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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ST-KSG-DDLover

oye hoye Kahani main kya twist daal diya yaar. very nice👏 please continue karo


karti hu yaar woh lunch break mei likha tha, ab likha tou boss muje bahar karedinge from office 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: leo4ever


karti hu yaar woh lunch break mei likha tha, ab likha tou boss muje bahar karedinge from office 😉

will wait please pm me whenever u will update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ST-KSG-DDLover

will wait please pm me whenever u will update


done will do 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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okie thank you guys, here is part two!!

priya leaving ,crying, rajat comes outside vikrams home, and says priya ghar pe sab pershan they tum kia kari hu yeh sab? ghar chalo, vik neha also come out.
neha says haan priya ghar pe sab pershan hunge tum kal chali jana fatty k pas naurwoh kahi jarha thri hai!!

priya: nhn nhn aap lopoog nhn samj rehe, hain, mei nay hamseha dusru ka socha, maa kia chati hai, papa kia expect karte hia, ayesha kartick kileye kia best hai, khush kilye kia best hugaaur meray employer kia expect karte hain looking at rajat, then k meray dost mera mentor kis socheinge, neha kia soche gi even mona k saaath dia phele aur phir ram k saath gai, liken mei yeh bhool gai k meray liye kia best hai mei kia chati hu aur mei sirf ik cheez chati hu to be in the arms of my husband, to be at his side never to leave to protect him hug him to give him happiness and i know that the real life is only if we are toghter, i cant go on living like half dead assuming he is happy when i know he isnt coz he cant be happy without me nad i cant be happy without him , he is my life he is in my breath , in my blood, in my thoughts,in my actions. i was wrong to assume that it is my problem when in marriage all problems are to be solved saath, mei unke begair adhoori hu and woh meray begair, jab muje yeh baat pata hai tou mei yeh kyu aur apni life waste karu and unse dur rahu??kyu?

vikram says: bas yehi baat asal hai priya k jo b musebaat aye woh saath face karna chayie uss se bhag nhn sakte na akele larte hain looking at neha, jo b khushi dukh ata ha woh dunu k hissay mei ata hai akle nhn yeh hota ha asla shadi ka matlab, jab ik bandhan mei hain tou faislay alag kasiay?

rajat quiet listening to her and says ok but i refuse to let u go alone i wnt allow it
priya: excuse me allow it? who are u to allow or not allow? i am going to my husband and noone cans top me understand mr rajat kapur u should understand that this is not a matter of your business partner and your ex friend rather it is a matter of a wife and hubby!! 😡😡

vik says: mei chalo priya, priya says han vikram ur waqai mei hamary real friiend , uski waqt rams call coems to vik, vik says ik min ruku
he picks and says ham bol,kia? han han baba de dia sab kuch priya ku and pihu ka letters b hain woh birthdays pe mail kia karu ga.
priya crying ,
vik: kia ? yeh kia awaz hai? ram ram hello???
beep beep


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Too gud, pls continue with it, kam se kam reality ne jo ho raha hain usse toh thoda distract ho jaungi, varna jo ho raha hain woh mere bardasht ke Hagar jaa raha hain, I really can't take that Ram Kapoor will nit continue with BALH, if this happens, I don't know what am going to do, really nervous and unhappy
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zehra awesome yaar.tu writing pe settle hoja.audience/readers will love u.whats the suspense in part2.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very gd writing.. But u made me difficult to read using shortcut word in between lines.. God. I finished reading at last wid my desperate effort.. Plz write full hindi word in ur sentences...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs

Too gud, pls continue with it, kam se kam reality ne jo ho raha hain usse toh thoda distract ho jaungi, varna jo ho raha hain woh mere bardasht ke Hagar jaa raha hain, I really can't take that Ram Kapoor will nit continue with BALH, if this happens, I don't know what am going to do, really nervous and unhappy


aray mei guarantee deti hu there will be no ram death no quitting !! tum relax karu bas just relax!! 🤗
ab bas chill and enjoy , i am writing for the same reason that i cant stand the wait and the maha crap gest shown to us on tv so thought should do kuch to improve mood😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: armanz

Zehra awesome yaar.tu writing pe settle hoja.audience/readers will love u.whats the suspense in part2.


haha chalo done hai waisay i do mainly writing in my job 😆

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