RaYa - OS - raastein phir mil gaye, updated on pg 16

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SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Woww going smoothly...raya atlast feeling 4 each other...waitting 4 confession!!

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IndYa4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Scene 1 - Fab opening...
Love the kind hearted Tycoon and Hard working Priya.

Looking forward to this story...

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IndYa4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

OMG... Dreamy..

Please please write the next one soon...

eaaagerly waiting.

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peeyara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

loved the update, it was beautiful 👏

aww Priya didnt went for dinner on Ram's birthday😕

finally Ram has gifted phone to priya so that he can call her wenever he wants, good

koi mujhe bhi ek phone gift karde😆 i wont mind k kaun gift kar rahe hai😆

waiting for last update..continue soon

thanks for pm😊

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Sanjukta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

wow yaar kya menu thi ..indeed it is my fav too..when my mom makes it for me..

What an os it is ...still now love each and every bit ..

Priya's friendship,cares to Ram..and Rm got a companionship in Priya..they realized their love towards each other ..but cant express and specially the self respect of Priya ..just love it and also ram respects her every decision ..and all time Vikram and Neha r good frnds of them ..

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Birdy91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Haaaye jinee... What a fabbb update yaaar 👏 Kaise describe kr leti ho Raya ko itna butifully...👏 i jst love ur choice of words nd d way u r portraying Raya is Sooo Guddd... Laallalala dheere dheere haule haule chupke se kab hoga??? Iiieee Raya ka vo anjana sa ehsaah ek dusre k liye kab pyaar m badal gaya pata hi nai chala... raya's care for each other... priya's self respect... both r emotionally attached...😳 Beautiiifulll superbbb... Waiting for nxt part didi...muaaahhh for dis part...Update soon

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: 123fiza1
Slowly n steadily growing relationship...
Everything described very beautifully making this part perfect...
Loved Priya's self respect nature ...
Priya's simplicity reflect s in ur writing
Both need eachothers care love n support...looking frwd to next part
Very good going...
Thanks fr d pm...
Update soon

thanks for commenting😊, thanks for liking the part, yes Priya has a strong self respect and that's what ram liked about her, my pleasure

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Hayee...Ab main bhi wait kar rahi hoon Priya ki exams kab katam hoga...aur humein next update kab mileaga.

Superb update thi.

Thanks for the pm.

me too waiting for that ke kab ram confess karega, 😛my pleasure