FF: The Thing called Love- Part 23-PG 114

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luvsakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Awww that was tooo cute ...
hmmm waiting for next part

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Siacutie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

neha ram to angry young man ban gaya he

wats the relation b/w rajiv @ priya 😕

continue soon😃

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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

I was reading with zapped attention...

.Ram moved his head forward a little...he was in proximity with her luscious lips which were inviting, the surrounding and the dimmed light providing the perfect setting for them. Priya sensed what was about to happen next and closed her eyes in anticipation...

and then this...

To be continued...

And I wanted to KILL you at that very instant!! 😡

aaargh! Why did u hv to stop at that CRUCIAL point???

But thanks sooo much yaar Neha! Two updates in a day. Thanks so much!

I absolutely love the way you write convos. So natural. shows your grip on writing. Lovely flow. 👏

But pls yaar, agli baar se aisa mat karna.. 😛

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Evan

@-evan-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#244

wow it was a lovely update ❤️

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balhfan4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Awww...thanks for making them dance together and now I have my fingers crossed for their kiss😉 but I don't know why I have a feeling that this magical moment is going to be interrupted (pls don't)...I am falling for this Ram and Priya and want more romance..superb👏

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Aweee Thanks Neha, Muwaaa 🤗 A big hug to you, Finally dashing Ram and beautiful Priya 😳danced, wow, so romantic.❤️. loved the last part so much.. waiting for the kiss, I am really falling for this couple.. Sigh! .Amazing write up gal, really lovely, you made my day, now I can not wait for the next part..