FF 'pyar me hota h kya jadu'LAST UPDTED ON PG85 - Page 57

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

Lovely update...
looking forward to next part...



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sreev12


First of all once again thanqqq sooo much for giving me such a spl & wonderful gift!

ab aaya time 'priya ka pyaar' ki ... waah veenu ... 👏👏👏

arey waah priya ki surprise for ram ... wowww ...

arey veena ltrs ka silsila band mt karna ... hume bhi teri narrations ye ltrs ke roop mein padni hai na ... 😉



plsr again...itna kuchh nhi kiya yar...bas thoda sa pyar h...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Raya_some

lagta hai iss baar kuch jyada hi phool gyi ho ...

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pls update soon suspense knock ne pareshaan kar rha hai ... :( ..


hahaha...kitna bhi phulungi...rambabu nhi houngi...😛...bas aa gyi yar aur bhi bht sari khurafat krne lagti hu isiliye late ho jata h...but now i am here...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sangautam

Veena, I have no words to express! I read the last 4 parts together. Awesome writing. Takes me to a whole new world. I love the way you express - you have a great sense of humor. Thanks for the PM's and sorry for not commenting all these days. Love the way you write. Your command of the language is great!!!!


its ok dear...aap kabhi bhi aram se cmmnt kariye its not a mttr...it means lot for me whenevr it coms...thank u sooo much...& i forgett to tell u...mere yha bhi 3 doggies ho gyi...hihihi..ab humlog barabar ho gye😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: veena23



hehehe...koi to expect karo yar...lol😛


Expect nahi ki thi ...par Abhi yakeen bhi hogaya ki Aap romance ko kitna romantic likh sakti hai...😉
well lage raho...RaYa romance hai hi aisa mai jitni baar bhi season 1 ke episodes dekhu utni baar maza aata hai..
aur aapke FF ne to phaad daala by 'Pyar me Hota hai Kya Jaadu''👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok to bht hua romance wgrh...i am getting bored...mera thoda genuine problm h..lol...to bhai m apne mood me aane wali hu ..these r last three updates i hv to enjoy it to ye to full to masti bhare hone wale h..i know public thodi dissappointed ho jayegi but what to do yar...shaadi krani thi kara di pyar karana tha kara diya..honeymoon bhi mna diya aur to aur..wo bhi ho gya...lol...aur bachhe wachhe paida karane nhi h mujhe..aur m 3 updates me kara bhi nhi sakti...to ab thodi mast ho jaye...waise bhi aajkl muskurane k liye bahano ki hi jarurat padhti h...to jra rampriya k bahane hi muskura liya jaye..so these updates r in full veena style...hope u all like it...agr masti me kuchh gustakhi ho jaye to maaf kar dena khaskar k rambabu k fans...lol..aur han ek aur baat..thanks anuraya..kamal h yar tumne kiss gin bhi liye...mujhe to pta hi nhi chala ki kitne the...hahaha..awsm dear..thanks for cmmnting...ok lets start...bht bakwas karti hu...

Lovestory part 23

"ye kisne kiya..."

ram priya busy rhte hain pyar karne tabse door pe koi aa jata h ...ram darwaza kholte hi cheekhta h..."tum ??? Yha???..itni subah subah..chain se apne ghr me nhi rh sakti ho kya???

Neha...nahi qki tumlog chain se rhne nhi dete ho..pta h hum kal se kitne pareshan h ki tumlog reception se aise kaise chale aaye..??..rat bhar tension me soye nhi humlog..

Ram..(ekdm dheere se)...soye to humlog bhi nhi..

Neha...aa..kuchh kaha kya??

Ram...nahi to

neha...sab theek to h ???

Ram...han theek h ab jao

neha...priya kahan h???

Ram...nahi h

neha...kya???tumne use ghar se nikal diya???..m janti thi..m vikram ko bol rhi thi ki yha kuchh to hua h...bechari kahan gyi hogi sab meri glti h ...tumhare jaise insan k sath usko chhodna hi nhi chahiye tha...

Ram...aaahh..chup karooo..are yha nhi h bahar kahin hogi

neha...oh...nhi bahar to nhi h m sab dekh k aayi hu

ram...ufff iske tewar kitne jaldi badlte hain...mera mtlb h naha rhi h

neha...achha theek h to m andar wait kar leti hu...tum hattoo darwaze pe tan k kyun khade ho???

Ram...kuchh nhi..tum andr nhi wait kar sakti???

Neha...kyu???

Ram...ab nhi kar sakti to nahi kar sakti ja ke study me intezar karo hum aate hain...

Neha..haha..tum kahoge aur m chali jaungi...idiot hato samne se..

Neha ki nazar se boss kuchh nhi bach sakta h to usne litrly priya ko blanket k sath jate hue dekh liya tha..upr se andr ka nazara bhi kamal ka tha to...

Neha...ye sab kya h???

Ram...kuchh nhi tum jake study me baitho hum aate hain...

Ram litrly neha ko dhakka deke bahar kar deta h...priya fresh ho ke bahar aati h..gile balo k sath...seeshe k samne khadi hoti h to ram peechhe se akr baho me le leta h use..he want 2 kiss her but she is little scard...

Priya...mr.kapoor..

Ram...hmm

priya...aap jaiye na wrna neha phir andr aa jayegi..

Ram...ha to chalenge na thoda wait karne do use..

Ram start kissing her on shouldr...

Priya...mr.kapoor aap samajh nhi rhe hain...m nhi jaungi aap hi jaiye

ram...kyun kya hua???

Priya...aap uski bat bhul gye..

Ram...kaun si bat??

Priya...mr.kapoor..uff pallu kyun gira...yar m theek kar rhi hu aap bar bar..whi ki ek ladka ladki dost nhi ho sakte...

Ram...to

priya...to???...are wo don hame tease karenge..aur humne bhi to promise tod diya...now they defently not going to leave us..

Ram...are..cmon look at me...idhar dekho..kisne bola ki hamara promise tut gya..

Priya..are pr ab hum to dost se jyada ho gye hain na...

Ram...ha...jyada ho gye hain...ab hamari dosti ko pyar ka extention mil gya h dear..to hum yhi bol denge unhe ki humne apni dosti pyar ka extention de diya h..hamari dosti to hamesha k liye h..aur ha m bhi man gya yar ki ladka ladki dost nhi ho sakte...hahahah

priya...mr.kapoor.. B serious yar..kya bolenge unko..

Ram..whi jo sach h ..ab jaldi se aao m ja rha hu...her kiss her & left the room...

Udhar neha to pure mood me h...vikram aur neha baithe h ..ram andar aata h..neha kuchh bolti nhi h...vikram se hi hello hoke ram bhi whi baith jata h tabhi priya aati h...

Priya...kya bat h neha k hote hue kamre me itna sannat...kamal h

ram..ha whi to..neha kuchh bol nhi rhi h??..it is somthing unbelievable na..

Vikram...han neha kya hua ?? Tum kuchh bol nhi rhi ho??..

Ram...are bol na kya hua???

Bas phir kya tha ye phata bomb..

Neha...u idiot stupid nonscence...just shut up u all...mujhe kisi se bat nhi karni h ab kisi ne ek bhi shabd kaha na to samjh lena...kuchh to ho jayega..

Vikram...are baby kya hua...kyun bhadak rhi ho itna..???

Neha...no vikram its enough yar bardasht karne ki bhi ek hadh hoti h..

Ram...par hua kya ye to batao???

Priya...ha bhai pehle pata to chale ki kisne kya kiya???

Neha..wo chhodo pehle tum dono ye btao ki ye kisne kiya???

Ram...kya???

Neha...yhi suhag rat...

Priya..what???

Vikram...what???..suhagrat???

Neha...han vikram tumhe pta h indono ne bina hame btaye suhagrat mana li..

Vikram..what...vry rampriya..tum dono ne bina hame btaye suhagrat kaise mana li...???

Uske baad to rampriya jo hasna shuru karte hain..aur neha ka innocent face dekh k to unki hasi ruk hi nhi rhi thi...ram haste haste priya k kandhe pr hath rakh deta h to priya use dekhne lagti h..ram ko lagta h shayad ovr ho gya to wo hath hatata h pr priya hath pakad leti h..she kiss on his palm get more closer to him..are bhai ab official pati patni ho gye hain itna chipak k to baith hi sakte hain..neha ye sab dekh k aur bhadak jati h..

Neha...this is rediclous ek to glti ki upar se has rhe hain..inko ek krne k chakkr me hamara itna nuksan hua aur ye dono..i jst hate u..

Vikram...bilkul sahi kaha neha tumne ..inki suhagrat k chakkr me hum apni postpon karte rhe...inki wajah se hamara honeymoon khrab ho gya...aur to aur kal ka itna achha din bhi humne inke bare me sochne me khrch kar diya...

Neha...aur subah subah yha bhag k aaye ki pta nhi kya hua hoga...aur inko dekho...ye dono suhagrat mana bhi chuke aur wo bhi bina btaye...idiot..

Ram...hahaha..are to suhagrat bina btaye hi to manate h pta nhi tha ki neha ko itna intrest h wrna invitation deke mnate...

Neha...shutup..tu to bol mt ekdm..otherwise i kill u...

Ram...ok ok i am sorry neha...pr meri galti nhi thi..

Neha thodi serious ho jati h aur dhyan se ram ki bat sunne lagti h...to kiski thi???

Ram..priya ki...

Priya...meri???..mr.kapoor

ram...han neha isine uksaya tha mujhe mera aisa koi irada nhi tha...

Priya...nahi neha mr.kapoor jhuth bol rhe hain inhone hi pehle bola tha ki chalo suhagrat mnate h..seriously mne to kaha tha ki pehle neha vikram ko bta dete hain...pr ye to kisi ki sunte nhi h..

Neha bht seriously dono ko sun rhi hoti h..bechari...

Ram..achha ye kab kaha tha tumne???..ulta m to keh rha tha aaj ruk jate hain to isne hi kaha ki nhi nhi valentine day khtm ho jayega...

Priya...are mr.kapoor khuth bolne me to lagta h phd kari h apne...

Neha...tum dono suhagrat pr aise bat kar rhe the???

Ram..nahi..lekin tumhari bato se to yhi lag rha h ki tum aisa hi expect kar rhi thi...

Uske bad sab hasne lagte hain..neha sharma jati h..neha bechari...suhagrat k frustration ki mari...lol..

Priya...achha bht ho gya aap sabne bht maza le liya mere dost ka...seriously neha...thank u so much..& vikram u 2..agr tumdono nhi hote to hum apni jindgi se kabhi nhi mil pate...

Ram...aur isiliye tumdono ki humdono ki life me bht bht jyada khas jgh h jo koi nhi le sakta..

Neha...lekin phir bhi tumdono k chakkr me hamara to nuksan hua hi h

vikram ...ha mera to bht jyada..m kab se chance marne ki koshis kar rha tha but inko to rampriya k sath manana tha jaise suhagrat nhi birthday party thi..sab milke mnate hain...ho gya...??... Dekhlo..pyar hame pehle hua tha suhagrat inhone pehle mna li...

Ram...ha bhai bat to sahi..glti to ho gyi...

Priya...to ab glti ko sudharna bhi padega mr.kapoor...

Ram...chalo theek h...aisa h ki tumlogo ne hame 6 din ka honeymoon package diya tha to hamara bhi farz banta h kuchh dene ka h na priya...

Priya...bilkul mr.kapoor

neha is soo excited...woow...kya de rhe ho jaldi btao..

Ram...hum tumhe pure 2 hafte ka package dete hain..

Vikram...are wah ram tu to sudhar gya

ram...suno to abhi aur h

priya..wow mr.kapoor u r tooo romantic yar..

Ram...hehe..wait baby..ha to m kya keh rha tha...ha tumlogo ka pure 2 hafte ka package bnata hu m wo bhi jammu ka...wo bhi full on masti ka

nehavikram ek sath bolte hain...jammu???

Ram..han ab puri family leke aur kahan jayenge

nehavikram...family??..matlb???

Ram...meri family priya ki family..tum dono hum dono...tum dono ki family..

Neha...ek min ek min humlog actully kahan ja rhen hain???

Ram...are vaishno mata k darshan karne...hahaha

sab phir se hasne lagte hain...neha cusion utha k ram ko marti h aur kehti h...

Neha...idiot...fatty..rakh apna package apne pas..nhi chahiye hame...

Ram...are nastik ladki bhagwan ko aise bolti ho...

Priya...mr.kapoor enough yar kyun pareshan kar rhe hain use...

Neha..nhi priya..rhne do ye h hi aisa..aur tumhe hamari chinta karne ki koi jarurat nhi h ram..jb mata bulayengi to hum darshan bhi kar ayenge..aur suhagrat ka bhi hum dekh lenge..tumhe apna deemag use karen ki koi jarurat nhi h..

Ram..hahaha..achha baba i am sorry m mazak kar rha tha yar...

Vikram..achha ab bht masti hui humlog ja rhe hain office k liye late ho rha h

neha...ha ha mujhe bhi..anyways hum dono tumdono k liye bht khush hain..aur please ab aise hi rhna

vikram..phir se ladhne mat lagna..qki ab humlog tumhari wajah se apni suhagrat kabhi postpon nhi krne wale hain...

Neha..aur nhi to kya..tomlog ladhte ladhte sab kar dalte ho aur humlog sochte hi rh jate hain...

Ram...hahaha..thank u for evrything darling...& vikram bhai ab to neha ko khus kar hi dena

priya..ab kal subah hamare disturb karne ki bari honi chahiye..hehehe.

Neha...hopefully..chalo by..are ek baat to kehna bhul hi gyi...bola tha na mne...

Priya...ha ki ladkaa ladki kabhi dost nhi ho sakte...

Ram...but we r still...sirf humne apni dosti ko pyar ka extension de diya...

Vikram...hahaha...dil k behlane ko khyale ghalib achha h

neha...hahaha...gud one vikram...

sabhi gale wagarh milte hain aur neha vikram chale jate hain...ram priya ek dusre ko dekh k muskurate hain aur thoda aur kareeb aa jate hain...

To b continue...
Edited by veena23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg poor neha suhagraat ki frustration 😆 nd bina hume bataye mana li 🤣
Are pehle pata hota tujhe itna interest hai toh invitation deke manate 🤣 superb lines
Awesome awesome awesome update veena
Continue soon nd thanx for pm waise meine pm se pehle hi padh li thi 😉
Edited by vironikajain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Are wah Veena U are FULL ON FUNTOO masti ke mood mein...I bow down

TUM LOG LADTE LADTE SAB KUCH KAR BHI LETE HO AUR HUM SOCHTE REHATE HAI...

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Suhaagraat nahi Jaise BDay party ho aur Saath Mein Manate hain...👏

Main itna hasi itna hasi -Now words Veena U are mindblowing...
Abhi RaYa ko Dekh ke mujhe bhi Yakin hogya hai ki ladka ladki Dost nahi ho sakte...
Wasie ye bhi romantic tha-- Maine kuch nahi kiya Priya ne Uksaya 😆 Rambabu kaafi mischevious the😉

Poor Vik Neha... Neha to full on class le rahi thi RaYa ka...Chalo inki bhi Suhaagraat karaado pls...
Curtains!!!!!!!!!!!😛

Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😳🤣Main. Padthe rah gayi,hansthe rah gayi aur😳.
You are a jewel and your FFs are real gems.
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Posted: 12 years ago
arre wah ful on masti ke mood me aa gyi ... main sach kahu tohu toh pichle kuch updates thode kuch ajeeb the i missed that veena style element but after reading this one all madness came back ... or should i say craziness for fav ff pyar me hota hai kya jadu
i felt ohh this neha she really thought ki ram ne usse ghar se nikal diya...she is too much ... aur then jo dramak iya dono ne was so much fun really throughout enjoyed... ab pls jaldi update ...

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