RaYa FF mkl...iht thread 2, preview on page 146

youandme272000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

Lovely update... 😊
Lovd d bonding ram nd priya share vid meethi...
Rajats part was very nice...

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vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#702

Awesome update..
Marriage preparations on full swing..
Everybody is busy..Rajat took the responsibility nd same time respected Priya's feelings too..Shruti nd Priya's scene was very good..both Rajat nd Shruti re true frnds
Ram ko tension ho rhi hai..Priya nd Meethi ki..ab kya karne wale hai Ram ji dekhte hai..loved the scene of Meethi with Ram nd Priya.. Priya nd Meethi's bond is moving Ram too much..he started caring for Priya..pehla kadam toh badhaya Ram ne..its good..dheere dheere karib arahe hai dono..Ram samjhne laga hai Priya ko uske emotions ko..
Priya's bond with Mishras...update was full of different emotions..
Good progression in the story..
Very well penned down..great job.. 👏 👏
Precap seems interesting..looking forward to it
Thanx for pm..

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lalmadhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#703

Wonderful update. Shaadi sh0pping pad ke kisi ke bhi apne wali moments yaad aajayega. U write soo well. The friendship with Shruthi and Rajat's feelings for Raya is soo nicely penned down.

So Ram has started feeling Priya as his responsibility tho gaadi track pe aa hi gaya. Meri manna ye hai ki har arranged marriage isi feeling pe shuru ho jathe aur pyaar hote hote ho hi jata hai. I m happy with the way the story is taking shape.

Please continue soon. Thanks for the pm.

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Sanjukta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#704

just loved it yaar..its a long one ..and the story is progressing so well..mithi is such a swt character ..even i am in love with her cuteness,,and the all credits goes to u as u made it superb..thank u for ur pm

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anupam_dil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#705

hey very nice story line yaar...you write very nicely👏👏...waiting for the next update and thank you for the PM...and a request ...plz update RaYa - OS - tere bina zindagi se...actually I am waiting for this FF really loved it👍🏼👏

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leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#706

Part 16

awww awesome update hai yaar chahe jitna bhi karo maan hi nahi bharta padh padh ke ... just awesome i m falling in love with it more & what to say u now i understood why RaYa is not adopting Meethi b'coz Meethi will the only bring RaYa closer she will bring happiness in RaYa life very soon... i loved the way Ram cares for Meethi & Priya both he is such adorable guy i say too gud... i even loved the way Mishra's showed their love for Priya & thier bind is really amezing... also i loved the way Rajat & Shruti is doing for RaYa they r such tue buddies... awww even NeVik is best yaar they gave right advice to Ram loved the bond in all relations... i m enjoying it so much i can't tell u in words... at the last loved the Ram & Meethi's growing bond its way too gud & mesmarizing just like Meethi & Priya's... ok now just request i know Ram don't love Priya now but he difinatly have feelings for her also the way u mension the description of dress i want Ram to be lost in Priya for the moment he show & want to see some romance unknowingly by Ram... & to make him flow in moment & do some romance with Priya unknowingly geeting lost in her beauty plz plz do try to make it if u can... & plz reply to this...

Edited by leena04 - 11 years ago

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leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 16

awww awesome update hai yaar chahe jitna bhi karo maan hi nahi bharta padh padh ke ... just awesome i m falling in love with it more & what to say u now i understood why RaYa is not adopting Meethi b'coz Meethi will the only bring RaYa closer she will bring happiness in RaYa life very soon... i loved the way Ram cares for Meethi & Priya both he is such adorable guy i say too gud... i even loved the way Mishra's showed their love for Priya & thier bind is really amezing... also i loved the way Rajat & Shruti is doing for RaYa they r such tue buddies... awww even NeVik is best yaar they gave right advice to Ram loved the bond in all relations... i m enjoying it so much i can't tell u in words... at the last loved the Ram & Meethi's growing bond its way too gud & mesmarizing just like Meethi & Priya's... ok now just request i know Ram don't love Priya now but he difinatly have feelings for her also the way u mension the description of dress i want Ram to be lost in Priya for the moment he show & want to see some romance unknowingly by Ram... & to make him flow in moment & do some romance with Priya unknowingly geeting lost in her beauty plz plz do try to make it if u can... & plz reply to this...

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