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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Res karke bhaag gayi..😲🤣..

sachi me yaar

place rerve kar ke vaag gayi dono 🤣

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: 123fiza1
u turned d way of d story..yes hoped for something else bt ended with unexpected scene...u r a fab writer ..love it...hmmm ram is in peak of d anger...hw priya is gonna handle d annoyed ram..cont soon

thank u dear

yes its our RAYA

only Priya can handdle RAM

but in this situation she is hurt too

so wait for the next one

and if u want plz suggest any scene i will try to add it 😃

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

sachi me yaar
place rerve kar ke vaag gayi dono🤣

Oye chup karo tum dono mein kahi nhi bhagi hun..comment kar chuki hun..dekh lo.. 😛 😆

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: sinalbest
Hey superb work..👏👏
So will this anger lead to confession.. 😉,,..
Thanks for pm'continue soon

hm..may be

Ram will realize his mistake

wait for the next 😉

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Nice update...loved ur thoughts about mature love story nd totally agree with u.. 👏
Like all the scene..Mandir, mall nd scene where they were lost in their thoughts 😃 ram kaha chala gya tha mall mein aisa kya dekh gya tha..koi surprise hai kya.. 😛
Par yeh last mein kya ho gaya.. 😲 dono hi hurt ho gaye..yeah kya kar diya sweetheart par acha Twist hai 😉
Ab confession or bhi dhamakedaar hoga.. 😳
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..

he he

thank u darling

ha wo to surprise hai sabke liye mere liye bhi

kyunki abhi tak mujhe hi nehi pata 😆

aur I love twist yaar

aur fighting scene sandy k liye

uska idea meri nahi

kyunki after fighting she wants a dhamakadar RAYA milan so ..

teri bhi koi idea hai to bol de darling

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: sakshirambalh
Nice one...sab kuch accha tha. but last me jhagda hogaya...waiting for the next part...thanks for pm

thank u dear

ha jitna jyada jhagra hota hia

pyar bhi to utna jyada hi hota hai na

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cloud121

@cloud121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Nice update...
kya mast start hai...
mandir phir shopping...
pr ye priya ko kangan aur kk kaise yaad aa gyi😲
ram ke ache khase mood ka band baza diya😭
kya se kya ho gya...
raya k beech mu clear kro sweetu
continue soon !!!!!

Edited by Mini1991 - 12 years ago

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

toh ladai ho hi gayi RaYa ke beech, yeh dono bina fight ke reh bhi nahi sakte aur ek dusre ke bagair inn dono ka guzara bhi nahi hota, ajeeb jodi hain, nevertheless, liked the part, now plz make them confess after all they also need each other, plz continue ASAP

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Mujhe pehle samjh nahi aa raha hai kya likhu issi liye pehle a big tight HUGgie...

Kitna achha likhti hai..idiot itne din kaha chup gayi thi...sorry ye mera love hai tere liye😛

Last mein aake Ekta ke jaise scene ko ruin kardiya, mein kya karoo tera😆.

Lekin tune jo definition di hai na love ka uske liye love u..

Ehsaas jo aankhoan se shuru hoke, dil se jud jaaye to iss pyar ko kya naam doo,

Har lafz tere naam se shuru aur khatam ho to iss pyaar ko kya naam doo,

Pyar ka koi naam nahi hota, to iss pyaar ko kya naam doo,

ab mere paas likhne ke liye kuch hai nahi

Just say awesome wonderful, outstanding👍🏼

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
toh ladai ho hi gayi RaYa ke beech, yeh dono bina fight ke reh bhi nahi sakte aur ek dusre ke bagair inn dono ka guzara bhi nahi hota, ajeeb jodi hain, nevertheless, liked the part, now plz make them confess after all they also need each other, plz continue ASAP

yes dear

yehi tio

humari RAYA ki khasiyat hai

aur more over jitna jyada jhagra hota hai

utna hi pyar barta hai ..so they will confess soon in their way