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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

kya baat hai veena jaldi jaldi update de rahi ho.

mere liye toh achha hai yaar.
Ye kya kahan rok diya. ye achhi baat nahi.
rain romance ke baad aage ka kya irada hai.
continue soon. PM kahan hai bhai.


sorry dear time ki kami ki wajah se nhi kr payi pm...next time pakka karungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

Ayyye hayyye yeh bin mausam barishwali romance toh bada pyara tha, ab mujhe bhi kuch zyada hi pyar aa raha hain inn dono pe, u r too gud Veenaji, continue plz ASAP



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Posted: 12 years ago
part 30

"hua na hamara family fvrt"

Priya change krne jati h ram bhi peechhe peechhe jata h..pihu k sone ka mast fayda uthate hain dono..ram priya ko pichhe se bahon me le leta h...

Priya..uff mr.kapoor aaj lagta h subah subah apne pakka irada kr liya h mujhe pareshan karne ka...

Ram...ha...ekdm pakka irada...can i???

Priya...what???

Ram..can i start my task...

Priya...hhaaww..about what???

Ram..about love u yar..

Priya...oh to pyar bhi puchh k karenge...

Ram...o teri...to pehle kyun nhi bola yar main faltu me time wst kr rha tha...

Priya...achha chhodiye mujhe thand lag rhi h..puri gili ho gyi hu...dekhiye na

ram...kab se dekh hi to rha hu..now its a time to action baby...thand lag rhi hai???

Priya look at on ram...full to masti k mood me uske ekdm kareeb aake pakad leta h..

Ram...abhi bhi thand lag rhi h

priya..hmmm..priya can feel his evry bit of "garm sanse"...) thodi thodi

ram kiss on her lips...abhi bhi..

Priya...hmmm

ram take her on bed...cover her by his strong body & say...abhi bhi..priya ansr nhi krti h kewal rambharose khud ko chhod deti h...lol..

Thodi der bad darwaze pe knock hoti h..bahar se pihu shor kr rhi hoti h...

Pihu...mumma darwaza kholo na...mummmaaa

priya...shittt...mr.kapoor pihu uth gyi h...

Ram...hmm ...tooo

priya...tooo mtlb ??? Bahar jana hoga na

ram...to jao na

priya...hhuhh how mean na...apna kam ho gya ..bs..

Ram...are meri jan bhadkti kyun ho bhai bolo na kya chahiye..

Priya...meri saadi dijiye udhr se

ram...hmmm

priya..aur mujhe chhodiye bhi...

Ram...ok boss..ye lo chhod diya..bs ek last kiss...

Priya...uff..khane wali cheez h kya???..pet hi nhi bharta h??

Ram...hahaha..wo to h..ab late nhi ho rha h??

Priya...ufff...priya ek kiss krk chali jati h..ram phir se blanket odh k so jata h...

Priya bahar aati h..baby aap uth gye??

Pihu..ha par aaplog abhi tak so rhe the??

Ufff..ye bachhe bhi na hr cheez ka hisab chahiye hota h inhe...

Priya..aaa..wooo..rat ko late ho gya tha na..tooo ..achha chalo aap brush karo pehle..

Ram...hi rockstar gudmorning..

Pihu..gudmorning papa..

Pihu balcony me aati h aur dekhti h barish ho rhi h...aur chillane lagti h...

Pihu...mummmaaa..mummaaa..

Priya bhag k aati h...kya hua baby???

Pihu...wo dekho

priya...kya???..kahan???

Pihu...are mumma barish ho rhi h

tabhi ram bhi aa jata h...kya hua???sab theek to h???

Priya..ha theek h bas apki beti pe apka jo asar h na wo kabhi kabhi dikh jata h..apdono bap beti mil k kisi din mera heartattack karaoge...

Ram..haye meri jan tumhara heart ko kuchh ho jayega to hamare heart ka kya hoga???

Priya..achha bas ...haaa...ho gya ...

Pihu..are mumma dekho na barish apka fvrt h na..

Priya...ha meri ma bht fvrt hai..

Pihu...pr mujhe aur papa ko to nhi pasand h...h na papa..

Ram...are kyun nhi pasand h...bht pasand h

pihu...pr mumma ne to bola tha ki apko nhi pasand h...

Ram...dekho pihu its vry easy...mummy ka fvrt barish..ok...aur papa ki fvrt mumma..aur pihu k fvrt...

Pihu...mumma aur papa...

Ram...to jo mumma ka fvrt wo sbka fvrt..to hua na ye hamara family fvrt...to barish aur mumma...

Pihu...bade achhe lagte hain...

Ram..hahaha

priya dono ki badmashi pe hasti rhti hai aur apni kismat bht naaz krti h ki aaj zindgi me uske pas wo cheez h jo jeene k liye sabse jaruri h...apno ka sath aur pyar...

Priya...achha bht ho gyi bap beti ki nautanki ab jaldi se taiyar ho jao jake wrna sab late ho jayenge..

Ram pihu ek sath bolte hain...cmon mom chill yar..barish me school kaun jaata h??

Priya...main aur pihu aur aap office jate hain..m apko sara din tolrate nhi karne wali hu...

Ram...achhaaa jii!!...

Priya...hehehe...chaliye yar

ram..ok baba tum chalo hum abhi aate hain...

Priya andr jati h aur wha se hi ram pihu ki masti enjoy krti rhti h...

Ram...pihu thoda sa bhinga du tumhe

pihu...no

ram...please please

pihu..no no

ram...thoda sa

pihu...nooo papa...mumma bachao.. (hehehe..ye mere shona bachha ka fvrt dialogue h..m jb bhi use irritate krti hu he always shauting ...mummmaa bachhhaao..lol..i am loving it so much)...

Zindagi adjustment aur pyar dular k sath aage badh rhi h...jindgi h to tammnaye bhi h aur tammnaye hai to unhe pura karne ki chah bhi h...aur jaha chah hai to wha koi na koi rah to nikal hi jati h...ram apni family k sath khush to bht h..par usne zindgi me itna aish aram aur life ka aisa standrd dekha hua h ki use hamesha yhi lagta h ki jb tak akela tha uske pas sab kuchh tha aur aaj jb wo apni family k liye sab kuchh krna chahta h to uske hath khali h...koi bat nhi rambabu jindgi h..pehle cheezo se bhari thi to sath k liye adhuri thi..ab sath mil gya h to cheeze to jarurato k hisab se aati hi jayengi..agar insan k pas sabkuchh rhega to life me needs nhi rhengi aur agr needs nhi hongi to insan to jeena hi chhod dega boss..to lage raho...chhoti chhoti bato me bht badi badi khushiya hoti h aur sabse badi khushi hoti h jb hum wo khushi dhundh lete hain...har kisi ko kuch na kuchh jarurat hoti h aur jisko kuchh ki jarurat nhi hoti hai to wo khurafat karte hain jaise pyar..koi kam nhi h to chalo time pas k liye pyar kr lete hain...aah i nvr undrstand..pyar pe time barbad karte kaise hain log...anyways..rampriya bhi lage hue hain chhoti chhoti bato me badi badi khushiya dhundhne me...har din kuchh naya aur anokha ho jata h jo bada hi achha lagta h...

To b continue

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Posted: 12 years ago
veena what to say... u have sooo good sense of writing..

it was cute.. sooo beautiful when raya do romance in ur ff..uff kya kahooon ram babu ki romance wowww bahut tand lag rahi hain😳 ram haina😉 to keep u warm.. mr kapoor give me sari he says give me kiss😳 omg that was sooo 😳 u were making me blush through out the update... pihu was soo cute and raya convo with pihu tooo

itna achha kaise liksakthi hoo muje bhi bataooo ..

baarish ka mausam with raya and pihu... want to see them dance together in the rain..

the last words of ur words were really touching 😳 😊

u write sooo nice...👏 aur liko waiting for next update
Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Veena Love U yaar...🤗 kitna achha likheti hai aap oh my god

Ram..can i start my task...

Priya...hhaaww..about what???

Ram..about love u yar..

Priya...oh to pyar bhi puchh k karenge...

Abhi bhi aap ke RamBabu question/answer mein hi atke hue hai.. business deal confirm hone tak aage nahi badhenge 😆



.priya ansr nhi krti h kewal rambharose khud ko chhod deti h...lol..

rambharose haan Loved it...👏


Priya...uff..khane wali cheez h kya???..pet hi nhi bharta h??

Natkhat Priya koi mauka nahi chodti Rambabu ko romantic banane ka



Ufff..ye bachhe bhi na hr cheez ka hisab chahiye hota h inhe...
😳



"koi bat nhi rambabu jindgi h..pehle cheezo se bhari thi to sath k liye adhuri thi..ab sath mil gya h to cheeze to jarurato k hisab se aati hi jayengi..agar insan k pas sabkuchh rhega to life me needs nhi rhengi aur agr needs nhi hongi to insan to jeena hi chhod dega boss..to lage raho...
koi kam nhi h to chalo time pas k liye pyar kr lete hain...aah i nvr undrstand..pyar pe time barbad karte kaise hain log.."

Iske liye to main aapko bata nahi sakti aap kitni suljhi hui writer bilkul hamari suljhi hui priya ..
Zindagi ki sachaayi darshati ho aap...
Its take the privilege to honour you as the 'Charlie Chaplin' of IF (BALH) - logoan ko kitna hasaati ho saath mein jeevan ke satya ko bhi dikha dete ho...
aap such mein grt ho yaar kabhi bhi track nahi chodti ho ..Love u yaar
Hats offf


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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣Khud ko Rambharose chod dethi hai.What a clever twist of words.
Pyar karne me time waste karte hain? Kyon boss itna mayusi.Cheer up.Zindagi Ab baaki hai.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update u written very well looking frwd d nxt pls update soon 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
as always very beautiful update di...
loved every bit of it...
superb masti of ram n pihu
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Posted: 12 years ago
I always loved ur punch lines, lekin what I like most us that ur view point, aap jo sochte ho woh aap bejhijak kehre ho aur itni khoobsurati ke saath pesh karte ho ke padne ke baad sirf WAH hi nikalta hain, sach bolu, hum toh aapke updates ke liye intezaar me rehte hain, I really really appreciate, chaliye choddiye zyada emotional hi gaya, but seriously I mean it, continue plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was really cute i had a huge smile after reading this tq veena di

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