os:Talash last part updated on pg-9 - Page 2

very interesting OS loved Raya's 1 dance waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon thx 4 PM

Lovely Os...First part wonderful...Waiting for the next...Update soon...Thank u for the PM...

Originally posted by: Pinkjali

nooo..!!!! sunday is so far i can't wait for so long.. the os is just mindblowing and heart stealer to.. aisi anokhi suruwat raya ki love story ki maine pahele kabhi Nahi para... suspense , sadness and love perfect blend of everything... pls update soon and before sunday..

Nice update...
ye priya india kyun aayi hai...
aur ram ji ko pyaar ho gya..
ab priya ji ki baari hai...
continue soon dear !!!

Part – 2

Next morning Ram went to priya's room n found her trying to bandaged her hand.

Ram took the cotton n dettol from her hand n asked: may i?

She gave permission by blinking her eyes. He dressed her hand, she mimes him thank you.

Ram: choti will give u sumthng to wear for today...after breakfast u can shop for urself...maine choti se kehdia hai, she'll go wid u.

Priya: thanks Ram

Ram: kisliye

Priya: for every thing

Ram: don't say that... U r friend now(thinks shayad dost se zyaada)...come for breakfast

He was about to go from room wen priya called him

Priya: Ram...one minute

Ram: yes

Priya: ye lijiye...ur hanky

Ram: ummm... I can't take it

Priya: i hv washed it...it's clean

Ram laughs n says: it's not lyk that

Priya(confusedly): then

Ram: wo maa kehti hai k hanky wapas lene se apas mai dushmani hoti hai, toh isiliye...

Priya smiles: u r educated but u still believe in this superstitious...amazing

Ram: not in all beliefs but kuch kuch

Priya: toh iska kya karo(pointing towards hanky)

Ram:ur wish, chahe toh apne paas rakh le ya throw it

Ram went outside the room n peeps inside the room to see wat she'll do wid hanky.

Priya opens the dustbin to dump hanky in it but stops herself n kept it inside her bag smilingly.

Ram went for breakfast wid a smile playing on his lips.

Nuts: kya baat hai bhai itna smile kyun kar rahe ho?

Ram: kuch nahi

Nuts: kuch toh hua hai... Priya se milkar aa rahe ho?

Ram: tu chup karegi ya nahin

Nuts: bhai aaj aap priya ko bas dekhte rehjaoge

Ram: kyu...matlab mai usey kyun dekhne laga

Nuts: good morning priya

Priya who was aproaching dining table: good morning

Ram was looking at her wid wide eyes.

Nuts: bhai...control

Ram came back to his senses n murmurs to nuts: tune ye dress kyun di usey

Nuts: mujhe laga aapki choice pe aapki choice ki dress achi lage gi...waise bhi bhai u know na mujhe yellow-green color combination pasand nahi upar se chudidar...ewww

Ram: toh usey kyu di...kuch aur de deti

Nuts(angrily): maine toh kuch aur dia tha par usey ye dress pasand aayi toh de di...mai wapas le loongi...khush?

Ram: usey pasand hai toh rehne de

Nuts(wickedly): oh really!

kk: tum dono kya khusr pusr kar rahe ho...khana khao

All were having dinner quietly wen they heard some noises

kK: Mera khana hogaya, mai room me ja rahi hu, yahan kuch der aur ruki toh ya mai pagal hojaongi ya mujhe heart attack aajayega

Ram: maa pls...

KK: tere pagal doston ko mai nhi jhel sakti...nuts dekhna agar priya ko kuch chahiye ho to

Nuts: jee ma

Priya was confused k wat kk was talking about

Nuts: don't worry priya, abhi jab tv serial shuru hoga na toh samaj jaogi

Ram(angrily): choti

Nuts: sorry bhai...mazak kar rahi thi

There enters Neha blabbering sum thng with vikram following her...trying to explain her sumthng.

Nuts to priya: ye dono bhai k college friends hai...inka roz ka yahi tamasha hai...roz jhagda karte hai aur bhai ka deemag kharab karne aate hai...par mera toh roz enjoyment hojata hai wo bhi free mai

Priya: tum bahot shararti ho...tumhare bhai thak nahi jate

Nuts: nahin...ye do hi toh dost hai bhai k

Priya n Nuts were disturbed by neha's voice.

Neha: fatty dekho na tumhare dost ne kya kiya

Ram: pehle aaram se baith ja phir batana

Nuts to vikram: ab kya kardia aap ne vikram bhai

Vikram: kuch nahi yaar bas kal ek ladki ki tareef ki thi jo neha ne dekh li

Nuts: toh aaj ya toh murder ya suicide

Vikram(pleadingly): my dear sister aaj bachale mujhe

Nuts: badle mai mujhe ek diamond set chahiye

Vikram: done

Nuts: priyaaa... shopping par kab chale

Neha: shopping par jarahe ho aur mujhe nahin bataya

Nuts: mai aur priya tabse batane ki koshish kar rahe hai ...hai na priya

Priya: haan

Neha: vikram i forgive u but u hv to pay my shopping bills

Vikram: anything for u darling

Vikram n Ram mimes thank you to nuts for saving them from Neha.

Priya: i must say itni pyari family maine aaj tak nahi dekhi

Nuts: bahot jald hum aap ko iss ghar ka member bana denge...hai na bhai?

Ram spit out water n hits nuts leg under the table. Priya was confused with nuts statement.

Nuts: wo priya ab aap hamare saath reh raho na isiliye

Ram n vikram leaves for office, b4 leaving

Ram: bye priya...see u in the evening

Priya: bye...have a good day

Nuts n Neha coughs.

Ram(supressing his anger): bye Choti...bye Neha...chale vikram

The three ladies went for shopping, it was less of shopping more of mumbai darshan. They went to sea side restaurant for lunch. Neha signalled nuts to start the questions.

Nuts: priya aap ke liye kya order karu

Priya: any thing in veg

Neha: i'll place order n come

Nuts: u r vegetarian?

Priya: yes

Neha joins them.

Neha: either ur mom or dad must be indian

Priya: i don't know

Neha: tumhare parents hai tumhe nahi pata?

Priya: mujhe yahin nahi pata k mere parents kaun hai

Nuts senses that she is uncomfortable wid this, so she changes the topic.

Nuts: aap london mai kya karti hai...i mean ur profession

Priya: i am fashion designer, works for XYZ company

Nuts: wow that's my dream company... I too want to work for that company...isi saal maine apna course complete kia hai

Priya: then wat's the problem?

Nuts(making faces): bhai...mere bhai ko lagta hai k mai abhi bhi 3 saal ki bachi hu jo kahin kho jaongi

Neha was totally confused about wat Nuts was speaking but she didn't questioned her.

Neha: agar tumlog bhool rahe ho toh mai yaad diladu k mai abhi yahin hu

Priya:sorry

Neha: it's ok...tum toh serious hogayi

Priya: i need ur help...mujhe rent pe ek flat chahiye

Nuts: we r not gonna help u...are u facing any problem in our house?

Priya: it's not lyk that...it's just that k mujhe khud nahin pata k mai kab tak yahan hu...1 month, 6 month ya year toh i thought

Nuts: tum bhai ko apna dost nahin manti?

Priya: manti hu

Neha cuts her in middle: toh decided tum kahin nhi jarahi ho...ab lunch kare

Priya(helplessly):f9

They were enjoying the lunch wen Neha asked priya: priya ek baat pucho?

Priya: yes pucho

Neha: tum itni khoobsurat ho, smart ho, intelligent ho...toh tumhara koi boy friend toh hoga

Priya: excuse me...mai abhi washroom hokar aati ho

Neha to Nuts: isey kya hojata hai jab bhi mai ye topic chedti hu

Nuts: obviously wo uncomfortable hojati hai...ab aap iss topic pe baat nahi karenge

Neha: thik hai...waise tu kab job karna chahti thi aur Ram ne tujhe mana kardia?

Nuts: wo toh jhoot bola maine

Neha angrily: tu phir se jhoot

Nuts cut her in the middle: bhai k liye...Priya k liye

Neha: tu karne wali kya hai?

Nuts: u just wait n watch

In the mean time, priya also joined them. Soon they finished the lunch n went to nearest shopping mall.

In mall:

Nuts: priya mujhe aap se favour chahiye.

Priya: kaisa favour?

Nuts: mai apni khud ki fashion company kholna chahti hu...apni identity banana chahti hu

listening this neha coughs and thinks: pichle do mahine se Ram keh raha hai k apni company open karlo but ye madam ko koi kaam nahi karna tha...enjoy karna tha par ab poora u-turn...kitna jhoot bolti hai ye

Neha came out of her trance wen priya offered her water. She thanked her.

Priya to nuts: wat i can do in this?

Nuts: aap hi karsakti hai...mai bhai se kahungi k mai ek fashion house open karna chahti hu aur usme aap meri help karne walo ho toh bhai maan jayenge...kyunki mai akeli nahi rahungi aur bhai aapko trust bhi karte hai

Priya was thinking wen neha says: haan kardo na priya,agar mujhe fashion ka kuch pata hota toh mai hi iska sapna poora kardeti

Nuts making puppy face n folding hands in front of her: pls say yes...pls...pls

Priya agrees so Nuts hugs her in excitement n thanks her

Nuts: now i am confident k god ne aap ko mere bhai ke liye hi bheja hai

Priya: kya kaha tumne

Neha corrects her:iska matlab hai k bhagwan ne tumhe iske bhai ko manane mai iski help ke liye bheja hai...hai na nuts?

Nuts: haan wahi

At 8 ram reached home n asked kk about nuts, she informs him today she had travelled almost whole mumbai n had slept early out of tiredness. He then asked about priya...kk says might b in her room. Ram freshen up, had his dinner then went to priya's room but couldn't find her in the room. He spots her in the garden n in no time joins her. He saw her crying but she wipes her tears.

Ram:hi

Priya: hi

Ram: how was ur day today?

Priya:good aur aapka?

Ram: bht busy... Neha aur choti ne zyaada pareshan toh nahi kia na?

Priya: nahin

Ram: neha kisi ko tang na kare aisa ho hi nhi sakta...agar usne kuch ulta seedha poocha ho toh i am sorry

Priya: no need...they r really sweet...infact i should thank them

Ram: tum har baat pe thank u thank u kyu bolti ho...u shld never say thanks to ur friends

Priya: will take care from next tym

Ram: it's quite late, i think hame andar chalna chahiye

They started walking, ram says to priya: priya...with a pause...if u feel like sharing ur feelings wid sum1, i am always there(wid a pause)...for u

Priya: thank u

n they retires to der rooms.

Precap: priya reveals her past to Ram.

i hv updated it before sunday itself..pls let me know how was it!!!!😊

Part 1

Part 2

That was a superb update... Awww Nuts is tooo cute yaaar...I loved her...Waiting to know abt Priyas past, i hope she too falls for Ram soon...Thnks for the PM...