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kritinayyar

@kritinayyar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

thnku guys for ur likesss this is my first attempt so plzzz beer me...here goes next part...

ram - chle peehu ko lene ya rajat siiirrr ki wait krni he...😕

priya - hmmm let me update neha first...

(priya neha ko awaz lgati he or ab neha ki turn hmare golu ko tang krne ki)

neha - are fattyy tum! kya bat he aajkal office ni jaate 😉 patni or beti k sath hi rehna psnd krte ho...

ram - stop it neha u knw na peehu k liye aya hun usi ko pick krne ja rha huu...

neha - lekin peehu to school he. tum to yahan aye ho hmare caafeee...yahan se b kisi ko pick krna he kya????😉(teasingly)

ram - wooo wwoo mein guzar rha tha to socha priya b ja ri hogi to lift dedun...

(priya apne golu ko dekh kr bht khush ho rhi hoti he but janti he goluji ka kuch pta ni kb mood khrb ho jaye to wo interupt krti he)

priya - aree peehu wait kr rhi hogi...chleeenn..biii neha c u in some time..

neha - bibib njy late b ayogi to chlega afterwall fatty he tumhare sath time lag skta he and wings at both😳

(ram nd priya dono gadi tak jate he to priya dekhti hai ki aj ram khud drive kr r aya he to wo as usual apni interrogation start krti he)

priya- aj aap khud drive krenge???driver kahan he????aapko yaad he i i mean aap manage kr lenge naa...u know na mumbai ka traffic...

(ram irritate ho jata he and zor se chilata he)

ram - tumhara question pepr raaste me solve kru to chlga???😉 abi hum late ho rhe hai...

priya - 😲

(ram and priya peehu k school phunch jate hai wahan peehu already bahr khdi hoti he nd now hmare peehu ptake ki turn)

peehu - hii mom hii papa...

priya - peehu kitni baar kha he mom nhi mumma ya maa...

peehu--han mumma han😊 and priya ko huggy nd kissi krti he🤗

(ram priya nd peehu ka sweet bond dekh rha hota he then hmari peehu ptaka)

peehu--aree papa aap to pure golu he cum here give me sweet kissi nd huggie...

(ram nd peehu looked too adoreble together)

peehu--mumma u know kal se school me 5 holidayzz...mumma aaj khi ghumne chlen????mumma mall chlen???? peehu bore ho gyi he whi purane clothes pehn pehn k...🥱makes puppy face😔

priya--awww mera baby...sb janta kaisi mumma ko manana he...😛

peehu--papa aap b chlo na mumma and pehu k sath shopping...

ram--rockstar me...😛

peehu--yes papa aap...aaj peehu b apne papa mumma sath shopping jayegiii...wowww kitna mza ayega...😛

ram--(almost had tears in eyes)ofcorse rockstar papa will go nd buy what ever u want...

(all sit in car nd head towards mall in the car)

peehu--mumma apna phone do na...

priya--kya huya bche kis se bat krni he...

peehu--mumma caddy see..ooopppss caddy didi se...puchna hai kya shopping kru...use sb pta hota hai model model kapdon ka...aap to boring lekr doge...😆

(ram bht zor se hasta hai 😈nd proud hota he apni beti pe nd priya use sherni looks deti😡 he)...

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love4raya

@love4raya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Hey Kirti well written..Loved Ram zor se hasta hai aur Priya use Sherni looks deti hai..Awww.. and ofcourse "Question paper raste mein solve karu to chalega?" Pls continue soon..Dekhna chahti hu shopping kaise karte hai RaYa Peehu k sath..

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balhfan4ever

@balhfan4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Very well written...RaYa and their Peehu going shopping😉..abh aayega mazaa!

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shavii

@shavii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

😆pihu always steals the show.. here too.update soon.hope priya and ram have an argument and pihu says no fight family no 1 and ram challenges priya saying u cant wear such clothes and she wear making his jaw drop😉😲

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Eram

@viny_queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

cute ans sweet update tha yaar soon update

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shonuz_mom

@shonuz_mom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Very well written. Continue soon

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saniya9919

@saniya9919

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

That was a very cute update Kriti.😆

RaYa nok-jhok...very sweet. Love Peehu.😛

Waiting for the next update.

Edited by saniya9919 - 12 years ago

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hey Kriti sorry yaar for late comment ..As this was my first dewali had somuch work ...
And now iam back ..Nice start and loved the first update ...
Beautifully written ...Thank you for the PM otherwise i could have missed it ..
Continue soon waiting for next ...

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sreev12

@sreev12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

are waah ... cute update!
continue soon!

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kritinayyar

@kritinayyar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Thnku guys for such a lovely feedback...here goes d next update...
Cady-hyee golu baby
Peehu-errr cadyyyee me golu ni hu bs healthy hu..
(ram peehu ki bat sun kr bht khush hota he nd to priya ko kehta he)
Ram-priya ye same meri trh he nd uski ankhon me ansu a jati he
Priya-hmmm apki hi beti he to ap pr hi jayegi..
Peehu-mumma dekhona cady ko wo meko motu baby bol k chidati he
Cady-aww mera aaloo baby
(peehu chidh jati he nd now peehu blast)
Peehu-me mumma ko bta dungi rahul bhaiya apke boyfrnd he agr apne chidana bnd ni kia
(ram priya ek dusre ko dekh kr haww expressions dete he nd priya peehu se ph khinch leti he)
Priya-ye ye peehu ne jo kha wo kya sch he? Tumhari umr dekhi he? Rjt sir ko me kya khungi? Tum meri responsiblity ho. Meri bdi beti..nd rone lagti he
Peehu ram nd cady ikthe chilaten chill mom/priya chill
Priya-han han bs me hi chil kru bhagwan dunia k sb pagl muje kyu milte he
(ram priya se ph pkd leta he)
Ram-hye cady. Kahan ho?
Cady-hi rr r ram sir...aap peehu ki bat mat sun na ye motu baby ese hi bol ri he nd plz rjt uncl ko mt kehna plz apko to pta he us kadus wid u ka
(ram bht hsta he nd)
Ram-chil me kuch ni khunga nd i knw istime rahul tumhare sath he so both of u join us for shpng in xyz mall in half an hour
Cady-sure sir😛

peehu-yes yes sb mil kr krenge shopping yes yes...👏

(priya nd ram peehu ko dekh kr bht khush hote hain nd bg song at back)

peehu-mumma me mall school uniform me jaungi kya??? wid puppy face😭

priya-baby i have extra dress for u dont worry mall ja kr mumma change karwa degiii..😳

peehu-no mumma aj papa change karwayenge ...plzz plzzz papa plz😕

(ram face was so lighten up seeing his daughter but priya peehu ko mnane ki koshish krti he but our peehu ko ptaka he)

peehu-mumma aap hi to kehti ho me kapoor hun...kapoor bht ziddi hote😃 he dmg me sirf ghee bhra hota he..fir kyu mna rhe ho...me apne papa ki beti hun to apki bat kbi ni manti😉rite mumma...😉

ram-tum ne peehu se kya kha😡 ...k hum kapoor ziddi hote he😡...hmare dimag me ghee😡...madm shayad aap bhul rhi ho aap be kapoor ho...mrs priya ram kapoorrr...😕 nd heran ho jata he wo kya bol gya...

(ram nd priya ek dusre ko dekhte reh jate he with bg song at background then achanak)

peehu-mumma papa chlo na mall aa gya he...

do tell me guys howz it...dont forget to like or comment...any scene anybody want to see do tell me i would try to fullfill it...