FF : Kal Ho Naa Ho *Updated 5/11* Part 3 - Page 9 - Page 5

Originally posted by: vishnuh

All right anzy957 aka as Agatha christie..Dial M for mystery..CARRY ON..

Originally posted by: love4raya

Anjy Rocking FF hai.. Haila kitna susupense?Yar tu hame Vikram var shaq karwa rahi hai.. rajat bodyguard?? haha I imagined him n dat uniform (Salman wala haha..Aur suit bhi hota hai sabka ek bhaijan lol hahahaha) universal bhaiyya hai na.. Sorry hum bach a nai sake apke baby ko hoga.For sure Priya was pregnant..Sahi jawab?? Raya ka ishq wala love hayeee...<3 <3

Originally posted by: Hasini_smile

WOW thts so nice.. Rajat bodygaurd 🤣 🤣 too good.. plz continue soon..

and if possible do send me a PM of ur next updates

Originally posted by: Pinkjali

Guessing..? Mera deemag hi kam nahi kar raha.. When i get to know that hadda i mean rajat is priya's bodyguard i was laughing so hard and after reading the last line my laugh got stuck inside my throat... But the update was really gud and filled with suspense... Eagerly waiting for the next,

Originally posted by: snehalparab

aise heart attack na diya karo ab rajat ka suspense khol diya toh vikram ke upar shak ki sui aur pria ko seedha hospital i hope woh ram ki car ka driver mar gaya ho aur priya sirf halki kharoch ke saath thik thak ho...pls jldi update karo yaar aur ram ka ek hi dost hai use mat cheeno

Originally posted by: leena04

wowowoowwo what suspance u have kept first i thought its Rajat n now suspected is Vikram but i know he ca't do anything wrong with RaYa then who is culprite... loving this suspance story... n what an end i know Priya is alive... then is anything happen to her or its just Ram's dream... will get to know in just next so do update next soon... waiting to read... n thanks for PM do next time too...

Thanxxx everyone for such a wonderful response...Love you all 😃

PART 2

HOSPITAL

Doc : I'm sorry Mr. Kapoor….

Ram : No doc…no plsss…😒

Doc : Humne bhottt kosish ki lekin hum nhi bacha paye….Mrs kapoor ko…..coma me jane se... unki condition bhott critical hai…and pregnant hone ke karan……. (Ram cuts him in between)

Ram : Pregnant..?? Priya is pregnant..?? are you sure..?? 😕

Doc : Yes..Mr. Kapoor..ur wife is 6 weeks pregnant…and the risk has increased due to this pregnancy…we are trying our best to save both mother and the child but your wife is not responding…

Ram, controls his tears 😭 : kya main Priya se ek baar mil sakta hun..???

Doc : She is under observation Mr. Kapoor..

Ram : Bas…thodi der ke liye doctor plsss..

Doc : Okay…

ICU

Ram entered into the ICU..and sit on the side stool..

He carefully holds Priya's hand...leans down and kisses it softly...as tears rolls down his cheeks..

Ram : I'm sorry Priya..ye sab kuch mere karan ho rha hai..mai ye situation control kar sakta tha...par nhi...mai haar gya Priya...hamari kismat se mai haar gya..aaj hamari life ka kitna important day hai..you are pregnant darling..remember how badly we wanted this baby..c'mon sweetheart get up..I want you to hug me, kiss me...get up na Priya pls...I know u can hear me..pls kuch bolo na Priya...😭

Ram controls his emotions...and puts his one hand on Priya's lower belly...caresses it..feels his baby...

Ram : I promise champ...Papa aapko aur mumma kuch bhi nhi hone denge..

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RaYa in their bedroom..Priya is trying to remove her necklace...and Ram is standing behind her,looking at her through mirror...

Priya : Ram...aapko nhi lagta kbhi kbhi aapko meri help kr deni chahiye...

Ram : arrey mai kab nhi karta tumhari help..?? haan...

Priya : toh fir kholiye na ise...(shows him the string of her necklace)

Ram : oh haan...sorry...

Ram comes closer and starts opening the string..❤️

Ram : Priya...tumhe nhi lagta ki Peehu ke pass bhi khelne ke liye koi hona chahiye..??

Priya : No Ram..pls...aap KM ko already toy store bna chuke hai.. ab use aur toys laa ke dene ki koi jarurat nhi hai...aap na use...(Ram cuts her in between)

Ram : Darling..mai living toy ki baat kar rha hu... I mean use bhi toh kisi bachhe ke sath khelne ka mann karta hoga na..

Priya,(understood his intention) : hmmm..Main bhi yahi soch rhi thi.. 😈

Ram, with a wide smile : arrey wah!!!!! 😃

Priya : toh thik hai.. kal se hum dono peehu ko park le ke jayenge..Peehu wahan bachhon ke sath enjoy bhi karegi aur hum dono evening walk kar lenge…It'll be good for ur health too.. hain na achha plan..??

Ram, scratches his head 💔 : Darling..thode der ke apne health tips ko side me rakh do…Mera matlab tha ki Peehu ke sath GHAR me koi bachha hona chahiye…iske liye Peehu ko park le ke jaane ki koi jarurat nhi hai..

Priya : Oh..ok…I got ur point..but don't you think Rishab n Saumya are too young to plan a baby….??

Ram : What..!!!!!!!! 😲

Priya : Haan…aur nhi toh kya..abhi unki shaadi hue sirf 3 months hi toh hai…let them enjoy their life na…

Ram : uff…main Rishab aur saumya ki baat nhi kar rha hun Priya…Ghar me aur bhi log hai na…jinki shaadi ho chuki hai…hmmm

Priya : Karthik n Natasha…?? I guess hume unhe force nhi karna chaiye..ye unka personal decision……………………….

Ram (almost controlling his anger) : Priya…….Main Nuts ke bare baat nhi kar rha hun…

Priya : toh fir kaun..Apeksha..?? oh plzz Ram… wo aapki behan hai…use business se time mile tab toh wo shaadi ke bare me sochegi…kitni baar maine kaha use lekin har baar mana kar deti hai…You need to talk to her….

Ram, gets irritated : arrey par bachhe ka Apeksha ki shaadi se kya lena dena hai yaar…😡

Priya : jab shaadi hi nhi hui…tab aap bachhe ke bare me kaise soch sakte………….

Ram, shouts : par hamari shaadi toh ho chuki hai na….hum toh bachha plan(pauses…realizes what he said) kar…sakte…hai..na (in low tone) 😳

Priya blushes and bites her lower lips….

Ram, holds Priya by shoulder(again in low tone) : Main tab se yahi kehne ki kosish kar rha tha… 😳

Priya, turns to face Ram : Hmm…mujhe pata hai…😛

Ram : kya.. Tumhe smjh aa gya tha toh fir ye sab..?? 😡

Priya : wo aap paresan ho rhe the toh mujhe aapko tang karne me maja aa rha tha…and she hugs Ram….😛

Priya : Ram…I want a baby boy this time…

Ram : and I guess we should start working on this… ;)

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Nurse, taps on Ram's shoulder : Sir, your visiting times are over.. You should leave now….

Ram gets up…kisses Priya's forehead and leaves the ICU…

Outside the ICU

Rajat : Ram..Maine truck driver ka pata laga liya hai…he is there in waiting area…lets go…

Ram : Great…I'll kill him today only…😡

Waiting Area

Ram chokes the Driver and lifts him by his neck…but Vikram intervenes and holds his hand..and stops him…

Vikram : Ram kya kar rha hai tu…marr jayega wo…for god sake calm down…

Ram, shouts : meri wife wahan coma me hai…and dammit u r telling me to calm down…😡

Vikram : aur ise maarne se bhi kuch nhi hoga Ram..ye sirf ek driver hai,,paise ke liye kaam karta hai ye.. maine pta lagaya hai ise kuch bhi nhi…iss poore accident ke peeche koi aur hai Ram…

Rajat : Haan Ram…Vikram is right..driver se hame kuch bhi pata nhi chalega…

Vikram : Tum dono(Ram n Rajat) yahi raho…mai ise(driver) le ke jaata hun…

And Vikram leaves..

Rajat : Ram.. hame sahi time ka wait karna hoga…I'm sure wo jo bhi hai wo ek aur baar Priya ko maarne ki kosis toh jarur karega…

Ram just nods his head…and Rajat also leaves the room…

Outside the hospital

Vikram (to driver) : Nikal jao yahan se aaj ke baad tumhari shakal bhi mujhe dikhni nhi chahiye…

As soon as the driver left…Vikram dials a number and says : haan maine driver ko bhej diya…galti ho gyi thi mujhse...ab jo karna hai wo mai khud karunga…. And hangs up the call..

Vikram turns and finds Ram n Rajat in front of him…

Rajat : tum phone pe kisse baat kar rhe the..??

Vikram, looks towards Ram : wo..wo..Ne…Neha se..

Ram : Neha se..??😕

Vikram : haan yaar wo mai neha n puri family ko inform kar rha tha about Priya's accident..They are coming soon…

(okay again I'm cutting the whole family drama..like one consoling the other and all craps..)

After Two days

Priya is still in coma...KK, Neha, Natasha and Saumya is taking care of Peehu and the search for the culprit is still going on…

Hospital

It's 11.00PM… A man,who is fully covered from head to toe, is moving towards Priya's ICU…He opens the doors(as no one is around) and enters into the ICU…

The Man : Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor….Your time is over now….bye bye

He was about to remove the oxygen mask suddenly someone holds his hand……………..

TO BE CONTINUED…

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so almost everyone wanted me to kill the baby in order to save Priya...hmm very bad...but I saved the both...no no wait a minute...priya is still in ICU...kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai.. 😉

so any guesses???? can anyone read my mind..????