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Posted: 12 years ago
very interesting preview can't wait
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally they decided to confess their feelings but yeh rajat kyun aya bich mein..raya c-night cant wait now...jaldi se update karo nd thank u for preview nd long update hopefully..
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PART 16:

The sun was rising. He was showering his golden rays on the earth which was quite cold and sad at that time. How beautiful those rays appeared! What a joy they were giving to the lovers of the nature. The shadows of the trees were very long. They were dimly lit. The sun was still behind the trees' priya lazily opens her beautiful dove eyes' she is feeling still sleepy but today her first day at office so she dose not want to getting late' she lazily sits on the bed and puts her head on the head board' she closes her eyes for few seconds' the memory of last night flashback in front her eyes' she is feeling goosebumps in her full body' something is magical in his touch' whenever he touches her she feel intoxicated.. she wants to lost in his touches for forever'. neha's each word is echoing in her mind' she opens her eyes' she is so confused she does not know what to do' will she goes to him and tells him about her feeling or wait for his confession'.why its so difficult to confess our feeling' priya gets up from the bed and goes to washroom'.priya wear a beautiful white dress..

ram is pacing ups and down in his room' all the night he is thinking about priya' he realized that he loves her and he cant live without her'. he does not know how to confess his love'. " what should i do know? will i go to her office and tell her that i love you or i will inform her to meet me in a coffee shop" no i dont think she will be able to take a break from her work..today her first day' this is the best to directly meet her and tell her about my feeling" thinking all this ram smile cutely' ram wear a white shirt and black jeans..looking extremely hot'
priya steps into her cabin'. the cabin is neatly organized'she notices a bouquet lying on the table' she goes near the table and find a note attach to the flower she picks the note " hi good morning, i want to welcome you to office but i m the boss so i cant do that' this beautiful white rose for this beautiful lady..i hope u like it'some more surprise waiting for you'..your friend/boss rajat.. looking at the flower priya smile and sits into her chair' she is going through all the important file' and make a list for today's work' she made her mind that today she will tells ram that she loves him and want to start new life with him' the thought of in his arms makes her smile'

after several hour later priya is totally lost in his work.. she hears that someone is knock at the door'without looking in the door priya says"come in"' ram nervously steps into the cabin his eyes capture his love his priya who is still lost into her work' how someone look so cute and innocent ram is thinking..ram scratch his forehead and smile' when priya realizes that someone coming in the cabin she raises her head'looking at the ram'. her heart lost a beat.. she hurriedly stands up' and murmurs " Ram" .. looking at priya ram smile and says " hi can i sit down".." ohh sorry plz sit down" priya reply and shyly looking at the floor'

" you also can sit down" ram naughty says.. priya bits her lips and sit down' both r silent they dont know how to start the conversation' both r want to say so many things but the fear and the nervousness takes over so both of them remain silent'after several minute later ram breaks the silent looking at priya ram says priya "i came here to say you something" priya looks at him her heart stop beating'' ram stands up and move near priya' priya is state of shocks' she is trying to understand what is ram going to do'. priya also stands up.. both are now looking at each other eyes..they lost in each other eyes' ram takes a steps and stands very close to priya' he can feels her breath.. ram closes his eyes and takes a deep breath.. he slowly opens his eyes..priya is looking at him intensely'.ram takes her hands in his hand.. priya confusingly looking at ram..": priya i dont know what u feel for me.. i dont know whether u like me or hate me' every time when u came close to me i lost into u completely'..i know i m taking like a rubbish..but i really dont know how to express my feeling'look at my eyes priya' u will see what u meant to me..i want to tell you so many things but i m afraid you will break my heart'.i know if u reject me it will be very hard for me to compose myself..but i cant hide my feeling anymore' i just want say priya..ram close his eyes and says "I LOVE U PRIYA, I REALLY REALLY DO" priya is feeling numb she cant believe her ear' is it her dream or ram really told her that he loves her' when ram does not get any response from priya he opens his eyes and looking at her in a fear' before priya says anything they hear someone is knocking at the door.. ram steps back' feeling rejected''priya compose herself and says "come in".. rajat enters into the cabin' "what a pleasant surprise ram, when u come here? looking at ram rajat says..ram moves near rajat and hugs him.. " i just came here to meet with priya" ram reply' well you come in perfect time i want share something both of you.. ram and priya looking rajat confusingly' well i know u work under ram so many years and very soon you both r going to be relatives' but u dont know i and ram was graduated from same university' and we shared a special friendship' because pressure of work we dont able to contact each other'. obviously you want know why i m telling all this to you because today is a very important day of my life and really happy that ram is beside me in this day' ram and priya still r feeling confused why rajat is telling all this' rajat goes near priya and kneels in front of her' priya is shockingly looking at him' ram is stare them'. rajat takes the ring from his coat pocket and hold it in front of priya " priya you r not only my childhood friend you r also my first love'.. in those all years i just prayed to the GOd to give me a chance to tell you how much i love you'i know u also something feel for me'. priya i dont want to loss this opportunity' i love u priya, will you marry me' ram cant takes all this anymore looking at rajat and priya ram leaves the place'.

"ram where r u plz pick up the phone i want to tell you that i also love you plz ram pick up the phone plz ram" priya is almost burst into tears' she clearly told rajat that "if she loves anyone in this world that is ram'. and today she will tell him that he is everything for her" priya several time calls to vikram number but he did not pick up the'. she cant loss ram' she is very ngry at rajat for spoiling their special moment like this'she steps out from the office and goes to Kapoor industry' priya directly goes to ram cabins but' there is no sight of ram'she enters into the cabin and sits on the couch ' priya is feeling very helpless' she breakdown totally "why god why u always do this to me plz be safe ram.. i know i think that i dont love but this is not the truth.. plz ram gives me a chance to tell u how much i love you'how badly i need you" after cried several minute priya gets up and wipes her tears' before leaving the office she meet with vikram and vikram inform her that ram is in his farm house..she rushes to the farm house'

the sun is slowly going down the horizon' As it went down, the burning light of the sun got dull and it looked like a huge disc of orange and yellow'. sitting in the taxi priya is gazing at the sun' his every word is echoing in her ear'" i love u priya i really really do". priya smile' taxi stops in front of the large steel gate.. priay clear the bill and hurriedly get down from taxi and moves towards the house'.. priya is lucky that the main door is open she steps into the house and climbs the stair directly goes to ram s room...

holding a wine glass ram standing near the window..his eyes become red because of angry... the thought of priya in rajat arms makes him go crazy... he cant think that priya in someones arms...takes a deep breath priya steps into the room and goes near him...she stands behind him..she whisper "RAM"... ram turns back... without utter a single word ram tries to move from there before he moves priya holds his hand and stops him..." just leave me" ram calmly says.. " no i will not leave you" priya reply..." dont makes me angry "priya plz go before i do anything" ram harshly says..." ram plz don do this i want to say somethings" priya says in a choke voice... ram holding the glass so tightly that it breaks down... blood is flowing from his hand... looking at his hand priya gets panic..when she tries to touch his hand ram raises his hand and says "don touch me priya just go away in front of my eyes... before i do anything wrong" " why r u doing this ram plz give me a chance to explain you" priya almost shout...ram holding her shoulder tightly and pin her against the wall... "why u do this to my why,? u love this rajat right? thats why u left my company and joints there? what u think i m fool??? what rajat said " i know u also feel something for me??? than what the hell you come here?? to see me how much i m in pain...today is a big day for you finally u manage to break me down...he presses her more toward the wall he grits his teeth and say if u will not be mine than i will not let u anyone else... ram breaks down in his keen... crying like a little boy... tears flowing from her eyes too ... priya knees in his level.. and cups his face... and forces her to look at her eyes... " kya lagta han aapko ki mai uss rajat ko pyaar karti hun, in din din se aap mujhe srif itna hi jaan paiya hain??? maine aap ki company iss liya nhi choda tha ki main uss rajat ko pyaar karti huin maine iss liya choda tha kyun aap k pass hogi bhi aapse dur rehena padta tha.. srif mujhe pata han ki kitna taklif hoti thi jab mai app ko dusri ladkio k shate dekhte thi... ram aap to mujhe kuch din se pyaar karte han par jab se mai apki company mai joint kiya tabse apni dil aap ko de bethi... main kabhi nhi socha tha kabhi main kisiko itna pyaar karungi... ram aap meri srif pyaar nhi meri zindegi hain... aap meri wo sappna han jo mai kabhi nhi socha tha ki sach hoge... priay wipes her eyes and continue... ram mai srif apko pyaar karti huin aur hamehsa srif apko hi pyaar karte joungi... mujhe itna bhi badi sajah mat di jiya apse dur karke... covers her face priya is crying..ram pulls her in his arms..holding each other tightly both are crying and waste their pain away...several minute later ram breaks the hug... he raises his injured hands and fills her forehead with the blood...priay close her eyes...priya opens your eyes..ram whisper...priya slowly opens her eyes tear gather in her beautiful eyes... ram wipes the corner of her eyes... aaj se tum hamesha k liya meri ho chuki ho, kabhi bhi mujhe chod jane k baat soch na bhi nhi... priya tumare bina mai nhi ji sakti mar jaoungi mai agar tumne mujhe akele chod k chale gayi to...both again hug each other' ram lifts her from the ground and gently places he on the bed'priya is lying beneath him'.priay closes her eyes ram bends and kiss her forehead..her both eyes.. cheeks'. ram lay beside her' priya comes over him' priya caress his face
'
Meri adhoori kahaani
Lo daastaan bann gayi
Ho Tune chhuaa aaj aise
Main kya se kya ban gaya'.



priya places several kisses on his face..between each kisses priya murmurs "i love ram, i love you'.ram places his hand on her back and hold her firmly'. ram eyes becomes wet.. priya kiss above his eyes and wipes the tear'.
sehme hue sapne mere haule haule angdaiyaan le rahe,
thehre hue lamhe mere nayi nayi gehraiyaan le rahe,
zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane..
karwat lene lage hain armaan phir bhi
hai aankh nam kyun na jaane
o saiyyan'

ram again comes over her' both are looking at each other eyes.. both r emotionally drench' both need each other badly' ram leans and stars to nuzzling her neck..priya finger makes its way in his hair..she grip his hair tightly
''
both lost in each other fragrance'' this is the moment both r waiting for'
odhun teri kaaya
solah singaar main saja loon
sangam ki ye raina
is mein tyohar main mana loon
khushboo teri chhoo ke
kastoori ho jaaaun
kitni pheeki thi main
sindoori ho jaaun
sur se zara behki hui
meri duniya thi badi besuri
sur mein tere dhalne lagi
bani re piya main bani baansuri

the emotion love and the intense is so overwhelmed that they cant control them self anymore' both r ready to break the last barrier'both r lost in each other touch''

mere aasmaan se
jo hamesha gumshuda the
chand taare
tumne gardishon ki
lay badal di
laut aaye
aaj saare..

O saiyyaan'
now they r complete'. they filled each other with love and passion'... holding each other close they r sleeping peacefully...
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i wrote this part hurriedly ...i dont know what i wrote..whatever came in my mind i put down... this part is not up to the mark... plz forgive my mistake... i m thinking to end this ff very soon..... plz dont forget to hit the like button and leave your valuable comment...

Edited by aiyathasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
yayy...raya mil gye...
ab dono sath hai...
waiting for nxt update...
continue soon !!!!!
Edited by Mini1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update was gud
Atlast ram priya confess their love
Waiting for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
both confess their love and completes each other.
lovely
thanks for PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww its so beautifull update..finally they confessed their feelings nd re together now ❤️
Loved ram's confession nd how priya straightly refused rajat's proposal nd the way u have described their moment as usual with a lovely song.. 😳
Maang bharne wala scene bada hi filmy tha.. 😉 😆
Why u want to finish it this soon bcoz this was not ur plan earlier.. 😲
Cont soon nd thanx for pm
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
well written 👏👏
and thanx for PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg the best updateee plz carry on soon cant wayt

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