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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi friends this is my version of story
this is continuation of yesterday episode
when priya will tell ram that they were exchanging mails unknowingly he was so happy but still remain khadoos
he will look at rajat
ram eyes will tell rajat

priya ki takhtir main sirf main hu aur meri zindaagi wo hain or tere jaisey khabab main haddi bhich main athey hey aur bhich main jathey
next day morning ram will come to pick pihu to school at 7.00am

neha will be standing along with pihu
ram will come out f car and say
ram:gud morning rockstar choti
pihu:gud morning papa
ram will look around and see
ram:chti tu yaha kya kari priya kaha par hain
natasha: priya kuch kaam sey bahar gayi
ram:acha konsa kaam hai madam ko itni subah
nats: bhai priya tho akhele hain usey sab kuch handle karna padega
ram: pihu chalo
both will leave
pihu will wave bye to smeoone ram will see but no one is there
ram: pihu ap kisk bye bolrey
pihu: nahi papa main kisiko bye nahi bolri thi
evening
ram will drop pihu in priya book cafe
neha will come and pick her
ram: tum aye
neha :hm main aye kyu main pihu ko pick nahi kar sakthi
ram: waisey priya kaha par hey
neha:priya ghar par hey
ram:mujhey pehley kyu nahi bataye main pihu ko waha par drop kar detha
neha:nahi woh baas athey hongi
ram:acha tikh hey
neha: coffee
ram:nahi
neha:tum priya ko dhonthrey
ram:nahi main kyu usey dhondonga
neha:bye fatty
ram:hm bye with khadoos expressions
ram will call priya with hesitation but phone is switched off
next day
ram will come to pick pihu
neha will stand along with pihu
ram: priya kaha par hain
neha: woh uppar hain
ram:uppar hain matlab woh apni beti ko bye nahi bolengi
neha: waisey fatty tujhey tho sirf aur sirf pihu chahiye priya toh nahi phir baar baar uskey barey main kyu puchrey
ram: main kyu puchunga
bye with anger
pihu will give flying kisses to someone outside
ram will see and ask her kya karey aap
pihu :will give kissy to ram
evening
ram comes to shop
neha will make same bahana and tell ram that priya went out for some shop work
ram will murmur inside him
ye priya ko kya hogaya wh apney beti ki kayal nahi rakhri
till that pihu will change her dress and eat and come
ram:pihu itna jaldi ap apney dress change kardiye aur kaa bhi liye
pihu: mamaa ney
ram:mamaa ney kya
pihu: mamaa neha aunty ko dress change karney ke liye kaha na
ram:tikhey
ram will go around the whole shop but will not find priya and he will leave
ram will be very much frustated he will not be able to concentrate on his work
the same happens with vikram becoz neha also switched off her phone and when vikram goes to her house neha and shop neha is not there priya will come to answer vikram and neha for ram


hope u all are enjoying this
ill write the next part tomorrow



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shavii thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
😆😆 seeing this i rem a song luka chupi bahut huhi saamne tuu aahh😆 (i don't know whether it is correct or not?sorry for the spellings😉 ) update soon .hope ram sees priya soon and says i was missing u😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice. Keep going . Can't wait or the reunion
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Absolutely...full on enjoying😛
nice game of hide n seek...
this will probably make vik n ram realise how much they miss their wives😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update...update soon...bechara ram ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Lol.. loved it dear.. Ram gollu dhoodte rahejago ge Priya ko..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆 Aww..poor Golu! Lekin majja aa rhaa hai. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why they are playing hide and seek with their hubbies, what both are up to? Update yaar, tension ho rahi hain
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
awww i loved this RaYa's luka chupi... lol do connt... waiting for to read next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hayhay.. ye chupanchupayi mein bada maza aa raha hein.. continue soon yaar..

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