FF:'Yet Unknown.'Part-30 up. on pg.104(14/02/13) - Page 51

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Posted: 12 years ago
ala ..
well you said about chemistry with J.so just pen down what you felt 😆</font>[/B]
neel do you really trust on my writing so much? ❤️ wait...wait...wait 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update, but a short one😭. continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saniya9919

ala ..
well you said about chemistry with J.so just pen down what you felt 😆</font>[/B]

neel do you really trust on my writing so much? ❤️ wait...wait...wait 😉


Are you going to give update or not ...If you say yes than i will be right awake for the update ...
Otherwise will sleep ...Give me reply plzzz...


Yes i do trust on your writinf especially soft wala .. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

neel do you really trust on my writing so much? ❤️ wait...wait...wait 😉




Are you going to give update or not ...If you say yes than i will be right awake for the update ...
Otherwise will sleep ...Give me reply plzzz...


Yes i do trust on your writinf especially soft wala .. 😉
Dear Neel, please wait for sometime(wait for few more hours..)...😭 I have to write soft wala when you said about N & J.😛😉
I am so sorry, didn't log on IF yesterday night...You were waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
when u r going to update??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Action-packed update!! 😉 Can understand Priya's fear of dogs.. They freak me out too! Actually almost all animals freak me out! 😛 This Yashika will be so shocked after coming to know about RaYa! Can't wait to see her reaction! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saniya9919




Are you going to give update or not ...If you say yes than i will be right awake for the update ...
Otherwise will sleep ...Give me reply plzzz...


Yes i do trust on your writinf especially soft wala .. 😉

Dear Neel, please wait for sometime(wait for few more hours..)...😭 I have to write soft wala when you said about N & J.😛😉
I am so sorry, didn't log on IF yesterday night...You were waiting...


Im confusing with the time ..
few more hours already over ...when are you updating ??

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for liking, commenting & reading.
This part is for Neel. My dear friend because of whom I keep on writing.😛
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Ram enters in the cabin, with trembling heart but swift motion; the picture in the cabin doesn't look good to him as anticipated. 'Okkk Priya. Don't move I am here. Tumhe kuch nahi hoga'

Priya's face glows with joy looking at Ram. Though the dog has crossed the half of the distance from where he was standing before & he continues to keep making strange but horrifying voice Priya looks invigorated after Ram's entry.

Priya: Mr. Kapoorrr!

Miss. Yashika Dewaan remains puzzled staring at them.

Part 20:

As he entered in the cabin on the opposite side of the table where Priya is standing, in next few seconds Ram scans the room acutely. He gets the idea of how circumstances have happened after he left his cabin. Yashika too had gone out to get some paper work done leaving her pet Snow alone behind in the cabin. When Priya called Ram, he didn't realize that Yashika's pet was in the cabin. Obviously, the dog got in his guarding mode against Priya when she entered there. Ram heads towards Priya's side with making an assuring eye contact with Priya, starts folding sleeves of his shirt in determination to take charge of the situation.

Ram: (In low voice with concern) Priya! Just stand like that. Maybe he will just come & sniff (Tries to give her courage)

Priya: Please jaldi kuch kijiye. (Making a lip moment manages to utter, eyes showing fear)

Ram: Tum agar darogi, he will get suspicious about you. So just try to be relaxed. (Grabbing the dog- food packet kept on his table, Ram makes a move where Snow & Priya are standing)

Snow just stands there very still, hackles raised, tail lifted, observing Priya.

Yashika: You are right Ram. Snow is just trying to guard his territory. Its Priya's fault, she entered here.

Ram: For God's sake. Will you just keep your mouth shut Yashika.(Almost reaches behind Snow)

Snow makes a growling sound as Ram's voice gets louder.

Priya: Mr. Kapoor be careful.(Shouts with fear)

Ram stands quickly between Priya & Snow so that placing himself, facing the dog. He bends down & keeps his hand on Snow's head.

Ram: Snow…bravo!

Snow's attention shifts towards Ram, starts sniffing him.

Ram: Have you got your meal buddy! (Runs his hand through Snow's wavy, shinning coat lovingly)

By cowering his tail, Snow moves smoothly closer to Ram making a whimpering sound.

Ram: Hey…let's get some….(Takes out some biscuits to feed Snow)

Snow's tail nods in approval making a pendulum like movement. Priya & Yashika stand in astonishment as Ram pampers & continues to talk with Snow. Snow who was looking like a beast before a while looks like a cute puppy now. Ram makes a gesture suggesting to Priya to come forward by his another hand.

Priya: (Skeptical) Are you sure Mr. Kapoor?

Yashika comes near Snow before Priya come, starts patting Snow.

Yashika: Are you alright Baby? (Cuddles Snow)

Snow makes a growling sound once again;

Ram: Do you understand how he is feeling? Don't annoy him Yashika. (Irritatingly)

Priya still stands behind Ram, hesitant to come in front of Snow.

Ram continues to caress Snow by his left hand, moving his right hand behind so that Priya can hold it.

Ram: (Slightly turning his head behind looks at Priya in sideways) Are you ok? (Soft smile escapes through his lips)

Priya's hand reaches to his hand, the warm touch of his hand wraps around her fingers firmly forming a fist. Her lips twitch into equally enticing smile in response.

Priya: (Nods her head) Huhhh…

Ram tries to bring her forward by holding her hand.

Ram: Snow se dosti kar lo. Otherwise you will have to play the childhood games yet again…Hide & Sick OR Fire in the mountains…run..run..run! (Laughs)

Yashika gets a heart attack looking at Ram who is cracking a joke with a woman.

Priya stands besides Ram with her hand in Ram's hand, looking at Snow. Snow comes closer to her , starts sniffing.

Priya: (Nervously) Ram yeh phirse…(entwine her fingers with his tightly)

Ram: (Stands straight) Shhh! He will sniff and go away. Next time he will recognize you.

Yashika gets restless as she watches Ram & Priya holding their hands tightly.

Yashika: Snow…(lifts the dog in her arms) baby let's go now.(In huff glances at Ram & Priya)

Ram: Arre Yashika! Priya se milkar to jaao. I mean let me introduce.

Cuts him in between…

Yashika: Ohh! I know her. We have already met accidentally. (Still unaware that Priya is Mrs. Ram Kapoor) Ok…Bye.

Ram: Lekin theekse toh pehechaan honey do. Priya, kya tum jaanti ho Yashika ko?

Priya: Abhi kuch der peheley mulaakat huyi.

Yashika starts moving out hurriedly, reaches at the door.

Yashika: (Puzzled turns around when she opens the door) I am not getting that why are you giving so much importance to her (Before slamming the door behind)

Ram scratches his head in bewilderment.

Ram: Ajeeb ladki hai, no wonder if her pet would behave in weird manner.

Priya who is standing beside him,

Priya: (turns around) Jaane dijiye na Mr. Kapoor. Abb sirf 5 mintues hain meeting kay liye (starts to move)

Ram swiftly grabs her hand from behind.

Ram: Wait…

Priya: (Not looking back) Mujhe prints lenay hai. (Lowering her head)

Ram: Aise kaise jaaney du? (Bringing her close by holding her hand)

Priya: (Turns around, facing him) kya? Jaldi bataayiye.

Ram: (Looking into her eyes deeply) Thanks nahi kahogi. (Keeps his both the hands on her shoulders to bring her more close)

Priya:( Clutches his collar tightly by both her hands so that he lowers his face) are you ready?

Their lips inches away, he brings his face closer to her, speaks abruptly.

Ram: As always…

Priya: (Giving an intense look to him) Thanks Mr. Kapoor.

Before his lips reach to hers, she pushes him away by placing her hands on his chest, burst into laughter.

Ram: What it is this? (Shouts) Cheating…

Priya: (Blushing) Meine bol diya 'Thanks'.

Ram: You know well. (Holding her arm) I don't want a formal 'Thanks'. (Kisses her hand)

Priya: (Keeps her left hand on his shoulder) Mr. Kapoor this is your office. (Starts correcting his hair by other her hand, with affection)

Ram: (His arms wraps around her waist) so what? My office! …My wife! (Bending down his head, gives one of his hot looks) Mein kuch bhi kar sakta hun, kissi ka darr thodi na hain?

She feels his bare arms around her waist,

Priya: (Lowers her eyes to avoid his gaze) Koi aayega toh? Koi dekh lega phir? (His touch raises her heart beats; slowly she wraps her arms around his shoulder)

Ram: Don't worry. (Slightly lifting her with his arms) 'Knock' kiye beena koi nahi aayega. (Speaks into her ear, showering his breath)

Both of them start melting in each other's intimacy. The touch, increased hear-beats, their breath sparks off intensifying desire. For a moment, they stand looking into each other's eyes which are conveying a message of their love.

Priya: (Wraps her fingers around back of his neck) you are so stubborn. (She brings his mouth close to cover her lips)

Their lips start moving against each other's lip 1st softly, gently then passionately. In next few seconds he deepens the kiss. By placing his hand around her back, he supports her trembling figure. They remain in heaven like trying to satiate the thirst to feel each other, unaware of rest of the world around them.

Suddenly, the door flew open & Yashika storms in the cabin, before they all could realize anything.

Priya moves away abruptly from Ram's arms breaking the kiss, looking at Yashika. Ram's eyes fills with rage as he sees Yashika in the cabin,

Ram: (Shouts) how can you enter straight away?

xxx

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Sorry for the mistakes, posting it hurriedly.😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow .. leave this yashika . i hate any one between raya..

truely hot.. that too for neel .. haila

Edited by luvbalh - 12 years ago

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