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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#931

waiting for next part Veenaji

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Dsudipa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#932

nice update Veena ji

u written very well

waiting 4 RAYA's romance

pls continue soon

nxt time pls PM me

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#933

Originally posted by: Mini1991
Awesome update diii...bechari meri jaan priya ko ram babu ne dekha bhi,nhi 😭😭😭 uhu uhu uhu...golu k golu hi rahenge ram babu...continue soon!!!

hahaha...hota h hota h...😉

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#934

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Nice update veena...sahi kaha neha ki baate jaldi se nhi jati dimag se.. 😆 par uski advices bhi badi khatarnak hoti hai...lol
Haha...pehle halwa, phir kharate, or ab baat..aage pata nhi kya kya hoga bichara ram 🤣
Cont soon

hahaha...aur aisi advices log mante kyun hain jb pta hota h ki khatrnak hihongi...😆

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#935

Hehehe...insecurity bhi kamal ki cheez hoti h..apse ajeeb ajeeb harkate karati h..khair...jo bhi h iski ek limitation honi chahiye...aajkl priya bhi bht insecure ho jati h kya kare pati jo itna anokha mila h..kal tak to kahte the kabhi ladkiyo se bate hi nhi karte aur aaj pta nhi kahan se ye isha madm ko utha k laye hain...wah rambabu badhiya h..ek hi h ya list me aur bhi naam h...dekho bhai priya to apse aage hai uske to already do do hain...aur dono ne apki nak me bht dum kiya h to ek mauka to apko bhi milna hi chahiye...hahaha...lage rhiye rambabu..m chalti hu updates pr...

Part 52...

"waise wala pyar nhi h"

priya...bate karni hain

ram...what???...itni rat ko???...kya hua???

Priya...kuchh nhi hua bas aise hi

ram...achha theek h bolo

priya...wooo...koi bat h nhi ...magar bat karni h bas

ram...ufff...koi bat h nhi to karni kya h???

Priya...wo mujhe nhi pta...aap hi btaiye..

Ram...achha idhar aao pehle meri baho me..

Priya ek smile k sath ram ki bahon me aa jati h...

Ram...ok now tell me what happen...kuchh hua h kya???..kisi ne kuchh kaha kya??..

Priya...nahi..

Ram...achha wo chhodo ye btao dinbhar aaj kya kiya...

Priya...kuchh nhi kiya ..bht bore hui..aap bhi nhi the pihu bhi nhi thi...ghar me koi bhi kuchh bhi karne nhi deta h to mne bas neha se bat kar li...aur phir...

Ram...hmmm..ab aayi line pe..to kya padhaya us stupid neha ne

priya...pls stupid mt boliye..itni to achhi h

ram..achhi to h bas use ye nhi pta h ki akal kab kharch karni chahiye jb dekho tab faltu me kharch karti rhti h aur faltu me tumhara bhi deemag kharab karti rhti h apne ideas se...

Priya...mr.kapoor...vry bad wo hamare bare me sochti h itna aur aap aise keh rhe hain...

Ram...ok baba bht achhi h tumhari neha to aaj kya achhai kari usne...

Priya ram ki trf dekhti rhti h..ekdm masum se chehre k sath...

Ram...kya hua baba..kyun aisa face bna rakha h..bolo na ..kuchh chahiye??

Priya...han

ram..kya???

Priya...ap

ram...are to main to hu hi..dekho tumhare itne kareeb...

Priya...han par

ram...??...kya???

Priya...pta nhi..aajkl mujhe bht dar lagta h

ram...kyun???

Priya...wo m nhi janti bas aise lagta h aajkl aap hamesha mere aas pas rhiye mere sath bate kariye mujhe pyar kariye...

Ram...are karta to hu pyar...

Priya...par ye waise wala pyar nhi h...

Ram...mtlb???..

Priya...mtlb ye...ki ye to papa wala pyar h jo baby ki wajah se h...hamesha...ye karo wo mt karo yha baitho waise chalo ye khao wo mat khao...kabhi pihu kabhi baby...in sabki wajah se ye pyar ata h...aajkl ram wala pyar to ata hi nhi h jo ki sirf mera h persnl...

Ram...hahaha..to ye tumne kaise jana ki ram wala pyar nhi ata h

priya...han to janungi nhi kya...aaj m itne man se taiyar hui sirf apke liye aur apne dekha bhi nhi...

Ram...mere liye taiyar hui???...par kyun???

Priya...are wo btaya tha na neha se baat hui thi...to usne bola ki aise time me patiyo ka dhyan bhatk jata h to unko impress karne k liye ye sb karna chahiye...

Ram...got it ...pta tha mujhe...iska link pakka neha se juda hua hoga...ok now litsen to me...sabse pehle to us pagal ki bate mt suna karo...uske to teen bachhe ho chuke h...ab dono k pas koi kam h nhi to yhi karenge na..but hamare pas to bht sare kam h na..aur tum agr mujhe har rat aise hi jagati rhogi to yhi hoga..phir m thakunga...phir tumpe dhyan nhi de paunga to phir ram wala pyar kaise dunga...

Priya...han ye bhi sahi h...achha theek h aap so jaiye...i am vry sorry..apko disturb kiya...ye neha bhi na...aap so jaiye...hum baki baten subah karenge...

Ram...han hum baki bate subah karenge...bas ek bat abhi karni h..

Priya...kya???

Ram...gudnight..!!..

Priya...oh...han gudnight..

Ram...are bat to suno puri...gudnight kehne se pehle m tumhe kuchh btana chahta hu...

Priya...kya???

Ram...aaj tumne jo black & white combination ki saari pehni thi..wo nayi li kya..??..mne pehle to nhi dekhi thi

priya muskurane lagti h..aapne dekha tha na

ram...han to..tumhe kya laga meri biwi itni khubsurat lag rhi thi aur m use dekhunga nhi...m to ye bhi bta sakta hu ki aaj tumne bindi phir se thodi tedi lagayi thi...exact position batau???

Priya smiles...hmm

ram kiss on her forehead...yha pr..aur tumhe pta h tumhara kajal bhi thoda sa fail gya tha...

Priya...kahan pe

ram kiss on her eye's corner...yha pr...aur tumhari lipstic bhi...

Priya...lipstic ko kuchh nhi hua tha...jhuth mt boliye..

Ram...achhhaaa????

Priya...han wo nhi faili thi...abhi tak waise hi h...

Ram...to theek h ab nhi rahegi..

Priya...(she push him) mmm..sona nhi h ab

ram...nhi ...ab to neend khul gyi...waise bhi ab ram wala pyar jag gya h to neend kaise aayegi..

Priya...hehehe...mr.kapoor..ho gya ab so jaiye...

Ram...are wah aise kaise so jau..pehle lipstic ka kam tamam to karne do rat me koi lipstic laga k sota h kya???..

Ufff..ab to ram babu ko rokna thoda mushkil h boss..to he kiss on her lips...& hold her tightly..aur kaha..

Ram...tum kaise bhi raho mujhe hamesha achhi lagti ho..pr taiyar hoke badi achhi lagti ho..aur ye ramwala pyar hamesha tumhara h aur iski jagah koi nhi le sakta...ye hamesha...tumhari saari tumhari bindi tumhare huk me atka hi rhega ...love u

priya...hahaha..i love u 2...aur atke rhna bhi chahiye wrna mere pas neha to h hi...

Ram...shutup uska to nam bhi mt lo...

Priya...hahaha...gudnight

dono ekdusre ki baho me so jate..mera bas yhi tak ka kam hota h yar...asusual...baki jiski jo marzi wo kare...next part me milenge with 2 rks...god knows how i tolrate them...

To b continue...

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PURVIVA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#936

Very nice n sweet update... Total Rayalicious... Thanks...

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#937

TFS

Very nice update..

Aaj kal blore ka mausam bahut hi romantic hai..aur upar se apne itni acchi update di...very nice thanku so much..

I liked ram wala pyar-hamesha saadi mein,bindi mein and hook mein atki hui pyar...hillarious...

bow down veena,...👏👏👏

Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#938

Mast update veena.. 👏 iss bar neha ki pagal panti ne kam kar diya..hahaha
Or ram wala pyar bhi bahut accha tha ❤️
Loved the line 'yeh ram wala pyar humesha tumari saari,bindi or huk mein atka hi rahega' ..lol
Thanx for pm