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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dsudipa

sry 4 late reply, fantastic update, nutz & kartick ek dusre se pyar karte hai, wow thats good, ab Rajat v aa gaye kahani me, bt am sure Ram Priya ko usse protect kar lenge. pls update soon, thx 4 PM


thanks for liking, will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

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when we can expect the next update???


Jald hi wait and wait a lil.
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PART-11

That day at 12pm

Ram-Hello,vikram can u plz come to my home kuchh jaruri bat karni he.

Vik-Sure 15 min me pahanchta hun.After vikram's arival ram narreted him all thing about rajat.

Vik-Ram,ye to bahat complecated he,priya bahat badi muskil me phasjayegi.

Ram-No,mere hote hue me esa hargish hone nai dunga,ek kam karo Mr. Raichand ko phone karke bolo ki wo aj 4 baje hume yhn pe mile.

At 4pm

Mr.Raichand- Hello Mr.Kapoor kahiye esi kansi urgent bat thi ki apne turant bulaya ??How can i help u ???

Ram-Dekhiye Raichand ji ,ap itne salo se hamare company k liye private detective and investigater k kam karte arahe hen but iss bar kam thoda alag he mere pas information he plan v bas karna he apko ar apke admion ko.

Mr.Raichand-Ok,but karna kya he ye batayi ye.vik explained him what to do.

Vik-Raichand ji plz make sure ye plan kamiyab rahe aur usse iski vanak v nalagpaye.

Mr.Raichand-Ap Mr.Kapoor bilkul relax rahiye kl apke hat me wo papers sahi salamat honge,i promise u that.

Ram-Thank u Mr.Raichand i have full faith on u.

Mr.Raichand-Then see u soon.He left kapoor manssion.

Ram-Vikram plz neha ko issbare me bilkul mat batana wo khamokhan pareshan hogi ar agar priya ko patachali to bahat gadbadi hosakti he,ekbar wo papers mere hat lagjaye uss rajat ki kher nahi.

Vik-Relax ram me neha ko kuchh nahi bataunga.Ar sab kuchh thik hojayega.

Ram-Ok,me nikalta hun mujhe priya se milne jana he patanahi usse kya hua he mera phone recieve nahi karrahi ya messege ka reply v nahi derahi,mujhe uske sath kuchh imp bat karni thi plus usko kissise milwana tha.Vikram knew the fact remained silent.

Vik-Ok then me v chalta hun,neha ko ar azad ko park lejane ka wada kia tha,see u soon bye.He left and after sometime ram also left for priya's house.

Ting tong...door bell rang.Priya who is bussy in some medical case file looked at watch,iss wakt kan asakta he kartik to thodider pehle gaya he ashiyan me bachho k class k liye.She put the file on table and went to open the door.looking ram infront of her all hidden imotions started to come in her mind.Wo jisse vagna chahti he khud uske samne ake khada he.Priya ki chehre dekh ke ram ko kuchh ajeebsa laga.

Ram-Hello,kahn khoyi hui ho.

Priya-Nothing,boliye kya kam tha ?????????Massi thik he na ????Wo ram k ankho me ankhe nahi milarahi thi.

Ram-Aree me kya sirf kam ho tabhi asakta hun ar kabhi nahi ????Ar tum mujhe andar kyon ane nahi derahi.Wo priya ki reply ka wait kiye bagair andar chala aya.Priya followed him.

Ram-Mujhe ye batao tum mere phone kyon nahi utharahi thi ar koi v msg ka reply nai derahi thi ??????????Mujhe tumse kuchh imp baten discuss karni he.

Priya-Me apna phone sath lena vulgayi thi,wese apko mujhse kansi itni imp bat karni hogi

Ram-Aree ese kese phone bhulsakti ho,kabhi agar koi musibat me padjati to kisko contact karpati ar kisiko tumhari jarurat padjati to...

Priya-(LOUDLY)Meri itni fikar karne ki jarurat nahi me koi dudh piti bachhi nahi hun...ar rahi bat kissi ar ki jarurat duniya me esa koi ar nahi he jisko meri jarurat pade sibaye kartik ke ar mere hospital ko chodke.Ar me unka khayal achhese rakhta hun apko itni salah dene ki jarurat nahi..Ram was shocked at first but remain calm he knew something is bothering priya.

Ram-Ok calm down am realy sorry mere kehne ka matlab wo nahi tha me to bas...

Priya- Mujhse kya kam he wo boliye,mere pass time nai he mujhe kuchh case file study karni he.

Ram-Ok mujhe tumse kuchh imp baten discuss karni thi but tumhara mud thik nahi he to aj ye bat nahi bolungi.Ar mujhe tumse kissise milwana he.

Priya-Kisse ????

Ram-Barbie se.Listening barbie's name hidden anger grow in priya.Mene uske samne tumhari bareme bahat baten ki thi to wo tumse milna chahti he,u will like her,she is so imp in my life and precious also i love her a lot(priya closed her eye,she can not here more)

Priya-Stop it ram stop it.How dare u to talk this to me ???Ram dis not understand what happened suddenly,what he told which made her so angry ???Mene apko kya samjhata ar ap kya nikle ???Chee mujhe kehte hue v sharam arahi he ki mene apki dosti accept ki thi apto dosti k kabil hi nahi.Apne mujhe kiss type ki ladki samjhrakha he hn,ki me akela rehta hun to ap jo chahe wo karsakte ho ??Imotionally weak banake ap mujhse jo chahe wo karwasakte ho ?????????

Ram-Ye kya bolejarahi ho priya ???????//Tum mujhe galat samajhrahi ho ??????????Meri bat to suno...

Priya-Bas ram bas,itna koi kese girsakta he,eksath do do ladkion k sath flerting karte hue apko sharam nahi ati ????????Apke liye to ye souk hoga na,aj ye ladki to kal koi ar,kya farak padta he kisike imotion k sath khel ke apko ????????????U r the ram kapoor,everything is possible for u na ?????????

Ram-Priya,tum galat samjhrahi ho tum jo samjhrahi ho wesa kuchh nai he...

Priya-Stop it i said stop it mujhe apki koi bhi bakwas nahi sunni nahi koi safai,mujhe apjese logo ki harkat achhese pata he ladkion ko use karke kese bed pe late hen ar uske bad kese raste pe chod dete hen mujhe utni jankari he..

Ram-Stop it priya,tumhe pata bhi tum kya bolejarahi ho...

Priya-Mujhe achhese pata he,thank god ki mujhe apka asli chehra pata chalgaya nahi to ,now gateout of my house right now.

Ram-Meri bat to sunlo priya

Priya-Abhi nikalte ho ya me security ko bulaun ??????????????

Ram-Ok,priya me chalajata hun,and kabhi v tumhare samne nahi aunga issliye nahi ke me galat hun par issliye ki me tumhare ankho me apne liye nafrat nahi dekhsakta.Tear trickled down from his eyes,and he left.Priya closed the door and collapesed there sobbing vigourusly.

Ram spent all the evening in sea beach where both of them spent the most beautifull day together,all memory came flashing infront of his eyes.How can she thought that ????Kya uske ankho me priya ne pyar nahi dekha,wo tadap nahi dekhi,wo sachhai nahi dekhi ?????????????Aj tak jindegi me kissi se itna pyar nahi kia jitna ki priya se,sayad apni jindegi se v jada,ar jarurat pade to apni pyar k liye bafadari nivane k liye wo apni jan bhi gawa sakta he.Par priya ko wo wafai hi mehsoos nahi hui,kya galti ki thi usne ki jindegi ne usse uske sare chahnewale dur kardiye.Ar jindegi se v jada chaha jindegivar wafa karne ka sochha usine hi uspe bewafa hone ka darja dediya.Ram bilkul ek chote bachho ki tarah rota raha.Rat k 2.30 hochuke the avtak ram ghar wapas nahi aya tha.Banshi kaka pareshan horahe hen wo vikram ko phone karnehiwale the ki ram ki gadi ki awaj ayi.Banshi kaka darwaja khole to ek alag hi ram khada tha unke samne,ankhe bilkul lal bal bikhre hue jese bina jan ka sirf ek pathar khada ho.

Banshi kaka-Baba,thik to hona kya hua tabiat kharab he kya ???Doctor ko bulaun ???

Ram-Nahi nahi,uski koi jarurat nahi.

Banshi kaka-Par,apki halat thik nahi he baba

Ram-Kaka,ek kam kijiye,wo clients k liye jo drinks rakhe the na usmese ek botal le ayi ye.

Banshi kaka-Par baba apto sharab nahi pite fir aj kyon ?kuchh hua he kya ????????Me dawai lata hun khana khake dawa lelo thik hojayega.

Ram-Nahi kaka mujhe dawai ki nahi sharab ki jarurat he sayad nasha hi ek chij he jo mujhe sab kuchh bhulane me madad karega plz kaka.

Banshi kaka-Baba me apne hatose tumhe jeher kese desakti hun ??????????Tum agar lena chahte ho to khud lelo me nahi dekhsakta.He left him there.Ram slowly came to the wine self and took a bottole and went to his room.

Next day 9.30am

Some men in a van came to rajat kapur's office.Securityguard stoped them but they showed him some cards.The guard came to his boss's cabin hurridely.

Guard-Sir,wo Incometax department se kuchh log aye he,bolrahe hen unhe av k av sare kam band karna he jabtak ki unka verification khatam na hojaye.

Rajat-What ???????????????Unhe andar bulao,ar stafs ko indicate kardo ki wolog chokana rahe.Some time later Govind Sahani head of the team came to rajat's cabin.

Govind-Dekhiye Mr.Kapur hume apke office ki sare kam abhi k abhi rokne ki ar verification kasrne ki permission mili he,ar jabtak humari kam khatam nahi hojati ap ko ar apke employs ko hall me rehna padega humare guards k samne.

Rajat-Par humne kuchh galat nahi kia apko jo bhi kam karna he humare samne kijiye.

Govind-Dekhiye,agar ap hume cooperate nahi karenge hume majburan police ko bulana padega.

Rajat-Ok,i will,he left the cabin and went to hall.Govind indicated her team members to search every corner of the cabin.After 30 min the file was infront of him,he called Mr.Raichand.

Govind-Sir,hume files milgayi adheghante me file apki hat me hogi.

Mr.Raichand-Good job govind,jaldi kam khatam karke wapas ao jese usko vanak na lage.

Govind-Sure sir,see u in 30 mins.He ended call and came out of cabin.Mr.Kapur apki kismat achhi thi ki ap bachhgaye,but next time we will make sure that we can get solid proof against u.Rajat had a devil smile on his face unknown of his root of destruction.After one hour Mr.Raichand handed the paper to vikram saying that he tried more than 50 times to contact to ram but he is not respinding.Vikram get tensed and neha also.He immediately called the landline of kapoor manssion luckily banshi kaka recieved and narreted eeverything to vikram.Vikram was drumstuck,didnot understood what happened to ram he never did such things moreover he was so happy yesterday to meet priya.What happened between them ?????????

Vik-Neha,ram ki halat bahat kharab he,hume wohn jana padega.Vikram and neha left for km.On the way vik told her about rajat's plan,then ram's action and about the paper,and last talk between them about priya.Neha mujhe lagta he kuchh bahat badi bat hui he nahi to ram ese nahi tut sakta.They reached km and rushed towards ram's room,They are astonished seeing ram like this.Ram is laying on floor a bottle of drink is in his hand two empty bottles are laying beside,he is blabbering something and crying also.Neha can not hold her tears both of them rushed to him make him sit on bed.

Vikram-Ram,tune apna kya halat banaya he ye hn ????Esa kya hogaya ki tum ne sharab me apne apko dubadiya he apna halat dekha he tune ???Neha uske haton se botal nikalke table pe rakha.Ram looked at vikram and neha for a while and then cling to him and cried hard like a child.Both of them never saw ram like this.

Ram-(CRYING)vIKRAM,ME USKELIYE BEWAFA HUN,ME...JO USSE APNE JINDEGI SE V JADA CHATA HUN ,JO JINDEGI VAR USKE SATH USKE HAR KADAM PE KADAM MILANA CHATA HUN USKO DHOKA DERAHA HUN...HOW CAN SHE SAY THAT VIKRAM HOE ?????????????????KYA USKO ME ITNA GIRA HUA LAGTA HUN,KYA MERE ANKHO ME USKE LIYE KABHI PYAR NAHI DIKHAYI DIYA USE VIKRAM ?????????????/U KNOW USNE KYA KAHA ?????????/ME LADKION KO USE KARKE BED PE ...MENE SAPNE ME VI ESA KISIKEBARE ME NAHI SOCHHA HOW CAN SHE VIKRAM HOW ???????????????//wO MERA CHEHRA NAHI DEKHNA CHATI,USKE ANKHO ME MERELIYE SIRF NAFRAT HE SIRF NAFRAT...He fainted there,Vikram and neha setteled him on bed.

Vikram-Banshi kaka nimbu pani banake rakhiye,jab use hosh ayega uski jarurat padegi nashe k bajese behosh hogaya he.Neha cried seeing him like this.Neha samvalo apne apko ram ko kese samvalenge.Neha wiped her tear and stood up to go.

Vik-Kahn jarahi ho ??????

Neha-Priya k pas.Use aj jawaw dena padega,bahat hogayi humesha uski ankhe ar dimag sachh nahi hosakta,uski man mani k bajese kisike upar kya bit ta he use jan na padega.

Vik-Ruko,neha tumne khud kaha tha ki priya ko khud ehsas karna padega agar tum ese karoge to kese chalega ??????????????

Neha-Jab insan khus realise nahi karpata ki sahi kya he ar galat kya to usse turant ehsas dilana chahiye nahi to kain jindegi bikharjate hen,ar me ram ko esi halat me nahi dekhsakta wo yesab nahi deserve karta.Tum ram ka khayal rakhna me ati hun.Vik nodded yes and assured her that everything will be fine.Neha left km,she have to take priya infront of the mirror of truth or two life will destroy.


PS-Sochha tha aj confess karwadunga but fir likhte likhte patachala ki nahi bahat long hojayega ar padte padte bore lagega to intrest kam hojayega,issliye sochha k kal next part likhungi jisme sure confession hoga plus yadgar v hoga and u will enjoy.

HAPPY DURGA PUJA

PLEASE READ AND COMMENT IF U LIKE.
Edited by jeena1993 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one priya has some mu regarding ram
hope that priya realise soon that she also love him and solve their mu
continue soon waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too good... update d nxt asap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
vry nice..n pls yaar updt soon..ab intejr keyse karu raya k cnfession ka!!Thanks for pm..n Happy durga puja..
Edited by sampa123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 11
ohh so sad can't see Ram like this i m feeling so hurt for Ram... hay Priya how can u be so stone haerted poor Ram is so suffring... Ram is doing so much for Priya yes Vik got the papers too so happy for that also now Neha will sheak up Priya to take right decision in life hope she understands she also just simply love with Ram... waiting for next do conntinue soon lokking forward for conffesion part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Uffo priyaji blasted him like anything without giving a thought. Barbie se itni jealousy ya fir ram ko khone ki insecurity ya fir loneliness and betrayal ka ehsaas. Just fabulous outburst.
Ram hurt so badly, yaar dono apne dil ki baat dil mein rakhenge aur ek dusre ke feelings dikhane ke liye ek dusre pe gussa hona. superbly written.
waiting for tomorrow...
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a fantastic update it was, I was just going on and on and suddenly found it was end, plz yaar you could have given the confession, kuch nahi hota, we would have loved a long one, but I really felt sorry for Ram, but I seriously want to clear out this MU, I hope in next part we get to read that, plz continue ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part...!!!!!!!👏
priya ji ...ram ki baat toh suniye...!!!
bchre ko bina wajeh hurt krdiya..!!

feeling bad fr ram...😭

hope this mu clears soon...!!!

contn soon...!!!

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