FF: 50 shades of Ram part4 upd16-5-13 pg-17 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

part 3

very good part. penned down nicely.
ram jealeous...like it the way he is clearing his doubt
loved their talk
best part is last one when Priya falls and Ram holds😉
she wanted to kiss😲. both are in love or in lust😲
continue soon please give faster update along with other FFs



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

part 3...

awww owowowoowowowowwo whqt qn updqte dear RaYa r actually getting closer to each other awww Ram is so sweet i know behind his L**t somewhere is love is hiding which will out very soon... he just don't need a night partner but he needs life partner he will sooon realized it too... awesome update loved it Ram is getting jelouse after one after one awww awesome updates loved the part but again Rajat here yaar don't make him haddi now plz... any way waiting for next part so it soon...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shaz9

NOTE: read it at ur own risk and all rights goes to the writer of the novel E.L james i would just write it on my way ...and it would be both ram and priya's
POV


Part 3
My Personal body gurad took my shopping bags from my hand and open the car's door for me 'I sit in my car outside the hardawre store grinning like a complete idiot'Oh Miss Priya Sharma'I am obsessed with u ? how she can have such effect on me'I once again glance at the store and my driver switch on the engine and drove off'.on my mind there she lingers'image of her biting that god damn lip '.the way she tucks her hair behind her ear'Get a grip Ram 'I try to shake it off'and clear my focus'but no,there she is'all I want to do is f**k her '.
Back to hardware store '.Mrs.khanna and all others wished priya good luck for her new job and bid her bye 'she left the store ..


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Posted: 12 years ago
Note: All right goes to the writer of the novel E.L.James i will just write it on my way and it would be both Ram and Priya's POV

Part 4


I glare at her. What am I going to do! You can't kiss her, Ram. No! My eyes trace across her perfectly sculptured lips which are slightly parted as her breathing increases fast. She softly shivers under my arm. No, no, no, no, no, no… I close my eyes, and take a deep breath, just do it and get it over with, Ram. I shake my head, opening my eyes, knowing what I'm going to do.

Kiss me damn it! I implore him but I can't move. I'm paralyzed with a strange, unfamiliar need, Completely captivated by him,. I'm staring at Ram Kapoor's exquisitely sculptured mouth, mesmerized and he's looking down at me, his gaze hooded, his eyes darkening. He's breathing harder than usual, and I've stopped breathing altogether. I'm in your arms.

Kiss me, please. He closes his eyes, takes a deep breath, and gives me a small shake of his head as if in answer to my silent question. When he opens his eyes again, it's with some new purpose, a steely resolve.



Full part on my BLONG http://hotraya.blogspot.com/


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update shaz 👏
Cont soon nd thanx for pm
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Ram absolutely rocked the part with priya 😆
This for the pm
Edited by Ukppriyafan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
hate this Rajat.how could he😡 😡 😡
lovd the bar scene
waiting for the next part. Raya are together.
it will be rocking😉
continue soon and thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
just awesome..what a description...👏 Words are less for comments ..love every bit dear...thank u for ut PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab update
Ram saved priya from rajat
Wat next
Waiting for part
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomely superb, wow! Priya is drunk and Rajat tried to take the opportunity of her, that moron, and Priya called Ram and Ram saved her, now its getting more interesting and intriguing, plz continue ASAP

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