'LAW'updt part 20 page 92 28/10/13 update

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name2saakshi

@name2saakshi

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#421

all the thing fast fast 😉 but i understandd if u want finsih this ff soon this is best and happy u complete it not hung us in middle😃

Edited by name2saakshi - 12 years ago

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SharmiRayaBasu

@SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Ohho...atlast u have updated...hasshh..atlast raya become one...lovely update..awsome writting as always...thanks 4 pm..nd dnt end thz ff ple...

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

in one word its beautiful, the pent up emotion of RaYa is clearly visible through the dialogues, its absolutely superb, Priya refused Rajat and Ram's confession was the main USP of this part, and the way u describe their special moment is very relative and apt, overall I like this update, but y u want to finish this off?, u better continue this, waise maang bharnewali scene thoda dramatic ho gaya hain, anyways thoda sa writer's freedom is allowed, will be eagerly waiting for next part 👏

Edited by jineejiggs - 12 years ago

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Beautiful update Please continue soon

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lpsakshi

@lpsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

u wrote extremly good go on dear

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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

This was superb...
Yayyy raya became one by all means...
Dont worry darling it was perfect...
Do cont soon...
Why u want to end this ff??

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

after a long gap...thank u dear for ur PM.what an update I love every bit...this is very much emotional..thank u

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gupta90

@gupta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

nice update, even though written in hurry it is good, no need to worry on that account😊

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

fantastic just fantastic... finally ram and priya has shared there feeling.. the mang bharne wala scene was also very gud... atlas raya had become one.. the song u selected is one of my favorite thanks for using it... thank u so much for the pm, update soon