FF:'Yet Unknown.'Part-30 up. on pg.104(14/02/13)

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sss283

@sss283

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

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omg penned down so beautifully...i have no words to describe the beauty😲

you can visualise every detail ...

raya moments were touching and sweet

ram got to see another side of priya...🥳

Edited by sss283 - 12 years ago

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deepa

@deepa1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Nic update... happy valentine day...

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00Princess00

@00Princess00

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

it was indeed awesome...

i cn imagine each nd every expressions of ram priya!!

u r a fab writer!!

nd wish u a happy valentines day dear

Edited by 00Princess00 - 12 years ago

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name2saakshi

@name2saakshi

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

so lovely update priya dance me 😲like ram

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Anjali

@Pinkjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#755

One of the fav dance form of mine "lavni" u made my day dii.. The whole pallu wala scene toh was smooth like butter and just beautiful... And coming to the lavni, from start to end it was perfect.. The pics, video and the discription of the dance, helped me soo much that i can almost see it happening infront of my eyes.. Poor ram, priya has danced but i am sure ram la lagli hichki priya cha dance bagoon.. Trupti di tumhi tar pharun takle , kaye super duper update hota.. Maja dil tar garden garden jhala.. Ata phata phat laukar update kara..

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

awesome update

pallu scene was very nice

pics of lavani outfits is very nice. I can imagine priya wearing those outfits.

good song for lavani.

continue soon and thanks for pm

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Krutika

@kaparikh1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

Speechless...Left with no words to describe how fabulous the update dear...I just loved it...Plzzz continue...

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Thank u so much ...

U really made my day...

Lavani was nicely explained supported by Pics.

U have tremendous potential in writing and describing the things...

some of the things i liked very much like RaMk saying -My actor nahi hu , the biscuit part

and also the pallu part.. how romantic...yet descent one

Thx

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haribol79

@haribol79

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

Hey Trupti.. Finally got a Lavni dance from Priya...
thank you thank you...

I could almost imagine Priya doing it.. Really Sakshi will look awesome beauty if she do this particular marathi get up and do a lavani.. (alas.. in our dreams! )

keep rocking.. and Happy Valentine's day..

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Suman

@_CandyCream_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

OMG! Great update! I could imagine the scene and every tiny little detail that you mentioned.. Fab writing! 😃 Really beautiful part! Had a smile throughout the update!

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