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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: azk92

Ram realized that he had been communicating with Priya without even knowing it for the last 5 years. And she had been struggling to take care of his baby, their baby, his princess, Pihu' She had struggled so much to make ends meet every single day and yet provide their daughter with everything that she needed and wanted. He realized that the last 5 years had not been easy on her either. That she had dealt with a lot too. That email, the one that had touched his heart many months ago, was Priya asking Anjaan to sign some books so she could make ends meet for Pihu' and Rajat had refused stating he didn't do public appearances. If only he had known' He would have taken away all their troubles and neither of them would have had to suffer'

Rajat: Ram..

Ram turned to Rajat and slapped him with his left hand. He grabbed his collars and shook him.

Ram stood there, staring at Neha. Without saying another word, he left the apartment and headed up to the roof where it was decorated. He saw Priya standing there with the channi in her hand. She was wearing a gujrati style saree with a green blouse. Her hair was tied in a bun and her side bangs were hanging out. She looked ethereal. His mind flashed back to their first Karwa Chauth when he had yelled at her for removing his Chennai tickets from his bag only to find out that that plane had crashed and she had indirectly saved his life by stopping him from going. He closed his eyes, wondering, if this was the reason he was alive today. He was sure he would have died after finding out that Priya was dead. How had he survived these 5 years? And his answer was standing right in front of him. Priya would never have let him die.



Hey writing queen is back with a bang😛
missed your works a lot
Must first say...hats off to your writing style amby
Ram slapped rajat...wow...those eyelocks...the pain...grief...guilt...love...you portrayed them sooo well
One just loses oneself while reading it...



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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
So heart warming and beautiful.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful dear.. no words needed.. just a Hug and all said and understood
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all a big hug to u dear...u know i have read many os on RAYA...but this was something i was waiting for the same plot was going on my mind since thursday...i told my mom...dekhna ammi ab ram ko pata chal jayega ki priya ne kitni taklif uthai hai...my mom said...apko bada pata hai...the feeling was unique of reading it...i felt a ache in my heart in each n every word...the best thing we can get from BALH now is that ram is showering his luv to priya...u did it dear...hats off n thank u so much for writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😃😃u write very beautifully.. just love ur writings...
touch wood!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Amber, you rock, this is so beautiful, so emotional, had tears in my eyes, just amazing, please do continue, 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Whoa! What a shot! Excellent amby!! *claps* The emotional cascading of events was wonderfully penned and came a full circle!

I esp LOVED these lines the MOST-
He was sure he would have died after finding out that Priya was dead.How had he survived these 5 years?And his answer was standing right in front of him.Priya would never have let him die.
So so so maturely put and bringing out the true spiritual meaning of this ritual. Im your fan now..seriously!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww..I loved it... :)

Ram turned to Rajat and slapped him with his left hand. He grabbed his collars and shook him.

Ram: 5 saal tak tumne meri hi biwi ko pareshaan kiya Dubai mein… Teri vaja se meri biwi aur beti ko itna sab kuch sehna pada ke uss ne Anjaan ko awaaz di usski madad karne… Mujhse kya kaha tha tumne? Ke she's a nuisance, ke rent kabhi time pe nahi milta hai, ke baatein badi badi karti hai, ke she's an idealist.. Kya tumne ek baar bhi nahi socha ke uss ke paas ek 5 saal ki beti hai jisse woh support kar rahi hai? Ke maybe she has a reason for not paying your bloody rent on time lekin woh tumhe bata nahi sakti, ya uski koi majboori hai? Agar uss waqt main nahi hota, aur woh saari kitaab tumse sigh nahi karwaai hoti, toh Priya aaj bhi musibat mein hoti… Uss waqt mujhe nahi pata tha ke woh kitni badi musibat mein hai, lekin woh mails padh ke ab mujhe ehsaas ho raha hai.. aur woh bhi sirf aur sirf tumhari vaja se. Kash maine tumhe apni aur Priya ke baare mein nahi bataaya hota… Kash maine tumhe dobara pyar karna sikhaya nahi hota…Toh shayad aaj uss board pe Priya Sharma ki bajai Priya Kapoor likha hota… Lekin mujhe kya pata tha ke tum meri hi biwi se pyar karne lago ge… Aur ek hi pal mein meri 5 saal ki dosti ko thukra bhi doge… That's why you're doing all this right? Yeh book caf, a Priya Sharma and Rajat Kapur enterprise? Because you love her? Isiliye toh tum itna involved ho gaye ho iss case mein, jis case mein hum dono bhi itna involved nahi hai. Hum dono koshish kar rahe hain hamari beti ke liye ek dusre ke saath rehne ke liye, lekin tum toh itna involved ho gaye ho iss case mein. Kya saabit karna chahte ho humein ek dusre ke khilaaf khada kar ke? Ke tum kitna pyar karte ho Priya se? Ke badle tumhe kuch bhi nahi chahiye? Ke tumhara pyaar kitna mahaan, kitna bada, kitna selfless hai? Ya phir main kitna bura hoon kyun ki mujhe bhi apni beti ke saath rehne ka haq hai? What the hell are you trying to prove Rajat? Biwi hai meri aur Bhabhi hai teri, yeh baat kabhi mat bhoolna, kyun ki yeh baat main tujhe kabhi bhool ne nahi doonga.

Ambar dats Bhadas..hahahaha.. Jo hum chaha rahe hai ho par pata nai hoga ya nai.. :)
The part wer Neha Tells Ram dat Priya has been observing the fast etc.. I loved the way u wrote it..Wonderful!!
This may be shown ha coz in the promo v see no one around only RaYa.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey amby di... u r awesome yaar u have shown RaYa's feeling so well i ca't stop my self from loving this more n more u have really rocked it love u yaar u nailed down their emotions so well i "wish show main aisa hi hota " but we all know CV's don't have such brain like us... so never mind enjoyed it here... waiting for next OS do update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesoomme os you have penned down and i loved it wish to see the exact replica in serial yaar ...emotional kar ditttaa ...awesome potrayal of ram feelings and priyas dilema along with chirpy peehu ,...loved it when ram thought that for his daughter he will be there and she doesnt needs anyone else to look upto

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