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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: luvsakshi




<font color="#0000CC">Noo da, will update tmrow...</font>





ok so now i can sleep was waiting for you to update good night
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: taashu11





ok so now i can sleep was waiting for you to update good night



Im really sorry ..Actually she told she will send but somehow she was unable to send the mail ..some network problem ..sorry dear ..im extrekmy sorry ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
neel
4 third thread and congetz
how much u want that priya cry that is not fair
father duather bonding
ram is so love and care of her
Waiting for the next part Eagerly to know that nothing happen to her father
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: viny_queen

neel

4 third thread and congetz
how much u want that priya cry that is not fair
father duather bonding
ram is so love and care of her
Waiting for the next part Eagerly to know that nothing happen to her father




Hey viny dear ...Sorry to bother Priya but what else we can do if the reality happens ...
Ok dontknw what will happen we will see in next update ...
Thank you soo much for the feed back...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
waiting you were about to update tonight...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
😡 waiting... kab ayega next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

waitng for u when will u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Di update pls pls pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79


PART-41


Ram its paining here showing her heart .. Some unknown fear not letting me cool down,My heart beats are raging in each passing second ,Im tired of crying
still sobbing on his chest ..I want my Papa back healthy ..Plzz plzzz im tired of crying ,im tired of thinking whats gonna happen ,,My muscles gave up
My body fumes with pains..
Do something ..Plz remove this pain from me ...Her knees wekens ,He hold her near to his heart ...
He lifted her up slipped from her clothes,He placed her in bath tub ,that filled with light hot water..
He massaged her body with the liquid soap ,trying to relieve her pain .After 10 mins he wrapped the towel around her ,dried up her hair ..made lie down on the bed ..
He wiped off the tears that coming from her eyes ..He changed his clothes slipped beside her..
Hold her tightly in his embrace ..started stroking her hairs ..telling everything is gonna okay ...You have to releive because Peehu needs your attention ..
slowly her eyes gave up..finally she dozed off to sleep...He too laid after her ..
The birds chipring sound made her to stir a bit in her sleep and soon she had a wide grin on her face remebring she is in her old room, 30 years she was here , Its her world and today she was here with her family ..She gazed at her husband who was in a sound sleep ,planted a soft kiss on his hairs slipped from the bed and realized she wasn't wearing anything except the towel ,,, soon she changed into comfortable clothes ..
She touched peehu's cheeks ..She opend her droopy eyes to look at the fammiliar face soon closed her tiny eyelashes with heavy sleep ...
Priya smiled at her ..she looked at the time she has to leave now ..Again gazed at her cute pie who was sleeping...
She looked at the clock hmm if i will leave now she will be hungry and Ram can't handle her alone ..
What to do now ...thinking ..thinking ..
Gotchha idea .. she held a finger on Peehu's mouth ..she sucked it unknowingly ...
Priya surprised and took her in his arms start feeding her .Involuntarily Peehu had her first meal of the day ...after some time Peehu's head flinted..
Priya kissed her cheek hmmm sooo aap kush hai ??? patting her stomach full hai or our chahiye kya ?? Peehu responded with her cute sleepy smile...
Priya placed Peehu on the bed near to Ram,Adjusted pillows around her not to slip from the bed ...
She walked ahead to the door ...Again her gaze turned to the duo [papa beti ] my hubby & cute pie ..She lovingly looked at them with all her love..
Went to the kitchen to made adrakwali chai ...She stepped in her fathers room .There he alredy got ready for morning walk ..
Good morning papa giving her angelic smile to him ..
Good morning beta ...why you got up so early ..Seeing her eyes ..
Kya papa its 6 o clock ,we used to go for morning walks aap bulgayi kya ???handing the chai to him ...
Hmmm the aroma itself making me full beta..
"Papa " aap bhi na mamma ke tharah kithni filmi ho ...
He laughed heartily ...They both sat on the balcony ,.
Peehu uthgayi kya ??
No papa ...papa beti dono sorahi hai abi thak ..Papa aap ko path hai most of the time They will get up together only papa ..
I wonder sometimes how they are so similar ...
Priya ...Tum our mai bhi ek hi time pe uthne wali hai bachpan me..
such papa...
Ha Priya...Finsihed their Tea.
Chale papa ...
Kaha ...??

our kaha park me walk pe ..chalo chalo getting him up from the chair..
Ok both walked to the infront of the park ...Priya entwind her fingers with him ,papa yaad hai ...
You and me every day maximum everyday used to come for walk here hai na...
He nodded as affirmative...
See there i used to swing and you helped me ...We used to play hide and seek around these bushes ..
crossing over the bridge ,There is small lake attached to it ..she dragged him near the lake ..
Sat there with him ..Their legs touching the water ...She is kicking the water slowly with her legs ..from there they can have the view of entire park.
Held her father hand rested on his shoulder ...Papa remeber this is my fav place ,you and i sit here for hours and chit chat random things ..
showing her house window with her finger our vaha se mamma ithna jhor se chillathe hai !!!
This house and this park was out best places hai na papa,He is looking at her lovingly ..
Papa dekho udhar ...I fell down while running and you cried alot seeing the blood oozing out of my hand..You picked me up in your arms ran to the hospital ..
Hmm yaad hai beta ,when doctor asked you is it paining ..you said NO ,than when he asked why your crying..
You pointed out to me told "My papa is crying seein him im crying "
The doctor laughed at us ...hai na..
she smiled with moisten eyes ...When i received the Best student award ...we celebrated the news in this park only na papa ..over there you are with some of your friend showing a bench opposite side ..Ha beta

Papa when i decided to pursue furthur studies you took a loan from your office and worked for late hours hai na papa..
Haa tum bhi ..you used to take home tutions for kids and earns by your self ..you did so much for us beta ,and im very happy to see you met with Ram ..
A slight blush appeared on her face hearing his name..And very happy for peehu tooo ...
Than why you are worryng papa placing her hand on his chest ..palming gently ..
Kya dard hai papa aap ko ,karthik be settld hai ,Ayesha is getting good chances and we are there to look after her marrige and all ..
What's hurting you papa ... You are there with me in every instict papa ..
I know when i left KM and i came to our house ..you were invited me because of mom you were not ...
shhh he placed a finger on her mouth ..
It's ok beta ...I completely undrstand your situation..
Ha papa thats why i just dont want to come to our house ..i was so lost and when i stepped in our house i refused by my own family ..
I just couldnt stand on that ..Thats why i didnt come to our house ...Iska matlab ye nahi hai aap se pyaar nahi karthe
Papa i love you papa ...plz math chodiye muzhe..when i had the bad dream papa my heart broken into pieces..
Papa plz why you are taking stress.plz let me know if you have any problem ..What exactly you are stressing out..
Nothing beta ..Imjust worried about you three only but now iam fine ...
Im trying to be peace beta ..I love you tooo ..
Im just scared papa, how my life be with out you , I know im married and left our house ,But you are there always with me papa.
i adored you ..Plz papa forgive me that time i cannot come to you because i dont want to give any stress to you ..[She is talking about her initial days when she fighted with ram, if you have doubts check the first parts of this FF thank you ]
Plzz papa dont do this to me..I want you all my life time...
Knowing your health condition im restless , If Ram is not my husband i dont know how could i handle this situation ..

Papa plzz can i stay here for few more days with you plzzz...sure beta ...
They stayed for some time memorizing the beautiful past incidents infront of their eyes ...

*******
Coming to Priya room ..

Ram stirred a bit in his sleep streched his arm for Priya ...But he touched some baby stuff ...
without opening his eyes he searchd with his hand what was it .. soon his hand touched her fingers ...She clasped them ...
No where a wide grin appeared on his face ...Opened his eyes to found the most beautiful site in the world ..
His daughter is looking at him trying to flinch her eyes to open fully ...
Hayee mere rock star uthgayiii ,Taking her in his arms,kissed her cheeek...wished her GOod morning darling ..
She smiled at him..Her rose bud shape mouth turned coyly ..
Wooo kya peehu ithna hasi arahe ho papa ke dekh kar ...checked himself once...
Called Priya ..priya ...Hmmm your mom is no where to be seen ..Where she is ..taking peehu in his arms,
he searchd everywhere in sharma house ...came to balcony along with her ...
See peehu how beautiful tumahar mamma ka fav place ...
And suddenly his eyes looked at the view in the park..Priya rested her head on sudhir's shoulder kicking her legs in water talking with him ..
They were soo good and lost in their world...He smiled and looked at Peehu [dont know she already fed peehu so he thought of something]
Peehu ab toh tumhari mammi mazhe se bhi bhool gayi hogi ...Kya karu aap ko bhuk lagi hogi na ..
Trickling her nose with him, hmm ok papa is there for you my princess...
He placing peehu in stroller patha hai.. aap ka papa bahuth achha cook hai ..
Nutz heard this when entering their room .. tiptoed what her bhai is up to ...
She reachd the room ..adjusted herself infront of the kitchen room ...
He reachd kitchen with peehu ...wearing the cooking apron...Hmmm So here goes your milk taking the milk packet from fridge..
He boiled the milk , poured it in baby feeding bottle,dropping a milk drop in his back of palm to check the warmth of milk ,when he felt thats ok ..
He removed apron took peehu in his arms...

"Hmmm Bhavarchi Ramkapoor ne Baby Peehu Kapoor ke liye ye khud aapne hathho se banaya "

Though she was not crying ,He fed her ,she sipped the milk from the bottle looking at her papa lovingly with an adorable smile ...
Her lips left the bottle kya hai Peehu ..over ..checking the bottle ..Ohhh why you didnt like this milk ... She drank only half of the milk..
Hmm now he is panicking what happen dear ... She used to drink nicely ,,why she drank so less ...
Natasha barged with the cam...Bhaii you look soo cute all the time...Ohh how lucky peehu is got a loving father hmm no no world ka best father ...
LOve you bhai giving a side hug ...Bhaiii i have taken video of the whole incident and this is my gift for Peehu on her 1st month b'day ...
Chotiii ..
Soon Priya enterd ,wondered what Bhai & bahen are upto ...
Seeing the feeding bottle in his hands ...
She briskly walked Near Ram ...Taking Peehu up in her arms...Ram kya hai ..did peehu cried ,is she hungry ..
No Priya she didn't cry ..all the time she was smiling looking at me and when i fed with this milk she finishd only half bottle ..Im very much worried she used to drink her milk at 6' o clock only ..If you are late by 5 to 10 mins also she began to cry but Today she hasnt cry .. she hasn't finishd her milk..Looking wonderly at the feeding bottle in his hands ...Im worried ...

Priya smiled at his worriness about thier daughter ...
Because Ram..when im leaving from the house ..I fed her ..hai na peehu ..nuzzling Peehu's stomach ...
Kyun papa ko tang kar rahe ho beta !!!
gazing at Ram..why you worried so much ,How i will forgt about her ...
Haaa you are with your papa na ,you will forgt rest of the world taking peehu in his arms left to his room...
Sudhir and Priya smiled looking at Ram's sulking ..They know that he is so understanding ..
Priya followed Ram ..Kya why you behaving like this ...what happend ..I adjusted beside you ..I know you will take good care of her ..
And you were fast a sleep ,,dont want to disturb your sugary sleep my husband soo i went without telling you ..
pulling his cheeks...I love you and good morning ..
He smiled at her explanation ... he said Good morning jaan ..so you talked all the things with your papa sitting on the bridge at the side of lake..
She confused and dazed ...How so you know that ???
Looking where they have sat before ..Hmm see i have seen from here ...
Hmmm leaning on his shoulder ..ha Ram im missing him so much ..i want to stay some more days here ..
sure Priya ...no probs..
By the way Ram who told you about her feeding bottle ...I mean im feeding peehu na , so how come you know about this ..
Ha priya im her father ofcourse i know
"How"[she strechd the word]
Hmm krishu ma fed sometimes with this na ...i have seen so i thought ki it will work ...
Ooohh oooh my hubby learnt alot for his cute angel ...
"Mmm" [peehu spelled in betwwen"]
Both smiled seeing at peehu ...


From the writer :Hiii My dear pyari readers .Im extremly sorry for late ..I was really in dilemma to take up this track furthur ...i have thought something and wrote this and than got many PMs and still in dilemma of this track ..so it took me somuch time ..and convincing myself to write something good ...
HopefullY you will like the upcoming tracks ... Thank you and do give your feed back..

Thank you very much for sapring your time to read this FF and make me feel happy with your commnets ... Thank you soo much ...

🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️God bless you all


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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
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This is from Tashuu11 , as she was unable to post the comment she gave PM to me update here ...




i really owe you a big time...


thank you thank you so much for keeping my request...

love you for this muuahhh...

it is indeed an awesome... its so beautiful priya sharing all her old memories with sudhir...

specially loved the doctor part priya cried not because she was hurt but because her papa was crying... i really want to see same bond between ram and peehu...

it was indeed a fab update...



once again thanks for keeping the request...



Edited by luvsakshi - 12 years ago

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