FF: Hum Aapke.. Page 14 - Page 6

Originally posted by: leena04

part 1

awww song choice is very awesome... u r too gud writer yaar loved the whole senery awww rsya gonna meet in party as streangers... awesome... both went out alone too... moving on to next part to read more...

Abhi likh rahi hu..
I wish all my readers knew KGGK..
Anyway.. In my story.. Janki Who is also named Priya and Parvathi.. is the protagonist..
Pata nahi likhu kaise..
Abhi toh bas going with the flow..
Lets see what comes out of it..
Waise I would like to know how many of you know KGGK..
Ram and Suyash play parallel roles.. I know I know
Par.. Me like both..

Love,
L.

Goli kahanni, janki, suyash everything is ok but why 3 names for one person 😲 chalo anyways try to make it bit clear from next time when u re mentioning janki, priya, parvati...together in an update 😛

Janki is Priya's maiden name.. They are the same person.. Coming to Narayini Devi.. I think it is best to let the story reveal things to you.. Thankyou so much for your comments.. They mean a lot to me..

Have been a little busy off late.. So will not be able to reply to your comments for a while.. One long update a week is a promise..

Chapter 2 A: "Kuch Baatein Aisi.."

Pholon ke rang se..
Dil ki kalam Se..

Ram was waltzing in his study room which had book shelves and a beautiful blank wall.. He stood for a while smiling to himself as he imagined Priya walking by and nodding her head in negative..

Tere khayaalon mein uljaaraha hu..
Lekar ke maya mein daaga..

He pulls the beautiful woman closer and Twirls her around.. Her beautiful dove eyes smile with every turn..

Baadal bijili..
Chandan paani..

He lifts her a little off her feet and swings her in the air..

Lena hoga janam hume..
Kayi.. Kayi baar..

He puts her on her feet.. He walks towards her.. She walks back.. She hits the wall.. He walks close to her.. The scent of this woman.. Her charm.. Had him smitten.. He touches her cheek.. She closes her eyes as she smiles..

Kitna madir.. kitna madhur..
Tera mera pyaar..

He leans forward.. Moving his other hand to her soft waist.. He can feel her breath pace faster.. He can see love in her eyes.. Those beautiful eyes.. He brings his lips close to her soft lips and she vanishes..

Ram bites his lips and giggles.. She had turned to looked at him just once as she walked out of Pihu's room.. He mimes Priya.. She had stolen his heart that evening..

He walks out with a grin on his face..

In SM:

The mansion as a whole was a huge one.. The main door led to a huge veranda which had a huge stair that descended on the other end.. Chandeliers and royal linen dressed furniture made the interiors look antique.. There were very minimal things photo frames..

As we walk the stairs to the living room above.. The dim lights and the carpets.. The fire place and the balcony.. It was truly a mansion.. There was a dining room.. A library and home theatre.. Each of these rooms had grand entrances.. With linen curtain flowing down with pride.. There was so much more to the mansion than just its majestic marble build..

Iss makaan ki mallkin kahin nazar nahi aarahe the.. Another majestic stairs led to the next level which had 5 bedrooms.. The centre one belonging to her.. Iss ghar ki maalkin.. Iss ghar ki devi.. Iss ghar ki jaan aur shaan..

A dark huge room.. With a small madir with a murthy of Maa Durga.. Nothing much was to be seen.. The mandir had its nanda deepa burning with valor..

Janki sat in her padmaasan.. Hair tied in a pony.. Her hair seemed short because of the bangs that dangled by her face.. Her eyes shut.. Her lips curved into a calm smile.. Her divinity and aura.. Let out positive vibes.. She wore a sleevless white top and a knee length shorts.. All white and cal.. Her hands folded together.. Jasmine lay all around her.. Light music played in the background..

Time had stopped to watch her sit.. Beauty personified.. Calmness spread around.. The cool wind.. To her right was a garden.. The French windows were open.. Letting the wind enter and whisper to her.. 35 years of peace yet chaos.. Soonapan jaise chah gaya tha.. Akele pan mein ghoonjrahi tanhai..

Sapne bunne wali Janki.. Aaj bandhi thi zimmeddariyon se.. Shayad sapne kabhi bune hi nahi.. Saansein tho le rahe the.. Par zindagi ki ehsaas kahi chut gayi thi..

She thought to herself..

Sabkeliye jeeliya.. Ab shayad kya baaki hai.. Karthe hai hum beintiha.. Sehethe hai hum.. Beshaq.. Par kya paaya iss duniya se.. Kya paaya insaan hoke..

There was nothing in her mind.. Just peace.. Nobody on her mind.. She meditated.. Her mind meditated.. Her heart meditated.. The water in the water bowl calmed down.. The clear water and the lilies that floated.. The leaves didn't rustle outside.. The crickets didn't creak.. .. Everything paused for that moment.. Just the breath she took could be heard..

She had the most determined mind.. Jis muqsathkeliye jeerahe the.. Usko kamiyaab karne ke alaawa aur kuch nahi tha mann mein..

Night descended and the light of the ray dawned.. The first rays of the sun hit the dew drops that stood calmly on the leaves.. The garden looked fresh and lush.. Light green.. Young and misty..

The garden serene and calm.. Priya got up from her place and walked on the fresh soft Mexican grass..

She smiles at the freshness the morning had brought along..

In Mehra Mansion:

Suyash Mehera ( Anup Soni ) walks out of his changing room wearing a Suit.. His hair gelled back.. His glasses in place.. He looks at his Blackberry and places a call to Narayini Devi.. With one hand in his pocket.. He waits for the call to be received with determination..

Narayini Devi: Haan bolo beta..

Suyash: Jaanki ji gaye the Ram Kapoor ke ghar..?

Narayini: Haan.. Par beta tum yeh sab kyu karrahe ho..?

Suyash: Ram ko unki zaroorath hai.. jaise Om ko unki zaroorat thi..

Narayini Devi: Suyash Joh Janki ke saath hua Agarwal house mein.. Shayad.. Usne sabko maauf kiya hoga.. Par tumhe aaj tak who samaj nahi paayi.. Tumne mujhe kyu rokha hai Suyash.. Teri pyaar ke badle who sirf nafrath deti hai..

Suyash: Janki ji ne che bhaje bulaaya hai..

Narayini has tears in her eyes.. He would never utter a word.. He would only unconditionally love her..

Narayini: Hmm.. She shuts her eyes.. And smiles.. Aja beta..

Suyash looks a himself.. It had been 10 years since he had seen her.. A smile crept his face.. She was the woman who taught him how to see and live life.. Not just lead life.. Ek businessman se insaan banaaya.. Zindagi se pyar karna sikhaaya.. Rishton ki ahemiyat dikhaaya.. Jeene ki maksath di.. Sachai ki raah pe chalthe hue.. Sehensheeltha aur pyar.. Dono ki misaal banke.. Jeena sikhaaya..

Par aaj wohi aurath.. Joh hare k insaan se beintiha pyar karthe hai.. Joh har insaan ko raah dikhaathe hai.. Wahi Inse nafrath karthe the..

He took a deep breath.. Wind blew by his face.. He was calm and content.. He just wanted her to be content and happy in her life..

He walks out of his room.. it was early in the morning.. His house empty..

As he walked he remembers walking beside.. janki.. Or back then Parvathi..

Her grace as she walked.. Her bindi.. Her kohled dove eyes.. Her luscious red lips.. Her beautiful hair that swayed with the wind.. And her warmth as they walked side by side..

With each step.. he watched her feet touch the ground.. She had thin gold paayal.. That didn't jingle.. but yes it adorned her feet.. The cold wind blew by.. Playing with her hair.. It swayed back.. And her dark brown hair shone with grace.. She smiled and held her arms..

To be continued..

Precap: Suyash walks closer.. Janki walks back.. He traces her hair strand behind her ears..

Janki: Aap…Aap yeh..

Hi everyone..

Sorry I am a day late.. Was a little bust last night ;)

Anyway love to read your comments.. Do leave them behind.. I will take all suggestions and criticism.. I wonder where my previous readers are.. I miss you all.. Has been so long.. Haan kuch log rue hue hai.. Kuch log naraaz hai..

Ab maaufi maangu bhi toh kaise.. Im sorry I disappeared.. I hope ki aap sab maauf karsakthe hai.. Par haan aapki naraazgi jaaiz hai..

I am sorry from the bottom of my heart..

I miss you all very much..

Love,

L.

Woww awesome part goli..loved the song in beginning nd beautifully described SM scene.. 👏 ❤️
Cont soon

nice update Lesha ji

Chapter 2 B: "Kuch Baatein Aisi.."

Jaanki who sat with her hands folded in front of her nanda deepa.. opened her eyes in horror.. Om Agarwal.. Suyash Mehera.. She was living a peaceful life for the past ten years thinking she had left that world behind her.. But today.. It wasn't the same anymore.. Things had changed.. Mr. Mehra was back.. Yes the man she never wanted to see..

Narayini Devi walked in.. Janki looked at her.. Narayini admired her daughter.. Janki had the most beautiful eyes the world had seen.. Neatly dressed in a bottle green cotton saree neatly pressed.. She looked graceful..

Janki: Maa.. Ab aur nahi..

Narayini had tears in her eyes.. She knew that this day would come.. The day Suyash would want to meet Janki.. She would leave.. Narayini just nodded..

Shipra walked in calm.. She loved her Priya to no end.. Jaanki stood and walked to Shipra and took her blessings..

Shipra Sudhir and Karthik meant the world to Janki.. Shipra had given Jaanki a new life.. A family.. She had made her Priya..

Priya hugged her and said.. Amma hume jaana chahiye..

Shipra nodded.. She had never said no to Priya.. Priya was somebody else.. More than a woman.. More than a Daughter..

Sudhir and Shipra were all set packing.. Yes.. Priya had changed their life completely.. Karthik ran to his di.. A little worried.. Di par.. Woh..

Priya smiled to him.. She knew he was in love with Natasha.. She smirked as Karthik went.. Dii..

He hugged her.. Because he knew she would do everything for his happiness.. Di Natasha humare saath aaye toh.. ?

Priya smiled.. karthik lifted her in his arms and swung her around.. She had been a friend, a mother, a guide, a sister and a philosopher..

Everyone got busy packing.. In the past ten years Priya had taken them to the most beautiful places in India.. Aise jagahe joh shayad kisiko pata bhi nahi tha ki hai..

Meanwhile in KM:

Ram was all ready to go to office.. He wore his glasses and corrected his tie.. Before picking up his rolex from the dressing table.. The room was filled with musk.. He looked at the time.. It was still early in the morning..

Natasha blazed into his room with utter delight.. She came and hugger him..

Ram smiled athis choti.. Arre wah choti.. Kya baath hai.. ? Aaj itna khush kyu ho..?

Nutz: Bhai who.. She looks at him all flushed red.. Karthik apne parivaar ke saath chutti par jaraha hai..

Ram par choti.. Shaadi se pehele tum kaise..

Their conversation is interrupted by Pihu.. Pihu runs to her Bua.. Natasha lifts little Pihu in her arms.. And smiles to her brother..

Pihu is all smiles: Bua.. Hum mumma ke ghar jaaenge hai na..

Ram looks shocked at his daughters statement.. Nutz looks at her brotherconfused.. She mouths a confused Mumma.. Ram Pushes his glasses back with his index finger.. Looking embarrassed..

Krishna walked into the room.. Pihu beta.. Aaap tayaar nahi honge.. Chalo Natasha tum use tayyar kardo.. Saari cheezein uski pack hogayi hai..

Ram couldn't comprehend what was going on.. Natasha carried Pihu with excitement out of the room..

Ram looked at his mother with a confused expression..

KK: Ram.. Sudhirji ka phone aaya tha.. Unhone hum sab ko kuch dino keliye Pondicherry bulaaya hai.. Mein mana nahi karpaayi.. Waise bhi tumhaara yaha mann nahi lagtha.. Toh.. Meine haan kardi.. Vikram Neha waha pohunchthe hi honge.. Car mein tumhaara samaan rakhwaadiya hai.. Chalo..

She left in a hurry.. Ram was left flabbergasted.. No one asked for his opinion.. He laughed to himself.. The effect Priya had on each one of them..

He smiled and walked to his laptop..

Meanwhile Suyash Mehra stops his Bentley in front of the huge Mansion..

Suyash Mehra.. Walked out in his Gucci get up.. He looked smashing.. He walked through the stone pathway with valor and arrogance.. Yes he wasn't the same Suyash Mehera who talked to Narayini Devi.. He was the Suyash Mehra Janki thought he was. .

He spotted Janki Devi.. She stood amidst the flowers in her arden.. Butterflies.. Touched her hands.. It seemed like they were celebrating her..

He walked towards her with hands in his pockets.. She looked at him.. He saw her anger.. His heart stopped beating as he neared her.. Her beautiful skin glowed in the sun.. Those eyes.. Those beautiful dove eyes.. He was left awestruck.. He walked closer to her.. She moved back.. He held her soft palm..

She looks at him.. The man whom she hated.. But that touch was filled with love.. What was wrong with her.. She shut her eyes as the wind blew by her face..

He involuntarily moved his fingers tucking her hair back.. Reality hit them both.. He held her hand tight.. She looked at him with mixed emotions.. For just a moment she felt he was a different person..

He pulled her close to him by her hand.. His heart beats stopped.. The proximity.. Her aroma.. He had always thirst to have her in his arms,..

Jaanki: Yeh .. Yeh aap.. Her eyes go red with fury.. How dare he touch her.. She yanks her hand..

Suyash: Kyu..? He is angry.. After all he had done for her sheonly had hatred for him.. Kiya kya hai meine joh aap mujhe itna nafrath karthe hai..

Jaanki: Mr. Mehra.. Just leave.. She tried to get a hold of herself..

They moved away from each other.. There was pain.. In both their eyes.. They didn't want that distance.. They looked at each others eyes.. Yeh rishtha kaisa tha.. Nafrath bhi tha.. Pyaar bhi..

Rams car enters the open gates.. Suyash smiles at Janki.. Phir milthe hai..

Janki and Suyash looked at each other.. So much love so much pain.. They had no idea what they felt for each other..

Tere mere pyaar ki ghadiyaa..

Jeevan mein sabse badi hai..

Tum hasthe ho.. Toh lagtha hai..

Saamne khushiyaa khadi hai..

Bade acche lagthe the..

Yeh dharthi.. Yeh nadiyaa.. Yeh raina.. Aur..

Aur..

Tum..

Both had tears in their eyes.. Bichadne ki dard pehele kabhi na thi.. Dil tootne na darr pehele kabhi na thi.. Yeh kaisa bandhan tha.. Benaam rishtha joh tha..

Tears trickled down his eyes.. Tears brimmed in hers.. Unsaid words.. Un heard heart beats.. Suyash turned and walked away..

She felt as if a part of her heart ripped apart and went along with him.. She felt choked.. Why did she feel that way.. Who was he.. He had destroyed her past.. Her life..

She turn.. Closed her eyes.. And tears trickled endlessly.. Shipra called out to Priya.. Janki wiped her tears.. She looked at Shipra standing at the door smiling.. To Priya her parents meant the world.. Nothing else no one else mattered..

As she walked on the grass she turned back to have a last look at Suyash.. She looked back.. He was opening the door of his car.. As if he heard her call him.. He turned back and smiled.. Strangely she smiled to him.. He got in and drove away..

Jaanki drifted into her thought process.. Ten years was a long time.. Had she forgiven him..? Or was she wrong.. Was he wrong.. Who had wronged whom..

Her thought process was broken by Pihu.. She heard Pihu go mumma..

Priya turned to see the little girl run to her with a smile.. Pihu ran into Priyas arms.. Priya face lit up with Pihu's arrival.. Ram walked towards Priya.. As she lifted Pihu into her arms..

Ram watched the her neatly dressed in a pastel saree.. A maroon large bindi adorned her forehead.. Her eyes gloated love for his child.. She pecked Pihu on her forehead.. Pihu clinged on to her like she never wanted to let go..

Ram walked close.. Ms. Sharma.. She looked at him.. Lafz jaise hoton pe aakar rukhgaye.. Unki who geheri aankhen.. Un haseen ankhon ki chamak.. Dil pe khafzaa kargaye..

Priya: Kahiye..

Ram: Smirks.. Yes he couldn't take his eyes off her soft lips.. He wanted to hold her close and look at her.. He looked at Sudhir Shipra and Krishna.. And said.. Chale..

She smiled to him..And lowered her eyes.. Priya thought to herself.. Jab bhi yeh saamne aathe hai.. Ek sukoon miltha hai.. She smiles at his warmth.. As they walk together.. The sharmas and Krishna exchange whispers..

To be continued..

Precap:

They fly to Pondicherry.. Rishab Karthik and Natasha plan something for ram and Priya..

Will Priya let go of her past.. Of being Janki.. Why did she have mixed feelings for Suyash..?

Love,

L.

Hey goli it was wonderfull yar..aaj mujhe kabhi had tak priya or janki ka chakkar samjh agya thank u soo much.. 👍🏼
Both anguish nd love is their in btw janki nd suyash..but ram nd priya will find solace in each others presence nd will try to let go of their past with pihu playing cupid btw them..fab story.. 👏
Looking forward to pondicherry trip..
Cont soon