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Posted: 12 years ago
pinky where r u ? even i am waiting for update
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pinky ji where r u waiting jii
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can we get an update PInkyji, pleaseee
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Sorry glitter graphics

Sorry glitter graphics
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PART 9-

Scene 17-

"Main ab bhi tumse pyaar karti hun!"
Wait... "Kya ? Magar tumne toh kaha tha ki..." I asked her,totally dumbstruck !
"Haan.. " She looked away & replied..
I tried to look at her face "Phir ?"
She felt exasperated ! "Ram.. I am sorry ki maine tumse uss din bohot rudely behave kiya.. Aur I am sure atleast ek Minute ke liye tumhe maine ye jo bhi kaha wo sunke tumhe bohot accha feel hua hoga.."
I didnt understand what the hell she was saying.. I was trying to gasp the essence of that conversation !
"Magar.. Main tumse jhoot nahi bol sakti.. You are really sweet,Magar.. I never loved you.. But do you know why I said that line("Main ab bhi tumse pyaar karti hun!") to you today?
Because I want to fall in love with you !" saying so she looked at me!
I looked like a Dumb Idiot who couldnt make out a single thing she said ! It was too confusing,she drove me nuts.. I officially gave up on women !
"You didnt understand a thing I said,did you ?" she looked like she was about to crack-up looking at my perplexed-cartoon face!
I nodded my head sideways,in grief! :(
"Hmm.. I thought so.." She smiled..
"Look.. ! In a very simple way,I have been acting very strange.. I gave you one hell of a time since a few days,I.. I was going through a lot of emotional stress & Bottom line you were being so sweet & I just always behaved so mean & rude to you.. I just.. I didnt want to give you any signals or fall for you or make you fall for me.. Basically When I first met you I hadnt thought that we would end up like this.. In such a tangled situation where you dont want to move on.. And I cant move on with you.. But.."
I stopped her in the middle..
"Priya.. Wait.. so you are trying to tell me that you are not over your Ex & I should piss off,right ?"I asked in a serious tone..
"No.. No.. NO.. I am just asking you to give me sometime to start everything once again.. Like a fresh start with No..,Nothing from the past..!" she said
"Priya.. I dont care what your past was.. I never did.. Its always You who brings your past into our future.. Why dont you get it that I will be here.. Always waiting for you.. Even if you never show up.."
OMG! I Bet this was so much more cheezier a line than any of SRKs cheesy line from his romantic craps !
"Ram.. I am glad to here this.. So.. Could you give me sometime so that I can make it upto all those things that i did to you ?"She asked in a pleading tone..
"Priya.. But.. please... Do you this for yoursake.. I dont want to impose myself on you.."
I tried to sound as dramatic & modest As possible..
"No.. Ram.. I am not doing this for you.. I am doing this because I know this is good for me.. Maybe you arent really that guy i wanted but you are the guy that i need But never realised.. These few days when I was away from you.. Put me into thinking.. That how much you are there for me..!"
"You are not perfect but I need you to be there.. You have No clue how much I changed myself for you.."I said..
"Didya never feel frustrated about all that i did to you ?" She asked.
"You have No Clue.. But I guess I had this intuition that you too would have something for me.. Love is a hopeless thing .. Naa jeene deti hain na marne deti hai...
Atleast I am glad that you want to give US a shot ! Cos Tumhe mujhse handsome,dashing charming.."
she cut me in the middle.. "Banda mil hi nahi sakta.hahahha.. haan haan pata Mr.Ram Kapoor..." She smiled..
I smiled looking at her,..
"so.." I looked at her & Turned around..
Turned back towards her.. Like I made a rotation & moved my right hand forward..
"Hi.. I am Ram kapoor.. and you are ?"
She looked down,smiled & cleared her throat..
"Hi.. I am priya singh !"
"So lets go down & I can buy you a drink ?"
"Kyun ? Main khud kareed sakti hun.. !" she turned around & started to walk..
"Aye.. hello.. you agreed you wouldn't be difficult this time !"I went behind her..
"Haan ? kab ? hum toh abhi abhi mile hain na ? vaise bhi Mujhe toda mazaa toh uthane do.."
Priya smiled..
"Accha.. Jao baad me..!" I said & walked ahead of her...
Shit! What the hell had I done.. Ab kahi ye sach main nazar ho gayi toh lene ke dene padh jaayenge.. I thought & decided to turn back..But before that she came infront of me..
"Okay.. I will let you buy me that drink.." she winked ;)
"Nahi.. abhi mood nahi.. tum khud kareed nahi sakti ho kya ?!" I said,with pride
"Oh.. C'mon.. sorry " she looked at me with her gorgeous,irresistable eyes...
I blinked and said "Okay.. fine.. magar you have woo me for that ?" I looked at her with a smirk!
"Dont Push it,Ram!" She said & walked towards the stairs..

Scene 18-

"Seriously ? Come on ! dont be a spoil sport !" I walked behind her..
"No way !!!" she said as we entered the hotel..
I looked at my friends,..
"shit! Inke baare main toh main bhool hi gaya tha !" I said..
"Kaun ? aur jiju kaha gaye ?" she looked at me!
"Wo.. mere friends.. un hi ke saat toh aaya hun main !" I pointed my finger towards them..
"Oh ! lagta hain jiju ghar chale gaye,..." she said..
Like I cared about her jiju.. here I suddenly remembered about all that,that happened before I went up with priya..
Priya shook me "Kya hua ?"
I told her the whole thing...
As soon as I was done she hit me..
"Ouch! Tum logon mere upar bet lagayi ?!" she looked angry..
"Well..Na..haan.."
She hit me again..
"Ouch!" I screamed,rubing my arm..
"Teek hain rukho main unhe bhaga ge aata hun.." I told her & went near their table..
Ek toh emotional attyachaar karti hain aur uske upar maarti hain.. Mummy aapki jaisi hi bahu lee aaya hun aapke liye.. I thought in my head & trolled !
"Oyye hoye.. Ram.. kaha tha yaar ?" One of them asked,they all looked so drunk..
"Bohot der tak chali teri meeting hamari bhabhi se ?"
"Kya kya kiya meeting main ?" They trolled on their on dirty jokes & hi-5-ed each other..
"Aisa kuch nahi hua.. "I said calmly..
"Toh.. wo hamari bhabhie nahi bani..?"One of them got up.."Shit,Man! Humne toh tumhe sher samja tha aur tu toh meow meow nikla.." They all laughed ! I knew I just Knew I had this coming... But atleast in gadhon ki wajese aaj priya aur main saat hain toh Main ready tha saari insults sehene ke liye..
"Okay guys niklo.. Its late.." I said..
"Meow..!" They said & laughed harder..
usi waqt priya came there..
"Yaha kya kar rahi ho ?" I whispered in her ears..
"Shh.. let me handle them!"she said..
"Hello boys...!"
And their all those morons started drooling !
"Hii.." they said in course..
"Whats you name?" one of them asked..
"Kyun ? Ram ne bataya nahi ?! Its okay.. Main hi introduction karti hun.. I am priya singh.. soon to be Mrs.Ram kapoor !"
"Wooo... " They all screamed..
I was like What the.. I was never more happy..
"Ab if you guys excuse us.. We have to go...yeah ?" She said & dragged me by pulling my collar..Love glitter graphics
"Bye guys." I waved as she dragged me out...
"OMG tere meow ki toh nikal padi.." One of them said..
"Haan yaar.. meow ko toh gurrati huyi tigress mil gayi.. ab toh ye gaya kaam se.."
They said !
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Sorry For The D-E-L-😭A-Y-E-D Update !!!!! N also👏 "Congrats"⭐️ to all of my dear friends on their new FFs.. Sorry I havent found time to go through them.. My sincere apologies.. But.. But,.. I am sure all your works are as superb 👏 as you guys are ! Love you 😊 all & Missed you lots !!😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update yar priya is one hell of girl nd that meow or gurrati hui tigress wali line was superb
Cont soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
seriously my internet is not working properly right now, in none of the pages like button is working, 😡

i liked the part a lot, this FF has some really funny scenes😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahaha very funny awesome update. U r too good yaar seriously it was very funny 😉

RAM tried hard to be modest..

Priya sahi hai yaar shaadi ke baad toh naacha ke rakhegi Ram ko ;;;

acha hai Mrs. Ram Kapoor ka toh aur maafi tab milege jab aap jaldi update doge Madam 😊


Do Update. Awesome an keep writing 👏👏👏

Thanks for PM


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Posted: 12 years ago
ha ha ha... very entertaining update as usual... really enjoyed it a lot... I'm really chuffed to see you back here dude 😉

now plz don't get gayab abruptly again :P ... come on dude, don't be a slacker and update regularly 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally!!! You updated 😃 yeh Ram toh bechaara gaya Kaam se😆. As always loved your style of writing and the progression in the story. Please try to update regularly👏

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