RAYA - My Way... Update 38 pg 124 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for PM and sorry for replying late
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

awww awesome it was dam gud batter then actual show... i m loving this way of story u gived it gud turn & twist too gud...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

awww loved the way Ram is carring for Priya along with Peehu... what an epi its just awesome too gud yaar loving this RaYaPi they r world's best family no 1...loved this whole part very touchy & lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update yaar..
Aww priya felt bad but ram understands her emotions very well...loved his caring nature.. 👍🏼
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello alll..
M very much glad dt all of u ppl r appreciating wt i hv written..
Thankyu all for liking d updates nd commenting for d same :)
Cz of d lack of tym its nt posb for me to rply each of u individually.. bt thankyu each of ubwho hv commented so nice thng abt d story :)))
Vil update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4

awww awesome screen is getting hotter with each & every line prossesing... but it was small update yaar... par RaYa woh bhi bheege hue hay ise batter imagination aur kya ho sakta hai too gud...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5

Ram is such best hubby ever he knows the need of Priya health now & its complete rest... such a cute loving hubby he is rockstar yaar too gud... loved this part a lot they r the best i must say RaYa rockes where ever they r dam gud...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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UPDATE 7

Their love for each oder is so pure dt it can overcome thru ne mess around dem Cz of nstasha nd her bhaviour twds priya ram felt very bad nd so do priya bt dey both kno its jst cz of d circumstances dey r tied up in dis..
Priya tries to handle d situation bt natasha is nt understanding at all nd cz of dt priyas parents r in jail.
Ayesha hv stoop dwn so low dt she has nw no sense of hw talk vid her parents..
Kartik has ran away nd natasha is emtionally blackmailing ram..
Both r trying to handle d situation dey r in..
Priya cals kartik nd is really upset cz of al dis drama put up natasha for dt little child which is nt at fault..
Even ram is nt understanding dis nd has sent him to orphanage for adoption..
she is feeling vry helpless nd fed up vid al d thngs gng on around dem..
all relations r being spoiled cz of wt kartik has done nd nw he has ran away..
she is really upset nd so is ram cz he cannot c priya in dis situation..
He knows she is Nt dng ne thng wrong bt he has to support natasha as she is also nt wrong..
He understands d little child is nt at fault bt he has to b on natshas side..

The scene starts from ver priya left to their room after talking vid ram where ram told priya abt childs adoption nd ram consoles priya nd assures her nt to worry abt der relationship as dos 5 yrs ver also nt able to seperate dem..

Ram-so nw will my baby will get ne thng to eat nw ? Nd smiles a bit..
Priya- smiles vid teary eyes nd nods in negative..
Ram- a bit startled ask y ?
Priya- cz baby is saying dt he cannot eat ven his dad has nt eaten ne thng d whole day...
(OK GUYS i have written here "HIS" cz i want it to b a BOY !!! )
Ram smiles and takes priya into a bear hug..both feel at peace in each others arms..
Ram-priya hw can u kno me so well.. hw u kno i hv nt eaten d whole day..
Priya smiles nd looks up at him..
Priya- jst as u cum to kno everythng abt me ram nd pulls his cheeks..
Ram smiles widely nd kisses her cheeks softly..
Ram-hmmm is dt so mrs.kapoor den i kno one more thng nd vid dt he sits on d chair smiling at priya..
Priya looks confuse nd asks wt u kno ram ?
Ram pulls her in her lap nd makes her sit comfortably in his lap says..
Ram- i also kno dt u hv nt been eating properly d whole day inspite of my several warnings m i right mrs. Kapoor ?
priys looks at him nd makes a puppy face saying - ram i ate ven i was hungry nd den looks dwn..
Ram makes her look at him nd looks into her eyes saying - dnt mak fos faces its nt gng to melt me .. hw many tym i hv told u nt to neglect ur health ?
priya- sorry nd hold her ears smiling cutely..
nw dis def makes ram smile nd melts him in a sec looking at his cute wife..
Ram-ek shart pe maafi milegi..
Priya looks at him excitedly asking wt ?
Ram- u hv to finish dis whole plate nd brings d plate near dem on d table..
Priya looks wide eyed giving him r-u-serious looks..
Ram chukles a bit saying-ok nw dnt look at me lyk dis i kno its a bit more den u usually eat bt..
priya cuts him in btw saying- ram its nt nly a bit more den wt i eat bt its also a bit more den wt u eat !!
Ram hugs her from side keeping his hands circling her waist says-i kno darling i was jst trying to make u eat as much as possible nd pouts..
Priya smiles on dis encircles her hands on his neck says- nice attempt mr.kapoor Nw dnt make such face i hv a solution..
Ram looks at her ..
Priya- hw abt v share dis nd smiles..
Rams face breaks into a huge grin nd nods his head nd kisses her lips lightly giving his approval..
Priya smiles nd caresses his hairs nd tries to get up ..
Ram tightens his grip on her waist..
Priya-wt ? Let me get up nd sit on d chair else hw vil v eat..
Ram- v can eat lyk dis nd smiles naughtily..
Priya shys a bit nd says - noo ram leave me nd she again tries to getup..
Ram holds her again- shhh priya i said na vil eat lyk dis nly ..
He takes d plate closer nd taking d spoon fool feeds her..
Ram-c v can eat so comfortably nd smirks..
Priya too smiles takes a spoon full nd feeds him..
In dis way dey feed each oder nd ram being ram feeds priya a bit more nd priya cannot ignore her hubbys caring nd lovely way of feeding her nd so she eats wtever is fed to her by her Ram..
Ram makes her drink water wipes her face nd puts d plate away..
Priya- i love u ram
Ram- achha y ?? nd he smiles naughtily..
Priya- raaamm...nd hits ram on his chest nd hugs him..
Ram smiles loudly - i love u too priya nd caesss her back..
Priya-ram mujhe boht darr lag raha he..nd hugs him more tight..
Ram -priya look at me nd he cups her face nd makes her look at him..
Ram-dnt take stress ok i m nd vill b alwz vid u wtever d situation is ok .. u trust me na ?
Priya nods vid tears in her eyes..
Ram-ok den nw stop crying else my baby vil bcum a cry baby lyk his mumma..
He smiles nd pecks her forhead..
Priya too smiles nd hugs him again Nd says- m nt a cry baby !
Ram- achha u r nt a cry baby den who was crying d oder day telling ram m getting fat.. ram u cant get gajar ka halva for ur preg wife.. ram dis.. ram dt.. ohh ram m sry.. n dt day..
PriyA- Raaammm stop nw nd hits him on his chest nd smiles shyly..
Ram laughs loudly tucking her hairs behind her ears pulls her closer nd kisses her cheeks tightly says- mrs.kapoor u r too cute...
Priya-chaliye ab chodiye mujhe..
Ram-kyun?
Priya-kyun matlab aise he thodi bethe rahenge chaliye uthye..
Ram-are aise it feels so good priya so close to u nd he moves his hands on her back.. u kno hame roj aise he khana chaye...
Priya turns a bit to his side says- mr.kapoor r u crazy kya bol rahe he aap leave me nw nd she removes his hands vid a jerk nd stands up..
Ram holds her wrist nd pulls closer getting up says-yes m crazy for u darling..
he caresses her cheeks vid his fingers nd gives a wet kiss near her lips..
Priya is so memerised vid his touch she closes her eyes nd is lost in his touch..
Ram cups her face brings her closer nd...

Suddenly door bangs open nd peehu comrs rushing in shouting papa papa..
Both immediately pulls away bt ver late for peehu was already in..
Peehu-mumma r u alright ?
Priya-yes princesss mumma is fine bachha..
Peehu looking at her dad-to fir papa ne aapko kyun pakda hua tha ?
she looks innocently at her dad nd mom..
raya look at each oder dnt kno wt to say..
Peehu-bolona..
ram-rockstar vo.. ha vo.. mumma ki na aankh me kuch chala gaya tha to ..
Priya-ha peehu.. to.. to.. papa help kar rahe the..
Peehu-per aapne to kaha u r fine den..
ram sighs looking at his princess thnking ye peehu na bilkul apnj ma per gai he itne sawal karti he..
Ram-achha peehu aap te bataiye aap soye nai ab tak ?
Priya-ha baby maine somya chachi ko bola tha na aap ko sula ne k liye..
Jst den somya enters sahing-peehu tum yahan ho me tumhe pure ghar me dhund rahi hun chalo sone..
Priya-kya baat he somya?
somya-are me peehu ko sula rahi thi bt vo maan he nahi rahi thi aur uth kar chali gai..
Peehu-mujhe nai sona he aur jaake bed pe beth jaati he..
Ram-koi baat nai somya jao vil handle her.. gn
Somya-gn nd she goes..

Priya goes nd sits beside her nd takes her in her lap says-kya hua peehu aapko sona kyun nai he ?
Peehu looks at her mom nd den her dad says-aaj papa mujhe park le jaanewale the per aaj to vo mujhse mile b nai nd she hugs priya tight.. aaj papa mere saath khele b nai mumma..
Priya kisses her dorehead nd caresses her hairs looks at ram whose eyes hv bcum moist..
Ram is feeling so helpless..
priya looks at ram nd nods her head telling him nt to cry nd ask him to come to dem..
ram looks at dem nd goes fwd nd sits beside dem caresses peehu..
Ram-m so sorry rockstar aaj na papa thode busy the per pakka sun ko papa aapko aur mumma ko ghumane le jaayenge...
Peehu still dsnt looks at his dad..
Priya-peehu baby dekho meri taraf..
She looks at priya..
priya tucking peehus hairs says..
Priya-papa ne sorry bola na papa sach me busy the varna aisa ho sakta he k papa peehu ko diya hua promise bhul jaay ?
Aur aap to gud girl ho na fir aap papa se baat kyun nai kar rahe ?
Dekho papa kitne sad he..
Peehu looks at her nd again at mom nd says..
Peehu- bt mumma promise todna to buri baat hoti he na ?
Priya-ha beta per papa na nuts bua k saath the she is nt well na baby to papa has to b vid her na ?
Peehu looking at her dad says-sachhi papa u ver vid bua cz she is nt well ?
Nd goes in her dads lap..
Ram hugs her kisses ber says-yes rockstar bt papa is so sorry dt he forgot his promise nd looks dwn..
Peehu looks at her mumma priya mouths her to hug him..
Peehu hugs her dad tightly nd says-its ok papa bua was nt well dts y u dint came na peehu is nw nt upset c nd smiles broadly at ber dad..
Ram also smiles nd again hugs her tight nd also cals priya in his arms nd dey share a family hug :))

Ram-achha peehu wait a min papa hv something for u as well as mumma..
Peehu nd priya both looks at ram excitedly while be gets up nd dials intercom..
Peehu-bataine papa kya he ?
Ram again sits on bed taking peehu in his lap says aise thodi na uske liye aapko papa ko kissie deni hogi fir he milega nd den he winks at priya..
Priya gives hwww expression nd ram smiles broadly..
Peehu gives a slopy kiss on rams cheeks nd ram also kisses peehu on cheeks..
Priya was looking at both of dem says caressing her tummy- dekha baby aapke papa or didi ne abhi se team bana li he aur hame to puch b nai rahe nd she pouts..
ram nd peehu looks at each oder nd smiles..
Ram takes priya in his arms kisses her cheeks nd peehu bends dwn nd kisses priyas tummy..
ram-c baby nw tell ur mom nt to complain lyk a cry baby nd looks at priya nd laughs..
Peehu too laughs laudly joining is dad..
Priya frowns at ram for again calling her cry baby..
Peehu- really papa mumma nd cry baby hahaha laughs laudly nd ram also joins her bt den looking at priya giving him her hitler look stops laughing nd makes peeh quiet..
Jst den gopal kaka aarives vid d tray of kulfis..
Ram sighs in relief as he sees his wifes xpression turning from hitler ones into a broad smile..
Peehu jumps off rams lap shouting-yay paa kulfi.. wow
Ram-yes rockstar kulfi..papa said na he has something so did u like it ?
Peehu-yes papa i loved it..
Priya-kaka aap tray rakh dijiye or plate le jaie..
Ram takes d try nd sits on d chair making peehu sit on d table..
Peehu-aaine mumma c so yummy kulfis..
peehu starts eating kulfi..
Priya sits on d chair..
ram looks at her takes d kulfi nd makes her eat mouthing a sorry..
Priya smiles nd takes kulfi from his hands nd makes him eat..
They share d kulfi nd njoy laughing nd chatting...

To b continue...do comment guys if u like d update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice progressing of story
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6

awww it was the most beutiful & thouchy part of ur FF dear i just loved the way Priya thinks for Ram & his needs... where Ram cares for Priya & her helth is this is what called as true love ... they thinks & cares for each other so much loved it... thanks for giving such beautiful FF...

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