FF - RaYa - Second Chance overview on pg 149 - Page 44

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

update will be in couple of hours

"Jab
do log milte hain pehle frndshp hoti hain phir pyaar hota hain aur phir shaadi
hoti hain, lekin humare RaYa kuch"

As per u say lol..i agre totally that our RAYA are kuch alag hai bhai...

Loved the story going on...Sudden proposal from Krishnaji..

Akwardness of both Ram and Priya and special meeting for them arranged by Nevik...

slowly their mutual understanding ..still they have come too close but whatever their pths are simultaneously u r bringing up on the love phace ..Loved the entire wedding and thheir eaqution building ups... That ring part also just too good ... Priya na she will do exactly the same..

And dont worry im loving this dialogues where u r using it from serial ..

Bahuth acche lagte hai aapka story padkar ...

Thanks for contious PMs ..Lov ya .. keep it up the work .. want to see next updates ...

Sorry for late reply ..

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

<font color="#0000FF">Heyy Ujjaini .. Nice to hear that you started writing FF ... Congratulations for starting it off .
For me its a bit difficulty to read hindi ,, but Raya FF tho kuch launguage bhi chalegaaa...
loved the bang updates .. Actually its treat to read your ff darling ..
loved this dialogue...
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<font color="#990000">"Jab
do log milte hain pehle frndshp hoti hain phir pyaar hota hain aur phir shaadi
hoti hain, lekin humare RaYa kuch"</font>

<font color="#0000FF">As per u say lol..i agre totally that our RAYA are kuch alag hai bhai...</font>

<font color="#0000FF">Loved the story going on...Sudden proposal from Krishnaji..</font>

<font color="#0000FF">Akwardness of both Ram and Priya and special meeting for them arranged by Nevik...</font>

<font color="#0000FF">slowly their mutual understanding ..still they have come too close but whatever their pths are simultaneously u r bringing up on the love phace ..Loved the entire wedding and thheir eaqution building ups... That ring part also just too good ... Priya na she will do exactly the same..</font>

<font color="#0000FF">And dont worry im loving this dialogues where u r using it from serial ..</font>

<font color="#0000FF">Bahuth acche lagte hai aapka story padkar ...</font>

<font color="#0000FF">Thanks for contious PMs ..Lov ya .. keep it up the work .. want to see next updates ...
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<font color="#0000FF">Sorry for late reply ..
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Priya ko achha nahi laga yeh sunn ke, she was expecting that Ram will agree to go with her. She didn't say anything and just said ok to him.

On the next morning, everyone were busy as they are all preparing for the outing. Subah se ghar pe chehal pehel shuru hain, kids are enjoying to their best, everyone is busy in packing foods and other stuffs. Priya, Neha and Jyoti are helping Kaajal in the kitchen, Roshan, Vikram, Sohan and Rishabh are keeping the stuffs in the respective cars, Rajni is busy with Shree, she is making her get dressed, Dadi, Krishnaji and Ram are talking about their outing. Aaj Priya ne ek printed colour ki suit pehni hain which is in black and golden combination, bohot pretty dikh rahi hain.

Everyone is ready and they leave. This time also Roshan, Kaajal, Jyoti, Rishabh, Dadi, Krishnaji and kids are in one car and in another Sohan, Rajni, Shree, Vikram, Neha, Ram and Priya. They visited the famous places of Amritsar, enjoyed a lot, did all types of masti, fun, not only kids but the elder people also, kids played cricket with their favourite Ram uncle and Ram enjoyed every bit of the moment, Shree became the centre of attraction, she mostly seated in the lap of Priya and played with her and Neha along with Jyoti. In the lunch everyone come to one dhaba and enjoyed Punjabi food which were yummy and tasty. This time Ram teased Neha by showing her the ghee and butter he consumed with each paratha, Neha was angry and she shouted on him but Ram being Ram he simply avoided her. Some jolly and funny moments come up. After lunch everyone came back and go to their respective rooms as everyone were tired. Next day they will all leave so packing need to be done, so everyone thought of taking some rest.

In the evening, Priya came to Krishanji and said,

Priya – ma woh main soch rahi thi ke main sab ke liye kuch na kuch khareedo, itni jaldi main hum log yahan aaye toh kuch leke nahi aa sake, aur Shree ko bhi pehli baar dekha toh achha nahi lagta yun khali haath, so I was thinking if I go and get something for everyone.

Krishnaji was very happy to hear this.

Dadi – Priya tune bilkul achha socha, ek kaam kar Golu ko saath leke jaa.

Ram who was passing from there, stopped hearing dadi's voice.

Dadi – oye tu Priya ke saath ja aur usse help kar.

Priya not looking at Ram said, rehne dijiye dadi, main chali jaungi, aap pareshaan mat hoiyye.

Dadi – ek toh anjaan jagah upar se andhera bhi ho gaya hain, kaise jayegi?, nahi Golu tu ja.

Ab Ram ke paas koi option hain nahi toh woh aur Priya market aate hain. So both come to the shopping mall. Toh Priya sab ke liye kuch na kuch khareed rahi hain and to her surprise Ram was helping her with buying things, kabhi koi colour to kisi cheez ke upar inn dono ka clashes hota rehta hain par yeh log enjoy kar rahe hain ek dusre ke company, lastly Priya ko Shree ke liye kuch lena tha, toh woh ek jewellery shop ayi, wahan usse do chhote chhote silver ke payal pasand aaye, they are very simple but very beautiful, and size me bada hain but it can be adjusted, so Priya like that and she bought that for Shree. Ab kaafi saaman ho gaya hain, toh Priya se samhale nahi jaa rahe the toh Ram ne kuch packets apne haathon me le liya. When they were returning they saw Harminder Sahib is decked up with lights and it was really looking very beautiful. Priya insisted Ram that she wants to go there again. So both of them enetered the temple, ab gurudwara aaye hain toh mattha toh teek na hi parega, so both went to take blessings. While returning from Golden temple Priya came to an ice cream parlour and packed three varieties of different ice creams for whole family especially for kids and also bought one big chocolate block and gifted to Ram.

Ram was bit surprised and asked her, kis khushi me, yeh hain?

Priya – u came with me for shopping and also help me in that so this is for you and said thanks to him

Ram ko yeh andaaz pasand aya and he said its my pleasure.

Both come back and everyone were elated to get the gifts, sab ko bohot pasand aya, kids loved it and by turn all hugged their Priya aunty. Then Priya took Shree in her lap and make her sit and placed the payal in her tiny ankle. Shree was having fun and she loved her gift. She gave a sloppy kiss to Priya. Priya ko bohot achha laga, kahin na kahin woh Shree ke saath kuch zyada hi jud gayi hain, kal ke baad woh Shree se mil nahi payegi yeh soch ke uske aankhon me ansoon aa jate hain, woh dabane ki koshish karti hain par Ram dekh leta hain aur samajh jata hain. Shree ko bohot pyaar karke aur usko bohot saare kissi karke Rajni ko wapas karti hain.

Priya came back to her room and started to pack her things when Ram entered the room. He saw Priya was upset and sad. Ram ko bilkul achha nahi laga, pata nahi kyun par usko priya ki chehre pe mayusi achhi nahi lagti, Priya muskurati hain, blabber karti hain, chillati hain, jhagda karti hain, uske taang bhi kheenchti hain ---- yeh sab Ram phir bhi tolearate karta hain par uski chehre pe udaasi usse achha nahi lagta, yeh Ram ko bhi pata nahi kyun, par aisa hi hain.

Ram – Shree kuch zyada hi tumse ghul mil gayi thi

Priya – actually mujhe bachhen bohot pasand hain, unlogon ke saath waqt bitana achha lagta hain

Ram – mujhse toh bachhen samhalte hi nahi

Priya – haan samhalna thoda mushkil hota hain, par agar aap un logon ko comfortable feel karvayenge toh itna mushkil nahin hota hain

Ram – mujhse toh kabhi nahi hoga, pata nahi jab mere bachhen………………….

Hearing this Priya looked upto him and Ram by now understood what he says, he actually wanted to make Priya feel better that's why he was just chatting with her but now he becomes embarrassed and was looking other side and said, woh actually tum packing kar hi rahi ho toh mera bhi kar dena, am going downstairs, ma se kuch baat karni hain, saying this he went away.

Priya ko bhi thoda embarrassed feel hua par woh packing me dhyaan lagane ki koshish kar rahi thi and after 15 mins she was done with her packing.

Everyone were relishing the dinner, aaj dinner thoda special hain kyunki aaj last dinner hain sabka, kal after breakfast everyone will leave. Aur upar se aaj toh sweet dish me ice-cream bhi hain toh double bonanza ho gaya.

Dinner ho jaane ke baad everyone retired to their room, Shree was also sleeping so Rajni, Neha, Jyoti, Kaajal and Priya were sitting and chatting in the second floor verandah. Aaj ke baad pata nahi phir kab milega aisa mauka toh sab dil khol ke baad kar rahe hain. Neha ne toh Kaajal, Rajni aur Jyoti, teeno se wada liya hain ke jab bhi Mumbai aayenge unke ghar pe theherna parega bhale hi woh KM pe rahe aur Priya aur Neha ne bhi wada kiya ke Jyoti ke shaadi me woh log 10 days pehle hi aa jayenge aur bohot masti karenge. Priya ko Amritsar bohot achha laga, yahan ke log, reet riwaaz, uska saasural, saasural ke log, yeh haveli, Shree, Vinay, Aman sab, inn sab ki yaad leke woh kaal wapas jayegi par dil bohot suna suna, khali khali lagega. Yahaan aake thodi hi sahi par kuch waqt toh woh Mr. Kapoor ke saath bitaai, ek undekha pehlu dekhne ko mila, duniya se anjaan, apno ke beech ek bilkul alag insaan dekhne ko mila, pehli baar Mr. Kapoor ke liye kuch mehsoos kiya, kya hain woh feeling yeh toh Priya bhi nahi janti, par kuch achha sa hain ------ yeh saari yaadein woh saament ke lee jaa rahi hain, pata nahi phir kab yeh dekhne ko mile.

Next day, in the morning everyone is ready and is having breakfast. Kids are as usual in their masti mood but elders are bit sad, sab ko dukh ho raha hain, Shree Priya ke god me beythi hain, usse bhi lag raha hain ki mahaol kuch sad sa hain, finally its time to bid gud bye, so this time Sohan will drop them in the airport. Sab ne dadi aur Krishanji ke per chhuye, Roshan ne Ram aur Vikram ko hug kiya, Rishanbh ne Roshan ke per chhya aur hug kiya, Jyoti ko Ram, Vikram aur Rishabh ne hug kiya, Kaajal, Rajni – Priya aur Neha ko hug kiya, sab ke aankhon me aansoo the. Shree ko Rajni apne godi me lene hi wali thi ke Shree roo padi, itne dino me usne kabhi bhi royi nahi, actually woh roti bilkul nahi par usse bhi laga ke Priya usse chhod ke jaa rahi hain toh woh Priya ko kass ke pakdi huin thi, Priya ko bohot bura laga aur usne bhi roo diya, bohot mushkil se Shree ko churvaya gaya. Situations kaafi emotional ho gaya tha, toh tabhi Neha ne Priya ko samhala. Everyone gets into the bus and waved others back. They come to the airport and bid Sohan bye and boarded the flight. Ab flight me kuch khaas hua nahi, sirf Ram Priya ko dekhte hue kahan ki, if she is alright or not. Priya said she is fine.

Everyone reached Kapoor Mansion. It was Sunday so everyone go to their rooms and take rest for while. On the other Shergills also reached their house.

In the evening everyone was in the hall having their cup of tea and was discussing about their Amritsar visit.

Dadi – bade dino baad pura pariwaar ekkattha hua tha, bohot mazaa aa aya, aur babaji ke darshan bhi ho gaye, mera toh dil ki tamannah puri ho gayi, babaji meher kare sab par.

Krishnaji – haan beeji sab ne bohot enjoy kiya khaas kar bachhon ne, outing bhi gayi aur pura pariwaar ka saath bhi mil gaya.

Rishabh – thanks to bhabi, ma saal me ek baar aisa hona hi chahiye, isi bahaane sab se mulaqaat bhi ho jayegi.

Priya wasn't saying anything was just smiling.

Krishnaji – mujhe na beeji Shree ki bohot yaad aa rahi hain, itni pyaari si hain, aate waqt bohot royi.

Priya – Shree bohot yaad ayegi.

Dadi – ghar me ek bachhe ka hona mano jaise ghar ki raunaq bar jati hain, uski kilkariyon se, uske totle zubaan se ghar bhar jata hain.

Ram was in his study doing some work. He was engrossed with his writing, but was thinking, kal se phir wohi office, client, meeting, presentations ---- back to work. Yeh 4 days kab beet gaya pata bhi nahi chala, bachhpan ki yaadein tazaa huin inn kuchh dino me, pure pariwaar ke saath enjoy kiya, Priya ke saath bhi kuch pal beetaya, woh kitna sochti hain sab ke bare me, bachhon se kitna lagaav hain usse, Shree toh sara din usike saath rehti thi, aaj jane ke waqt bohot royi, Priya ke aankhon me bhi maine aansoo dekhe the, likhte likhte yehi soch raha tha Ram, tabhi door pe knock hua and he sees Priya is standing there.

Priya – dinner is ready, aap aa jaiyye

Ram – tum chalo, main ata hoon.

After the dinner everyone retired to their room. Rishabh came to his room and called Saumya

Rishabh – hi, kaise ho?

Saumya – hello, main toh theek hoon, tum bolo kaisa raha Amritsar?

Rishabh – awesome, pure pariwaar ke saath bohot mazaa aaya.

Soumya – u r so lucky that u have so many people in ur family, tum kabhi nahi samjhoge akele rehna kya hota hain. Pata hain Rishabh mere hamesha se khwahish thi ke mere koi bhai ya behen ho, jab bhi doston ke bhai behen dekhti thi, lagta tha kaash mera bhi koi hota, jiske saath main apni khushiyan ya problems share kar sakti, nuclear family se belong karti hoon, janti hoon akele rehna kitna tough hain, mummy papa toh the par jo bhai behen ka alag hi rishta hota hain, isi liye main jab bhi tumhare ghar ati hoon mujhe achha lagta hain, tum, Nuts aur bare bhaiyya ---- bohot khushi hoti hain mujhe tum sab ko dekh ke.

Rishabh could understand Soumya's feelings, ab itne dino me usse woh itna toh jaan hi paya hain, so he said, don't worry yaar, kuch dino ke baad yeh sab tumhara bhi toh hoga

Soumya don't say anything and just listened to him.

Rishabh – Soumya raat kafi ho chuki hain, go to sleep, hum kal milte hain, good night

Soumya – good night

In RaYa's room Priya is preparing her couch and Ram is busy in his laptop, working on the bed.

Priya – Mr. Kapoor, kal se meri college start honewali hain, toh mujhe thoda jaldi nikalna parega, hope aap ko koi pareshani nahi hogi

Ram – no its fine, main driver se keh dunga ke woh tumhe college drop kar dega.

Priya – no need of that, I will manage

Ram – as you wish

As both were tired so Ram closed his laptop and Priya also packed her stuff for next morning and both drifted to sleep.