FF ~ Those Lost 5 Years ~ part.17_ pg.108_ 08.Oct

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haribol79

@haribol79

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Glad u decided to continue... Anu.. loved it...
RaYa ko toh RaYa bhi juda hain sarkte!

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parul khare

@parulkhare13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

WOW kya likha hai again an awesome update my just fabulous full of emotions love and mystery ...loved each and every part of it from beginning to end just perfect ...

aaj toh bilkul power pack update thi saray emotion daal diyay tunay yaar too good

the way ram broke was too good at least usko realize toh hua ki kitna galat karnay ja raha tha loved ram and rajat conversation

AUR yay kya PRIYA KO TRANQUILIZER KIsnay diya yaar priya khud toh lay gi nahi kaun kar sakta hai jisnay bhi na uski toh kya ab tu ekta ki tarah MYSTERY BHI dalnay lag gayi abhi twist ka bhoot tha ab mystery ka GOOD I LIKE IT par yaar priya kitna sah rahi hai yaar pls ussay kuch honay matt dena plss and last part that was OUTSTANDING really you have written so well ki baar baar wahi padhi jaa rahi hoon so beautifully written each and every emotions was so perfect and adorable the way he was crying on her was so touching yaar fabulous again i am speech less aur last part that was just Outstanding perfect ,beautiful it touched my heart yaar so touchy when priya entwined her hand and spoke her first word and that was ramm ufff that was too good and sweet & tooo goood loved it and love u my WRITING QUEEN ur are fabulous thank u for writing this FF

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sss283

@sss283

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#723

sorry for being late dear..
glad you continued...
aww love the efforts made by cady,rajat and ayesha to bring raya back together...
ab next part jaldi se update karo na...

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jaysree18

@jaysree18

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: Anamika163

agayi..?? nautanki.. tere wajah se yeh sab horaha hai😡 chal chod.. pagal tu hai toh main kaunsi normal hu🤣 thnk u so much jaanu.. ab jaldi jaldi update kar ke khatam kardungi.. no more waiting... u knw i was upset with da last days' epis.. isiliye yaha pe bhadas nikala😆 love u too muuaaahhh🤗

Nautanki??? aur mere wajese eh sab?? lo kuch to accha kam kya maine😉 jaldise update karegi yeh samajh ayi par khatam kardegi???? nhi tu aisa nhi karsakti... meh kya k liye wait karungi 😭 are epi ke wajese to sab upset hai... tu jab chahe continue kar... par plzzz khatam mat kar... aur abhi next part k liye rukh rhi hu abhi...😉

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Eram

@viny_queen

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#725

u r making me crazy by ur update like this i m sitting

and wait 4 update

i have tears in my eyes out of

joy ...how turely they love eachother

keep rockin

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Lipsha

@lipshaa

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Oh Thats an pretty Good update. I like cady's character in ur ff. She is strong.

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Anamika

@Sakshi_Deewani

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: lipshaa
Oh Thats an pretty Good update. I like cady's character in ur ff. She is strong.

thnk u Lipsha🤗

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Shweta

@ShwetaVaidya

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

First of all congratulations dear...
n d way u depicted Ram's emitions... jst hatts off yaar... Beautifully written which touched my Heart...
love u yaar...

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#729

That was superbbb.. Atladt ramrealised the imp of priya in his life and how much he loves her... Plzzz continue soon...

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Birdy91

@Birdy91

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#730

Yayyy.. Kya baat h badi jaldi h tjhe isey khtm krne ki... tbi itni jaldi Jaldi update de rhi h na... 😭 😭 Stupiddd Rula Diya Mjhe... Awww my cutiiee Piee Golu...Kya halat kr di uski... 😲 Woaaahhh... bt i love it... 😉 Sb kuch bhut accha lga meko isme... kya kya btau??? Priya's attemp to suicide proves Dat vo sirf Ram ki hai.. Agr golu ki nai toh Rajjo ki bhi Nai... 🤣 Cady n rajat's realisation ki Ye thoda jyada ho gaya... peehu's sweetness... N priya... 😭 i was njoying it bt Rula diya re... 😉
love you Poppa..😆

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