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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Oneandall
Sorry for the late comment!!!

Maaf kardo na

getting to the updates... well what can i say... You are Awesome... I was soo happy when i read that have finally decided to get married. after all what's written is bound to happen...

ab jaldi se next part update karo...

oh yeah i forgot to mention I LOVED the part where they were writing their names on the paper... tooo cute!!

Hey Sheetal... Thanks a lot babes...
Glad u took out time to read and comment.. No probs if ur late.. u should be the one to maaf karofy me coz havent been commenting on urs regularly.. But believe me.. I read each update and wait desperately for the next...

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: sss283
Hey that was awesome...good luck with your interviews...
will wait till your free😛

Hey Subu...
Thanks a lot babes..
Love u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: tasshuu
awesome

Hey Thanks Subu!!!!!!!

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Part 5

After nih left, Kk went to her room. AK was sitting with files around him... Lost in work...
KK: ye nih samajhti kya h apne aap ko... Priya se mili b nhi h aur uski burayi kar rhi h...
AK: arre kya hua darling ji...
KK: mai kya soch rahi thi... Ke kal sudheerji aur priya ko ghar bula lu...aur apne saare relaTives ko bhi bula lete h... So that priya can meet all of them!!
AK: hmmm
KK: Kya hmm... Kuch toh kahiye na?
AK: Haan?? Kya hua?
KK: app bhi na... Meri baat pe kabhi dhyaan nhi dete...
Ak: arre nahi baba... Haan... Kal bula lo sabko.. Priya ko sabse milwa lete hai... Waise bhi maa ko uss se milna hai... Theek hai!!!

Sudheer on the other hand was so happy that he purchased sone sweets and went to TOFEL... Priya was in a lecture when the peon came and called her out.. She rushed to the staffroom and saw her dad there...
Priya: Papa.. Aap yahaan??
Just then the princi entered...
Princi: i have an announcement to make...
Neha(collegue.. The chinchin one if u remember het.. If u dont, read the first chapter): sir dont tell me extra classes lena padega.. Please.
Princi: arre nahi... Good news hai... Iss mahine sabko bonus mai dunga...
Neha: matlab priya maan gayi shaadi k liye!!!
She went forward and hugged priya tight...
Neha: im sooo happy for u priya... Finally... Uncle sweet se kaam nhi chalega... Mujhe treat chaiye!!!
Sudheer: haan milega na...
At that point.. Harish entered the room...
Harish: arre... Kiss baat par mithahiyaan bat rhi h... Mujhe bhi toh batao!!
Neha: priya shaadi ke liye maan gayi...
Harish hung his face and left from there...
All were looking at him shocked when a ting on sudheers phone brought them back to reality...
The call was from KK inviting them over to KM... Sudheer looked at Priya who gestured a no... Sudheer turned towards the phone...
Sudheer: haan krishna ji.. Hum aa jayenge..
That night... Priya was tossing around in her bed and so was ram on his...
The next day... Ram was out with his friends..
Vikram: waise.. Aunty ka call aya tha... She said tera phone nhi lag raha... Actually wo ghar aa rhi h...
Ram: wo kon??
Vikram: meri bhabhi...
Ram: what!!!!
He ran out of the room and dialled priya's no.. She was right outside KM when she got a call from an unknown number...
Priya: hello... Whos this??
Ram: Mai ram..
Priya: haan.. Sorry.. Wo mere paad aapka no. Nhi tha.. Aap ko mera kha se mila?? Mere permission k bina mera no??
Ram: arre meri ma.. Im sorry.. Bas... Ab meri baat suno.. Kha ho tum??
Priya: aapke ghar k bahr..
Ram: what!!! Accha suno... Mujhe aane me der lag jayegi.. Tum mere family ka population dekh k darr mat jana...
Priya: kya pollution... Hello hello...
Priya and sudheer entered the house.. And they were greeted by a crowd.. Priya almost fainted looking at the number of ppl around..
Kk came out and hugged her... And led them in... She introduced priya to the entire family..just then... Nih came in with ayesha...
Nih: haan.. Toh krishna.. Mai bhi toh dekhu teri hone wali bahu.ko...
Kk:Bahu nhi h wo meri... Beti h...
Nih: huh!! Meri ayesha se khoobsurat nhi ho sakti...
Kk: wo tumhari ayesha se khi zyada khoobsurat h aur samajhdaar b...
She called out to Priya.. And looking at her stunning beauty.. Nih felt jelous... She however did not let the fact reflect on her face..
Priya: hi.. Im priya..
Nih showed her attitude..
Nih: huh... Pata h krishna.. Meri beti model h.. Supermodel... Pata h kitni izzat h uski... Log usse salaam karte h...
Priya: accha.. Kya naam h aapki beti ka??
Nih: ayesha.. Ayesha malhotra
Priya: maine toh kabhi naam nhi suna...
Nih: tum kya sunogi... Tum jaise middle class log kya jano.. U uneducated class... Koi standard hi nhi.h...
Priya: waise aap ki jankari k liye bata du.. Mere papa ka naam h sudheer sharma.. Sharma industries ke maalik.. Wo toh mom k death k baad dad depression me chale gaye thhe isiliye business bechni padi.. Aur kya kaha aap ne?? Uneducated.. Aap ko bata du.. Im an oxford graduate.. Aap aur aap ki beti se kahi zyada qualified hu.. Teacher isiliye hu because its my hobby.. My passion.. Corporate world m hoti toh pata nhi kha hoti aaj.. So think before u speak the next time..
Nih's face fell and she left in a huff.. Tagging ayesha along...
That night.. Back in sharma house..
Priya: papa.. Mai yaha shaadi nhi kar rahi.. Ek toh kitne log h.. Upar se kaise chipku h.. Har baat pe gale lag jate h.. Shee... Its irritating...
Sudheer: par beta.. Ye koi reason toh nhi hui na shaadi cancel karne ki...
Priya avoided the talk and was walking towards her room when there was a call on her cell..
Ram: hi.. Wo im sorry... Darr gayi hogi na itne logo ko dekh k..
Priya: good that u called.. Mai aap hi ko call karne wali thi.. Ye kehne ki shadi cancel.. Kitne log h... Aur aap ne ye baat chupayi.. Not done..
And the phone got cut..
There was a call again on priyas phone..
Ram: haan.. Point1.. Maine ye baat jaan kar nhi chupayi.. Aisa koi topic nhi nikla isiliye nhi bataya.. Aur log apni weakness chupaye h.. Strength nhi.. Meri family meri taakat h.. Mera ego h.. Aur mere ego ko koi hurt kare mujhse bardaasht nhi hoga...
And point2.. Ab shaadi cancel.. And disconnected the phone...
Priya was shocked.. She however managed to keep calm and sleep...
The next day, KK came to sharma house.. And priya opened the door..
Priya: aap..
Kk: haan beta.. Wo aaj mere friend k ghar pooja thi.. And i wanted to take u along.. Aaj saturday h.. Pata h ke tume chhutti hai.. Wo.. Ram se tumhara number nhi lia tha.. Warna call karke aati..
Priya: arre nhi aisi baat nhi h.. Aap jab chahe aa sakti h..
Sudheer heard voices and came out..
Sudheer: arre samdhan ji.. Aap.. Baithiye..
Priya went into the kitchen and sudheer followed her after making kk sit comfortably..
Sudh: kyaa baat h beta.. Lagta h ram ne baat nhi ki h ghar pe..
Priya: haan papa.. Aur ab ye mujhe pooja me le jana chahti h..
Sudh: toh jakar aa na beta.. Kya problem h??
Priya nodded her head and went out..
Priya: maa.. Ek problem h..
Kya baat h beta?? Pareshaan lag rhi ho??
Priya: maa wo mujhe saari pehn na nhi aata..
Kk laughed..
Kk: bas itni si baat.. Chalo.. Mai pehna deti hu.. Come...
Sudheer was in his room.. Looking at shipras photo when his eyes fell on a beautiful saree clad girl standing at the door.. Tears welled up his eyes when he saw her.. He hugged priya and kissed her forhead.. Boht khoobsurat lag rhi ho...
Soon priya left with kk...
The same evening.. At kapoor mansion...
Kk was in her room arranging things when ram came in..
Kk: arre ram.. Aa gaya tu.. Pata h.. Wo mrs mehra h na.. Unki bahu ne alag ghar pe rehna ka faisla kia h.. Pata nhi ye kya naya shuru kar dia h aaj kal ke bacchon ne.. Shukar h.. Apni priya aisi nhi h.
Ram: maa meri baat toh suno..
Kk: kya sunu.. Pata h.. Priya kitni acchi h.. Aaj wo mere..
Ram: maa.. Stop.. Meri baat ump h.. Dhyaan se suno.. Please.. Wo mai aur priya..
Ram was abt to say more when there was a hand carrying a tray of snacks and tea in front of them.. Ram looked at her face and kept staring... Yes.. It was priya...
Kk clicked her fingers a couple of times before the two of them came back to reality..
After sometime...
Ram and priya on the way to sharma house.. Dadi asked ram to drop her home...
Ram: so the shaadi is still on i guess..
Priya: wo.. Im sorry.. For what i said yesterday.. Mera parivaar mere aur papa tak seemit raha h.. Achanak itne log dekh kar mai darr gayi thi.. I didnt mean to.. Par aaj jab maa ke sath mai pooja mai gayi..Mujhe accha laga ye jamkar ke mai apne papa ke alawa bhi kisi ke lie special hu.. Nad trust me.. It felt great.. Aaj pata chala ke family support kya hota hai..
Ram: Aur mom ke lie bhi accha hua.. Bahu jo aa rhi hai sewa karne... Waise.. U llok beautiful in saree..
Priya shied and blushed..
Priya: thanks..
Finally, they reached Priya's apartment.. Ram got off the car and like a true gentle man, held the door open for Priya.. She came out andlooked at Ram.. Who was unintentionally admiring her beauty.. Priya kept looking at him too when her phone bought them back to reality..
Priya: i should leave nao.. Papa ka call hai.. Bye.. and thanks for everything..
She turned around and walked towards the porch.. And Ram kept looking at her retreating figure..

Precap:
Ram and Priya decide not to have any sort of celebration while the families plan otherwise!!!

Edited by RaYaKapoor - 13 years ago

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Awww... Firstly an update after a long time dear...And the updarte was sooo goood...Both of them have solid egos...And loved the way Priya gave reply to Niharika...But most of alll love the last part...It was so cute sweet and a simple convo between Ram and Priya...Loved it...❤️

Thanks for the PM and the update...😃

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Shilpa Venketesh

@Mahaalwayscool

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

awesome update dear... continue asap

Edited by shilly - 13 years ago

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: kaparikh1
Awww... Firstly an update after a long time dear...And the updarte was sooo goood...Both of them have solid egos...And loved the way Priya gave reply to Niharika...But most of alll love the last part...It was so cute sweet and a simple convo between Ram and Priya...Loved it...❤️
Thanks for the PM and the update...😃

Hey Krutika... I know its been long.. But dammn busy these days yaa... Typed this out sitting in train and bus.. Just for u guys... Glad u like it.. and thanks for reading and commenting..

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: shilly
awesome update dear... continue asap

Hey shilpa..
Thanks for commenting..
And happy u like it..

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Lavanya

@Lavi_961

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Wow! Totally loved it! Cntnue sn..❤️

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: RaYaKapoor

Hey Krutika... I know its been long.. But dammn busy these days yaa... Typed this out sitting in train and bus.. Just for u guys... Glad u like it.. and thanks for reading and commenting..

Hey Priya its ok yaar...i can understand...But u typed it while sitting in bus and train...Awesome yaar...Thanks for it... U r frm Mumbai rite...??