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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-5





I asked god so many times plzzz bring back my priya , i just want to be with you , wants to live with you , wants to walk with you , wants to take breath with you , but
she hugged him tightly not wanting him to leave , crying copiously ,his shirt got wet by her tears , he pulled her up ,asked dont cry priya , i wont let you down this time, i may not expressive that time , may be you were not knowing this before ...

Her sobs were increased this time , Kush ran over to ram , Papa he called out , he released priya seeing kush ..

Kush clutching his trousers asked "Papa ye Priya angel hai na" she was surprized to hear ...
She knelt down ,cupped his face in her both hands ...No im your mother beta call me mamma like peehu didi..

He confused ,Ram kneels down i will tell you a story ok ,Hmmm ...
You asked priya angel to be there your side every time na ...Kush said "yes "
so priya angel came as your mamma ,so she can be with you every time...
kush excitedly asked "really angel "
She said yes beta , he hugged her tight telling thank you angel ... Ram signaled him "mamma"
Hmm thank you "Mamma "
she hugged him more tight .Krishu ji came ,Ram everything is ready , if you two are ready than i will go and call peehu ...
Kush went with krishu ji ,
Ram asked her can i ask you some thing ...
Ji ...

Do you like to come back to me and staying as my wife ..
"Im happy ram , i always prayed for !!! he stopped her than come with me , he took her to their room ,

She stumbled infront of the room ,Its all her life ,there were somany memories of her life occupied, Her trembling hands opend the door ,she stepped inside shocked to see the room , every thing was exactly where she used to keep before , even the curtains tooo , may be he bought new but the design and colour were the same , she touched each and every corner of the room , And she realized every corner resembles of her pics ,she noticed peehu& ram pic[where they have taken in bumper draw in dubai] ,Its infront of her photo ,Ram removed the garland from her photo cleaned the photo with his bare hands ...

She thought what have i done to you ram, you love me so much , still what did i do ...fresh tears trikled down from her face ...
He went to changing room called her , she walked with a daze ,He asked her to take bath giving a dazzling saree to her ... she just followed his instruction ...

She felt better after the bath ,but she didnt understand why he gave party wear saree , whatever she draped the saree ,when she was combing her hair she found a box with a note , If you like wear these too and your hair should be oneside , She opened the box found pair of lovely earrings , she adornd it changed her hair style to our oldy priya's style ...still she was unable to digest what was happening , why noone is asking her anything , why no one is questionning , yelling or atleast angry on her ..

She came downstairs ,Ram was waiting for her ,dressed in cream kurtha ,looking rather cute as he is ...
He forwarded his hand she placed her hand in his , he holds it properly take her to the pooja room , where peehu and kush came running almost crashed them..
Both lost the grip and leaned to the wall, after a sec he holds for support and made priya comfortable ..

Mamma ,papa how we are looking ... The two lil champs are looking really pretty in their white dresses ...
The poojari started chanting mantras , and everyone closed their eyes to pray for Raya well being ...
When his hand gently touched her hand , she opened her eyes to see him , everybody clapped Ram slid her engagement ring to her finger , Her eyes moistened , He took out the mangalsutra tied it around her neck , with all his love and affection ...
He picked the sindhoor box adorned it on her maang ,telling its not compramise marrige priya , With my all heart ',soul ,love wants to live with you , I promise you i would not let happen anything to you or kushpeehu , I will try my best to keep you happy my dear, I LOVE YOU jaan , "Mai nahi ji saktha tumhari bigair " those words are echoing in her ears , Nevi gave the garlands to them, both exchanged the garlands , took blessings from everyone
...

Ram removed the garlands from them and he lead her to the center of the room , when the song starts ...
Mann yeh sahib ji
Jane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahane

she placed his right hand on his left hand , he placed his right hand on her waist pulling her closer , this resulted her another hand landed on his shoulder , soon pehu kush joined with them...

Naina nawabi ji, swinging with the song
Dekhe hai sab ji,he is looking at her ,she is looking down
Phir bhi na samjhe ishare,she is looked at him meltd in them

Mann yeh sahib ji [she lowered her gaze]
Haan karta bahane[ he fasten the rhythm ]
Naina nawabi ji[he twirld her ]
Na samjhe ishare[she landed on his chest ]

Samjhe ishare[ moved with rhythm ]
Dheere dheere
Naino ko dheere dheere
[looking in to each other eyes]
Jiya ko dheere dheere ,[their heart beats raised to the core ]
Bhayo re saibo[she looked at him dreamily ]

Dheere dheere
Naino ko dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere
Lage re saibo


Surkhiyan hai hawaon mein [both are lost each other arms]
Do dilon ke milne ki
Ha haan arziya hai nazaron mein
Lamha yeh tham jane ki

O kaise hazuri ji
Yeh lab dikhaye
Chupi laga ke bhi
Gazab hai yeh dhaaye

Dheere dheere
Naino ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere
Bhayo re saibo

Dheere dheere
Begana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere
Lage re saibo

Saibo, saibo'

Dheere,

[Hmm remebering old days kya ,ohh when i wrote this part , i was just lost in that episode ,how good those times were]

offf will try to update tomorw ...before monday episode ...
will try to finish this ss..

Why ram is not asking anything to priya? why priya is stil in confuse ? what source for them in the future why ram gave details of the property ?
will ram and priya will live like before ??? wether anyone will trouble their relationship??
all this answers will reveal in furthur updates .. stay tuned guys .. Thank you so much for your support ...plz hit the like button and leave your precious comments ...



Edited by luvsakshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Sweet,cool and Romantic update. Seems future update is holding many suspenses..
Hoping for best. I know u will update so not asking for that.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Yaaayyy!! Thank you thank you thank youuu!!! Was waiting for someone to post a OS or SS on thursdays episode 😛 and Yes definitely continue!! By the way the part where Saibo songs played and ram and priya danced and as you said what they were doing during the song I actually visualized it 😛 and it was perfect! So cute! Plus one of my favorite songs by my favorite singer danced by my favorite characters was awesome!! Waiting for your next update!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Absolutely fantastic. I hope the reel drama also plays out the way you have written. No big show downs... no drama.. no RB mode ...

Hoping this drama takes the mature path as you have written here.

Take a bow...

Woot Woot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
👏awesome prediction ...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome dear.Everything is so perfect in this FF. Loved the Part-5 very much. Ram-Peehu's pic kept in their rm .😃 So cute.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
story is moving in good way
i think der vil be emotional break down from priya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
u write very beautifully.. just love ur writings...
👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
PART-6


Dheere dheere
Begana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere
Lage re saibo

Saibo, saibo'

Dheere,
Everyone clapped when the end of the dance, Both dreamily cameout from eachother arms ,Priya unable to comprehent how the things are going so sweetly , she looked at peehu , she was overjoyed by all these and patting kush while he is sleeping on krishna's shoulder , he was too early to sleep ,early raiser ,peehu went with krishu ji to put kush in his bed, Priya who was standing near the sofa observing all these thinking random things , she was still in a trance moving by others instructions only ,but her mind knows that a pair of eyes continuosly staring at her and her every action ..
Priya thoughts broke by dadi's call "Priya puttar "
She about to move saying "Ji dadi" , Felt slight dizziness she closed the distance between the sofa and her , she holds herself not to demote in the hall ,that too infront of everyone ,Her "Priya I LOVE YOU ,mai nahi ji paaungi tumahari bigair " ringing in her ears , her hands reached to squeez her head ,Its throbbing like hell ,she is getting flashes of ram smiling , asking sorry , when he wants tail maalish how cute he looked , slowly her head is laying back , How the events turned out today is like one of the most fearful day aswell as greatful day ,Ram's images were flashing infront of her eyes ..

when dadi called out again "Priya puttar "
She squeezed her eyes to remove her thoughts ,But invain ,she tried to get up from there swiftly landed back on the sofa , She knows whats happening around her unable to speak or look properly , her mositend eyes covering the clouded images of Ram ... only ram ..Her lips quivering to call his name ..
Ram Who finished his call and reached by her side , He knows very well that she needs some time to adjust to this ..

He held her in his arms moving towards Their bed room,Tears trikle down from her drooped eyes , Her hand is reaching out to crying peehu who is following them ,peehu hold her hand ,Enough this enough god ,my family is with me ...
Ram was consoling peehu that mamma is going to okay , she needs rest ,Dont cry beta , Rock stars will cry or what haa , wipe your tears baby ,see we reachd the room here see he placed her in the bed , Meanwhile the Dr came to check her [ dont ask from where the dr came, hmmm vikram called the doc]

He cheked her ,nothing to worry Mr.kapoor , just low BP & she was in stress ,i gave one injection she wil settle soon ...
He waited for her to wake up ,He is telling a bed time story to peehu , who is refuced to eat or sleep until priya wakes up, The hushh talks between ram and peehu disturbed by chimmering sound of priya's bangles , She tried to reach bedside table to reach the water glass as she didnt find anybody in the room...
Soon a pair of tiny hands reached the glass before her hand and when ram helped priya to laydown on the head rest , peehu gave the water to her asking " Mamma pilo "
while priya gulping down , peehu hand reachd her forehead asking mamma ab theek hai na ...
No where priya eyes moistend by the concern showing from her "
" Love of life [Ram], and Life of love [peehu]" "
She hugged her "Theek hai beta " Why you haven't sleep yet ...
Hmm ask her she even didnt have anything ...bahuth zidddi ladki ,aap ki jaise ...saying this ram called bansikaka to bring their food..

Im sorry ram " ...for what priya ..
ram i just dont knw what happend ...

priya thats ok ..common eat now , He feed peehu first than Priya ,Priya reachd the plate her weakness took over ,she badly want to feed ram , she closed her eyes tightly to clear her eyes ,Ram so wantedly to take her in his arms wipe off all her sadness.. she opened her eyes when Our rock star peehu called her father "Papa khao na" plzzz with her lil hand filled with food , he slowly takes it and kissed her hand ... both father daughter duo feed eachother aswell as priya ...

Peehu fall asleep at the last of their dinner , he managed to feed her properly,cleaned her dress ,hands and mouth ,laid her beside priya ...
He covrd her with a blanket ,He lifted his gaze towards priya , Who is lost in his charm..
Hey angel you are not getting sleep??? waving his hand infront of her eyes...
Rammm , I ..i will sleep but not now ..

He reachd her side shifting peehu to otherside of the bed neatly tucked her in between pillows ...
He knows that she wants to talk with him but this is not the right time , she needs lots of rest ..lots of rest ...he thought him self..
When he took her in his tight embrace she broke down again , He patted her back , ruffling her hair smoothly ,thanks to the medicines and his strong embrace ,she finally fallen asleep , still her sobs where craking in between ...

Ram made calls to dubai and asked them to Take TC form from peehu's school , and pack everything from priya's apartment and send them to mumbai ASAP...



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Edited by luvsakshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow that was awesome and emotional loved rayapee bond so nice...


but why ram is not letting priya to say any thing...


hope he gets priyas diary and read everything...

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