FF: Tum Hi Ho Updated @ Pg 5 Chapter 2 Precap - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi all. I know u guys are waiting. I'm having technical difficulties as there is frequent power outages. As soon as my lights stop behaving like blinkers I'll post the chapters. Thnx for understanding and for encouragement🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I understand ur problem and situation, its okay, u take ur time but we will eagerly wait for the update, take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its ok take ur time simi...we will be waiting for the update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys. I know I know. I am very very late na😳 Don't bash me plz😳 🤗
I had to change the name. So I had to change the first two chapters as well. It was done in a hurry. So plz bare with my grammatical errors. 😳 ⭐️ I promise to be more accurate at chapter 3😃.
Remember this is my 1st FF. 😳
Thanks for being so patient for me😊 I will try to be on time from now😃
Pls enjoy⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER ONE


Kapoor Mansion, MUMBAI
"Natasha!!! Arre Nutcase!!! Come here this instant!!!" Dadi was in a rather excited, impatient mood this morning. For some odd reason she seemed busy. Collapsing on the sofa, she again shouted, "Nutcase!!!!!!!!!!!! Come quick!!!"
Rushing from outside, Natasha sees Dadi on the sofa panting. Panicking, she runs to rescue thinking that it's something serious.
Dadi!!! What's wrong?? she asks, while putting the palm of her hands on Dadi's forehead and then to her neck checking her pulse and if her health is fine.
"Arre Nutcase, she shouts, hitting Natasha on her head, How long have I been calling for u, ha?"
With a confused look on her face, she rubs her head trying to soothe the hard smack she received.
Ouch Dadi. You always disturb the peace for no reason and then hit me when I start panicking for you. It's not fair, na, '. Nuts sits next to Dadi, pouting.
Dadi.: Aww poor baby, giving a sarcastic face of care. Now quit the act, I need your help ASAP!!
Natasha: With a confused, yet surprised face, " Dadi? Since when did you learn short hand language? ASAP? Do you even know what it means?
Dadi: With a I am not dumb look on her face, " Nutcase, I am surrounded by great British Emperors, who only speak and dress like those Whites. Haan.
Natasha: British? me? Dadi, it called Standard English. Bhaiya and I lived in London for 10 years. Obviously we had to learn their language.
Dadi: Hey, I don't want an argument with you. Okay. U British, me Hindustani. Okay?
Natasha shakes her head, knowing she will win her Dadi in an argument. " Okay. Dadi Maa Ki Jai Ho" Now tell me what is it you want my help for?

Dadi gets all excited again. " I have planned a surprise." Anxiously awaiting Nat's reply
Natasha: Dadi a surprise????? Okay now I've been waiting for the opportunity to tell you this, I think now's the time. You are one crazy old lady!!!
Dadi: Oh Thankoo Thankoo..I feel flattered. She gives a broad smile. " Accha tell me where is my boyfriend? I miss him. Besides I can't let him know of my'
Natasha cuts her replying: Oh I see your surprise is for Bhaiya. I now get it. Dadi don't u know, Bhaiya left since 6am this morning. He has an important meeting today.
Dadi in a disappointed face, "What? He didn't even come to meet me this morning. I'm going to deal with him. What kind of boyfriend is he? With a smile returning to her face " But its good he left early, so I can plan my surprise for him."
Natasha getting curious now, "But Dadi, what's this surprise for na?
Dadi: Arre Nutcase!!! How can u forget, today is his wedding anniversary. Today is my boyfriend's wedding anniversary!!! Can u believe it, 7yrs have passed by so fast..
Natasha's face drop and tears settled in her eyes. " Dadi, what are u saying? Have u forgotten? Unbearable, the tears fluttered down her cheeks.
As reality hit her, she covered her mouth in shock. Shock as to what she has done. How could she have forgotten, How could she? " Dadi puts her hands on Nat's shoulder, as tears flicker down both their cheeks. Natasha nods her head signaling not to cry. She wipes the tears from Dadi's cheeks and hugs her tightly. Her eyes fasten on a photo on the wall. There they were, embracing each other. Her Bhabhi and her. She glances over to the photo next to it. Her loving brother and his beautiful wife, happy and all in smiles. Unable to bear the pain, she quickly closes her eyes and whispers " Mere Bhabhi".

Kapoor & Singh Group of Companies, Mumbai

Ram : So then, the deal is signed and sealed. I guess you are now officially a part of our Company. Welcome on board Kapoor and Singh Group Mr. Rastogi. We look forward for our partnership.
After a series of handshakes and congratulations, Ram returns to his office. He sits in his chair, sipping a cup of coffee brought by his secretary. He puts down his cup and gets up to stand in front a huge portrait. "Oye Hitler. How are u, ? Arre what question is this. U are always alrite. After all u're Hitler na/? Braving a smile. "Hitler ji, Do u know today is what day? Special day na? Today is the day we became one. We made our promises na? Hitler ji, Do u know how much I'm missing u? Haan? Everywhere I go, it's only U I see. Every day I only wonder if U are doing fine. ONLY U I THINK ABOUT!! ONLY U., He breaks down into tears. "Please come back Mahima. Please. Please".
Ram touches the portrait with his Mahima a.k.a Hitler. He remembers the moments they spent together. Right from their first meeting to their last. He tries, with broken breath, to sing their song'. The song of their love'.the love of Ram- Mahima'.
Hum tere bin ab reh nahin sakte
Tere bina kyaa vajood meraa

I can't live without you now,
What's my existence without you..

Tujh se judaa gar ho jaayenge
To khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

If I get separated from you,
I'll be separated from my own self..

Kyonki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi, ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, meraa dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Because you alone are,
Now you only are,
life. You're my life.
My peace, and my pain,
you alone are my love..

Teraa meraa rishtaa hai kaisaa
Ik pal door gawaaraa nahi
Tere liye har roz hain jeete
Tujh ko diyaa meraa waqt sabhi
Koi lamhaa meraa naa ho tere binaa
Har saans pe naam teraa

How's this relationship of ours,
I don't like distance of even a moment
Every day, I live for you
All my time is for you..
There shouldn't be a moment of mine without you,
There is your name on every breath..

Edited by ramkideewani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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finally update is here, darling iss ke liye bohot intezaar karwaya but net result is superb, very emotional one, plz yaar Ram lo itna mat rulana, will wait for next part impatiently, continue ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start...
oye ram aur mahima 🤢🤢🤢
yaar raya k place pr rama nikale
chalo ek baat to theek hai ye mahima ji bhi ab ram k sath nhi hai...
oye priya ji kha hai bhai 😕😕😕
nxt part mai hope priya ji ka entry ho 😊
continue soon !!!!!!!
Edited by Mini1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Very nice and interesting update. Hope Priya is there in ur story.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Finally u updated this simi..nd its worth a wait..emotional write up 👏
Why ram is in so much pain? nd where is mahima?
Plz dont make him cry like this.. 😒
Eagerly waiting for next part do cont soon this time..
Thanx for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am late I am late I know😛😛😛😛but I am here...Interesting Start.👏👏..So far I am loving Dadi Maa ..😆😆😆😆.she sounds like so much fun!!!!
I am dying to know what happend to Mehima/ hitler? 😲so hurry up with the next chapter Ok... I am looking forward to see how this is going to develop... Good Job Simi ...Keep it up.
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