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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi...aayi m...lol..actully na main aane wali nhi thi...qki mera ek bht bada problm h main balh ki bate thodi seriously le leti hu kabhi kabhi qki m bade dil se ye serial dekhti hu aur shayad isiliye mujhe har hal me bade achhe lagte hain...aur aajkl public ne bht deemag khrab kar rakha h...mujhko samjh nhi ata h ki jab cheeze hazam nhi hoti hain to log khane kyun baithte hain..aur public hamesha ye kyun bhul jati h ki serial bnane wale to aise hi bnayege apko nhi dekhna h to channl change karo ...top k serial aate hain...diya aur bati...sarswatichandra...aur pta nhi kya kya...wo dekho...q dekh kar aur phir serial ka mazak bnate hain log...mazak m bhi bnati hu...lekin m kabhi nhi kehti ki bade bore lagte hain ya bade bekar lagte hain...ya m nhi dekhungi...khair...meri ek isse bhi badi problm h ki m dekhe bina bhi nhi rh sakti aur bole bina bhi nhi rh sakti...qki evntully mujhe kuchh na kuchh to mil hi jata h bakwas karne k liye bhi aur imagine karne k liye bhi...aajkl mujhe sabse bura lagta h jab log kisi ko appriciate karne ki bajay humiliate karte hain...anchal ki burai karne se anchal ka talent thode hi khtm ho jayega...use to jahan kam milega wha karegi hi...aur anchal ki jagah koi bhi ata to wo amrita ko nhi match kar sakta h...par iska ye mtlb nhi h ki anchal ko galiya di jaye...ab jo serial me ho gya h uske bad peehu chahe jitni bhi bar badle iski to 100 % grnty h ki ab wo amrita kabhi nhi ho sakti...pr jo bhi hogi wo balh me aane k bad apne ap achhi ho jayegi qki bade achhe lagte hain...h...aur sakshi ram ki sangat me to har koi best ho jata h...& anchal i tell u only one thing always accept challenges & do ur best...duniya ki to adat h insan ko peechhe khinchne ki ye to insan ki himmat honi chahiye ki wo kaise inka samna karke age badh sakta h...waise bhi ye gana sirf sunne k liye nhi bna h..samjhne k liye bna h:..kuchh to log kahenge logo ko ka kam h kehna...bhai public agar bate nhi karegi to aap famous kaise honge...ek kahawat h ki jab log apke bare me bate kare tab samjhiye ki aap tarraki kar rhe hain...qki log apko notice kar rhe hain..so chill aur achhe se kam karo...aur han...public balh ko bht kuchh bna rhi h parwarish 2..& whatevr...chalo ye bat i accepted...pta h bhagwan ne do badi hi kamal ki cheeze bnayi h...duniya aur ghadi...dono gol h...jahan se shuru hoti h whi akar khtm hoti h...serial aur zindgi bhi waisi hi h...jahan se shuru hote hain ghumphir kar whi aa jate hain...anyways...balh parwarish hi kyun h...mujhe to wo kahani ka next season lag rha h...aur m itni inspire ho gyi ki leap k bad maine kahani ka shruti aur parvati wala pura episode ek bar phir se dekh dala..aur pta h main do cheeze bhi notice ki...dono me sirf itna fark tha ki usme itna jyada bharosa karti thi ki bharose se uski beti bigad gyi aur isme itna jyada daubt karti h ki usse bigad jayegi pr bigdegi to jarur tabhi to bachhe sudharo abhiyan chalega...obiously na...ab parents bane hain to aur kya karenge bhai..??..kheti to karenge nhi..bachhe hi to palenge...aur romance hi karna tha jindgi bhar to shadi hi nhi karni chahiye thi qki shaadi hogi to barbadi bhi hogi aur abadi bhi hogi to kam badhenge bhi aur batenge bhi...to moral of the story ye h ki public decide kar le ki use chahiye kya??..agar morals dekhna h to dharmik serial dekhe...agr sirf entrtainment chahiye to ajkl ki pictrs dekhe qki usme sirf yhi hota h story to kuchh hoti nhi...aur agr moral entrtainment lesson sabka complete package dekhna h to bade achhe dekhe...qki sab kuchh dekhna achha hota h...aur hum is sawal ka jawab bhi dene layak ho sakte hain ki serial dekhte kyun ho tumlog??..to agr prwarish type ka to keh sakte hain na ki hamara serial sirf bachhe paida karna hi nhi seekhata palna bhi seekhata h...lol..i mean sirf entrtainment hi nhi deta lesson bhi deta h.. ..aur mere to serial dekhne ki aajkl aur bhi wajah mil gyi h...ek to aajkl meri priya bat bat me meri trh kehna seekh gyi h ki bade achhe lagte hain...dusre cvs ne mujhe thoda seriously lete hue mera vm bhi dikha diya..teesre mere subject psychology ko bhi ghusa diya to litrally m to ajkl serial dekh k ud rhi hu...duniya kya karti h mujhe fark nhi padta mujhe jo kehna hota h keh leti hu koi sune ya na sune...aur mujhe jo dekhna hota h wo m dekhti hi hu...koi dekhe ya na dekhe...khair mujhe pta h dekhte sabhi hain bas faltu ka scene bnate rhte hain nhi dekhne ka...khair back on track..dekho mujhe kuchh sochne k liye na bas ek line ki jarurat hoti h...mtlb bas mujhe chingari mil jaye aag to m khud hi laga dungi...au mujhe wo chingari mil gyi precap yar...ab usme ek line mil gyi ki ram muh se priya ne itne dino se priya nhi suna...ab dekho meri glti nhi h han...serial walo ne khud ne mujhe chheda h to main to chali rambabu se priya ka nam bulwane ab is nam bulane ki rasm me kuchh ovr ho jaye to dnt blame me...maine socha to nhi tha ki m after leap k bad bhi koi update dungi...pr jaise bade achhe ka nam hi bade achhe rakh diya h to wo bade achhe hi lagte rhenge...waise hi...jab iska nam hi maine socha na tha rakh diya h to chahe jitna bhi sochu...atlast karungi to whi jo maine socha na tha...to chale nam bulwane...??...rambabu ko bada shaukh h na apna nam priya k muh se sunne ka ab priya ko bhi shaukh ho gya h...to rambabu b ready..& han please try to do somthing diffrent ok... qki public aajkl bht khisiyayi hui h serial k sath sath ise bhi padhna band kar diya na...to mera khun aur kam ho jayega...qki phir m apni bhadas kahan nikalungi yar...badi mushkil se adha kilo wajan badha h..to m ekta ki trh public ko bore karne ka risk nhi le sakti...use to trp chahiye pr mujhe to pyar chahiye yar...ufff...ktna lamba likh dala..ab updates me kya likhegi bewkuf ladki hattt...

Part 69

"o teri to tumhara kya hoga??"


last update main rampriya k pyar par chhodi thi aur aaj bhi unke pyar se hi shuru karungi...to aplog man lijiye...anyhow leap ho gya...priya ghar ki jimmedariyo me busy rambabu office ki...phir dono ekdusre k sath manage kar rhe hain...but evntually h to pati patni...to insan apna pyar badal sakta h apni nafrat badal sakta h par apni fitrat kaise badle yar...to indono ke rishte ki khubi hi inka ladna jhagdna h wo na ho to maza khtm ho jata h to chahe kitni bhi samjhdari kyun na dikhaye ye pr jab tak bachpna nhi karenge inka aur hamara dono ka pet nhi bharega...to rambabu priya pihu ko surprise dene pahonch jate h...rambabu ko achanak dekh kar priya shock ho jati wha to kuchh nhi kehti h par andr h to sahi bht kuchh jo use kehna h...aur phir dar bhi to gyi thi ki akele bachho ko pal rhi h bachhe kuchh bhi karenge to sara blame to uspr hi ayega...sabhi kafi enjoy karte hain priya wha to kuchh nhi bolti h..even ghar aake to bilkul hi kuchh nhi bolti h...to rambabu ko lag hi jata h ki madm ka mood garam h...wo bat karne ki koshis karta h priya ignore karne ki koshish karti h...finally rambabu thoda laudly bolte hain...

Ram...priyaaa..kya h yar???abhi to sab kuchh theek thak tha...achanak kya ho gya??..

Priya...achanak kuchh nhi hua h...aur apko to theek thak hi lagega...jab apko char char bachhe akele palne ho to tab na pata chale...

Ram...are yar tum itna gussa kyun ho rhi ho...?? Bachho ne kuchh kiya kya??

Priya...bachhe kya karenge aur bachhe kyun karenge???..aapne kabhi socha h bachho k bare me...kabhi dekha h ki wo kya karte hain kya nhi??

Ram...are yar to kam hi kar rha hu...bachho k liye..

Priya...whi to...kam hi karte rahiye jindgi bhar...bas kam hi sab kuchh h...ghar pariwar bachhe kuchh nhi sirf kam...h na

ram...are yaarr

priya...please mr.kapoor mujhe lagta h jindgi me aur kuchh rh hi nhi gya h...main bachhe pal rhi hu aap kam kar rhe hain hamari life bas yhi reh gyi h

ram...to isme kya burai h...??..aur isme itna bhadkne wali kya bat h??

Priya...main apko kuchh bol hi kyun rhi hu??..apko to kuchh fark hi nhi padta h mujhe to lagta h main bas is ghar me ma ban k rh gyi hu...mujhe to sirf do hi cheeze sunayi deti h...ya to mrs.kapoor ya ma..qki meri khud ki to koi pehchan rh hi nhi gyi qki mujhe priya kehne wale insan k pas to mere liye waqt hi nhi rh gya...

Ram...priyaaa

priya...oh wow apko mera nam yad h main to bhul gyi thi??..qki m to apna nam ab sunti hi nhi hu...apko yad h last time apne mera nam kab liya tha???..

Ram priya ko dekhta rhta h...wo bolti ja rhi hoti h gusse se lal hoti ja rhi h...wo priya k pas ata h...aur use pakadta h...

Ram...sshh..achha sant ho jao...i am sorry ki maine itne dino se tumhara nam nhi liya...actully...u told me...main exactly kitne dino se tumhara nam nhi liya???

Priya...mtlb???

Ram...are tumko yhi problm h na ki koi...i mean m tumhe priya nhi kehta hu...theek h to main aaj sab din k badle tumko priya kahunga...btao...exactly maine kitne dino se maine tumhe priya nhi bola...??

Priya...mr.kapoor..

Ram...are yar bolo na

priya...pta nhi...mera deemag bht khrab h aur mat khrab kariye main ja rhi hu...

Ram...pehle bta do..phir chali jana

priya...ufff...kya h ye...pta nhi...shayad 6 mahine pehle bola hoga...

Ram...o teri..tumhara kya hoga??

Priya...kyun??? Dar gye itne dino ka badla kaise chukayenge???

Ram...han dar to gya par apne liye nhi tumhare liye

priya...mere liye??

Ram...han...tum handle kar paogi ??

Ram priya k forehead k corner pr kiss karta h aur kehta h...priya...priya uski trf dekhne lagti h...

Priya...mr.kapoor kya kar rhe hain??

Ram...tumhara nam le rha hu...(ram phir se priya ko kiss karta h aur uska nam leta h...jitni bar uska nam leta h utni bar alag alg jagah kiss karta h...kabhi forehead par kabhi gardan pr kabhi cheek par)

priya...mr.kapoor ...koi dekh lega bachhe aa jayenge pls...

Ram...kamal h yar...abhi tak keh rhi thi ki main tumhara nam nhi leta ab le rha hu to lene nhi de rhi ho...abhi to sirf 10 hi bar hue h...6 mahin me 182 din hote hain...182 dino me kitne ghante kitne minut kitne sec kitne pal hote hain...aur meri sanse to har pal tumhara nam leti rhti h...to 6 mahine ka hisab karne me...6 mahine aur lagenge...aur mujhe aise hi tumhara nam bulate rhna padega..

Priya ram ki taraf dekhti h..aur muskurane lagti h...

Ram...nhiii...mujhe koi problm nhi h...agar tum 6 mahino tak apne bachho k bina rh sakti ho to main ye continue karu???

Priya...mr.kapoor...aap hamesha aise hi karte hain..har bat ko bas hasi me uda dete hain...mere bare me kabhi nhi sochte na...

Ram...ye galt bat h yar..tum bhi to bachho m itni busy rhti ho...jab bhi m aata hu to kabhi khus kabhi pihu kabhi koi kabhi koi...tumne kab meri dhadkane sunne ki koshis ki??..karti to pta chalta ki meri har dhadkan tumhara nam leti h...lekin mujhe to lagta h tum hi nahi yad karti...

to be continue...

are ek bat bhul gyi...aaj kamine cvs ko kuchh nhi kahato jara unko bhi dose de du...are nalayko bachho se itne healthy dialogue mat marwaya karo...meri musibat ho jati h...kya jarurat thi peehu se wo apple wala dialogue marwane ki...kisine seriously le liya mere ghar me to mujhe do ki jagah 3 apple khana padega yar😡...m badi mushkil se 2 pr aayi hu..huh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Wow...serial to mast aa rha h...bas thoda sa ye log over ho jate hain...are bhai inhe serial chalana hota h na...trp chahiye hoti h...anyways this is non of my bsness...meri is wqt sirf ye curosity h that when priya call him "mr.kapoor"..& i hv a reason for that...mujhe shuru se hi mr.kapoor hi pasand h...ram bulana to mujhe kabhi bhi exciting nhi lagta tha...aur abhi bhi maza nhi ata mujhe ...aisa lagta h kisi padosi ko bula rhi h...actully kya h ki pati ko nam se to har koi bula sakta h pr har koi mr.kapoor thode hi bula sakta h are bhai mr.kapoor to sirf priya k pas hain aur wo mr.kapoor hi achhe lagte hain...waise bhi ajkl ka trend ho gya h log bechare ek bakre ko pta nahi kitne namo se bulate hain...jan janu janeman shona babu...ufff itne synonyms to bhagwan k bhi nhi honge jitne ajkl patiyo k ho gye h..whatevr...priya k liye ye... "mr.kapoor" h...to i wish rambabu use btaye ki wo kaise unhe mr.kapoor bulati thi...khair..rambabu kya karenge kya nhi ye to whi jane par m khud ka kya karu...mere deemag me to jo atak jata h bas atak hi jata h to..boss mujhe to mr.kapoor sunna h to rambabu ko ye priya se kehlwana hi padega...bas...bol diya to bol diya... :p..so lets move on updates...

Part 75

"mujhe mr.kapoor sunna h"

as we know that ki priya ki yaddasht totally ja chuki h aur rambabu har waqt yhi koshis karte hain ki priya ko dheere dheere sab yad aa jaye...are aa jayega na...itni kya jaldi machi h apko...khair...sab priya k mayke se wapas ate hain...i only dnt like one thing are pihu ka kuchh karo yar...bilkul apne bap pr gyi h supr confuse..pta hi nhi chalta ki ise karna kya h...idiot...khair chhodo usko...priya ram room me aate hain...ram fresh hone chala jata h...priya sofe par baith jati h...kamre ko dekhti rhti h...actully usko kamra achha lag rha hota h..aur samne wo jo tasweer rhti h...priya uske pas aake khadi ho jati h...tabhi ram bahar ata h aur priya ko dekhta h...

Ram...priya

priya...mr.kapoor ye tasweer kitni achhi h na

ram...kya???...kya kaha abhi tumne???

Priya...yhi...ki...ye tasweer...kitni achhi h...kyun...kuchh glt keh diya...??

Ram...are nhi...uske pehle kya kaha???

Priya...sorry pta nhi kaise muh se nikal gya...ram...

Ram...are sorry kyun bol rhi ho...tum janti nhi ho...what it mttr to me...

Priya...matlb???

Ram...yha baitho btata hu..pta h tumhe...tum mujhe mr.kapoor hi bulati thi...

Priya...what??..pr apka nam to ram h na aur m apki biwi hu secratry to hu nhi...to m apko mr.kapoor kyun bulati thi???

Ram...hahaha...pta nhi...mne bhi tumse same yhi bat kahi thi...pta nhi tum jab pehli bar mujhse mili thi tab se hi mujhe mr.kapoor bolti thi..:.akhir tak coma me jane se pehle tak tumne mujhe mr.kapoor hi bulaya...u know m hamesha tumhe ram bolne ko kehta tha aur tum bht shy feel karti thi...sirf ya to room me kehti thi ya nashe me...hehehe

priya...nashe me???

Ram...hahaha...han...wo bad me btaunga...abhi tum meri ek bat suno...u know jab se tumne bolna band kiya tab mujhe realise hua mr.kapoor word Ka main kitna use to ho gya tha...jab wo sabd sunayi nhi deta tha to dil bht tadpta tha sunne k liye...hamesha yhi lagta tha ek bar uth k mujhe phir se mr.kapoor bula do...phir tum hosh me aayi aur sab bhul gyi...aur mujhe ram bula rhi ho jo ki m hamesha se sunna chahta tha...lekin ab nhi chahta...qki ab ehsas hota h ki mr.kapoor sirf tum hi bula sakti ho aur sirf tumhare hi muh se sunna achha lagta h...pls ek bar mr.kapoor bolo na

priya muskurati rhti h

ram...muskura kyun rhi ho bolo na..

Priya...muskura isliye rhi hu ki shayad kuchh kuchh apko janne lagi hu...r u sure na ki humdono ek dusre k sath bht pyar se rhte the...??

Ram...matlb???

Priya...matlb ye ki jaise abhi apne kaha..ki m jo apko bulati hu wo apko nhi sunna hota h...iska mtlb humdono bht opposite hain

ram...hehehe...wo to hain...pr wo humlogo ka nature h...usse hamare pyar pr fark nhi padhta h

priya...han wo to m dekh rhi hu...

Ram...achha behlao mat bolo na mr.kapoor...

Priya...abhi m change karne ja rhi hu...bad me sochungi is bare me

ram...are sochungi ka kya matlb h??..isme sochne wali kya bat h??

Priya muskura k chali jati h..jb wo fresh hoke bahar aati h to juhi aati h kamre me.

Priya...are juhi tum??..aao na..wha kyun khadi ho ??

Juhi..han wo mr.kapoor ne bataya ki tum

priya...excuse me...maine bola tha na mr.kapoor mt bulana wo sirf m bula sakti hu...aur koi nhi

juhi...i am sorry m bhul gyi thi..

Priya...dubara mat bhulna..kuchh kam tha??

Juhi...nahi dekhne aayi thi ki tumhe kuchh jaruart to nhi h na...

Priya...no...main ekdm theek hu...waise bhi mere pati hain mere pas wo bht khyal rkhte hain mera...

Juhi...han wo to h...theek h phir m chalti hu..koi bhi jarurat hogi to bula lena...

Priya...sure

juhi bahar jati h to ram khada rhta h...he is vry excited...

Ram...juhi...thank u thank u soo much yar tumne mere kehne pr priya k samne mujhe mr.kapoor kaha...ufff tum nhi janti priya ka ansr sun k m kitna khush hu

juhi...main janti hu ram

ram...thank u once again main priya se milke ata hu...

Juhi...hmmm

ram andar ata h...priya sofe pr baithi rhti h ram ko dekhte hi akr usse lipat jati h

ram...are priya kya hua???..sab theek to h??

Priya...mr.kapoor...ab m apko hamesha mr.kapoor hi bolungi

ram...are theek h pr ro kyun rhi ho.??

Priya...pta nhi...m ro nhi rhi hu...apne aap ansu nikal rhe hain...

Ram...hehehe...koi bat nhi i can undrstand ...dnt take too much stress...jo marzi wo bulao...bas mera man ek bar mr.kapoor sunne ka tha...wo mil gya...to sab mil gya...

She looks on him & randomly say...mr.kapoor mr.kapoor mr.kapoor...

Ram...its ok...chalo ab so jao u need rest..

Priya...kitna rest karu har waqt rest hi to karti hu

ram...ab jaldi theek hona h to rest to karna padega na

priya...hmm

ram...then go to bed & sleep...

To b continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Ok...aa gyi main yha khurafat karne...actully kya h ki priya ki court jane ki excitement dekh kar na main bhi supar excited ho gyi hu...aur mujhe ekdm pakka yakin h ki ye juhi bht bada locha karne wali h court me jiska andaza rambabu ko bhi nhi h...waise to i hv 2 days for cope up with story par control nhi ho rha h yar...i sooo want to back on track...pr uske liye jahan chhoda tha wha se milana to padega na boss...so here u all go with next update...hope u all like it...

Part 78...

"bas bahot ho gya"

ram aur priya tour se wapas aate hain...sare famiy wale unhe dekh kar hairan ho jate hain qki abhi to do aur din baki the...sabhi puchhne lagte hain ki kya hua???ye log jaldi kyun aa gye???tab ram btata h ki priya ki yaddasht wapas aa gyi h aur wo sabke pas wapas ana chahti thi...isiliye ye log wapas aa gye...sabhi bht khush hote hain ye sunkar...siway pihu k...she is actully an idiot.Rampriya kamre me ate hain...ram ko sabse yada jaldi suhani se milne ki rhti h akhir dono milke use ullu jo bnaya tha...wo suhani ko bulata h thodi der me suhani aa jati h...wo apni instruction shuru karti h use to pta nhi hota h ki ram ko sab pta h..priya muskura rhi hoti h aur ram use ajeeb ajeeb nazro se dekh rha hota h...

Suhani...kya...kya...hua...aaplog aise..

Ram...bas bht ho gya ...mujhe sab pta chal gya h..

Suhani ...kya pta...chal gya h...m kuchh...

Priya...hehehe...dnt wrry suhani maine mr.kapoor ko sab bta diya h..yaddasht k bar me...achha aplog bate kariye m pihu se milkar ati hu..

Ram...tumne bhi mujhse jhuth bola...

Suhani...sorry sir pr priya mam ki bat m nhi tal sakti thi...

Ram...are wah aur m kuchh mttr nhi karta tumhare liye...

Suhani...nahi aisi bat nhi h...agar aplog mere liye mttr nhi karte to m yha nhi hoti but..problm ye h ki priya mam ki yaddasht bhale hi theel ho pr unki cndition theek nhi h m unki bat nhi manne ka koi risk nhi le sakti thi...pichhle 7 sal me wo itni weak ho gyi h ki koi stress koi incident koi bhi sadma handle krne ki power bht kamjor ho gyi h unke deemag ki...hamari yhi khushnaseebi h ki unki yaddasht theek pr baki aur kuchh bhi theek nhi h to hame bht bht bht carefull rhna hoga...unke samne koi bhi ulti seedhi bat nhi honi chahiye...aur ap hamesha unke sath rhne ki koshis kariyega...

Ram...yes boss...achha mujhe ek bat bta sakti ho..?..priya ne ye sab kyun kiya???

Suhani...ye to mujhe nhi pta h aur maine pta karne ki koshish bhi nhi ki..

Ram...its ok...thank u priya aur hamara sath dene k liye...

Suhani...pls sir i am a doctor ye mera kam h...ab m chalti hu..

..after that..priya aur pihu ka convo...priya ka ram ko kuchh na btana aur pihu ka aur sar pr chadte jana...upar se ye juhi jo jeene nhi deti h yar...aajkl to serial walo ne suhani ko bhi impotant bna diya h...waise pta h ye suhani ko na serial me mujhe taunt karne k liye nalayko ne rakha h...cvs ko bht gali deti hu na to wo apni bhadas suhani ko tana mar k nikalte hain jo aake mujhpr prfect suit kar jata h...lol...anyways phir dheere dheer priya k samne kai cheeze aati h...aur finally juhi ne jo jhuth bola tha wo bhi samne aa gya...ab priya ne jid pakadi h court jane ki to defently koi jhol h..tabhi ye scene aya hi h serial me..khair...priya taiyar hokar aati h court jane k liye...ram use puchhta h ki wo cmfrtable to h court jane ko...to priya bolti h that she wants to handle it...sab court pahonchte hain...court scene start hota h...lawyr juhi se question karta h

lawyer...kya apne jo bayan diya h kya ap use ek bar phir se court me bta sakti hain...??...us din ram kapoor kahan the aur unke sath kaun tha???

Juhi...ji bilkul...us din ram kapoor aur main ek sath hamare kamre me the...

Lawyr...ok to ap eksath kya kar rhe the...

Juhi...ji ye to iska hissa nhi h...

Lawyr... bilkul h...jawab dijiye

juhi...hum shaadi discuss kar rhe the,...

Lawyr...kiski shaadi???

Juhi kuchh bolti h...ram aur priya ki tarf dekh rhi hoti h...ram ko bht bura lag rha hota h...qki wo to samjh nhi pa rha h juhi ki chal ko...

Lawyr...boliye juhi ji kiski shaadi???

Juhi...meri...

Lawyr...kiske sath???

Juhi...sidhdhant

lawyr...what???pr apne to kaha ki ap aur mr.kapoor had relation to ap kisi aur se shaadi kyun kar rhi thi...iska ,tlb ya to ap tab jhuth bol rhi thi ya ab...boliye kya sach h???...agr apki saadi sidhhant se honi thi to ram kapoor k nam se apna nam kyun joda...btaiye sach kya h??

Juhi rone lagti h..aur ram ki tarf dekhti h...

Lawyr...lagta h aap bhul gyi hain...main btata hu apne byan diya tha...ki aap us din mr.kapoor k sath thi aur apdono bht jald shaadi karne wale the...aur ap usike k bare me discuss kar rhe the,,,..phir aaj ye siddhhant beech me kahan se aa gya.. Bataiye..wrna apka byan jhutha man k mr.kapoor ko doshi bnate hue saja di jayegi...

Juhi's lawyr...uski jarart nhi padegi qki juhi ji ne jo bhi kaha h sach h...unki shaadi honi thi...wo bhi mr.kapoor se aur uska mere pas sabut bhi h...

Ab priya bht bechain ho rhi thi...uska deemag kam nhi kar rha tha...wo bas ram ko dekh rhi thi...

Lawyr...achha..??...aisa kya sabut h apke pas...

Juhi's lawyr...ye hai sabut inki aur ram kapoor ki shaadi ka...judge sahab aur bhi kai sabut hain...wedding hall ka managr jahan shaadi honi thi...wha ki details jo ram kapoor k nam pr buk tha...

Ab to priya ko chakkr ane lagta h aur wo whi behosh ho jati h ram pura shor machane lagta h aur lawyr ko continue karne ko bol kar priya ko lekar chala jata h...

Ye to h ekta style ka update...but m ye nhi dekhna chahti i want to see smthing diffrent as we know priya is vry strong agar 7 sal coma ko jhel sakti h to chhota sa sadma bhi jhel sakti h...but point is that h to biwi na aur mr.kapoor se pyar bhi bht karti h...to pyar ki to problm hi yhi h ki wo dard bhi bht deta h aur dard sehna bhi nhi janta h...bhai ap pati pr jan asani se de sakte hain pr uski sharing to mushkil se bhi nhi kar sakte...ap upar se kuchh bhi dikhaiye...pr pati to boss privt proprty hoti h uska exibition nhi kiya ja sakta h...i want to see her weakness & strenght together...isliye thoda sa scene change karna padega...priya to priya h aur usse bttr koi h nhi...aur bettr hota h wo hamesha alag hota h...to yha se meri style me update...jab lawyer juhi se sawal karna shuru karta h priya ram ki trf dekhne lagti h...jaise puchh rhi ho.. ye sab jhuth h na??...ram priya ka hath apne hath me le leta h jisse priya ko bht himmat milti h aur wo thoda sa muskura deti h...phir ata h sabse bada twist..jab priya ko ram aur juhi ki hone wali sadi k bare me pta chalta h...wo convo isliye nhi suna rhi hu qki wo to upar bta chuki hu ki wakilo k sawal jawb me sachhai bahar aa jati mujhe to yha ram priya k sath aur halat ko dikhana h...ye sunte hi priya thodi bechain hone lagti h...uski ankho me ansu aa jati h pr phir bhi wo ummeed se ram ki taraf dekh rhi hoti h...ram uske kandhe pr hath rakhta h aur bilkul uske pas aa jata h aur uska hath bhi pakade rhta h...priya bht strongly khud ko sambhalte hue muskurane ki koshis karti h..pr ram uski bechain dhadkno ko mehsus kar pa rha hota h...isiliye wo is waqt priya ko bilkul bhi nhi chhodna chahta h...khair sabhi behasbaji k bad...finally juhi k statement ko sach mante hue court faisla ram k haq me suna deta h...sab bht khush rhte hain priya bhi khush rhti h pr kuchh to tut gya tha uske andr jo wo dikha nhi rhi thi...lekin ram bar bar uski ankho me dekhne ki koshis kar rha tha pr priya ankhe mila hi nhi rhi thi...khair sabhi ek jagah ikattha hote hain juhi madm ko thank u wanku bolne ki rasm chalu ho jati h sabhi bht excited rhte hain pr priya ko aisa lag rha hota h jaise use koi janta pehchanta hi nhi h itni bheed me bhi wo akeli h...wo dheere dheere peechhe hatne lagti Hai...ram peechhe mud k dekhta h to priya ja rhi hoti h ram sabko chhod k priya k pas ata h aur use peechhe se pakadta h...

Ram... R u ok??

Priya...hmm...i am vry ok..

Ram..thak gyi ho???

Priya...han thoda sa

ram...chalo ghar chalte hain..

Priya...nahi...i am ok...ap dekh lijiye shayad apki yha jarurat h...

Ram...koi jarurat nhi h sab yha h...sid bhi..meri jarurat sirf tumhe h...chalo

priya...pr juhi..use bura lagega...

Ram...sshh...drivr gaadi le aao..

Dono ek sath ghar chale jate hain ram priya ko pakde hi rhta h...pta nhi q use sab theek dikh to rha tha pr theek lag nhi rha tha...khair sabhi ghar pahonchte hain...ram priya ko lekar kar kamre me jane wala hota h ki tabhi baki sab bhi aa jata hain...pihu ram ko bulati h...

Pihu...papa yha aaiye na...kuchh bat karni h...

Sath me juhi bhi rhti h..ye pihu sach me bht nalayak h yar bolti to h ki pyar karti pr pta nhi kaun se type ka pyar h mujhe samjh nhi ata...idiot apni ma k hal ki fikr to h nhi aur pyar k dave tamam karti h...hattt..

Ram...priya tum kamre me chalo m bas abhi aya...

Priya han me sir hila kr jane lagti h...aur ram idhar ane lagta h pr uska dhyan priya par hi rhta h...priya jaise hi stairs pr pair rakhne jati h...disbalance ho jati h...ram jor se chillata h priya...

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I so want to excute the raya convo about remarriage...pta nhi cvs precap k sath kya karenge...qki precap to phadu hota h lekin jab postr fat jata h to pta nhi kya nikal jata h...i mean serial me pta nhi kaise utna entrtaining nhi hota jitna precap me hota h...khair ye to ekta k cvs ki maya h whi jane...hamara to jo kam h hum wo kare...so moving on updates hope u all like it...

Part93

"chalo shadi kar lete hain"

rambabu bhi na bas meri hi trh ekdm chipku hain..jo deemag me ghus gya bas ghus gya...ab bhale hi usse public pareshan hi kyun na ho jaye...khair...rambabu ki gaadi pihu sammi me atki hui h priya ki rambabu me...aur meri indono me...ufff...sab kahin kahin atke hi h...chalo koshishe marda to madad e khuda...dekhe kaise sab ekdusre se bahar niklte hain...

Priya...kuchh bat karni thi...

Ram...pihu sammi k bare me...??

Priya ram ko ghurti h...ram...sorry yar glti se nikal gya muh se...

Priya smils...its ok..

Ram..:heyn tumne gussa nahi kiya??

Priya...i can undrstand mr.kapoor...qki m bhi waisa hi feel kar rhi hu jaisa aap...ek beti k parents hone me ye situation face karna normal h...pr hame sambhalna hoga..tabhi to hum bachho ko sambhalenge...agr hum hi pareshan rhenge to kaise hoga...

Ram...ok...ab nahi karunga unke bare me bat...

Priya...gud..maine pihu se bat ki h..wo khud hame aake bta degi jab use sahi lagega...

Ram...oh great..lekin jab tak wo nhi btayegi tab tak hum kya karenge??

Priya...gggrrr...mr.kapoor..kyun???...kam nhi h apke pas koi karne ko??

Ram..,hai to but deemag me to whi rhega to kam me man kaise lagega..??

Priya...to mind divrt kariye...main bhi to yhi karti hu

ram...hmmm

priya...kya hmm..??

Ram...mind divrt karne ka tareeka dhundh rha hu...

Priya...kuchh mila???

Ram chillata h...yeeesss

priya...kya hua??

Ram...mil gya...

Priya...kya??

Ram...idea...

Priya...kya???

Ram..jab tak pihu hame apni pasand k bare me nhi btati aur mrriage ka kuchh nhi hota...tab time pas k liye hum shadi kar le???

Priya...what???

Ram...are hum legly devorcd h na...bhul gyi...to dubara shaadi to karni padegi...

Priya...but...mr.kapoor ...is...umar me shaadi...???

Ram...kyun is umar me divorce ho sakta h to dubara shaadi kyun nhi ho sakti...uske liye phir se jawan hona padega kya???...shaadi ki koi umar nhi hoti h...

Priya...wo to theek h ..pr ye bht odd h mr.kapoor bachho ki shaadi ki umar me ma bap shadi karenge...

Ram...cmon yar...itni mushkil se main apna mind divrt karne ki koshish kar rha hu aur tum sath nhi de sakti...??..kaisi biwi ho???

Priya...biwi kahan hu mr.kapoor ...biwi to shaadi k bad banungi na...

Ram...oho...mtlb...tumtaiyar ho..??

Priya...han lekin m jyada tamjham nhi karungi aur gharwalo se bat nhi karungi is bare me...

Ram...are tum bas han keh do meri jan ...baki sabkuchh main sambhal lunga...

Priya...ok...

Ram...woow..itni asani se man gyi???

Priya...le...hadh h mr.kapoor man jati hu to bhi apko problm nhi manti hu to bhi apko problm...apko pta h apki problm kya h apko na bina matlb k Problms create karne ki adat h...

Ram priya ka muh band kar deta h...

Ram...baapre...thoda sa chhod do to kitna bolti ho yar???

Priya ram ka hath apne muh pr se hatati h..

Priya...are apne hi to kaha tha kal ki apne meri bate bht miss ki in sat salo me to whi kami puri kar rhi thi..

Ram...hahaha...vry funny...bat bat pr tana marna kabhi khtm nhi hota na tumhara

priya...nahiii

ram...chalo ok...leave it...i am vry excited ...hayeee meri shaadi hone wali h

priya...meri bhi...so mee too..

Ram...hain na..: chalo chalo gharwalo se bat karte hain...

Priya...han chaliye..

Dono jane lagte hain..tabhi ram rukta h...

Ram...priya...ek min...mujhe abhi bhi daubt ho rha h yar..

Priya...kis bat ka???

Ram...yhi ki tum itni asani se har mat k liye taiyar kaise ho ja rhi ho??...koi dialogue nhi mara...lecture bhi nhi diya...argue bhi nhi kiya...kahin kuchh irade to gadbad nhi h tumhare???

Priya...h na...main planning kar rhi hu...

Ram...kis cheez ki???

Priya...yhi ki aap mujhse shaadi karne jayenge to main mandap se bhag jaungi...

Ram...kyun???

Priya...gggrrr...mr.kapoor..hadh karte hain yar...jaruri h kya ki har cheez ki excitment sirf apko hi ho...main excite nhi ho sakti kya?..isme daubt ki kya bat h..are pehli shaadi to aise hi samjhaute type se ho gyi ab dubara mauka mil rha h to usko enjoy nhi kar sakti hu kya m.??:

ram...oh my god mujhe laga tum seriously bhagne ka soch rhi ho...tumhari gol gol bate na kabhi kabhi dara deti h yar...

Priya...hehehe...

Ram...shutup...isme hasne wali koi bat nhi h..dekho mera dil kitni tezi se dhadk rha h...dubara mujhe chhod k bhagne ka khyal bhi mat lana..

Priya...are to m chhod k thode hi bhagne wali thi...main to dulhe ko bhaga k le jane wali thi..

Ram...bas bht ho gyi comedy...seriously bolo...r u ok na...shaadi karne k liye ready???

Priya...101%

ram...toh bhage...i mean chale bat karne..

Priya...ekdm jaldi se..

Dono jane ko hote hain to ram phir se ruk jata h...

Priya...ab kya hua???

Ram...meri ek shart h

priya...are shart kyun??..main to khud hi raazi hu

ram...han ye bhi h...to theek h meri ek khwahish h...puri karogi??

Priya...har man to manti hu apki...kabhi mna kiya h kya???..pr ye to btaiye ki karna kya h??

Ram...wo bad me btaunga...bas tum bolo han ya na??

Priya...han...pr apko bhi whi karna padega jo main bolungi...

Ram...are ye to blackmailing h yar...

Priya...ji nhi ye haq aur pyar h...

Ram...ok done..humdono ekdusre ki bat manenge...chalo ab chalke sabse bat karte hain

priya...finally...pleaassee

finally dono bahar jate hain..aur pure gharwalo ko bulate hain...sabhi super excited rhte hain ki ab kya hone wala h??..ye to pta hi tha ki rampriya ne bulaya h to kuchh achha hi hoga...lekin rajeev aur juhi ko bht ajeeb lag rha tha...khair..sab aate hain...rambabu bat karna shuru to karte hain...pr shuru kar nhi pate hain...qki kaise shuru kare unhe samjh nhi aa rha hota h..actully khud apni shaadi ki bat karna bht odd hota h...theek h ki ye dusri shaadi h..i mean dusri bar h.. But shaadi to shaadi hi hoti h na chahe jitni bhi bar ho agar khushi kam nhi hoti to dar bhi kam nhi hota h...shaadi to shaadi hoti h chahe jis umar me ho jis wajah se ho...ajeeb hi hoti h...

Ram..wo...actully kya h..are yar priya kaise bolu..

Priya...pta nhi...mne to pehle hi bol diya tha ki main kuchh nhi bolungi..aap ko jo kehna h jo karna h...kariye...

Ram...thats not fair yar koi apne pati k sath

priya...aah please dialogue nhi...bat kariye...

Ram...ok fine...humdono shaadi karne ja rhe hain..

Pihu pari myra...yeee...woow...partyyy...shaaadi...yesss...yesss

ram...ek min...shor mt karo pehle bat suno...aisa h ki kuchh gadbadiyo ki wajah se ye sab ho gya...divorce & all that...to mujhe sabkuchh theek karna h...ekdm perfect...jo ki hamare sath kabhi nhi hota...lekin is bar kuchh gadbad nhi hogi...pichhli bar to awaiye shaadi ho gyi thi lekin is bar hum shaadi ka pura maza lenge...

Priya...mr.kapoor...ye thoda jyada nhi ho rha h...

Ram...are yar pls...abhi koi bandhan nhi chahiye...kyun..??..aplog kya kehte hain??


Sab eksath bolte hain...yesss...is bar to full to dhamal hoga...ab aplog dekhiye hum bachhe hamare mummy papa ki kaise mast wali shaadi karate hain...

Rampriya ek dusre ka muh dekhne lagte hain...

Ram...ek min...humdono ekdusre ki marzi se shaadi karenge...

Bachhe...matlb??

Ram...usme tumlogo ko deemag lagane ki jarurat nhi h...tumlog bas...muhurat pandit aur rasmo tak apna deemag chalao..humdono ko kya karna h wo hum dekh lenge...

Bachhe...how rude...

Rampriya...shutup

priya muskurati rhti h pr bht excited rhti h aur rambabu to excitment ki dukan hi ho gye hain...lol..

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Ufff..after watching mera to dil hi tut gya yaaar..btao bhala itna asman me udaya aur phir lake dhadam se jamin pr patak diya...mujhe to khajur bhi nhi diya ki m bol saku ki asman se tapke khajur me atke...are ye seedhe patke yar...huh...itni jaldi yaddasht wapas aa gyi wo bhi kaise mod pr...jab ki rambabu bahar jane ka plan bna hi rhe the...shiiittt...yar...pr pta h kya...iske bhi do reason find out kiye mne...ek to ki plan bna k main atak gyi thi to inlogo ko destination clear nhi hua hoga...dusre logo ne mujhe thoda pampr kar diya to cvs ka ego beech me aa gya hoga...stupid big fat ego...huh..isiliye yaddasht wapas lake hamare armano pr pani pher diya...khair hum to boss kabhi nhi sudhrenge...itni buri tarah se dil tuta h phir bhi ummeed ka daman nhi chhoda..to phir se ek scene ghum gya deemag me..with promo...hehehe.:..hum kuchh nhi kar sakte yar...control hi nhi hota...to ek aur update to bnta h...here u all goes...50 pages pure hone ki khushi me thoda aur khush kar deti hu public ko...move on updates...

Part 77

"aap har bat man lete hain"

rampriya ka karwachouth bhi ho gya serial ki taraf se gale milna bhi ho gya...mangalsutra scene bhi ho gya...kaafi decent tha..ram pehna de dete to char chand lag jata...hayeee cand se yad aaya...duniya ka ek aur itihas badal gya balh me chand bhi lal ho gya...ye khurafat shayad chhote khush aur pihu ka hoga unhone hi chand pr painting kar di hogi...lol...anyways..naina ki wajah se priya ko kuchh kuchh yad bhi aa gya...kafi humgame k bad priya ram k pas aati h...ram bechara bht disappointed rhta h ye sab dekhkar...ek to life waise hi super risky h...biwi ki yaddasht nhi h to uske react karne ka koi thikana nhi rhta h...kab kis bat pr kaise react kare...upar se khud k bachhe to h hi jan khane k liye padosi k bachhe bhi sar pr nach rhe hain...hadh h...khair...best part pta h kya h...ufff...meri jan sakshi...gooodd...she is sooo natural sweet ufff how she talks yar...mazaaa aa jata h...loved it more than anything...har scene k sath bestest hoti jati h...kitni bar bolu yar...??...love her...khair...updates...to priya rambabu k pas aati h..waise aajkl rambabu bhi bht smart ho gye hain...haye...ideal pati bnne ki puri taiyari h boss...to priya ki har bat sunte hain aur han me han milate hain...love it...but abhi thode depress hain...

Priya...ram

ram...priya agar yha itni problm h to kahin aur chalte hain...yha se dur sabse dur...

Priya...kahan jayenge??...phir se jaipur??

Ram...jaipur ???..tumhe jaipur yad h...kuchh aur bhi...???

Priya...han mujhe sab kuchh yad h...hamara pyar hamara sath hamare bachhe...sab kuchh mr.kapoor

ram...sach priya...

Priya...han mr.kapoor

dono gale lag jate hain...thodi der waise hi rhte hain phir priya bolti h...

Priya...mr.kapoor aap khush hain

ram...bht jyada priya...tumhe sab yad aa gya mujhe aur kya chahiye???

Priya...aap meri har bat man lete hain na..

Ram...matlb???

Priya...mr.kapoor m janti hu ki aap mujhe bht pyar karte hain aur bht khush dekhna Chahte hain...main bhi apko bht khush dekhna chahti hu par kuchh kar nhi pa rhi hu...

Ram...mtlb priya ab kyun aise baten kar rhi ho???

Priya...i am sorry

ram...wwhhhyyy???

Priya...mne jhuth bola mujhe kuchh yad nhi aya h

ram...oh pr phir ye pyar bachhe...

Priya...cmon mr.kapoor aap aise karte hain to ekdm golu lagte hain...are its vry obious na jab hamare bachhe hain to hamare beech pyar hoga tabhi to bachhe hain...

Ram...hehehe...lekin jaipur

priya...wo to dadi ne mujhe btaya..bato bato me

ram...okkk...but ye mr.kapoor???...

Priya...eehhhmm...are ye to aap hi ne bola tha ki m apko mr.kapoor bulati thi jo ki apko bht pasand h to...

Ram...huh vry smart...kya yar..

Priya...sorry na...ap itne pareshan the to

ram...its ok..

Priya...par mne jhuth bola na...

Ram...taki sach mujhe bura na lage

priya...hehehe...meri bat mujhi pr...

Ram...option nhi h na...are tum itna tension mat lo yar...aa jayega yad...main hu na tumhare sath...itna yad aaya na baki bhi aa jayega...

Priya...han pr aap sach sach bolenge tab na...jhuthi kahaniya sunayenge to kaise yad ayega...??

Ram...matlb??

Priya...are mr.malhotra wali

ram...goood...bas karo yar...bhul jao mr.malhotra ko tumhe sirf mr.kapoor yad rhna chahiye aur koi mr nhi chalega...

Priya...oh possessive at 60...

Ram...oh madm possessive hone ki koi umar nhi hoti...

Priya...achha achha theek h...ek aur bat kehni thi...

Ram...kya???

Priya...ye jaipur ka kya kissa h???

Ram...wooow...chalen kya jaipur??

Priya...ufff...mr.kapoor

ram...hahaha...pr seriously yar kahin to chalte hain...kisi purani jagah taki tum yha ki bheed se irritate bhi na ho aur shayad tumhe kuchh yad bhi aa jaye...

Priya...are mr.kapoor ye to family h na bheed kyun keh rhe hain...?..aur rhi kahin jane ki bat to wo to mujhse behtar ap hi jante hain ki hum kahan ja sakte hain taki mujhe kuchh yad aa jaye...

Ram...ok let me try

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ufff...its tooo late na par kya kare...mazbur the isiliye updates nhi aayi waise lag nhi rha h ki kisi ne updates ko jyada miss kiya...anyways apna kam to h update dena to wo to dena hi padega...aajkl na mujhko rambabu bht gussa dila dete hain yar...ek to pta nhi unka pyar kaisa h jo bhai behno ka nam aate hi fisal jata h dusre bina mtlb k muh fulate rhte hain...koi kitna manaye yar...hattt..aur ye priya bhi kuchh kam nhi h jab pta h ki uska pati khiska hua h to kya jarurat h bar bar chhedne ki...dono ullu hain aur undono se bade ullu hum hain jo inke peechhe pagal hue rhte hain...khair..last episode achha tha pr cvs apni bewkufi atlast jarur dikha jate hain taki m unhe jee bhar k galiya de saku...kamino ko divorce mttr dikhane k liye pihu aur khush hi mile the...chhote chhote bachho ko bhi nhi chhodte apni bewkufi me...padhai likhai nhi dikhayenge bachho ki pr politics solid dikhayenge...aur itne k bad bhi rambabu ki akal thikane nhi aati...pagal bhai behno k chakkr me sab barbad karenge...khair...ab to sab kuchh priya aur vikram k bharose hi chhoda h mne qki rambabu to bhai behno k pyar me andhe ho gye hain...ho kya gye hain hamesha hi rhte hain...anywys dekhte hain...aage sab milkr kya gul khilate hain.:...lets move on updates...

Part 66

"ab mujhe hi kuchh karna hoga"




ram pihu milkar priya ko pareshan kar rhen hain...priya ko gussa ata h..wo wapas aake dono ko ghurti h...dono abhi bhi waise hi baithe rhte hain...priya gusse se bolti h...

Priya...kya ho rha h ye sab??..kya natak laga rakha h apdono ne???

Rampihu...shhh ..hum wait kar rhe hain???

Priya...wait??... Kis cheez ka wait???

Pihu...sshhh...mumma shor mat kariye bas aram se hamare pas khadi rahiye

priya...kyun???

Pihu...qki hum wait kar rhe hain???

Priya...mr.kapooor...kya h ye sab???

Ram...main...mujhe...mujhe kyun puchh rhi ho pihu se puchho..

Priya...pihuuu..

Pihu...no mumma maine kuchh nhi kiya...papa ne bola ki agar main apse naraz nhi rahungi aur happy ho jaungi to wo mujhe ek magic dikhayenge jiske liye hame thoda wait karna padega to hum whi wait kar rhe hain...

Priya...achhhaaa...aur wo magic kya h...jiska tumlog wait kar rhe ho???

Pihu...papa ne bola m happy ho jaungi wo mujhe chhote baby ka kick dikhayenge...

Priya...oh...unhone kaha aur tumne man liya...baby...papa to golu hain par aap to samjhdar ho...baby to mumma k tummy me hai to apko kick dikhayi kaise dega???

Pihu...han mumma puchha tha maine to papa ne bola yhi to magic h...

Priya ram ko ghurti hai...ram dusri taraf dekhne lagta h...

Priya...pihu aisa h baby aap jake taiyar ho jao...main jra apke papa ko magic dikha k ati hu

pihu...are par magic to mujhe bhi dekhna h

priya...baby..ye chhota baby ka magic nhi h ye bade logo ka magic h apko samjh nhi ayega...apka magic main apko bad me dikhaungi...ok

pihu...ok mumma

pihu chali jati hai priya kamar pr hath rakh kar rambabu k samne khadi rhti hai...rambabu bechare golu type ka muh bna k bolte hain...

Ram...mujhe office jane k liye late ho rha h...m ... Taiyar ho jata hu...

Priya...areee...ek min mr.kapooor...aaj to sunday h na to aaj kaunsa office khula h...main kya soch rhi hu ki aaj sunday hone ka fayda uthate hain aur sara din main apko magic dikhati hu...maza ayega...nhi?...

Ram...areee yar sorry galti ho gyi..

Priya...glti ho gyi???...aap kuchh bhi sikhate hai...mtlb apko ek kam karne ko bola to apne ulta seedha padha rhe hain...hadh karte hain mr.kapoor aap...hamesha:..

Ram...ssshh...sorry yar maf kar do pr mujhe isse achha tareeka nhi pta tha pihu ko manane ka...aur kya hua bas yhi to bola ki chhote baby ka magic dikhaunga...

Priya...bas...han bas itna hi to bola...aap kya jadugr hain jo apki marzi se chhota baby kick mar dega...ufff...pta nhi mujhe to samjh hi nhi ata ki itne sare bachho ko main kaise sambhalungi...

Ram...hehehe

priya...dant mat dikhaiye...jake taiyar ho jaiye...

Ram...are pr tumne to abhi bola ki tum aaj sara din magic dikhane wali ho...

Priya...mr.kapooor...gggrrhh

ram...ja rha hu yar...kya chillati ho...

Ram chala jata h priya muskurane lagti hai...par sochti h ki bekar me sabko dant diya pihu ka kitna man hoga...are pr ab kisi ki marzi se to kick aayega nhi wo to jab ana hoga tabhi ayega na...phir bhi priya pihu k liye kuchh to karna chahti thi...
Priya sochti h ki rambabu se to ab kuchh hone wala nhi h...ek kam kaho to sab ulta seedha karke rakh dete hain...wo sochti h ab use hi kuchh karna hoga to phir neha k sath milke plan bnta h outing ka...after that jo episode me hua wo sab hua...khair natasha itni jaldi sudhar gyi ye mere liye thoda shocking tha qki mne aisa socha na tha...pr ho gya...rishabh ka to sure tha ki wo sudhar hi jayga qki bigda hua charactr usko suit hi nhi karta wo bujurgo ki sewa karta hua hi theek..jyada role de diya tha cvs ne isiliye uska deemag satak gya..khair mere liye ek aur cheez shocking thi judwa bachhe...ufff mujhe ek bachhe ki story update karne me itna time lag jata h do bachho k sath m kya karungi pta nhi...khair best part aajkl k episode ka hoti h meri sakshi...she is simply amazing & impossible yar...ufff..kya acting kar rhi h...judwa bachho ko tummy rakhne ka ...hayeee..dead on her..aur jab hanf hanf kar bate karti h...ufff sooo natural...aur main bhi puri ufff hi hu...sakshi ka nam ata nhi h ki bas chalu...waise rambabu bhi kafi sudhar gye hain...are pehle hi directrs ko bol dena tha ki boss jinda logo ki bate mujhe samjh nhi aa rhi hain...qki m unhe sunta nhi hu...to mujhe bhut dikhao taki m shock se chup ho jao aur wo nonstop mujhpr lecture ki barsat kar de aur mujhe cheeze samjh aa jaye...lol...wah rambabu apka jawab nhi...khair...m bade shaukh se baithi thi last episode dekhne with raya dance...tha to 2 min ka but i enjoy it...lekin uske bad sab crap...mtlb...dance aur situation k sath thoda aur behtar bnaya ja sakta tha episode ko...to mujhe puri trh satisfaction nhi hui to mne ye ichha jahir ki...ki kash mne last episode likha hota to kuchh log jo mujhe jhel pate hain unhone kaha...ki likh lo...to maine socha ki ab ye jab apne pair pr kulhadi marwane ko taiyar hain to mujhe to bas bahana chahiye bolne ka...so m is scene ko apne hisab se likhne ja rhi hu...shayad public ko pasand aa jaye.. ...

To scene chal rha hota h...nuts ki auction party me raya dance ka ...priya thak jati h to dono dance karna band kar dete hain...phir ati h boli lagane ki bari...wo bhi ho jata h...phir ate hain bhanu bhaiya...unki bhi nautanki chalu h...priya sab dekh rhi hoti h..maze bhi le rhi hoti h...phir thodi der bad priya sochti h ki ek last koshis kar le shayad rambabu ko yad aa gya ho ki aaj kya khas din h...rambabu vikram aur bhanu k sath full to masti k mood me hain...ab bhanu ka to nature aur reason dono hi pta chal chuka h serial me aane ka to wo har mauke par chauka chhakka mare ja rha h aur lastly clean bold karne k liye natasha k sath dance bhi kar leta h...priya ram k pas aati h ram unhe dekh kar rha hota h priya peechhe se ake ram k kandhe par hath rakh kar kehti hai...

Priya...mr.kapoor...

Ram...are priya aao aao...dekho natasha aur bhanu kitna achha dance kar rhe hain na

priya...hmmm

ram...waise dono sath me achhe lag rhe hain na

priya...hmmm

ram...tumhe pta h ye vikram ka bhai h...aur natasha k sath college me padhta tha

priya..:.hmmm

ram...aur pta h tumhe...colloge me ye chhoti ko pasand bhi karta tha...ya yun keh lo pyar karta tha...magar phir chhoti aur kartik...

priya...hmmm

ram...kya h yar tabse hmm hmm kar rhi ho kuchh bol nhi rhi ho

actully ram natasha aur bhanu ki trf dekh kar bate kar rha tha aur priya ram ki trf...ram priya ki taraf dekhta h wo use ghur rhi hoti h...

ram...are yar bta do na aaj kya special h

priya...aap jo abhi mujhe kissa suna rhe the ye kab ki bat h??

ram...are yhi koi 10-11 sal pehle ki bat h...kyun???

priya...oh...nhi aise hi...apki yaddasht bht achhi h...main bht thak gyi hu ja rhi hu kamre me...

ram...are par abhi to 9 hi baje hain...achha ruko main bhi chalta hu...

priya...nhi aap enjoy kariye m chali jaungi...

ram...are pr bta to do aaj kya khas h

priya...by mr.kapoor...

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Part 80

"jisko jaise jeena h jiye"

priya neeche aati h sabhi uski taraf dekh rhe hote hain...jaise wo jane kaun sa bomb phodne wali h... Lol..khair...priya k deemag ko samjhna itna bhi asan nhi h boss..inlogo ko lag rha h ki wo kuchh nhi janti h lekin jitna wo janti h shayad utna inlogo ko bhi nhi pta h...jo inlogo ne sat salo me khuli ankho se bhi nhi dekha hoga..wo priya ne ankhe khulne k kuchh pal bad hi dekh liya h...but wo sabko bta nhi sakti h qki janti h ki sab uski bat ko manenge nhi...qki unke beech sat sal ki duriya h pehle use ye khtm karni padegi phir sabke stuck mind jo ki juhi me atka hua h ko wash karna padega...tab kahin jakr jo priya chahti h wo hoga...anyways...priya bolna shuru karti h...

Priya...main janti hu...ki mere wapas ane se bht sari cheeze badal gyi h...sabhi ki jindgiya disturb ho gyi h...mujhe aise lagta h jaise meri yha koi jagah hi nhi h m jabrdsti khud ko isme fit karne ki nakam si koshise karti rhti hu...mujhe pta h ki sabne apni apni life apne tareeke se set kar li h...mere ghar wale mere bachhe yha tak ki mr.kapoor bhi...so i realise ki mujhe koi haq nahi h ki m kisi ki bhi life me intrfear karu...aur mr.kapoor ki life me to bilkul bhi nhi...qki unhone to mujhe divorce hi de diya h...upar se wo to moove on bhi karne wale the...khair...par main kya karu...main khud ko nhi roke pati hu...qki m mr.kapoor se bht pyar karti hu aur m kisi bhi hal me unka pyar nhi bant sakti kisi k bhi sath nhi...aur bachhe...??..unhe kaise chhod du..bhale hi sat sal me unhe dusri ma mil gyi h par m kya karu??..maine to unhe janm diya h na...mere to sharir ka hissa h wo...to m to unhe khud se alag nhi kar paungi na...lekin iska ye bilkul bhi matlb nhi h ki agar m aisa nhi kar sakti to aplog jabrdsti mere sath jude rhe...nhi...bilkul bhi nhi...aj k bad main kisi ko kuchh nhi kahungi...jise jaise jina h jiye...jaise rhna h rhe...jisse rishte nibhana h nibhaye...m ab kisi ko disturb nhi karungi...bas aur kuchh nhi kehna h mujhe ja rhi hu m yha se...

Ram...priyaaa...ye sab kya h...??..kyun aise kar rhi ho???

Priya...mr.kapoor aap mujhse ek mauka mang rhe the na...theek h...agar jindgi ne mujhe ek mauka diya h to main bhi apko ek mauka deti hu...theek kar dijiye cheezo ko...pls...

Ram...han priya m sab theek kar dunga bas tum kahin jana nhi...pls..

Priya...lekin yha rahu bhi kis haq se..??

Ram...apne bachho ki ma hone k haq se...meri biwi hone k haq se ..is ghar ki jan hone k haq se..

Priya...par ye sare haq to divorce paper k sath khtm ho gye...qki mera rishta to sabse pehle apse h...uske bad ye sab meri jindgi me aaye...to jab apka aur mera hi rishta nhi rha to kaise rhu yha...jane dijiye mujhe...

Ram...jane to m tumhe dunga nhi...diya h na tumne mujhe ek mauka to us mauke ko dekhne k liye to tumhe yha rukna hi padega...tum kahin nhi jaogi...promise me...tum kahin nhi jaogi...aur rhi bat hamare rishte ki to use m abhi badal deta hu...

Ram mandir se sindur lakar priya ki mang me dal deta h..

Ram...lo jaise rishta khtm hua Waise hi rishta phir se jud gya...

How mean rambabu..paise bacha k kya achar dalenge...deemag to nhi hi kharch karte hain paise bhi kharch nhi kiye...?..free me shaadi kar li...huh...

Sab ram ki taraf dekhne lagte hain...priya bhi...tabhi neha vikram bhi aa jate hain...

Neha...are kya family drama chal rha h bhai...oye hero...aise kaise shaadi kar li...itna asan h kya...??..sindur laga diya shadi ho gyi

vikram...han neha bilkul theek keh rhi h hamari bhi isne jabrdsti dusri shaadi karayi thi na neha...

Neha...haaa...right...to ...kya karen???

Vikram...karna kya h???...inki bhi karwao pakad ke...aur kya...

Sare gharwale hasne lagte hain...pr priya bilkul bhi mazak k mood me nhi dikh rhi h...wo wha se chali jati h...jiska ehsas ram ko bhi ho jata h...wo bhi priya k peechhe peechhe jata h...

Ram...priyaaa...priya...bat to suno...

Priya...kyun sunu...apke liye ye sab mazak h na...aap kabhi nhi samjh payenge...mere halat ko...

Ram priya ko pakadne ki koshis karta h...

Priya peechhe hat jati h...no...dnt touch me...u cnt do this...ap har bar mujhe behka nhi sakte hain...

Ram...behkane ki kya bat h isme...shaadi to ki mne tumse abhi...agar tum us halat me hue divorce ko sach man sakti ho to is halat me hui shaadi ko bhi sach mano...

Priya...main kuchh nhi janti...bas mere andr bht gussa h apke liye

ram...to theek h nikal lo apna gussa...

Priya rone lagti h...ap janbujhkar aise karte hain mere sath...taki har bat k liye mujhme hi guilt ho...kyun karte hain aap ye sab???

Ram...theek h main nhi karta koi jabrdsti tumhare sath...lekin tum chahe jitni bhi duri bnane ki koshis karo...main hamesha tumhe pane ki koshis karta hi rhunga aur tumhe ye ehsas dila kar rhunga ki mere liye sirf tum mayne rakhti ho aur koi nhi...

Ram itna keh kar chala jata h priya ko bht bura lagta h aur khud par bht gussa bhi ata h pr wo kuchh nhi kar sakti qki cheeze itni uljhi hui h ki unhe suljhane k liye use aisa bnna hi padega...lekin wo kisi ko b mr.kapoor aur uske bachho ko usse dur karne nhi degi...juhi ko bhi nhi...

Ram study me rhta h...neha vikram ate hain..

Neha...fatty...ab kya hua??..

Ram...kuchh nhi

vikram...cmon yar bta na kya hua...??

Ram...are yar priya bht naraz h...usne sab cheezo ko bht seriously le liya h...tumlog to jante ho na meri aur juhi ki shaadi k liye kya halat the...kaise use samjhau???

Neha...mat samjhao

ram vikram...matlb???

Neha...dekha its vry simpl...priya dikhati nhi h pr usko tumhara kisi aur k sath ek pal k liye hona bhi bardasht nhi hota h aur hum iska fayeda utha sakte hain na..karne do use jo karti h...hum kuchh kam thode hi h...usko usi ke teer se nishana bnayenge...agr hum samjhayenge to use lagega hum tumhari side lekar use force kar rhe hain...tum samjhaoge to use lagega...ki tum uspe taras kha kar ye sab kar rhe ho...kuchh din ruk jao...bas uska khyal rakho usko pyar do wo khud theek ho jayegi...bas uski insecurity h jo uske andr gussa bankar bhari hui h...

Ram...par pyar kaise du?..pyar hi to nhi karne de rhi h
Neha vikram...hahahah...control yar

ram dono ko ghurne lagta h...

Vikram...sorry sorry yar...ye neha bhi na ekdm stupid h

neha...aye...mne kya kiya...tum khud ko dekho pehle

ram...aye tumdono mere sar pr lado mat..mera deemag already bht khrab h

neha...fatttyy...aye...cmon yar...relax..diya h na priya ne ek mauka...to uthate hain na hum us mauke ka fayda...bs tu relax rh yar

vikram...han hu do do sarfiro ko eksath handle nhi kar sakte...

Ram...aye...

Neha...aur nahi to kya...ekdusre se itna pyar karte ho tumlog phir bhi hamesha hame hi beech me padna padta h tumlogo ki uljhane suljhane k liye..

Ram...ahahaha..ehsan karne ki jarurat nhi h m sambhal lunga...

Vikram...kaise sambhalega tu hi to bol rha tha ki pyar nhi karne de rhi h

neha...hahahah...gud one baby...ok ok..time out...dekho ram...hum hamesha tumhare sath h...but priya ko thoda waqt aur pyar do...itna sab kuchh ho gya h uske sath...wo adjust nhi kar pa rhi h...pls undrstand na

ram...hmm

vikram...chal hum chalte hain...jab bhi jarurat ho hame bula lena...we will always there for both of u...

Ram...thanks yar...

Neha...han theek h chalo rakh liya tumhara thanx...take care...by

neha vikram chale jate hain ram sochta rhta h...ki ab kya kare??..kaise sab sambhale...but he hv to...udhar priya bhi isi uljhan me h...ki kaise sab suljhaye...in sab me sabse jyada uljhi hui hain pari aur myra...

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Hmm...again thoda late kar diya...actully raya love me dubi hui thi...socha phir mauka mile na mile...waise bhi ajkl raya veena type ka romance karne lage hain na...chhodiye na...nahi chhodunga...hayeee...kitna decent love lagta h yar...pta nhi sab c-night k chakkr me kyun pade rhte hain...are ye pyar ka apna maza hota h...pyar karne k liye chhed bhi do aur keh bhi do ki nhi karna h...lol..pta h mujhe pehli bar sabse mast dialogue rambabu ka laga when he said..."to main nhi chhodne wala hu"...hayeee..are to kaun keh rha h chhodne k liye waise wo pura scene hi awsm tha...aur meri sakshi...ufff...hihihi...mujhe pta h ye line padne k bad sabne ek bar to jarur bola hoga ..."shuru ho gyi ye"...but what to do yar...bina sakshi k bare me bole to m aage badh hi nhi sakti na meri gaadi atak jati h yar...ok let me talk...sakshi to ekdm jalwa thi yar...kya dekhti h...ufff anybody can fall in love with her...aur upar se jo budhha bola na haye...ki budhho ko bhi jawani aa jaye...awsm she is...pta nhi m janti hu ki uski tareef k liye words nhi hote hain mere pas phir bhi m nakam si koshise jarur karti hu...mtlb main pura scene haye haye kar ke dekha...itna maza to mujhe c-night wale me bhi nhi aya tha...actully mujhe na bate kar kar k pyar karne me bada maza ata h isiliye mujhe ye jyada pasand aya...khair main aur meri sakshi to aksar bate karte hi rhenge...aur mere liye to sakshi hi bht h khush rhne aur jeene k liye

...par logo ko ajkl badi problm ho rhi h qki leap aane wala h..whatevr...serial me sakshi h na...bachhe chhote ho ya bade rhenge to usi k na...pati to uska ram hi rhega na...to kya hua budhha ho jayega...hihihi.:sorry..scene to sakshi hi karegi na...to main uska budhapa afford kar sakti hu pr use nhi dekhna afford nhi kar sakti..bas leap me ek hi bat buri hui ki hamari darling pihu ka sath chhut jayega..but i know she is vry talented girl...wqt k sath aur nikhar kar aayegi phir se...& its really plsr to watch her with raya...hamare ghar me sab uske fan the..aur hamesha sab yhi kehte the...ki ekdm rambabu ki beti lagti h...awsm,...par har cheez apne mukam pr to jati h...for our darlin amrita...

"kab bichhad jaye humsafar hi to h
kab badal jaye ek nazar hi to h
jano dil jispe fida hote hain..
Aur kya ahede wafa hote hain
log milte hain juda hote hain"


always love u baby ..u r really a rockstar..god bless u with lots of success & happiness...

Ufff bht senti ho gya na..pihu h hi aisi...khair back on track...priya madm ko phir se cidgiri ka chaska lag gya h...do do bachhe lekar bhi jasusi kar leti h...anyways...mujhko bhi na priya wali hi bimari h...mera daubt kabhi khtm hi nhi hota aur mera doubt to whi natasha pr hi atka hua h...pta nhi q main usko itni achhi hazam hi nhi kar pati...bechari...hamesha mere shaq ki shikar ho jati h...lol..mujhe na pta nhi kyun lag rha h ki ye roshni chopra ka kissa raya pr bht bhari padne wala h...aur mujhe lagta h ye nuts madm ne hi koi jadu ki chhadi ghuma rakhi h..ye bhanu bhi usika chela ho shayad...khair...main janti hu ki main sochne me ekta se panga nhi le sakti phir bhi leti rhti hu...prediction karti rhti hu aur wo glt hoti rhti h...anyways...kitni bakwas karti hu yar...adha update hota h aur adhi meri bakwas...lol...achha chalo finally star my update...hope u all like it...

Part 68

"behn ki glti ki saza"

priya ram ko ghur rhi hoti h...ram hamesha confuse ho jata h priya k aise expressions se..

Ram...are ab kya hua???abhi to bht khush thi ab aise kyun dekh rhi ho???

Priya...qki mr.kapoor mujhko samjh nhi ata h ki m apka kya karu???

Ram...aree ab mne kya kiya???

Priya wo dress ram ko dikhati h...

Ram...hailaaa...ye isme kahan se aa gya???

Priya...sirf yhi nhi h...ek aur bhi h

ram...kya??

Priya...han ye dekhiye...

Ram...are yar ye mne nhi kiya h...sachchi m tumhare hi liye laya tha...

Priya...how sweet...lagta h sachhi me apka kuchh nhi ho sakta...mr.kapoor agr apko mujhse pyar nhi rh gya h to seedhe seedhe bol dijiye na aise jalane ki kya jarurat h...

Ram...aree darling aisi koi bat nhi h main tumse bht pyar karta hu

priya...kitna???...in kapdo k size ka???

Ram...areee ye mujhko nhi pta kisne kiya h

natasha...hehehe...i am vry sorry to disturb u both..pr romance karne se pehle door band kar liya karo aur...priya:...bhai ne actully kuchh nhi kiya h...ye packet me bachho k kapde maine rkhe the...

Ram...chhotiii..tune kiya ???

Natasha...i ...i am sorry bhai...wo aapne spcl ordr diya tha priya k liye to mujhe aise hi maskhri sujhi to mne ...sorryyy...

Ram...shutup & getout..

Natasha...aree bola na sorry...waise bhi to aapdono ladte hi rhte hain thoda sa meri wajah se lad liya to bhadk kyun rhe hain...

Ram...i said...get out

natasha...are ja rhi hu...apna gift to le lijiye...sorrryyy

ram...out...

Bechara ram...priya k pas aata h...waise to priya ko bht hasi aa rhi thi but she cntrol herself...bhai rambabu ko chhedne ka mauka to hath se nhi jane diya ja sakta na...qki unhone priya ko subah se bht pakaya tha to ab priya ki bari thi...to wo abhi bhi ram ko ghur hi rhi thi...

Ram...dekho...aise mat dekho...meri glti nhi thi ok...chhotiii ne

priya...theek h...mujhe neend aa rhi h main sone ja rhi hu

ram...aree pr meri bat to suno

priya...mera mood nhi h

ram...are pr gift to le lo

priya...nhi chahiye

ram...are vry bad yar mne itna important din yad rakha...tumhare liye gift bhi laya...theek h wo chhoti ki glti ki wajah se...

Priya...exactly...chhoti ki glti...ab uski saza apko milegi...m sone ja rhi hu...aap akele bhugtiye apni bhn ki glti ki saza

ram...o hello...itne imp din pr akele chhod k jaogi tum mujhe

priya...han jaungi

ram...kaise jaogi...main jane dunga tab na...

Priya...rok k dikha dijiye..

Ram darwaz band kar deta h

priya...ye kya kar rhe hain aap???...mr.kapooor..behv ur self...darwaza kholiye..

Ram...nhi kholunga...tumhe saza dena h na...yhi do..

Priya...mr.kapoor...

Ram...kya???..

Priya peechhe hat rhi hoti h ram age badh rha hota h...

Priya...mr.kapooor

ram...are kyun chilla rhi h...sona h to yhi so jao...bahar jane ki kya jarurat h ...mujhe bhi neend aa rhi h main bhi sone ja rha hu...

Priya muh khol k ram ki taraf dekhti rh jati h ram jane lagta h sone priya ko lagta h...jyada ho gya ...ram mudhta h dono ekdusre ko dekh k muskurate hain...phir baho me aa jate hain...

Ram...tum bht bakwas karti ho pyar bhi nhi karne deti...

Priya...hehehe..to kariye na mne kab mna kiya

ab isse jyada main nhi kar sakti baki ka imagination aaplog karo...main sirf kuchh ishare de deti hu...qki abhi meri limitation yhi tak hai...

"jism pighlne ko machalta h teri baho me
jane kitni gehrayio ki chahat dikhti hai teri nigaho me
honth sil jate hain mere tere labo ki chhuan se
har bar itni garmahat kahan se aati hai teri chaho me"

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Are yar bht hi jyada bore ho rha h..lappy nhi chala sakte aur ab aur jyada bimar hoke late bhi nhi sakte isliye update likhne ja rhe hain..post kab hoga pta nhi...depended on doctr's medicine jb wo mujhe theek kar dega tab posting ho jayegi..tab tak likh likh k timepass karti hu...pta h doctor bole rha tha shayad khun ki kami ho gyi h checkup karega to btayega...but m to bina checkup k hi bta sakti hu ki kami ho hi gyi hogi & all credit goes to ekta's cvs...kamine mera sara khun pee jate hain to bachega kahan se...hattt...lol...mtlb socho yar hum jaise hi sochte hain ki chalo gadho ko thodi akal to aayi tab tak wo wapas jis 0 se shuru hote hain usi 0 pr pahonch jate hain ...are mature love story kar kar k love karna hi bhulwa diya h nalayko ne...hhuuhh...kis kitab me likha h bhai ki ek mature husband wife car roke k chilla k ekdusre se nhi puchh sakte ki pyar karte ho ya nhi ,bat kyun nhi kar rhe ho...aah rambabu bina mtlb k excuse mujhe hazam nhi hote hain...han theek h ki pyar k mamle me mera experience zero h pr knoledge to theek thak h aur maine to yhi suna h ki pyar andha hota h ...na umr ki seema hoti h na janm ka bandhan hota h...aur pta nhi kya kya...to isme mature immature wala scene kahan se aa gya...aur ankho wala pyar to mujhko bilkul samjh nhi ata to pls...bola karo..bate kiya karo...life bht chhoti hoti h maturity aur immaturity ka hisab karenge to jindgi jeena bhul jayenge...waise kuchh cheeze jb dil kare kar lena chahiye..use kabhi..."kash" k liye nhi chhodna chahiye...khair vry disappointed with massage scene...main koi love scen expect nhi kar rhi thi but as they say mature lovestory to m mature scene jarur expect kar rhi thi...ki kam se kam tameez se ekdusre se baith k bat to kar lenge...ya jo bhi inka ankhowala love ka scene h whi karke...kuchh bate clear karne ki koshis to karenge...but asusual...cvs se jyada expect karna mtlb apna khun jalana aur phir khun ki kami ho jana...lol...so bttr h ki unke bare me na socha jaye aur khud hi kuchh kiya jaye...qki wo nalayak to achha sa scene de nhi sakte hain...khun kya denge mera wapas...hhuuhh..anywys..kafi din se update atki hui h...priya k kahin jane pr...han to qstion ye utha tha ki priya ne car chalana kab seekha ??..wo to mujhko nhi pta pr ek cheez mujhko pta h ki jb ayesha aur sid ki shaadi k liye panditji se milne rampriya jate hain aur ram car bht slow chala rha hota h to priya ne kaha tha ki mujhe de dijiye m drive karti hu is speed me to m bhi drive kar sakti hu..aur ram ne kaha tha ki nhi agle 9 mahine tak m tumhara drivr hu tum car bilkul drive nhi kar sakti...that means ki main sahi thi aur priya ko litrlly car chalane to aati hi h bhale hi ferari ki sawari jaisi nhi phir bhi is convo se to yhi laga that she know driving...anyways...bht bakwas hui...bimar hu to itni bakwas kar skti hu theek hoti to kya kati...chalo moving on updates...main in kamine bhai behno ka jalan ka solid missuse karna chahti hu in my updates..inhe rampriya k sath hone se badi takleef ho rhi h na to main jra aur takleef deti hu inhe...bolte hain na ki loha lohe ko katta h to theek h i use this...with..."yar jalne walo ko jalayenge pyar me jiyenge mar jayenge" are yar full time..family ..bhai...behn...yhi sab socha..ab maine socha h ki soch ko thoda aur badlte hain aur thoda rampriya k bare me sochte hain..taki is bar main nhi ekta k cvs meri update padh k bole..."are yar hamne socha na tha ki ye angle bhi ho sakta h"...lol

part 63

"tum yha kya kar rhi ho"

priya car lekar nikal jati h...mr.kapoor bhi uske peechhe peechhe jate hain ye us waqt ki update pending h jb rambabu pendulam hua karte the...kabhi behn kabhi biwi...ajkl to star ho gye hain...khair...wha tak pahonchne me thoda time lagega na...khair..priya kapoor mention aati hai aur natasha k kamre me jati h...aur uska hath pakad kar le jane lagti hai...

Natasha...aah...kya kar rhin hain aap ..??..mera hath chhodiye...its hurt me

priya...oh sorry...vry sorry...pr main tumhe bilkul hurt nhi karna chahti...tum janti ho i am with u...lekin tum yha kya kar rhi ho???..tumhe to hospital me hona chahiye...tumhare gunahgar ko saza mil rhi h tumhe apni ankho se dekhna chahiye...

Natasha:...main aisa nhi chahti thi priya main use saza jarur dena chahti thi pr aisi nhi...

Priya...main janti hu..isiliye keh rhi hu chalo mere sath...tum to usse pyar karti ho na...to phir tum kaise use aise chhod sakti ho...uske bare me nhi to apne bare me to socho...kaise rahogi tum uske bina...pls natasha aise mat karo...mera bhai bht guity h...aur m tumse sorry bolti hu pr pls chalo uske pas..

Ram...priya...shant ho jao...pls

priya...mr.kapoor aap boliye na natasha ko...btaiye ki m uske sath hu...bas wo kartik ko bacha le

ram...priya...relax...chhoti pls hospital chal...

Finally...in sab drame ke bad sab hospital aate hain...natasha ka jordar pyaar wala natak chalta h...pta nhi kaisa pyar h...jb pehle se natasha ko ye pta hi tha ki ek na ek din uska gussa utar jayega aur wo kartik ko maf kar hi degi to itna nautanki failane ki kya jarurat thi ...kill him kill him kar k bechare ko adhmara kar diya...beech me latka hua h..har din uske memory card me ek hi gana repeat ho ho k baj rha hoga...ki mar diya jaye ki chhod diya jaye bole tere sath kya suluk kiya jaye...lol...khair dr ne kartik ko ghar le jane ki izazt de di...as we all see...aur finally natasha se apna roop bhi dikha diya ram ko...best point jo cvs dikha sakte the wo yhi rha ki natasha ne samne se ram ko sabkuchh bol diya...aur shayad rambabu ne is scene k pehle sprite pee liya tha...isiliye deekhawe pr nhi gye aur apni akal laga k priya ko choose kar liya...for god sake...ye finally bade achhe me ho hi gya ki ram ne priya ko choose kar hi liye...khair...i know ki ram ko takleef bht hui hogi pr kabhi kabhi apno ko bade dard se bachane k liye chhote mote dard dene hi padte hain...aur pta h kya main abhi whi atki hu ki is pure drame k peechhe kuchh na kuchh to khichdi jarur h jo abhi humse chhupayi ja rhi h ..khair abhi to natasha ki ovr achhai dekh kar mujhe lag rha h ki ek aur mahayudh hona h janvi aur natasha k beech jo ki bina sir pair k hoga aur uske bad jo adhmara kartik h na wo cvs k pairo me gir k bolega pls yar pls mujhe mar do..do biwiyo k beech me pisna jindgi aur maut ki jung se bhi mushkil h...to mar hi do mujhe...lol..anywys..in sab me sabse kamal ki bat kya hui pta h..??..rishabh yar...jiske pas jaban k nam pr do char dant the jo wo hamesha dikhata rhta tha public ko...uske muh se awaze bhi nikalne lagi hain...woow...behn pr itna pyar aa rha h ki biwi ko bolta h meri zindgi se dur rho...dur ho jayegi to uski behn biwi ki kami puri kar degi kya???..mujhe to is nonsense ka mtlb hi nhi samjh ata...ki bhn aur biwi me se ek chunne ki shart...agr ram bhn ko chun leta to kya chhoti apne pati ko bhi uski bhn k pas chhod k chali aati apne bhai k sath rhne...are rishto ka ekdm kabada nikal dete cvs...jin do rishto me koi option hi nhi ho sakta..unhi dono ko option bna diya...duniya ka koi mai ka laal kisi bhn ko biwi ki jgh nhi dilwa sakta...ghatiyapanti ki bhi hadh hoti h yar...aise to pta chalega mardo ki kabhi shaadi hi nhi hogi...lol..anyways aaj m bht hi jyada bakwas kar rhi hu yar...itne din ki kasar ek sath nikal rhi h kya karu...itne din se kuchh bola nhi h na isiliye bolti ja rhi hu...lol..khair ram ne chhoti se keh to diya h ki wo priya ki side hai...aur priya bhi manti h ki ram ne chhoti k pyar me sensitive hokar ye sab kiya...pr kahin kuchh to hai jo communicate nhi ho pa rha h...waise pihu to h hi...bechari apne papa ki trh gala phad phad k apni mumma ko khush karna chah rhi h...vry cute...but rambabu har bat me ovr...kitna bhi kuchh bhi ho jaye..pr ye banda jaha atak gya to atak gya...bht mushkil h yar aise logo ko real life me handle karna aur mere liye to khas karke..qki mujhe jiddi log bilkul pasand nhi hai...theek h insan gltiyo se seekhta hai pr kitni gltiya yar...kahin to rukna chahiye...anyways..i am sure ki pihu comptition har jayegi lekin uska dil nhi tutega...qki uski mumma h na..comption se pehle mast wala lecture diya jayega...jo ki kady k puchhne pr shayad samne aaye in k3g style me...aur rambabu aur bhi khush ho jayenge...ki unki biwi itni samjhdar h..aur phir pihu k btane k bad koi coslation prize ya kuchh mil jayega pihu ko jike liye rambabu ek party organise karenge..jisse unke bhai behno ko aur bhi bura lagega...par mujhe kya...main bhi to whi karti hu jo mera man karta h to mera man to party karne ka h to main karungi hi...khair sabhi comptition se hasi khushi wapas aate hain...jo aajkl k bina kam k director ko hazam nhi hoti h...tabhi rambabu jale par namak chhidk dete hain...

Ram...ok ok...guys...hamari rockstar ne jbrdst mehnat ki ..comptition me participate kiya aur mumma papa ko bht khush bhi kiya aur proud bhi feel karaya...to hamari rockstar ke liye kuchh special to bnta hai..kyun priya??

Priya...yesss..to princess ko kya chahiye??...party karen???

Pihu...yeee...aur khush ko bhi bulayenge na mumma

priya...ofcourse baby wo to ayega hi...

Ram...main khud le aaunga use...to final rha kal ek grand party hogi for our rockstar

sabhi bht khush the sirf bechara rishabh...jiske chehre pr expression mushkil se ate hain aajkl bina mtlb k expression aane lage hain...ab dekhte hain party me kya hota h..

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thodi der k liye mila h to update de diya h dekhte hain phir kab mauka milta h...milti hu jaldi hi...hopefully...pls hope u all enjoy the update...
Edited by veena23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Chalo bhai bht din ho gya tha yha bakwas kiye...waise mne socha na tha ki ekta ne itni solid watt lagane k chakkr me hai...but main soch rhi hu ki thoda link se hatkar socha jaye...actully i always believ ki kisi ki bhi glti itni badi nhi ho sakti ki uski saza maut ho jaye...akhir aap kisi ko saza bhi to tabhi doge na jb wo jinda rahega...to ekta k serial me logic dhundhna to impossible h phir bhi inlogo ne kartik ko marne ka plan bna hi liya h to hum tolrate karne k alawa kar kya sakte hain...sabse badi bat to ye h ki natasha agr bht sachhi hoti to kartik ka marna bhi afford kiya ja sakta tha...lekin jo khud itni gltiya kar chuki h use to koi haq hi nhi h kisi ko saza dene ka...pr kuchh din pehle sudhar k public ki achhi khasi sympathy hasil kar li is ladki ne aur sab kartik par tut pade...anyways new promo k bad mujhko to yhi samjh aa rha h ki ekta halat ko bht bigadne wali h...to dekhte hain..kya hota h...pr abhi mera mood thoda sa natasha ko sunane ka h qki uski wajah se rampriya bht suffr kar rhen hain...aur priya k to ek ansu bhi mujhse bardasht nhi hote...last episode me wo rampriya ka khane wala scene aur saumya priya ki convo...ufff...sakshi ne to jan dal di yar...she is damn gud...& i can say it..hundred thousand crores times...without any intrruption...lol..anyways...m aur mere sentiments...ye kabhi nhi badlne wale...thoda aage sochte hain...kahani pta nhi kahan ruki thi..khair mujhe to ghumphir k track pr hi ana h...to bachha neha k wha rakh diya jata h pr natasha ko wo bhi bardasht nhi h to jid karke wha se bachhe ko anathashram bhijwa deti h apne pyare emotional bhai ko fool bna kar...uske bad ka drama to pta hi h...ram chahta to h priya ka sath dena pr uske charo trf itne sare pyare pyare log hain ki use lapet lete hain kya kare??..khud ka deemag to use kharch karna nhi h...bhai behn k pyar me bawla h...chalo bhai sabhi ko bhai bhn pyare hote hain pr kitne...thoda to logically sochna chahiye...khair ab aa gye hum current track pr priya ne kartik ko bulaya use bachha diya ab samjha bhi rhi h..kartik ko dialogue bhi gin gin k mile hain to uska record whi atka h ki m janta hu ki mujhse glti hui h...han to glti hui h to ab goli kha ram kapoor ki..qki uski behn to tere khun ki pyasi ho gyi h...hahaha..waise bhi kisi ne mujhko bola h ki kapoor's k sat khun maf hain...lol...to kartik to gya...ok moving on updates...

Part 61...

"aj bht dar lag rha h"

priya kartik se baten kar rhi hoti h tabhi police ki gaadi ki awaz sunti h ...

Kartik...di dekha mne kaha na mr.kapoor mujhe nhi chhodenge ...m man to rha hu meri glti ...mujhe agr jail bhej denge to is bachhe ka kya hoga m sabkuchh sahi kaise karunga...nhi...main is waqt jail jana afford nhi kar sakta...(bewkuf marna afford kar sakte ho..??)...

Priya...kartik ruk ja main mr.kapoor se bat karti hu...tu kahin nhi jayega aur tujhe aur bachhe ko kuchh nhi hoga...

Priya ram ko phone lagati h abhi wo police k bare me bat hi kar rhi hoti h ki kartik bhagne lagta h...wo use rokne lagti h phone cut nhi karti h udhar natasha bina mtlb k rambabu ko blackmail kari ja rhi h...main hoti to utha k car se bahar fenk deti ...marna h na jao maro...ye mera genuine problm h marne ki dhamaki dene wale log mujhe bilkul pasand nhi h m sochti hu dhamki kyun de rho chalo mar hi do kam hi khtm ho jaye...are marne ki dhamki dena kaun sa bada kam h...mushkil me jee k dikhaye insan to m janu ki usme himmat h...khair...udhar kartik bhagta h idhar se ram ki car aa jati h aur kartik usse takra jata h...pr use kuchh hota nhi h bas bachha uske hath se chhut jata h aur wo dusri trf gir jata h jisse samne se ane wali car uske upar chadh jati h..priya bht jor se chillati h uske bad sab ekdm shant ho jata h ekta style me...lol..uske bad directly hospital...pura sharma parivar aur kapoor family sabhi hain...priya ekdm shant baithi hui h...actully use abhi tak yakin nhi ho rha h ki usne jo kuchh bhi apni ankho se dekha h kya wo sach h..??..natasha bhi h apne pyare bhai k pas...ram natasha ko baitha k priya k pas aata h pr priya wha se uth kar ma k pas chali jati h...ram wha jata h...

Ram...priya...

Shipra...aap yha kyun aaye hain...??aap jaiye yha se...

Sudhir...shipra kaise bat kar rhi ho???

Shipra...nahi sudhir ab aur nhi..main janti hu ki kartik ki glti thi lekin itni badi nhi ki uski jan le li jaye...ye kaise bhul gye ki aaj tak jo kuchh bhi hua h wo sab inki behn ki wajah se hua...gltiya karna usi ne shuru kiya...m to hamesha use palko pr bitha kr rakhti thi:...lekin usne hamare ghr k ek ek sadasy ko dukh pahonchaya..chahe kartik ho ayesha ho priya ho...ya mr.ram khud ho...hamesha uski bato me akr inhone sabke sath aur khas kr priya k sath jyadti ki...aur sabko chhodiye sudhir...apko...apko..apne to kabhi usse unchi awaz me bat bhi nhi ki aur usne do do bar apko jail bhijwaya...itni badi glti khud ki apne bachhe ki jan lekar ab mere bachhe ki bhi jan lena chahti h...mr ram agr mere bachho ko kuchh hua na to m sb bhul jaungi..ki kaun kya h???...(warning...full to ekta style dialogues hain..pls bare it..ma h na yar)

Sudhir...shipra bas karo shant ho jao...glti hamare bete ki h

shipra...sudhir aap abhi bhi...mar rha h wo...

Ram...dekhiye meri bat suniye..

Priya...mr.kapoor...natasha thak gyi hogi aap use ghar le jaiye main abhi aati hu...

Ram...priyaa..

Priya...pls mr.kapoor itni si bat meri bhi sun lijiye...

Ram kuchh keh hi nhi pata h aur chhoti ko lekar wha se chala jata h...doctor btata h ki condition bht critical h...sudhir k jid karne pr priya bhi ghar jati h par uska man whi h...qki uski ankho k samne se wo sabkuchh ja hi nhi rha h...wo raste bhar pure incident ko yad karte hue ja rhi hoti h...achha hua ki rambabu ki car se sirf takraya tha wrna to halat aur kharab ho jate...khair priya ghar aati h...aur gopal kaka ko bulati h...ram priya ki awaz sun k lagbhag bhag k kamre se bahar ata h...priya bht hi normally bat kar rhi hoti h jisse ram ko thoda dar lag rha hota h...

Priya...gopal kaka natasha ko nashta wgrh diya ya nhi...??..kahan h wo???..theek to hai na???

Gopal...ji madm theek hain...apne kamre me hain...pr unhone nashta nhi kiya...

Priya...kyun???..aap jante hain na...ki usko pareshan dekh kar mr.kapoor pareshan ho jate hain aur m mr.kapoor ko pareshan nhi dekh sakti...abhi nashta le aaiye m khud le jati hu..jaldi kijiye...

Gopal...ji

gopal nashta lane chala jata h tabhi ram priya k pas ata h kuchh kehne jata h tabhi priya bolti h...

Priya...sorry mr.kapoor..thodi der ho gyi..wo ma chhod hi nhi rhi thi..bas ap tensn mt lijiye main abhi natasha ko nashta karati hu...u jst dnt wrry.:..gopal kaka jaldi le aaiye nashta

ram priya se bat karna chahta h pr priya chali jati h...uske bad wo natasha ko nashta wgrh karati h...aur kehti h

priya...dnt wrry natasha...ab saza milegi kartik ko achhe se..main hu tumhare sath...tum chinta mat karo..usne glti ki h to saza to milni hi h...bas tum apne ap ko saza mt do...main hu tumhare sath...tum aram karo main abhi thodi der me phir aungi...

Natasha ko kuchh samjh nhi aa rha hota h aur use kuchh khas fark bhi nhi pad rha tha...khair...priya thodi der bad kamre me jati h...wha koi nhi rhta h ..wo bed pr ankhe band karke baith jati h...tabhi rambabu aa jate hain...

Ram...priya...pani..

Priya ankhe khol k ram ki trf dekhti h phir ankhe band kar leti h...

Ram...pls pani le lo

again she look on him pr kuchh kehti nhi h tabhi pihu aa jati h...

Pihu...mummaa...aap kahan the m apko kabse dhundh rhi thi...

Priya...(pihu ko seene se laga k)..aww i am so sorry...mumma thodi der k liye bahar chali gyi thi..

Pihu...aap ro kyun rhi ho

priya...aaj mumma ko thoda dar lag rha h

pihu...kyun???..sab hain to apke pas

priya...but fir bhi mumma ko dar lag rha h..aap mumma k pas hi rho..mumma k pas koi nhi h

pihu...main hu na apke pas hamesha...aap mt dariye...aur pls roiye bhi mt...papa aap bolo na mumma ko nhi rone k liye...aap mumma ka hath pakad lo to unko dar nhi lagega jaise mujhe dar lagta h to mumma karti h...papa..pakado na mumma ka hath...

Priya...pihu m apka hath pakad leti hu...papa ko bua ka khyal rakhna h na unki tabiyat theek nhi h..aap mere pas hi rho aur ko nhi chahiye...

Ram priya ko dekhta rh jata h wo janta h ki wo bht hurt h bht dukhi h bht dari hui h pr kuchh nhi kar pa rha h...priya pihu ki god me sar rakh k chhote se bachhe ki trh so jati h...ram hospital me phone karta h to doctr bolta h ki kartik k bachne k chances na k barabar hain...ab ram ko bhi dar lagne lagta h ki kahin waqai wo glt to nhi kar rha h...wo priya k pas ata h wo so rhi hoti h...ram priya ko theek se sula deta h pihu wha se chali jati h...priya neend me ram ka hath pakad leti h to ram whi uske sir k pas baith jata h...kuchh der bad priya achanak se uthti hai aur jor se chillati h...kartik...ram use sahara deta h aur kehta h

ram...priya kya hua???...shant ho jao...kya hua???

Priya...are wo natasha ko dekh k aati hu main use kuchh jarurat hogi to...

Priya jane lagti hai to ram uska hath pakad leta h...priya uski taraf dekhti h...

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