FF: Kuch Mere Dil Ne Kaha *Part 13 on NEW THREAD!*

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crystal30

@crystal30

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#621

Sheetal, that was a marvellous piece! I'm on the edge of my seat, please unfold the mystery(te name mystery queen best suits you) soon else i ll have a great fall..lol Transformation of ones character does not need much time from bad to good & other wise..it all depends on the influential skills.. I ve seen people gettin bad influenced & drawing conclusions without even making an attempt to know the entire situation..its so ridiculous for the one who has to prove himself/herself right yet again...which will eventually create the distance as one wld have lost patience n let the things be as is! Well i'm glad that Priya did instantly got in to the plot weaved by Ram..the relationship among them is getting much clearer or worse.. What happened to the Sharmas & whos trapped our warrior! Please update soon & thank you so much 😃

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lpsakshi

@lpsakshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#622

wow what a script yar meri dil tho pagal hogaya just loved it in this i am imgnfg rashi wow

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

wonderful update

at last u updated after a long time

very well written the present and past scenes

present is just☺️

sheena was trapped in Ram's plan...but tthese two(Raya) are endless...

but still Ram care about Priya which is very big change in his behaviour...

totally no idea what will happen next...

please don't be late and continue soon and thanx for PM😊

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819504

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

Awsme update dr...
The past nd present synchrnisd beautifully...
Splendid job dr...
Loved it...
So pretendng love wil turn into life time love...
Intrestng...
Cntinue soon...

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bssamyukta

@bssamyukta

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Hi sheena,

wow yaar...really wonderful...eagerly waiting for ur next update ...would love to see how actually raya fell in love with each other...thanks for the update..

pls pls update it at the earliest

thanks and regards

samyukta

sorry instead of sheetal i wrote sheena,very sorry for that ...that shows how much i myself involved in ur update and characters...sorry dear for taking wrong name

with apologies

samyukta

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Hi Sheetal 😊

Awesome excellent just superb yaar 👏 ⭐️
From starting to end u leave us with a ques.. Ab kya hoga 😲 ... 😉
Full of twists 👏 ⭐️
Perfectly executed everything 👏 ⭐️

thanks for pm
continue soon 😊

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Hey Sheetal.. After so long finally u updated this..hope everything is fine with u..
Mindblowing update.. 👏
Present, past nd FB too in past..awesomly synchronised nd beautifully handled.. 👏
Present part was so romantic, ram's naughty exp that grin nd smile..uff killer..his love, care, how he got tear seeing her like this..everything was too good 👍🏼 ❤️
Past part..smart plan of playing that they re in love which is actually going to pave path for truly nd madly in love RaYa from present.. 😉
Dekhte hai Sheena ka kya hota hai..par RaYa baap re too much hai dono or unki argues.. 😆
But Priya aisa kya lene gyi thi cupboard se?? Or yeh kaha stop kar diya.. 🤔
This time update pretty soon plz...
Thanx for pm..

Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago