FF..'MSNT'PR57'PG148 NOTE ON PG 151 - Page 65

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Superb update veena loved the new definition of hate 👏
Raya romance is always a treat lekin iss bar yeh bhi pata chal gaya ki rishabh-saumya abhi tak 2 ke do hi kyun hai 😆
Ek aur baat veena tumne yeh toh bataya hi nhi ki machar her tha ya his 😉
Cont soon nd thanx for pm

A very Happy Holi to u veena

Originally posted by: sahana747

😆Your flow is keeping up with the current track,and the fact is it is better than the track.

I totally approve of your true sentiments that in bad times and when we are down in the dumps then only we realise the value of of life,love ,friendship ( here I am disappointed with vik- neha) and relationships and even a slight smile.

Phir bhi aap Ka lekh bade achhe lagthe hain.Thanks for pm.

part 37

"hospital me kamal"

Oh woow..chalo maine socha na tha ki kam se kam ek prediction to sach hui...akhir sid ko priya ne hi dekha...i so knew it...are boss BT ki heroin h always rocking...khair main to ye 6 mahine pehle hi soch liya tha..cvs ko sochne me bhi 6 mahine lag jate hain...anyways ab ise phir track k sath reunited karna padega... Chalo dekhte hain...

To ashwin ka atyachar chalu h...jisse hamari pyari priya faint ho gyi aur rambabu ki baho me aa gyi...hayeee what a scene..pr cvs bade idiot h koi kam pura nhi karte hain report pta nhi kab denge...gadhe kahin k...khair hum to hain hi spcl report bnane k liye...lol...

Priya ka no ata h..doctor checkup wagairh kark report agle din dene ko bolti hai...mr.kapoor ko ashwin ka phone aa jata h wo jana to nahi chahte the pr priya ne kaha ki wo sambhal legi to unhe jana pada...qki ashwin to ka**na h..rambabu ki bhi job chheen lega to garibi me ata gila ho jayega yar...anyways...priya doctor k cabin se nikal kr bahar aati h...tabhi uski nazar sidhant par padhti h...he found him as sidhant...wo uska peechha karne lagti h bt asusual kuchh dur jakar wo kahin ghayab ho jata h priya use dhundh nhi pati h...wo bht confuse rhti hai ki wo sid hi tha ya koi aur...khair idhr udhar dekhne k bad sid use kahin nhi milta h to wo wapas chali jati h...

Udhar sid aayesha k pas jata h...aur kehta hai ki opration ka time ho gya h ab tumhe yha se ot shift karenge...tum chaho to ek bar aur soch lo...aayesha kehti hai..ki usne faisla kar liya h aur wo ab use badlne wali nhi hai...wo abortion kara k hi rahegi use sid ki jindagi jyada pyari h...tabhi nurse aa jati h aur ayesha ko le jati h...sid ko whi rukne ko bolti hai...sid to asman me udh rha h...gadha kahin ka...khair opration ki sab taiyariya ho chunki hain ayesha ko dar bhi lag rha tha bt as usual pagal h to pagalpan to karegi hi...jaise hi doctor opration karne jati hain rampriya ot me ghus jate hain...

Ram...1 min doctor aap aisa nhi kar sakti

doctor...aap kaun hain aur andr kaise aa gye???apko pta nhi h ot me is tarah ana allow nhi hai...

Priya...hame achhi tarah se pta h..lekin apko shayad pta nhi h ki aap bina permission k abortion nhi kar sakti

doctor...aap hain kaun???

Priya...main ayesha ki behn hu

doctor ...to apki behn ne btaya nahi ki wo abortion karana chahti h...hum to uski marzi se hi kar rahe hain

priya...are doctor meri behn bht seedhi h bechari emotion me aake koi bhi kadam utha leti hai...kyun mr.kapoor

ram...han doctor darasal kisi ne ise behka diya tha...u know aajkl ki ladkiya figr consius & all that..to...

Priya ram ko dekh k muskurati h..

Priya...lekin hum jante hain ayesha dil se aisa nahi chahti hogi...kyun ayesha tum apne pyar ki nishani k sath aisa to nahi karna chahogi...are bhai isme ghalt kya h...tumne pyar kiya h koi pap thode hi h...aajkl k bachhe bhi na...

Ram...han doctor ye log bht jaldi behk jate hain...aap please do min bahar jayengi hum jara ayesha se confirm kar le...bhai ek jindgi ka sawal h...aur m samjhta hu ki ek doctor hone k nate aap bhi kuchh ghlt to nhi karna chahengi...

Doctor...sure sure aaplog baat kar lijiye...

Ayesha...are doctor meri baat to suniye

doctor...its ok ayesha ji hum apki situation samjh sakte hain u take ur time hum hain yhi...

Doctor bahar chali jati hai...actully hota ye hai ki jb sid priya ko nhi milta h to wo jane lagti h tabhi use ayesha dikh jati h apne room me to priya ruk jati h aur unki bate sun leti hai...phir wo ram ko phone karti h

priya...mr.kapoor maine apko bola tha na ki mne sidhant ko dekha tha

ram...han tumne ek bar kaha to tha lekin phir jindgi ne aisi karwat li ki sab badl gya aur m bhul hi gya tha...kyun kya hua???

Priya...mne aaj phir dekha sid ko

ram...kahan???

Priya..yahi hospital me aap jaldi se aa jaiye phir m apko sab btati hu...

Ram...par ashwin

priya...use bad me dekh lenge...aap jaldi aaiye...yha bht locha h..

Then ram aata h aur priya use sab btati hai...aur ab dono aayesha k samne hain...

Ayesha...how dare u ..tumlogo ki himmat kaise hui...mera bachha h chahe m iske sath jo karu tumlog kaun hote ho bich me bolne wale...koi haq nhi h tumlogo ka mujhpr aur meri jindgi par chale jao yha se...

Le padha ek aur jhannatedar chanta from priya...lol

priya...ek to ghlti karti ho upar se badtamizi kar rhi ho

ram...priya...relax m bat karta hu

priya...mr.kapoor dekh rhe hain ise ...iska deemag kharab ho gya h..

Ram...relax m dekhta hu..aur tum...tumhara deemag bht jyada kharab ho gya...jyada bakwas ki to abhi police ko bulaunga aur fraud k case me andr karwa dunga

ayesha...what???..maine kya fraud kiya h???

Ram...btata hu pehla fraud to tumne dhokhe se meri compny aur paise chhin liye..

Ayesha...are lekin wo to tumne khud diye the tumne mujhe

ram...kisne kaha??kisne dekha.??..kiske samne diye???

Ayesha...are sare gharwalo k samne aur priya di bhi to thi

ram...gharwale kiske hain???..ofcourse mere...priya kaun h...ofcourse meri biwi...ab btao kiske samne tumhe diye the mne paise aur proprty...

Ayesha...aap aisa nhi kar sakte...

Ram...bilkul kar sakta hu agr tumne sid ka pta nhi btaya to...

Ayesha ...m nhi janti

ram...theek h to ek aur case ban jayega...ek mujrim ko chhupane ka aur uske sath sambandh rakhne ka...ab bolo nhi janti...

Ayesha,...main to use room m chhod k aayi thi..

Ram...chalo room me...

Teeno wha jate hain par asusual sid wha rhta nhi h...dono phir aayesha puchhte hain to wo behosh ho jati h

ram...priya...jane do hum police ko inform kar dete hain wo khud dhundh legi

priya...are mr.kapoor ye natak kar rhi h

ram...kuchh bhi ho she is pregnent so we should carefull...

Tabhi ram ka phone bajta h

priya...kaun h???

Ram...whi ek aur musibat

priya...ashwin???

Ram...han...tum aisa karo ise ghar leke jao m use nipta k ata hu...

Priya...par mr.kapoor wo apko pareshan karega...

Ram...its ok i will handle him

priya...take care

ram...u tooo

to b continue...

Originally posted by: sahana747

Veenadi is aswin Ka bhi kaam thamam kar do na?

wow Priya ne Ayesha ko firse chanta mara 👏

nice update u written very well thx a lot