Tumko Dekha Toh.. PG 71 note - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear.. continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u Lesha for Nanda Deepa explanation, ur updates make me crazy, they are so pure and beautiful yet very mature and romantic, I love to read it but I have a confusion "Ram takes the bangles in his hands and priya shows her hand.. he slips them in.. She smiles promising herself that his family is not rightfully hers and she will always protect them.." why does Priya thinking that Ram's family is not her rightful family, they are married now and that too socially, so why this thinking? then she is thinking she is going to protect them, what is this all about? please clarify it
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Posted: 12 years ago
JineeJiggs - Sorry it not "not" its "now".. i corrected it in the ff.. Thankyou for pointing out..

Hey everyone..

Another update coming up.. Enjoy!

Love,
L.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaprasad1994

Hey everyone..

Another update coming up.. Enjoy!

Love,
L.



arey waah waah ... thanq thanq 👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaprasad1994

JineeJiggs - Sorry it not "not" its "now".. i corrected it in the ff.. Thankyou for pointing out..


Hey everyone..

Another update coming up.. Enjoy!

Love,
L.



thank u dear, btw u can call me Jinee, am waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful,Beautiful and just Beautiful.. Thanks for the discription of nanda deepa, i was going to ask only... Wow..!! dheere dheere houle houle chupke se ab hoga.. Hey neha dear in future pls design my house also.. Ur story is making me crazy. Update soon..
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To be continued..

Ram comes from his shower.. He looks fresh in his formal shirt and pant.. He opens the cupboard and pics up the blazer.. He wears it and looks for a tie..Thinking kaunsa pehenu.. Priya enters.. He senses her presence and turns around..
Priya smiles.. Comes close and picks out a dark blue tie for him..
Ram: Mujhe pehenna nahi aatha..
Priya smiles and puts the tie around his neck.. He smells her fragrance.. She starts tying the knot..
Ram innvoluntarily moves closer.. Wow he smells nice too.. Priya moves a bit back.. Saying.. Nice perfume..
Ram is lost in her kohled eyes.. She bites her lips which have curled into a smile while complimenting him.. He feels drawn.. He has no idea of the world around.. He goes closer.. She steps back.. He clenches his fist.. She finishes the knot and tightens the tie.. He smiles.. Thinking.. Why am I so drawn to her..
Priya thinking.. He looks so smart..
Priya: Nashta tayyar hai.. Chale..?
Ram: Ji..
They both walked ..Rams gaze was fixed on Priya.. They walked out..Priya closed the door behind her.. It was about 7.15.. It was still cool outside.. the sun was covered by clouds.. It was green.. The whole place seemed fresh today.. They Go to the dining.. All the dishes are on the table.. They walk to the table.. Ram sits down.. She serves allo ka paranta awith dahi.. Vik and Neha enter..
And sit down still yawning..
Neha: Kya yaar tum dono itna jaldi utgaye..
Priya serves parantas for both of them..
Vik has a bite.. Wah bhabi.. Kya khana banaathi hai aap..
Ram: haan.. Itne acche parante toh..
Before he complete..
Neha licking her fingers.. Wah Priya.. Fatty toh gaya..
Priya smiles and sits beside Ram.. having her breakfast quietly..
Vik and Neha Fix their gaze on her.. Her sinddor and mangal sutr.. Her calmness after the previous nights events.. Ram too looks calm..
Neha: Fatty kya baath hai..
Ram: Finishing the two parantas.. Kya? He moves his hand to take another.. Priya puts her hand on his.. Nodding in negative.. He smiles..
Neha: Oho.. Wah! Kya baat hai Priya.. Joh hum itne saal mein nahi karsake tumne aaj ek min mein kardiya..
Ram smiles.. Priya finishes off.. Smiling at Neha..
Priya and Neha leave with their plates to the kitchen.. Ram and Vik follow.. They wash their hands..
Vik: Chalo Ram.. Office chale..
Ram: mein sab lekar aatha hu..
Priya turns to him: Suniye..
Ram turns..
Priya: Woh meine sab ghaadi mein rakdi hai..
Ram: Thankyou..
Vik goes and gives Neha a kiss on her cheeks..
Vik: Bhabi mein jaakar aatha hu..
Priya: Haan..
Neha: Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.. Chalo.. They walk out..
Ram comes to Priya.. Their eyes fixed on eachother..
Ram: Thankyou..
Priya: Kissliye..?
Ram: Naasta bohot accha tha..
Priya smiles..
Ram turns and walks.. Priya looking at him thinking.. Ek baar mudiye..
Ram turns around.. Priya mimes a bye..
Ram smiles and mimes a bye..

He leaves the dining and Neha enters..

To be continued..

Precap:
Disscussing married life.. RamVik and Neha Priya..

Hope you liked this last update for tonight.. Have a good night.. Sweet dreams.. Thankyou for your compliments.. Do leave your comments behind.. Love reading them.. Helps me write better.. And motivates me.. Hope you enjoyed it!

Love,
L.

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Posted: 12 years ago
its superb dear, I simply can't take my hands off from ur post, ab thoda sa romance bhi ho jaye, I know both are uncomfortable but maaza isme hi ayegi, so if ur writing permits u then thoda woh bhi dekhna chahongi, will wait for next update impatiently
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow ... dheere dheere houle houle ... good one!

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