i wil answer to all ur confusion in next part..