New SS: Tere Ishq Mai, last part updated on 142 - Page 15

Originally posted by: peeyara

will take care frm nxt tym k tumhe diabetes na ho😆

Thats good... 😆

Originally posted by: peeyara

mai tumhare planet earth par hi hu😆

actually relatives se milna ya relatives hi ghar pe aarahe hai toh tym nhi milra😛

shayad monday tak completely free hojau, wait till then😊

kuch bolna chahri thi par bhuul gayi isiliye pata nhi likh diya😆

Ok..will wait 😊
Hahaha thik hai..

sry 4 late reply Wonderful update feeling very bad 4 Priya 😭 Ram ko Priya ki baat 1 bar sun lena chaiye waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon thx 4 PM. my choice is 1 option... poem was superb & perfect 4 d situation 👏👏

Originally posted by: sinalbest

I believe what parents give us is the best.. 😉

So better I will address u as Nassem if u hav no problem..😊

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

sorry to comment late, first of all belated EID MUBARAK! and welcome back.

Coming to your update, its beautifully written, I liked it, specially the poetry, it goes down lovely with the story line, kahan chhupa ke rakkha tha ab tak iss talent ko?, u should continue with it, I actually felt bad for Priya, Ram se pyaar karne ki itni badi sazaa mili hain usko, pariwaar ki khatir usne apni dosti bhi gawa di but somewhere Ram is also justified in his behaviour, but now it will be interesting to see what lies in RaYa's future...I would suggest the title 'tere ishq mein' as it sounds apt, plz continue ASAP

Hello everyone! Here comes the second part. Hope u all will enjoy reading.

CHAPTER TWO

priya looked around the room, the room where she has spent most of her tym, was looking completely strange to her. She slowly took out the broken pieces of bangles from her hands. Her hands were badly injured, blood was flowing from her injuries. She carried herself to the washroom to clean her wounds. She was analysing how her life has changed within moments. She couldn't believe that Ram can be so wild when angry but she was not at all angry with him.

Mujhe Is Haal Tak Pahucha Diya Teri Mohabbat Ne .

Sitam Kaisa Bhi Ho Tujhse Koi Shikwa Nahi Hota ..

She was wondering how different this Ram is from the Ram she knew. She remembered the first time when she met Ram after his return from london.

*FLASHBACK*

Priya suddenly wake up when she realised that someone has spilled water on her face.

Priya rubbing her eyes: ma ye konsa tareeka hai uthane ka...pura geela kardia

voice: maa nahi sleeping beauty, mai hu

Priya angrily: Shruti ki bachi tu, tujhe toh mai nahi chodungi

Shruti: pehle pakad kar toh dikha

Priya ran after her, chasing Shruti in her whole room. After sometime they both lie down on bed.

Priya: tu meri dost hai ya dushman

Shruti raising her brows: kyun?

Priya: pata hai mai kitna acha sapna dekh rahi thi, mai aur

Shruti makes not-again face n interrupts: Ram the aur tu Ram ka chehra dekhne hi wali thi par maine tujhe utha diya

Subah Kay ujaloon mien dil dhoondhta hy Tabeerien,

Dil Ko kOun smjhayye Khuwaab Khuwaab HOtay hien !!

Priya excitedly: how do u know this?

Shruti sulkingly: tu aur koi dream dekhti bhi hai, tere sapno mai toh sirf Ram hi aata hai... Ek baat puchu?

Priya: jaise mai mana kardu toh nahi puchegi

Shruti: tere paas na Ram ka koi photo aur na hi tu usse contact mai hai phir bhi

Priya excitedly: photo hai na mere paas...abhi dikhati hu

Priya hurriedly ran towards her wardrobe n took out a pic n gave it to Shruti.

Shruti was excited to finally see the face of man wid whom her stupid friend is crazily in luv. But after seeing the pic, her all excitement died.

Priya: kya hua acha nahi laga

Shruti: ye school ka photo hai Priya...uski abhi ki koi pic nahi hai tere paas?

Priya sadly: nahi hai, mere paas yehi ek pic hai

Shruti: soch agar wo school tym ki tarha cute nahi hua toh?agar wo bahot ugly hua toh? Tu phir bhi usi se shaadi karegi?

Log mujhse her baar yahi
Puchtein hain tumne us
Mai dekha kia?
Mai her baar yahi kehti
Hoon...bewajah hoti
Hai mohabbat.

Priya: bilkul karungi, i love his nature more than his looks... I still remember how once

Shruti continued: he saved u from ur classmates who were teasing u n how badly he beated them.

Priya happily: yes, he is my hero

Shruti: tu uske ghar se uska photo aur contact number kyu nahi leti

Priya: kaise lu aur kya kahungi aunty se

Shruti teasingly: yahi k aunty mai aapki bahu banna chahti hu, kya mujhe apne hone wale pati ka number milsakta hai

Priya hits her on her shoulder.

Shruti: mai toh bhul gayi

Priya: kya?

Shruti: yahi ki aaj prof. Mehta ki class hai aur agar aaj tu late hogayi toh

Priya: toh he'll kill me today...tu 5 min ruk mai 10 min mai aayi

She gets ready hurriedly n they both went to college

After college:

Shruti: aaj toh tu bach gayi

Priya: kya bach gayi...assignment dia hai khadus prof ne, wo bhi accounts mai

Shruti smilingly: tera fav subject

Priya making faces: haan mera fav subject

Shruti: tera phone baj raha hai

Priya: maa ka hoga ,rehne de

Shruti: ok bye, mai chalti hu

Priya: ruk na aaj bahar kuch khate hai

Shruti: tu kha, mujhe late horaha hai

Priya went to the nearest stall n served herself wid some pani puri n samosas. When she put her hand inside her pockets, she realized she has forgot to bring the money. Now she understood y her mom was calling her continuously. She was cursing herself n a man nearby was watching her. He was Ram n he was trying to recognize the girl.

Priya looking at sky: aap ko toh maza aaraha hai na mujhe aise dekh kar, aaj ka din hi kharab hai pehle us sadoo prof ne assignment dia wo bhi accounts mai aur ab mere paas paise nahi hai

Ram was smiling listening her bantering to god, he was trying to remember where he has seen her.

Priya continued: ma bilkul theek kehti hai k mai ek number ki idiot hu... Ma ko phone karti hu but her phone was off as battery has discharged... Phone bhi band hogaya(Ram was still trying to recognize her n at the same tym enjoying her continous bantering)... Priya Sharma, Sudhir Sharma ki beti k paas thele wale ko dene 50 rupaye nhi hai

The last line triggered Ram's brain n he now recognized Priya. He came forward to help Priya. He tapped her on shoulder n Priya turned to see him but she didn't recognize him.

Priya hesitatingly: akeli ladki samaj kar fayda utha rahe ho, tum jante nahi mai kaun ho

Ram smilingly: i don't want to harm u, i wanna help you

Priya confusedly: help me?

Ram: wo i'll pay ur bill if u don't mind

Priya: no it's ok

Ram like a gentleman: i insist pls

Priya after thinking for sumtym: ok

Ram paid her bill.

Priya thanked him n asked his number.

Ram: my number? But y?

Priya: taki mai aapko paise lauta saku

Ram: par iski koi zaroorat nahi hai

Priya: zaroorat hai, warna aap apne paise wapas lelijiye

Ram: nahi….better u take my number

Ram gave her his number.

Priya: mai kal call karungi aur aap apne paise le jana aur haan mera number save karni ki sochna bhi mat

Ram: ji

Priya walked few steps then came back again.

Priya: waise mai subah aapko kab tak call karsakti hu?

Ram: i'll be up by 6 toh u can call me at 6 a.m

Priya: subah 6 baje

Ram: haan...any problem?

Priya in dilemma: nahi toh, ok then bye n thanks too

Ram waved her back. He was still smiling to himself thinking Priya has still not changed a bit, she is still mad, stubborn n innocent like in childhood n also afraid of strangers.

Next day Priya was up by 6:00 a.m to the sound of alarm. She took the number of Ram and called him. Ram, who was getting ready to go for jogging, received the call.

Ram: hello

Priya: hello

Ram: aap kaun ?

Priya: mai mai bol rahi hu

Ram: kaun?

Priya: mai Priya, kal jiski aapne madad kit hi

Ram now recognized her: haan boliye

Priya: wo aapke paise lotane the toh mai kahan aao

Ram thinks , " o god! Ye abhi tak wahi atki hui hai"

Ram: sirf 50 rupaye toh hai rehne dijiye

Priya: kal maine aapki baat mani na toh aaj aapko meri sunni padegi aur waise bhi mai kisi ka udhar nahi rakhti

Ram helplessly: jaisa aap theek samje…..mai abhi jogging ke liye park jaraha hu toh aap wahin pe aajayie

Priya: theek hai…… I'll be there..bye

Ram: bye

Shipra rubbed her eyes when Priya came downstairs and asked Sudhir to pinch her. Sudhir asked her the reason, she pointed in the direction from where Pria was coming.

Sudhir to Shipra: iski tabiyath toh theek hai na……..aaj itni jaldi kaise uth gayi

Shipra wid blank expression: pata nahi

Shipra to Priya: kya hua beta aaj itni jaldi kaise uth gayi

Priya: kyun mai jaldi nahi uth sakti

Shipra puts her hand on Priya's forehead as if checking if Priya is fine. Priya withdraws her hand.

Priya: kya kar rahi ho maa

Shipra: teri tabiyath toh theek hai na

Priya irritatedly: ma mai bilkul theek hu aur maine bataya than a kal kisi ne meri madad ki toh bas uske paise lotane ja rahi hu

Shipra: wo toh tu baad mai bhi de sakti hai na

Priya: udhar jaldi chukka dena chahiye, hai na papa?

Sudhir: haan beta bilkul

Priya: papa aap jogging ke liye park ja rahe ho na, mai bhi saath chal rahi hu

Sudhir(shocked): tu jogging ke liye aayegi

Priya: nahi papa, jise paise lotane hai wo bhi park mai hi hai

Sudhir: acha

They both headed towards the park, Priya went inside the park to search for Ram leaving behind her father who was parking his car.

Priya spotted Ram and headed towards him .

Priya: hi

Ram: hi…toh tum aagayi

Priya: ofcourse……(she took out 50 rs note and over it to him) ye lijiye aapke paise

Ram: mai phirse keh raha hu iski koi zaroorat nahi hai

Priya: ajeeb aadmi hai aap, mai aapke paise lotane subah 6 baje(stressing the tym 6:00 a.m) uthkar yahan iss park mai aayi hu aur aap ko paise nahi chaiye

Sudhir, who has by now, standing behind Priya says: paise lelo beta, tumhe paise lotane ke liye aaj meri beti kai saal baad itni subah uthi hai

Priya gave a deadly stare to her father and whispered: isey ye sab batane ki kya zaroorat hai

Mean time Ram bend down and took blessings of Sudhir. Priya was looking at them confusedly.

Sudhir: kaise ho beta

Ram: ekdum fit…..aur aap

Sudhir: tumhare samne kada hu

Priya was confused how her father know this man. Sudhir and Ram were looking at Priya's confused face.

Sudhir: Priya tu ne isey nahi pehchana?

Priya nods in no .

Sudhir: ye Ram hai tere bachpan ka dost, amar ka beta

Ram: Priya, tum toh bahut jaldi bhul gayi

Priya was feeling lyk killing herself for not recognizing Ram about whom she daily dreams. She was feeling embarrassed as to how she behaved with Ram , what he must be thinking of her, she was cursing herself.

Ram snapped his fingers infront of her to bring her back from her thoughts.

Ram: tum bilkul nahi badli Priya, abhi bhi waisi hi ho

Priya embarrassedly: sorry maine tumhe pehchana nahi aur thoda odd behave kiya tumhare saath

Ram: it's ok

Priya was at loss of words as she was seeing love of her life in reality not in dreams and that too so closely, she couldn't utter a single word, she was on cloud nine that her Ram has come back after many years. She wants to talk to him, asked many questions to him but her tongue was not helping her. Again Ram bring her back from her thoughts.

Ram: ab toh tumhara number save karsakta hu na

Priya blushed and replied: haan and then she excused herself from there and went to her house. She wanted to shout , dance, sing all at once.she directly went into her room to sleep but there was no signs of sleep in her eyes.

Main us k khayal se jaoon to kahan jaoon ,

Wo meri sonch ke har raste par nazar aata hai.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Priya came ot of the washroom and took out the first aid box from drawer and seated herself on the couch. She took out the medicine to apply it on her hands but she cant bear the pain so she left the wounds undressed and dozed off to sleep.

Next morning Ram woke up at his usual timing(6:00 a.m) and his eyes fell on Priya who was sleeping on couch all cuddling to herself. He saw first aid box on the table and then at Priya. He walked towards the Priya and saw that her hands are badly injured. He took the first aid box, started applying medicines on it, Priya winced in her sleep, Ram then careflully dressed her hands and raised his hand to caress her forehead but his eyes caught the vermillion in her head, then his eyes fell on mangalsuta in her neck. All last night incidents came infront of him , his ego didn't allowed him to care further for Priya so he withdraw his hand and went out of the room in anger.

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