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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

welcome dear after an ages u came back..1st of happy eid to u .

Now about ur update- I love it simply with ur poetry..all r awesome..and the situation b/w RAYA is worst ..its is very much justice .hope RAM will Love Priya very soon and can understand Priya's love too

Thank u for ur PM.

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

sadly beautiful write up.. now i will catch every update.. this triangle love stories are old concept but an super hit concept.. can't see priya in so much pain , for that stupid isha raya lost there friendship to.. but i liked the story, thanks for the pm.. update soon

Edited by Pinkjali - 12 years ago

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

after many days u have update

first part was very good but why ram is angry with priya

their is no fault of her continue soon waiting

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

just superb

kya damakeedaar start kiya...👏

ram ka gussa har situation very interesting

priya ki shaadi toh ho gayi but yeh Ram ka gussa meje bhi dara raha hai😕

waise achha hua Isha baag gayi nahi toh raya nahi milte...but abb aage kya hoga

continue soon and thanks form PM😊

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RAYAFAN2

@RAYAFAN2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

amazing start really emotional plz pm for next update

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SharmiRayaBasu

@SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Omggg its tooo gud yaar...jst hv take a bow...awsome story...superb writting..beautifully peened down..too much exciting story..really cant wait 4 next..ple ple update soon na..nd thanku 4 pm..nd the suggestion 4m me is no.1 tere ishq mein...

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peeyara

@peeyara

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Hey sagar..address her by alien.. 😆 😆 her nickname..haha
Now she will come after me..sorry meri pyari alien.. 😉 😆

@sagar my parents named me Naseem but my siblings hv given me new name'alien'; ur wish u can address me by any name
@vj u called me'my sweet alien', so sweet re
aap dono bhi fikr mat karo mai kisi ka bhi murder nahi karungi since i hate violence

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peeyara

@peeyara

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: shamavi
i don't know whether to say or not but i have read similar stories..

but raya ki style hain will read it😊 i wan't to see how u write in ur own way.. wish to see how u take up the story😊 because har writer has diff style of presenting and i want to see that...

u have written good portrayal achha hain.. i don't mind old wine in new bottle... aaj ka trend hain

but never know hosakta hain it is not old wine in new bottle but new wine with old wine 😆

continue soon sorry if my words have hurt u... i like the first option

dont say sorry; hosakta hai i too hv read somewhere aur mere dimag reh gaya;
old wine in new bottle ya new wine in old bottle ye aap hi mujhe yaad karke batao
thank u for ur appreciation n suggestion and u hvnt hurted me so dont be sorry

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peeyara

@peeyara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: sinalbest
Hi😊

Welcome😛

Eid Mubarak😃
Like the way u didnt drag things..👏👏
Superb poetry..👍🏼
Well execution of Priya's pain.. & Ram's anger..👏👏⭐️Perfect work...👏👏⭐️
in ur first one.. u showed cool Ram..😎& in this Angry ram😡..superb..😉👏

Thanks for pm'
continue soon..
btw can i suggest one more name😉

thank u verrry much
karo na suggest aur ek nane, kisne roka hai