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Posted: 11 years ago

#931

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

Amritsarwali uss raat ke baad Priya kaise batati Ram ko woh usse pyaar karti hain, jo aadmi aagle din subah yeh kehta hain ke that was just a moment they shared, Priya kaise batati, Ram ne toh khud kaha tha ke usse pyaar jaise cheez pe vishwaas nahi hain, apna mazak kaise banati, agar bana bhi leti tab bhi kaise apne pyaar ka mazak banate huye dekti, Priya ne sachhe dil se Ram se pyaar kiya tha, isi liye sab kuch ho jane ke baad bhi chhup thi, yeh jante huye bhi yeh shaadi koi mayne nahi rakhhti hain lekin dil ka kya kare jisme sirf Ram hi hain, chahungi toh main bhi ke Ram zindagi me kan se kam ek baar iss dard se guzre shayad tab jaake realize karega ke kya kiya tha woh Priya ke saath

ab jab Pyar kiya hai toh dard toh sehna hi padega hi par sach me Priya ko itne dard me nahi dekh pa rahe hain but this love will only make her strong & great personlity so waiting for more do post soon yaar... but can i request something...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#932

hey di.. m back.. I knw I knw m sooo damn late per aaj ek Ff khtm ki finally...4 hours m 18 parts padhe.. ufff 😲

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Birdy91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#933

part-1 simply amazing jingu..nd interesting
too.. beautifull start di.. ohhh toh priya is
wrkng undr rajat..dats cool. m lykng d concept
di. luking forward to d story.. liking d 1st part 😃

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Birdy91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#934

part-2 ufff ye golu kese kese plans bnata h
hailaaa aur priya ne agree b kiya..its actaully
difficult for a gal to decide ki kya kre kya nahi?
priya's past was painfull but thankgod shruti
was dere for her..ahaaann di apko punjab aur
amritsar se bahut pyar h shayad.. pura naksha
dikha diya 😛 priya suffered allottt in her
life.. dekhte h aage kya likha h uski kismat m...
this one was lovely..

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Birdy91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#935

part-3 Gossshhh di.. beautifulllyyy written.
I dont like jalebi's ewww... but I like d song
jalebi bai ahaaan hehhee..oohhoo toh
vikram ko ram pe doubt hmmm hmmm.. hailaaa
priya was fully awkwrd..kanha fansa dia di
usko..awww neha is damn swt like jalebi
awwwiiieee di d way u described kapoor's love
for priya is awssmmm

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Birdy91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#936

part-4 awwwiiieee cutie pie update di.. sunset
part, ghode ki sawaari wala tangaa,haaaye
priya ka disbalance hona fir ram ka smbhalna
isshhh...ahaaan swt dish kheer...
ummm...lalalalala I just loved dis
billiard table game.. ufff kaaash thoda aur
describe kr dete di closeness ko I wish priya
jyada hurt na ho 😭

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Birdy91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#937

part ~5 😭 😭 priyaaa 😭 why r u doing dis wid her 😭 awwwiiieeww raya shared a moment togher n d rain witnessed dere moment 😳 shaadi sd pehle 😕 aur ram ko lagta h ye galti h.. 😡 beautifulllyyy written di .. per I want to punch u sooo tyt 😛

Edited by Birdy91 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#938

Part~6 Raammm 😡 Ek toh priya ko itna hurt kiya uper se saara blame priya pe daal diya 😡 ho kya raha h yeee... ek toh priya is already hurt uper se ye sab

Edited by Birdy91 - 11 years ago

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#939

Originally posted by: leena04

ab jab Pyar kiya hai toh dard toh sehna hi padega hi par sach me Priya ko itne dard me nahi dekh pa rahe hain but this love will only make her strong & great personlity so waiting for more do post soon yaar... but can i request something...

mujhe bhi achha nahi lag raha hain, in fact Ram e upar bohot gussa aa raha hain lekin usse bhi thoda waqt chahiye, for him this was very abrupt, I think waqt ke saath saath sab kuch theek ho jayega, yeah sure plz go ahead, you don't have to fumble dear, am waiting...

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#940

Originally posted by: Birdy91
Part~6 Raammm 😡 Ek toh priya ko itna hurt kiya uper se saara blame priya pe daal diya 😡 ho kya raha h yeee... ek toh priya is already hurt uper se ye sab

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