TERE MERE SATH 15th part 25th oct page104 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Wow kya description di hai pyar ka realization n confession ka. Luv u darling.
Rambabu to bade smart hogaye hai uss niharika ko avoid karna sikh Gaye aur madam priya bina hawa ke hi udane lagi hai asman mein. Pyar pehla padav shayad ek dsure ki respect karna, ek dusre ki care karna, bin bataye hi ek dusre ki dil ki baat samjhna , ek dusre ki har choti badi cheez ka khayal rakhna,ek dusre ki saath choti si baat bhi agar smile laade aur dil ko sukoon de de to shayad wahi sachha pyar hai wahi dil ki awaaz hai wohi saath harpal saath dene ka ehsaas hai.
Waise pyar ki koi umar nahi hoti hai, par pyar wo hai Jo do log ko umar bhar ke liye baandh ke rakhti hai.
Nicely written breakfast bahut tasty tha kyonki dono ki dil Jo ek dusre k liye dhadak rahe hai.
U described many forms of patni so well. Yes patni sirf patni nahi har roop dharan kar leti hai.

Well done dear. Loved it.


thank u sweet heart
aab ye niharika ko to tough ans dena hi tha
👍🏼
what a comments
main update de ti hu
aur tum usse itni achi describe karti ho haye ...
yes this is true love for me too
breakfast idea was not mine
(chillipc) prava give me this idea
actually,she wanted a scene where Priya feed RAM ..but ram ko hurt karna pada nehi to ye dono duffer confession k pehle to kisiko khilane wale nehi the ..
so credit goes to her not me.😃
ek ladki ki bohut sare roop hi hoti hai
aur Patni banke sab ko nibhana padti hai use
thank u very much again
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

nice ending, for me love is such kind of emotion when u realise it the whole world around u look beautiful and fancy. You don't need to confess your life as it is clearly seen in your eyes when u love someone, as far as matured love is concerned, it is the self realization first, both Ram and Priya felt that craving for each other, they want to share their minutest thing with each other and for me this is love, the respect and craving for one another, they both miss each other, they want to share their life with each other is what love is, thanks for sharing this OS here👍🏼

thank u Ujjaini
I am feeling same as u
thats why
i ended with my view on love
and really happy that u also share ur view
hm RAYA r matured enough so for them
LOVE is care,just spending time with each other ..craving for each other company
though they feel short of words to confess
but they r in love to the eternity
and which is expressed by their eyes
i consider eye is the door of heart which shows the pain as well as love towards partner
but yes after their confession may be they will behave like acrazy love birds as they missed this essence also
thank u very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was good
and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tulshan1989

it was good

and thanks for the pm

thank u dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late reply
Lovely update jaanu...
allo paratha wo bhi priya ji k hatho se😳
hayy kya pyaar hai..
ye niharika dayan khin ki...😡
thanks for pm 🤗
continue soon !!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mini1991

sorry for late reply
Lovely update jaanu...
allo paratha wo bhi priya ji k hatho se😳
hayy kya pyaar hai..
ye niharika dayan khin ki...😡
thanks for pm 🤗
continue soon !!!!!

haaw jaanu itna late full day kaha thi
ok chod ekbar late
maafi ..abhi kaise ho ?
thank u dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late comment
but very very beautiful update
each part explained beautifully...
ek baat muje bhi BALH mein samaj nahi aayi ki USA ki khabar Niharika ke paas hai aur Ram iss baare mein kuch nahi jaanta...businessmen hokar usne ek phone bhi nahi kiya...cvs kaafi jagah miss kar gaye...but woh bhi achha tha Ram ka realisation dhikane ka...
here also it is different...Ram jo pehle express karne wala hai..but still I want ek small MU between Raya before confession. feeling jyada hoti hai😉...
lunch ke baad kya plan hai Ram ka😛...this is beautiful story...
please continue soon and thanks for PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER


thank u sweet heart
aab ye niharika ko to tough ans dena hi tha
👍🏼
what a comments
main update de ti hu
aur tum usse itni achi describe karti ho haye ...
yes this is true love for me too
breakfast idea was not mine
(chillipc) prava give me this idea
actually,she wanted a scene where Priya feed RAM ..but ram ko hurt karna pada nehi to ye dono duffer confession k pehle to kisiko khilane wale nehi the ..
so credit goes to her not me.😃
ek ladki ki bohut sare roop hi hoti hai
aur Patni banke sab ko nibhana padti hai use
thank u very much again


Luv u yaar..tu achha likhti hai to mein accha comment karungi na...
aur @chillpc ka idea accha tha feeding ka , issiliye tu ekta maiyaa bani hai rambabu ko hurt kardiya , warna rambabu kabhi ye kehte nahi the aur priya madam ke dil mein ho to bhi kabhi woh zaahir nahi karti..chalo thx to tera rambabu hurt by door. hi hi and chillpc idea..
u know i don't know ur name till now😭
Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update loved every bit of it pls continue soon thx 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
At 1st say u r going jst fav..superb update..ple go with ur way..nd ple change ur story name..nd ple convert from os to ff..ple yaar..i want to see ur story as a ff..nd i want to see ur writting more nd more..so ple continue update soon... :)

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