OS:Ke dil kare haye! 'End Part' pg.13 (30/11/12)

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AshHouse

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

This was too good...👍🏼 lekin the end kyun? 😔😭

I wish you could continue 😉 thanks for the two lovely updates 😉

Take care.. 😉

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cloud121

@cloud121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

[COLOR=magenta] 😃 Nice update...end kyun kiya etni jaldi 😭

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shavii

@shavii

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

continue it to clear all mu and give an happy ending😊

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Siacutie

@Siacutie

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nice part but y u have ended its incomplete complete it @ continue sooon😃

Edited by Siacutie - 12 years ago

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love4raya

@love4raya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Beautiful... papa "hot" hai.Main "born-hot" hu..haila!!! Thud!! Loved it.. :)

Saniya the end could have been better even though ur showing dey dnt reunite..This looks incomplete.I thot ders more to cum.. Otherwise loved it.. :)

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Mindblowing update.. Each and every word was just perfectly choose for the situation of raya.. Spcl mention to the priyas thought wala part, it was just terific.. U have almost expressed what priya is feeling... I hearty wish that if u could continue it...

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Coming to the update ..
asusaul awesome one and the emotional bond between Raya is soo cute ..
And the confrotation and realization of priya's part was penned down so asthetically dear ...
I loved the update ..Try to continue this OS with another update clearing their MUs..
Plz plz pretty plzzz..