i too Had a Love Story.LAST PART..page 13 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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[COLOR=BROWN]ohh crap means all this was true... means RaYa has sapearated... but why Ram ?????? why u leaved her alone... she must be so hurt n heart broken...now she won't get to u back... btw aweosme update keep it up ur great work waiting for next[/COOR]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I Too Had A Love Story...9

pata nahin ...kahan hogi,,, kaisi hogi...agar thik bhi hain to kiske saath hogi ...???
najaane kaise yeh tin mahine usne mre bagair kat liya ... Shayad iss soch ke saath ..ki usdin meine aapna kadam hata liya tha... Hataya to tha par usko chhodne ke liye nahin...aage ki sochne ke liye..par kisko pata tha...ki tum mujhe thora sa bhi waqt nahin de sakti thi... kuch hi paal pahele mera kia gaya wada tum bhul jaogi..Fir toot jaaogi...fir roothke chali jaogi...wada kiya tha tumse ki kabhi juda na honge...Par thora sa waqt ...khair
Mein confuse tha... aaj taq meine sab kuch pana chaha... Par Tum mere liye wo ho jisko mein khona nahin chahata ... Khair aksaar mein sochta raheta hun..Tum hote to yeh hota tum hote to wo hota...

suddenly


one day i got a call from ashwind,,, ''hey brother u wont blv me... But the Flat where i shifted... just next to it I noticed Priya... I think she is settled up there...''

The biggest newz for me... after so long days and nights ,,,I got a clue for priya...

i arrived the next hour


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I reached ashwind's flat...He made me to get that place...

That moment i was feeling that much happy..which i have never came before...I think much more than that when she said '' i love u too '' I was so eager to see her...I just started moving towards the house... Windows closed ...the door bulb litting up and going down ... And the plants indicated that i was heading the perfect place... when i move further ,, i smelt a blessing fragnance...gathering lots of courage.. I knocked on the door...

From the other side of the door.. I heard the most gentle and loving voice (but in a very low manner ) ''Kaun ?''

Though i gathered a lot of courage ..It all went away with her voice ...her heartwrenching voice...her so innocent voice...

'' Kaun ?''

Just i could do was knock it again ...

'' mein puch rahi hun kaun hain ?? ''

My mind said .. '' I ... Mein... Tumhaara mein... '' but just i could do.. Was to knock th door and take deep breath...

Now i felt a crying voice... Lil crying...lil worried ..lil confused...and with a feeling that the otherside person is somebody known ...somebody whom her heart wished to see evry seconds of her life... I guess ...she was feeling her loved one presence ..she can get its somehow me...

'' Ram... is that u?? '' a pre-bursting emmotion came out

I coundnt get what to say...what to do... as i became so overwhelmed with she calling me Ram ...For the first time...
And with the feeling that she misses me...That finally i got her..and is the luckiest person in the whole world...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
kya hai yaar itna short ...waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
😕😕😕😕itna short 😭😭😭😭 kam sekam atleast raya ko milne deti😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww so nice i was very excited kya yaar bas ek scene atleast write a para yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I TOO HAD A LOVE STORY...LAST PART


Wo pal jab ahista khula wo darwaza...Mithe se bhi mitha tha wo pal... Kyunki darwaze ko kholke dooriya mitane wali thi meri aapni hi parchhai ... She opened the door...and finally looked at the man outside,, I also watched the beauty,, i itched to see every min every sec of my life...

But she in twice thrice move went back ward... Looking here and there but not at me... I entered the room... went in few moves to her...to hug her ..But she avoided and moved side and covered her face with her palm... maintained distance... the much i went close..The more she got far..she is not turning her face...and began straightening the wrinkles on the bed shit...

I asked '' mere taraf dkhogi bhi nahin ''

AFTER a hault she asked '' kyun ayeho yaha ??''

After few secs I replied '' aisehi... Dkhne ka jee kiya...''

she interrupted ''Mujhe ??''

I stopped her and said '' Kyun nahin aa sakta yaha ''

She replied... '' saath to aapne hi chhoda tha ...''

I interupted ... '' yeh nahin puchhogi... Ki mujhe kaise pata chala tum yaha ho ? ''

She said ...'' jab aahi gaye ho to kya far padta hain.. ?? aab kya baat hain bolo... Yaha zyada der mat ruko ? ''

''Kyun ?? ''

''Is ek Kyun ka jawab mein kitne saare kyun se du ??? ''

'' matlub ? ''

'' Tum mujhe batao ki KYUN jo mein desrve karti thi... wo mujhe nahin mila...Kyun ?? jo mein deserve nahin karti thi wo mujhe mila... Kyun ?? jab meine kisika bura nahin chaha mujhe hi saabse ghatiya kismat kyun mili?? Kyun ???Tumne saath nahin nibhaya ..??Kyun mujhe chhod ke chale gaye ??firse Kyun mere jivan ki akhri kuch din mujhe aapni tarha nahin jeene di... Kyun ?? agaye wapas ?? ''

Among all her questions ... I became dumbheaded when my ears heared her words... jivan ke akhri kuch din... what does it mean...why her hair betrayed her not covering her entire head ??why her face full of spots..why her eyes seems to be going inside n inside her flesh time by time..why both her cheeks became flat and why her throat so swollen ?????

''Hain koi jawab'' i asked to myself...

''Hain koi jawab ??'' she said '' i m so damn popular ..ki kahin bhi mein jaaau... Mujhe leke hi baatein shuru ho jaati hain.. Kolkata mein gayi thi..dosto ne bhi saath chhod dia... well...Agar aap chhod sakte ho to koi bhi..Yaha vapas agayii,, I thought akhri kuch waqt wohi pe bitaalu jaha nayi zindaagi shuru karna chaha...''

''Akhri kuch waqt yaani ??? kya kahena chahati ho ?? ''

'' Nahin... matlub bohot saara waqt hain ''

'' to waqt nahin hain waqt nahin hain...Kya kie jaa rahi ho ?? ''

'' half a month... Bohot hain nahin ?? ''

It was Not less Than a (SANDY ) which happened in my mind... I became colder and firm...But soon i cant afford to stand anymore and sat on the bed.. Looking at her eyes and thinking my Luck...
when sometimes back i was thinking myself the luckiest and the happiest man in the world now i m the fool of the year...i put my palm on my forehead... ''paani dogi zara ''

she went Inside and came with a glass of water ...

i took it and gulped in a sec... '' Aur dena ... ''

she went inside and came again... i again drank it in a sec...

'' aur nahin de saakti '' she said..

I was not thirsty u knw... but i wanted my eyes to cry... My mind desereted with she saying only half month more... my entire body became cold outside... But inside a terrific warmth ..i was feeling.. cant speak anything...

my mind went several thoughts...

she dosnt deserve this... she needs to overcome...
Y she is bng treated as peoples topic of disscussion...
what crime she did that she will have to keep herslef detached from the society ??? if we care for cancer patients...Show our concern for every Desease...why we make AIDS a matter of Joke...
if ur immunity is zero u'll be affected by deseases and this is the ultimate... We need to take care of them more than anybody but the society makes them a matter of joke...is she having any work to do??...If not whats she doing to survive...her food ,, her medicines,,, and now i can get y her lights are not working...
why the fans are just showing there faces but of no work...From where could she get money.. ??? Oh my destiny...i need to snatch her out from this place... she'll not go... But i have to...

''Kyun aye ho yaha ?? ''

after few mins...i can discover my answer...'' Invite karne ?''


she smiled and said '' kyun aapni party kharab karna chahete ho... Mein jaaungi na.. To log bhag jaynge... ''

i put my head down... and said '' invitation mere shadhi ki hain..''

she looked at me and showed her joy..She became excited ''shadhi ki ????? u r actually marring ...Wow !! thats an exciting newz... arranged ha ???? ''

'' do u realy think so ?? ''

'' dnt tell me... Tin mahine mein ??? kafi fast ho ha ?? ''

'' kyun ??? cant love happen twice ?? ''

she haulted ..took deep breath... with a smile...lowing hr voice and with an overfilled eyes... ''Ofcourse ...zaroor... kaun hain wo lucky girl...jo finaly Ram Kapoor ki wife banne wali hain ?? ''


''Kal hi dekh lena...''

'' Nahin ..nahin ...nahin.. wo to ho nahin sakta ... Tumhe lagta hain ki mein usdin ka hissa banungi... Jis din mein...''

'' Kabhi tumhara haq tha ?? ''

'' I m happy For u... ''

'' kal mein tumhe lene aaunga... ''

'' par mein auungi nahin...''


Next day i went to her ...With a pink lahenga..

'' mein nahin aaungi ram ''
''yeh paheno aur chalo ''
''kyun kharab karna chahate ho aapna shadhi ??''
''tum jaaogi to shadhi kharab hogi ??''
''haan... ''
''koi kuch nahin kahega ..chalo ''
''mujhe kisi ki kuch kahene se koi fark nahin padta... bohot suna hain meine...Infact mein kisi aur ke saath aapko rishte mein judte hue nahin dekh sakti... mein nahin chahati ki mere maan se koi bad dua nikhle... I realy want u to stay happy after me.. but i cant see ur shadhi with anybody else and not me... I dnt want to make u emmotional before ur marriage with another girl whom u said u also were in love..after u my luck didnt permit to fall in love..So it'll ver be an unknown question to me...
''CAN LOVE HAPPEN TWICE ?? ''

''yeh akhri request rakhlo... Plz...please come... ''

''no...''

'' thik hain tum nahin jaaogi to mein shadhi nahin karunga... ''

''aisa mat karo na ram ..plz ''

Finally i insisted her and we where on our Kapoor Mansion...

she found my hall orchid studded again... and in completely a way she arranged three months before...

'' Shadhi kaha hain ?? ''

Soon my business ppl started shaking hands with priya with big smiles... Soumya Hugged her tightly,,, I noticed a slight smile ...a smile of getting in a place full of ppl...who were loving and encouraging her presence...and a slight tear...when i and she reached the centre... Vikram-Neha announced ...''NOW AS THE COUPLE HAVE REACHED ...WE START OUR ENGAGEMENT CEREMONY '' with huge round of claps...
She looked at the announcement and thn at me... she can get what i was upto...and with a drop of tear rolling down her left cheek...she went on walking to her room previously...


soon i reach her with two rings in y hand...

'' aap kya kar rahe ho ?? ...kyun kar rahe ho ??...'' she was crying

'' as u deserve everything ''

''plz mujhe jaane do... ''

'' Ek baar jo galati ki thi..bar bar thorei na karunga ''

and i put her palm over mines ..slipped hr ring on her fingger...
Both her eyes started to tear...and i gave my ring to hers and she finally hesitating alot ..engaged with me...


The after 2 days we had our marriage... with all ceremonies.mahendi, sangeet, haldi , etc etc...Finally i was not a bachelor...she was so happy ...that last days are going happier ... I was the luckiest man...the happiest man in the world...

Night came...

She didnt let me ... i pulled her on my arms ..she leaned on my hand.. i was lost on her eyes...

her eyes were saying no... dnt let it be...

she said '' yeh nahin ho sakta ram ''

'' kya ho jayega ??? ''

'' I m very happy Ram...Thanks for giving me the love of my life..Thanks for making considering me as ur girlfrnd...Thanks for being the most lovable partner evr..Thanks for being my behalf...But yeh aakhri kuch waqt mujhe yeh ahesaas mat dilaao,,that i'll b ruining ur life... ''

i put my finger on her lips... ''Chup...ek baat aur nahin ''

i lifted her up in front of the cloudless sky,,
i placed hr on my bed in front of the stars ...
and i kissed her lips ,, moon being in front...
And avoiding her cries , i became hers ..in front of my destiny..


The next day when i woke up ... I found she placing he hands on my chest... i saw her ring...then looked at her side face...and saw hr eyes... i turned her to kiss hr forhead and wish her good morning But what i saw is ,a cold , still,,heartless, lifeless ...priya ...but her lips was smiling ... I for the last time kissed her dead lips and took a deep sigh ..realizing my heart getting squeezed up..in a second i cant find my heart as it was none in my body but smewhere else,,where she is now...

so strange na... ?? when i consider myself the most luckiest creature i discover muself the fool of the year ...






Now
after 1 year when we tied in a same knot and then detached...


I Ram Kapoor..sitting on my wheelchair ...waiting for the last call ...after which i can meet my love after so many seconds ...
and i'll be telling,,,That C i took ur suffer to meeT u as fast as possible...Now come fast and hug me tightly..dnt care what ur angel frnds will say ... I will say ur frnds...That i have the right to give huggies and kissies to the most beautiful angel who belongs to me ...Only me...


And Thats where I complete ... I TOO HAD A LOVE STORY...


THANK YOU
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
taht was damn emotional dear... it ws a nice 1...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
It was too emotional...
i just couldnt stop d tears falling from my eyes...
must say ur an excellent writer :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Hey Anu... u made me cry dear...
I m in tears after reading this beautiful creation of yours... <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShwetaVaidya

Hey Anu... u made me cry dear...
I m in tears after reading this beautiful creation of yours... <3



Thank u shweta... <3 u

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