FF - RaYa - Second Chance thread 2, note pg 148 - Page 83

Raya part is gud..bt yaar i want raya fight :P hehehe :D maarna maat..bt i want to see in ur ff..actually i like raya's fight chaiyeh serious ho ya aise hi nok jhok bcoz jaghre ki baad payyar kuch aur hi hota hai ahem ahem *wink* ..if its possible thn ple create thz situation in ur next update..eagerly waiting 4 next..

😳😳😳😳 Superb update...

Superbb update..
Hospital part nd convo btw RaYa nd Dr is very nice..its better to clear doubt no need to hesitate but priya's awkwardness nd shyness is right too.. 😛
Planning for kids is done now its time for execution..haha ram is geeting very naughty at 40 😉 but the convo btw RaYa is very matured nd shows their understanding..beautifully written.. 👏
Loved the way Ram controlled his desire nd said its not necessary to get indulge in physical activity only bcoz he want that nd truly respect her feelings too..this is how should be the realtion btw husb nd wife which u showed where they respect nd understand each other's feelings.. 👍🏼
Shaadi ka mahool nd all the happenings with shopping nd their masti with teasing each other is very beautifully described nd only u can create this magic with ur writting.. 😃
Loved the chudiyan kharidne wala scene too..
Great work.. 👏
Thanx for pm..