FF..'MSNT'PR57'PG148 NOTE ON PG 151 - Page 58

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Dsudipa thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
i think aswin baht jyada hi asman per ud raha hai
Priya ki haat ka ek thappd to banta hai Veena ji
u written very thx 4 d update pls continue soon
pls PM me nxt part

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi...ye thoda jaldi h na...hehehe...hota h hota h...kabhi kabhi kuchh achhe kam bhi krne chahiye jaise jaldi updates dene k...lol...

part 34

"aap chain se nhi baith sakte"

after that priya ram se bht naraz h qki ashwin ki wajah se aaj phir ram ne lunch nhi kiya upar se us ashwin ne alag hi deemag kharab kr rakha h..ram ko andanza tha ki priya naraz h isiliye wo jaldi jaldi kam khtm kr rha hota h priya k sath ghar jane k liye tabhi priya aake kehti h...

Priya...m ghar ja rhi hu

ram...mne bhi kaam khtm hi kar liya h chalte hain dono sath hi...

Priya...nahi koi jarurat nhi... h..aap aram se kam kariye jab tak man kare tab tak kariye...waise bhi m to bekar hi bolti rhti hu..kuchh fark to padna nhi h...kariye ,..m ja rhi hu...

Ram..ek min ruk jao...ye lo band kar diya...ho gya..ab chalo..

Priya aur ram dono jane lagte hain..tabhi ashwin unhe tokta h...

Ashwin...are wah shaadishuda koda kahan chala ek sath..

Priya pehle hi gusse me thi upr se ashwin ki bat pe use aur gussa aa jata h jaise hi wo use ek dhansu dialogue dene k mood me aati h ram uska hath pakad k rok leta h aur kehta h...

Ram...sir its 6'o clock..toh i think ki office ka time khtm ho gya h..lekin agr apke pas aur kam ho to aap bta sakte hain...waise bhi yha kam ki kadr hoti h...lekin yha ek aur bat h...ki yha k rules bht strict h aur sabhi k liye barabar h to obiously agr sabhi 9 se 6 ki duty krte hain to hum bhi unme se hi h...if i am not wrong...baki boss to aap hi h...to jo aap kahen...

Ashwin wha se look deke chala jata...ullu koi bhi look de dikhta ullu hi h...lol..but priya ko aur gussa aa jata h..are rambabu ne uska dialogue maar liya yar...vry bad...hahaha..anyways..priya hath chhuda k bahar chali jati h ram bhi bahar aata h..dono auto lete hain...ram bht chipak k baith jata h..to priya thoda sa alag ho jati h...bas faltu me rambabu ko luk de rhi hoti h jiska 1% bhi rambabu ko fark nhi padh rha hota h...auto jitna hil rha hota h rambabu usse jyada hil rhe hote hain aur hil hil k priya ko dhakka dene me unko bada maza aa rha tha... Priya ko gussa aa jata h..she shauted...

Priya..aap aram se nahi baith sakte hain..

Ram nodes & give shararti smile...nahi

priya ko hasi ane lagti h to wo chehra ghuma k baith jati h...tabhi autowala auto rok deta h...

Priya...tumhe kya hua???

Autowala...madm apka society aa gya

priya...oh

ram again smile on her...dono building ki lift me jate hain...tabhi lift band ho jati h..

Priya...are ab ise kya hua??

Ram...mne band karwa diya..

Priya ghurti h...ram muskurata h...

Priya...pta nhi ye lift kab sahi hogi..???

Ram...jab tum muskuraogi...

Priya...what???

Ram...han priya..are priya ki building ki lift h to priya k muskurane se hi chalegi na..

Priya..mr.kapoor deemag mt khrab kariye...

Ram..are sach me yar...yakin na ho to muskura k dekh lo...

Priya...achha??...ok...eee...muskura diya nhi to chali...

Ram...are ye wali hasi thode hi na...isko aisi waisi lift samjha h kya..isko pta h kaun si bnawti hasi h aur kaun si dil se wali...dil se muskurao tab chalegi..

Priya...mr.kapoor ..aap...???

Ram..are yha koi option nhi h...lift bhi priya ki trh jiddi h..hasogi tabhi chalegi...are cmon..ab hasi aa rhi h to kyun bekar me dabane ki koshis kr rhi...cmon cmon...dekho yha h...yha aa gyi..are le ye to bahar hi aa gyi...

Priya muskurane lagti h aur lift chal deti h...

Ram...dekhaaa...bola tha na..

Priya shocked ho jati h...sachhi me mr.kapoor

aur dono gale lag jate hain..thodi si lift ki tanhai ka fayda uthana to bnta h boss...tabhi lift rukti h...dono bahar nikalte hain samne liftman khada rhta h...

Ram...thank u sirji...bhagwan apko har janm me liftman bnaye

liftman..wlcm sir..aur apko hr jnm me meri hi lift me fasaye...

Ram...hahaha

priya...mr.kapoor ??...???...sachhi me apne roka tha lift ko???

Ram...to kya m jhuth bol rha tha

priya...mr.kapoor u r too much..

Ram...cmon yar ab itni pyari biwi ko mnane k liye itna to kar hi sakta hu main...achha ab andr chale jara dekhen nana nani ka kya hal h

priya...hahaha..han bhai pihu nam ka hathiyar jo chhod rakha h yhan,,

dono doorbell bjate hain..pihu door open karti h..dono sath me bolte hain...hiii

pihu...mumma..(pihu priya se chipak jati h)

priya...aww mera bachha...kaisa h

pihu...theek hu

priya...khana khaya ya nhi...aaj nani k menu me kya tha pihu k liye

pihu...aaloo ki sabji aur roti...

Priya...woow...phir to pihu ka tummy bht khush ho gya hoga

pihu...han bht

priya...ok now papa se bhi to milo..

Pihu...papa

ram pihu ko god me utha leta h...jo ki thoda mushkil rhta h..

Ram..to rockstar aaj nani ko jyada pareshan to nhi kiya...

Pihu...mne nhi kiya aaj nani ne pihu ko pareshan kiya...

Ram...achha..aur nani ki beti ne papa ko pareshan kiya...to we will take rvenge...

Pihu...ok ...but how???

Ram..aaj dinner k bad hamare ghar pr kulfi party hogi...but...mumma aur mumma ki mumma ko party me invitation nhi h...

Priya...mr.kapoor this is tooo much...

Ram...what tooo much..tumne bhi too much hi kiya tha...

Shipra...damadji aap pihu ki mumma k sath kuchh bhi kar sakte hain pr mumma ki mumma k sath aisa kuchh nhi kar sakte qki mumma ki mumma nhi hoti to mumma kahan se aati..aur aap pyar kisse karte..

Priya...ufff ma tum kabhi nhi sudhrogi..

Ram...sahi keh rhi hain aap...chalo bhai...mumma ki mumma ko chhod dete hain phir kabhi le lenge revenge...par mumma ko to nahi chhodne wale...

to b continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
CVs aapke jitne brainee aur entertaining nahi hai... mark my word.

oye teri maine miss kardiya?
Rambabu zero size? LOL
Thappad maarna-ek naya kaam..😆
Priya ko kaam nahi dega yaar Ashwin--
dekha nahi abhi bhi line maarne ka sochta hai..aur wo bhi Golu kapoor ke absence dekha na kal ke episode mein...

Rambabu chill hai aajkal--aap ko pata hai kyon kyonki madam wo 'baniya hai' 'Binnes man' (lol thodi dailogue baaji main bhi copy karoo hindi movie se,) so ram babu apna energy waste nahi karte jab tak sahi waqt nahi aata hai barsane ke liye...Wait n Watch Ashwin ko ram babu Gyan pradaan karenge very soon-- just the way as THE RAM KAPOOR...😊

Thanku-- main ye soch ke dukhi ho rahi thi ki aapka 'Pyar mein hota hai kya jaadu' khatam hogaya.. jaise kuch missing lag raha tha...but aap phir se MSNT ke saath aa tapki...

loved it 👏thx...


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Posted: 12 years ago
this was so so nice.
priya ka gussa hona aur ram ka manana.is always icing on the cake.
love the lift scene.
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊😊 lift wala scene ultimate tha, kash asli mein bhi kuch milta aisa dekhne ko, par nahi kismat kahan jo CVs kabhi kuch accha dikha de.

Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowowowowowowowow👏

yaar make sure ab to ram ki tummy aur bummy kam ho😆 common yaar..

btw ye revenge lena hain to us condaaa se leloo😡 shipry ne kya kiyaa😆
continue soon
Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago
Siacutie thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum revenge part was cute👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
update was very nice n well written...
Dsudipa thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update u written very well revenge part was very cute
thx 4 pm pls continue soon...
Edited by Dsudipa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww!, kinna sweet hain ji, mainu bohot pasand ayi, u are too gud Veenaji, CVS guyz plz learn something from her, ab jaldi jaldi update diya kijiye

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