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aiyathasan

@aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Siacutie
ab ram bhao khayega @tease her
it was a superb update
continue ur other ff also

tnx dear...😊

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aiyathasan

@aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: leena04

part 3...
awww awesome loved the way RaYa's relation growing they r just meant for each other yaar so cute the way they were doing knok n jhok Priya not in love with him but started to falling for him... plz make Ram teases her more n even plzz plzz plzzz connt next soon... i want to see it soon will Priya kisses Ram or not... so waitinggg

thank u so much di for commenting in my every update... i will update soon...😊

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aiyathasan

@aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: viny_queen
superb update wow their nok jok i

tnx di for liking it

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aiyathasan

@aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sss283
nice nok-jhoks😆

tnx subhu

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aiyathasan

@aiyathasan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

part4

priya is alone in her bed room... all the morning she is thinking about ram ... several times she calls at nehes number but she does not pick up her phone... now priya is feeling restless. coz this is the first that ram does not eats his breakfast and does not gives her a good bye kiss moreover today is sunday and ram always spend all day with priya... she is missing him badly... on the other hand ram is planning to make priya jealous... he goes to nevik house and explain them his plan... they said that they r with him... now ram is feeling very happy ... after sometimes later neha calls priya after several rings priya picks up the phone..

priya: what is this neha where r u? i m calling so many times but u does not bother to pick up my call?
neha: priya plz hold on yaar... u know that today is sunday and vikram is at the home so we r just enjoying each other company... and this one day i get a chance to spend a quality time with him so how could i miss it... by the way where is fatty...
ram and vikaram is sitting in the hall and neha is sitting opposite them... ram show her his thumb and tells her to active the loud speaker...
priya: i m alone in the house ram is not here i dont know where is he... even he does not eats his breakfast.. i need your help yaar..
neha: whats happened to ram and this is the first time that i m hearing that ram does not takes his breakfast... poor boy must be hungry now... tell me what can i do fo you?
priya: he is very angry at me and i dont know how to say sorry...
neha: its simply yaar when he goes to house gives him a hug and kiss... and trust me this the best way to mollify him...
priya: i cant do this...
neha: why? he is your husband then whats the problem?
priya: i know he is my husband but i cant do this..
neha: okay as you wish... by the way be ready me vikram and roshni will coming to your house in the evening ..
priya: who is roshni?
neha: ram does not tell you about roshni?
priya: no...who is she and why she is coming here
neha: she is top model in our country... me ram vikram roshni we all r goods friends and we know each other from school days... plz dont tell this ram that i tell you this... when we had at college that time ram had a crush on her... but he never told this to roshni... after so many years we get a chance to spend some time with eachother... when i told this to ram that roshni is coming to his house his happiness is no bounds...
priya is feeling little uncomfortable she has never imagine that ram had a crush one someone else: neha i will wait for you bye...

after puts down the phone ram and neha gives a hi five to each other...

ram: tnx darling... now i have to leave now... saying this ram leaves the place and goes to shopping mall for buying some gifts for priya... after finishing his shopping he goes to house...
priya is thinking herself what the hell this is... why she is coming here... she does not know that ram is married now... and ram how mean he is...,, he always tells me that he loves me.. loves my foot.. if he really loves me than he will never leave me alone like this...priya does not realize that ram standing is behind her when she turns and looks at the door she sees that ram is standing at the door and holding some bags in his hand...

priya: mr kaha the aap... aur ye a kaya hain?
ram: priya tume deykhai nahi dete hain kya? ye shopping bag hain..
priya: mujhe deykhai deyti hain par aap kisk liya itna shopping kiya hain?
ram: hain koi hi jo meri dil ki bahot karaib hain aur jiske aak muskan k liya mein apni jan bhi dey sakti bhi huin
priya thinking to herself i know mr kapoor u buy all this for your roshni...
ram: kya soch rahi ho?
priya: kuch nahi.. apne lunch kiya?
ram: tumeh nahi jan nah he ki mein kis k liya shopping kiya hain? nahi mein lunch nahi kiya hain..
priya: nahi mujhe nahi jan na hain... aap fresh ho jaiye aa mein khana ready karta huin..
ram: okay... ram is feeling very happy coz his plans is working... he can feels that priya is feeling very jealous...

at the evening time ram and priya sitting in their bed room... and drinks their evening tea... ram: kitna baj rahi hain priya neha roshni abhi tak nahi aiye hain.. kabse un teeno ka intezer kar rahi huin... aak kam karo neha ko phone kar ke puccho kitne time aur lagegi anne mein..
priya: jab aana hain to aa jaiyege aap kiyu itne pareshan ho rahi hain... aur plz jab sab ayegi aap log hall mein baat kar bate karenge meri room mein nahi..
ram: kya se na paresan huin roshni ko kitne dino k baat deykhungi... aur room mein kiyu nahi baat sakti hum... a room mera bhi hain...
priya: meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi hain mein aab rest longi... to aap log hall mein he bathenge...
ram: hall ho ye room ho mujhe kya mein to srif roshni ka shate cahata huin kuch der k liya...
priya: plz mr kapoor bar bar ye roshni roshni mat kahe hain meri sar mein dard hota hain... when they r continuing their nok jhok vikram neha roshni enters the room..
neha: hey priya tum log kya hameshai aise jhagarte rahe te ho?
priya : hey neha plz come in side... sorry humne tum logo ko notice nahi kiya
roshni takes some big steps and goes to near ram and gives him a tight hug and a kiss in his cheek... oh god ram look at you yo r looking so hot... saying all this she again hugs him... now priya is fuming with angry..thinking. kitna mannerless hain ye ladki koi married admi ko koi aise hug karta hain kya o bhi uski biwi ki samne.. h roshni mein priya ram ki patni..this is the first time that priya calls him ram...
roshni: oh sorry itne excited hogaiye ki tumeh notice he nahi kiya mein nea...
priya: its ok plz sit down
neha vikram and priya is sitting on the couch and ram and roshni is sitting on the bed... they all r talking about their past their college life and their future but priya is thinking somethings else.. she cant tolerates roshni for a second...

priya is talking with neha in low voice: neha tumeh nahi lagya ye roshni kuch jaiyeda karib bate hain mr kapoor ki?
neha: haan yaar par a to kuch nahi hain hum jab clg mein tha tab to aur bhi karib baatte thi..
priya: kiya? plz yaar kuch karo usko meri samne se hatao mein aak palke bhi usko bardas nahi kar sakti..
neha:mein kya kar sakti huin ram usko jane nahi denge..
priya: uski chinta tum mat karo... usko aur vikram ko room se bhar ley jao baki mein samal lungi..
neha: okay wait... vikarm baby i m feeling ill and plz lets go home and winks him roshni u also joint us..
vik: okay baby lets go.. roshni also gets up from bed and ram follows her priya hurriedly walking towards ram and stands beside him..

before leaving from there roshni hugs him whisper something in his ear which makes his laugh loudly... priya cant control anymore roshni can u excuse us,,,,
roshni: haan sure...roshni leaves the room when ram tries to goes behind her priya holds his hand and pulls back towards her...and takes his lips in her mouth and gives him a passionate kiss... after sometimes they apart from each other for taking some air..
priya: usko kisne hak diya hain aap ko touch karne ki... mein apki biwi huin aur apko touch karne ka hak srif mera hain saying all this priya takes his hands and puts it in her waist... at first ram touch her waist lightly,,, but when he gain full access in her waist he holds it tightly and pulls her close to him priya keeps her one hand in his neck and pulls near her and hug him tightly... now their lost in each other arms...

i know it is a very bad update and not up to the mark sorry for this... meri maan mein jo aiye mein a likh diya...lol
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Edited by aiyathasan - 12 years ago

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cloud121

@cloud121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Awesome update dear...continue soon!!!

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Eram

@viny_queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

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Alaadin

@Alaadin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Nice update
Please update soon

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Was nice one but Ram should have made her jealous for longer time, tab mazaa ata, anyways love the bold step of Priya, aakhir hote hote pyaar ho hi gaya, this reminds me the tag line of the show "shaadi ke bad hote hote pyaar ho hi jata hain", will be waiting for next update

Edited by jineejiggs - 12 years ago