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Shilpa Venketesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

awww... wot an update dear.. u made me almost cry...
hatz of!!!! Rams, explanations n ques .. wow!!!! dis is the first ss that made me cry!!!!👏👍🏼

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Awww... What a superb explanation of ram... And one line he knows and understands how priya wud have brought up pihu...OMG i just loved this part... Now waiting to know priyas reaction to this... I know it wud be as superb as this...

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Dilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

n thankx for clearing my confusion by specially mentioning my name in between update.. Thankx

Edited by D4BALH - 12 years ago

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

I always wanted Ram to protect Priya from the family enquiry session because its all between them if they cleared between them then it will be a mature love story. When i read the same in ur ff its just amazing btw thank u for the pm keep on rocking

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

PART-8

She don't know what she would do , His each word stabbed her heart uncountable times, he was feeling guilty by thinking all this happend because of him and thats why he dont want to talk with her about the matter , the outside krishu,dadi,saumya,rishab were also in tears , Ram &Priya sobs mingled with each other , she ran her fingers thrw his hair and pulled him to her close , giving a kiss on his forhead , You are Gem ram , i love you soo much , and i really really do ...

I never ever loved anyone like you ram , it just happend that time, i betrayed you leaving you alone , keeping pehu away from you ,

Ram i left you wants to move on your life , but its my mistake to think like that , and when i came to know about peehu ,

I called to you hundred times my dear , hundred times, but i heard the earring convo with a lady , in my heart i know you wont do that , but still after that also i cald but you were not attended my call , so i thought ki you must be moved on your life ...

Now her sobbings increased he is not understanding her words , he gave a glass of water to her ... she holds herself now she wants to clear everything with him ..

when i hold our baby in my arms , she was just reminding you ,that 9 months i ate aloo paranthas only each and every sec i rembered you ram , I thought ki you will be happy , but im wrong you could have been more happy , If you were there at the time of peehu , Ramm i love you , she is exact replica of yours , Each time she will remind me of yours , I tried my best to keep your beti happy , but when she was ill , when they asked 5000 dhirams to her hospitalization, I cramped down , i hated myself being away your daughter from you , I know how hard it to be digest for you , When you told me nothing will happen to peehu ,It was enough to soothen me up ..

I my self felt somany times, im bringing up The Ram kapoors daughter in my way , If you were there with her she could have completed all her wishes as well as all her dreams tooo , A single mother cant do somethings which peehu wants ... I really hate myself putting you and peehu away but if time comes back to me , i never ever let you down mr.kapoor ..plz accept my mistakes and plz give me some punishment ...plzzz ram now she collapsed on the floor crying bitterly ...
All the 5 years of her good,bad moments, missing him was like mad to her , but when she realized he only loved her , she only loved him , how cruel the fate played with them ..And she took the initiative to this massive thing , It piercing her like hell ...
When she felt he is trying to lift her up , she gazed at him with tear filled eyes , Ram why did you love me unconditionally ...

Man you are soo good at heart , You still undrstud my feelings , everything you trying to do fr me and peehu was ..I'm Speechless ram...still you love the way Iam..
God could have taken me up at the moment ...nothing could ...

He yelled at her loudly " PRiyaaa" He firmly clasped her shoulder raised from the floor , raised his hand to slap her ,seeing her closed eyes he backed off his hand ..
pulling more closer , Dont dare to raise your voice , i wont spare you if you spoke again those words ,

Why you stopped Ram, Slap me hard that i should remebr it for ages ,Slap me Ram , he tugged her to his heart Sobbed with his love of life ...

I love you Priya ,PLz dont do this to me again ...
I love you too Ram more than myself ...i wont leave you until my last breath ..
But priya i will come with you after your last breath also ...
she gazed at him with all his love , yes Priya i will come with you i finishd all my works so i can come this time ,
I left you Ram , i left my love and i was just living like hell with my dughter in dubai like an orphan , god also wouldnt forgive me ram ...
But i forgve you priya ...I Love you jaan ... Noone will question you mydear , i cleared everything with everyone ...
so noneed to worry , if you felt anything just let me know plzz don't hide it from me anymore ...
And thank you for accepting Kush ...Ram what are you talking all your decisions were correct and i will be with you everytime ,hugging more tightly to him..
I just want to be with you ... you and me for some time ..he looked puzzled

Yah just you and me , plz be with me for sometime here in our room ...
Every corner is dazzling with your love Ram, Im happy that im back to my own place pointing to his heart ...

HEaring his heart beat you know ram this heartbeat made me to live these 5 years , you are there in my life, you are there in my dreams, you are there in my smiles, you are there in my bitter phase ,, you are there always for me ...
she is rubbing on his chest ,he is ruffling her hair ..both were solaced in eachother arms and those tired hearts relaxed in a deep slumber in the velevety bed ...

their legs were touching the ground ,her head on his chest ,his hands were on her waist ...the breeze singing lulluby to them...
both were slept peacefully after 5 long years ,every math has cleared from their lifes ..
Dadi,Krishuji,Rishab,Saumya's hearts were broken hearing their love to eachother aswellas suffering from 5 years ,just blessed them in their heart and went away leaving the love birds alone [poor felows what they will do other than that ] and all their doubts vanished like a blow after hearing their convo ...

[D4BALH -Ooops don't know your name ,usually Neel will give reply behalf of me ,so this time she also dont know whats the plot im writing so when she mailed all comments , i just saw your question so wants to comment it but no time , so when your doubt will clear in myFF than i wrote to reminded you , Thank you so much,hope you loved it ]

Thank you so much girls reading and commenting .. I may not get the time from tomorw so trying to finishing off sooonn...
so they were happy so what should i write here ..hmm give me some suggestions na...plzzz...Hope you like this part tooo
plz leave your comments and dont forgt to hit LIKE button

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Eram

@viny_queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

i have to say it again and again amazing SS..u should join the BALH CVs

Uff main kya karu... Fida ho gaye hum aap ki iss kahani pe...

incredible update

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ahana1994

@ahana1994

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

That was just fantastic 👏 was just wondering if this will happen in BALH than just imagine RASHI performance in this it will be a treat to watch to all RASHI fans 😊

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: shaz9
lovely prediction hope this happens and thx neel for bugging her 😆 and i would say bug her more till she write the other stories as well 😆

Thank you shaz ..you will get the updates of those stories in october ...dont wory she will update ..thank you

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: saniya9919
Nice prediction...Peehu saying 'Golu uncle ko kuch nahi hoga..meray jaisey rockstar hain'...very nice.Thank you so much Neel .Thanks to your friend for writing.

Thank you dear .. yah i too loved that dialogue