FF:'Yet Unknown.'Part-30 up. on pg.104(14/02/13) - Page 28

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Part 12: Flashback- XI

It is a Friday evening. Priya returned from the college gets freshen up. (She has joined in one of the prestigious institute in the city as a lecturer few months back) As she enters their bedroom she thinks still two more days to go & already she has been 'Missing' Raam so badly. His tour to Dubai is to follow up the progress of his venture in reality sector there. They had hardly talked since he had left to Dubai on Sunday afternoon, except some conversation through SMS & few phone calls. She knows very well that 'how passionate is he when it comes to his work'. Once, he had told her laughingly that 'my wife came into my life very late but before that my work was the only thing which kept me so engrossed…how come I could ditch it now.' The feeling of emptiness because of his absence grew vigorously within her with every passing day. Especially their bedroom has become so lifeless where she would wait for him after returning from the college, she would talk endlessly about her day at the college & other things, he would keep listening to her chatting while working on the laptop & reply in between. She has always amazed by watching how crisply his fingers move on the laptop while he keeps simultaneously conversing with her .His fingers & brain are so accustomed that he does not need to look into what's happening on the screen. Even his employees get awestruck by their boss's multitasking skills. She smiles to herself that even thinking about him makes her so happy that she forgets the world around her.

Just like that, she had forgotten about what had happened today for some time. The day filled with tension, anxiety & restlessness for Priya & her colleagues (friends). She feels weary not physically but mentally as she tries to call her colleague and very close friend 'Shamal'.

At the college in teacher's room Priya & Lekha were sitting as both were having 1st lecture off. The day Priya joined this college as a lecturer; she has found acquaintance with Lekha & Shamal, both the girls in their late twenties. The three of them bonded so well that in short span of time they become best buddies. Priya's seat is in the middle of Lekha's & Shamal's seats around one of the huge elliptical desks which are seating arrangement for the professors. Priya's cell phone beeps, she checks, today there is no call or a single SMS from him, gets irritated looking at a service message. She feels like reading his old messages especially the SMSs conversation before they were going to meet in the Orchid hotel. Of course she has already read no. of times before since last four days. She chuckles looking into her mobile, at the exact moment Lekha observes her friend. She moves her chair close to Priya's chair. Winking at Priya she asks in low voice

Lekha: Humm….why are you smiling? Is there something special?

Priya: (Blushes) No …I am deleting the SMSs. There was a joke.

Lekha: (Knows her) Okk…don't lie. You were blushing at the joke. Show me that joke.

Priya: (Surrenders) Okk…please continue to talk in lower voice otherwise others will get disturbed by us (Glancing at the only two, three professors seating far away from them)They started conversing in low voice.

Lekha: Ok…now show me.

Priya: (Shows her the message blushingly) Subah honey na de, saath khoney na de ek dusrey ko hum soney na de…

Lekha: (Shouts amusingly in low voice) don't tell me. Mr. Ram Kapoor has SMSed you this.

Priya: (Shouts) what do you mean? Of course my husband 'Mr. Ram Kapoor' had SMSed me.

Lekha: I am sorry yaar. Meray kahein ka matlab yeh nahi tha. I never imagined the business tycoon 'Mr. Kapoor' can be so romantic. Such a deadly combination.. handsome, affluent & he loves you so much. Wow!

Priya: Isliye mein tumhey dekha nahi rahein thi.Tum bhi na..

Lekha: Phir aagey kya hua?

Priya: Humlog dinner ke liye 'Orchid' gaye thai.

Lekha: Ohhh! Bade (stretches the word Bade) log…(Teases Priya ) Phir?

Priya: Phir kuch nahi.Ghar aagaye (Lies as she knows Lekha will ask her further details)

Lekha: I know …jaisey aagey kuch hua he nahi hoga my shy friend. (Winks at her) BTW he has a nice song choice [Ok…this one was suggested by Evan]

Priya: (Blushes more) Mein next time tumse kuch share nahi karungi.

Lekha: Ek last question? Bas. Then I will not ask you anything. Subah honey tak soney diya tumhey?

Priya: Mein jaa rahi hun mujhe library mein jaana hain. (Starts to get up)

Lekha: Ok…sorry…sorry…Don't get angry.

Priya: All I have to say is, 'what he says is what he does' (Her cheeks get pink)

Lekha: Oh great! Lucky girl. He is so cool.

Priya: (Smiles) Tum bhi toh lucky ho. Aashu loves you so much.

Lekha swiftly takes out her mobile & shows a pic to Priya.

Lekha: See our Matheran trip pic.

Priya: Wow! It's so cute Lekha. Very lovely!

At the exact time Shamal comes there.Both spot Shamal's pale face, teary eyes when she approaches near her seat & hangs up her phone. A phone call left Shamal shocked, traumatized. They understood that again 'all is not well' between Shamal & her Fianc Amol. Without thinking much Lekha & Priya took her to the quite corridor near college library where they can talk. Shamal was trying to control her sobbing. She talked with Amol's mother & got more tensed when haung up the phone.

Lekha: Is everything alright Shamal?

Shamal: Amol has called me (Teary eyes) He said 'You will never see my face again. Don't ever try to find out about me, I am leaving you forever'. Mein kabb se phone try kar rahi hun. He is not picking up his cellphone. I talked to Amol's mummy. She asked me about what happened between me & him. He was very upset since yesterday evening. Today he left the home early in the morning. Mujhe bahot tension ho rahi hain. (She tries to make a call)

Priya too is shocked now, Lekha quite accustomed to Shamal-Amol's fights, relatively less shocked.

Priya: (Tries to comfort S) Shamal….please don't cry.

Lekha: (Tries to call Amol from her cell phone , very often she resolves their fights but this time he does not reply to her call also, after sometime Amol's phone gets switched off) Phone bhi switch off kar diya. What is happening Shamal?

Shamal: Kal jabb mein ghar jaate waqt Amol ke liye station pe wait kar rahi thi, Shounak (another colleague) bhi train ke liye rukey thai wahanpe. We were chatting & you know how witty Shounak is….so I was laughing on one of the jokes. At the exact moment Amol got down from the train (Before she can continue Lekha yells)

Lekha: Oh shit…Amol had got very angry then.

Priya gets confused…

Lekha: (Continues) God! Shamal, jealousy ki bhi ek hadd hoti hain. Abb meray Aashu ko he dekho. He is so understanding (Lekha loves to flaunt about her BF at every opportunity)

Priya thinks about Raam remembering how crucially he handled Ashwin (Though tensed at the moment she feels how much trust Raam has on her & this 'trust' is so much important in the relationship)

Shamal: When Shaunak left, he asked me that why I couldn't wait alone for him. I tried to explain. But he didn't listen to me. Finally I said "Agar koi ladka aakey meray saath baat karega toh mein yeh toh nahi bol sakti ke Bhai jaao, Amol ko accha nahi laggta hain." Then we had a tiff which turned into a huge fight.

Shamal is irritated with Amol's possessiveness. Priya dumbfounded, not knowing the solution.

Shamal: Abb mujhe darr lagg raha hain, office bhi nahi gaya hai…kahan hoga…kya kar raha hoga.

Lekha: Don't worry. Woh kuch nahi karega (Again tries to call him but his phone is switched off)

Shamal: Amol ki mummy bhi tension mein hai. At least she knows her son well, thank God she understands me.

Lekha: Think again…you still have a chance Shamal. How can you spend your entire life with him?

Priya is shocked now, though Lekha was right it was not the right time to discuss this issue. Even worst it's not the right solution for the issue.

Shamal: Lekha,you know na?… I can't live without him.

Priya's heart goes out to Shamal. Her helplessness! She tries to console her by putting her hand on Shamal's shoulder.

Priya: Don't worry Shamal. Kuch nahi hoga.Sab theek hoga.

They came back to go to their respective classes as the bell rings alerting the next lecture. Shamal tried to contact Amol's friends, relatives to find his whereabouts. Priya & Lekha did their best to support & help their friend in between the lectures. But all the efforts to find out about Amol failed. Shamal left earlier. Lekha assured tensed Priya that not to worry much as these two fight very often & Amol keeps Shamal's pulse rate always high. Both of them feel really sad for it, they hoped & prayed anticipating some news about Amol very soon.

Finally Priya's phone rings, its Shamal who tells her that everything is fine now because as she reached the station Amol was waiting for her there. Priya found Shamal's voice filled with happiness. Priya's face also shines after finding her friend cheerful mood, she goes to the balcony. Shamal continues to unfold the rest of the story in detail. Priya stands there facing the Arabian Sea resting her arm on the railing & another holding a cell phone. She continues to chat with her friend taking a cool breeze. She feels a warm touch to her skin as someone taps on her shoulder very gently. She shivers reacting to a sudden touch which is undoubtedly known rather which tunes her heart's music on, but unanticipated at this moment. Nearly about to drop her cell phone as she turns around in surprise only to find Raam waving hand indicating a warm 'hello' & saying 'SURPRISE' in inaudible voice but visible by his lip movements. Yes, he is standing in front of her. Her eyes & mouth displays disbelief as it remains open widely. She is still listening to Shamal, makes a hand movement as if asking him 'Aap aa gaye?' in surprise. Her face gets enlighten.He liked the way her face responded & beautiful eyes twinkled to his sudden appearance. He thinks to enjoy it more, pinches on her arm, he bursts into laugh.

Priya: Oouch! (Putting her hand on the phone shouts) Aap peheley kahen nahi saktey thai…ke aap aaj aaneywale hain (Hits on his hand playfully)

He grins warmly, tries to grab her close by holding her arm.

Priya: Shamal, please hold on for a second (Pleads him with eyes to stop)

She keeps her hand on phone & talks to Ram.

Priya: Ram please..mein kuch serious baat kar rahi hun.

He makes a puppy face & leaves from there. Though she wanted to talk with him desperately, how could she stop the conversation with Shamal in midway who was pouring her heart out to Priya. As she ends up the conversation with Shamal, she feels satisfied that Amol –Shamal are together & they have resolved the issues between them for the time being. She enters in the bedroom happily, sees no sign of Ram. She remembers his puppy face, feels bad for hurting him. She calls up to Bansi kaka and gets the dinner in the bedroom. She waits for Raam, finally he comes out from their closet dressed in white Kurta-payjma, freshly bathed. He is drying up his wet hairs with the towel (Looking very hot) .For a moment she gets lost in his handsomeness. After regaining her consciousness Priya comes near to him, but he turns around and tries to avoid her. She runs behind him.

Priya: Aap naraaz ho mujhse? Sorry.

He ignores her. She follows him.

Priya: Mein aapse kabhi naraaz hui, itnay dinose aapne mujhse theekse baat bhi nahi ki.

Ram: Toh tum isiliye 'Revenge' le rahi thi.

Priya: Ohh..aap hamesha galat matlab kyon letay ho. Mera matlab hain ki mein samjh sakti hun

ke aapka kaam bahot important hoga isliye aap busy thai. He turns around & stands facing to her.

Ram: Mein jaldse jald kaam khatam karke aana chahta tha, isliye waqt nahi mila.

Priya: Per mein 'complain' thodi na kar rahi hun(Takes the towel from his hand & starts drying up his hair, he bends to make it easy for her) She tells everything about Shamal-Amol very shortly & why she didn't stop their phone conversation. His hands wraps around her waist. She runs her fingers through his wet hairs, continues to dry up his hairs with the towel.

Raam: Tumahra koi friend hai?

Priya: Mein abhi 'Masti' ke mood mein bilkul nahi hun. What difference it makes if I have a male friend?

Raam: Kuch nahi…yuhi. Just for the information.

Priya: Mera ek friend tha per kuch mahino se kuch contact nahi hai usskey saath.Sahyad Dubai chala gaya hai, usske ghar.

Raam: Dubai mein he rahein toh accha hoga(Laughs holding her more tightly brings her closer)

Priya: What do you mean Raam? aapbhi Amol ki tarah..

Raam: Okk..okk…I am just joking (Laughs more)

Yeh khushboo kis cheez ki aa rahi hain (sniffs)

Priya: Arre, khaney ke hai.Aapka favourite butter chiken hain.

Raam: Nahi kuch aur hain. (Sees Mehendi on her hand)Yeh haathpe kya hai dekhney toh do. Takes away the towel from her hand & throws it on the Sofa, holds her both the hands in his hands.

Priya: Aap kya kar rahein ho (Giggles lowering her gaze) Aapko pata chala aapne towel sofepe phek diya.

Raam: Haaa..woh towel jaaney do,abb pata chala ke 'Mehendi' ki khushboo thi woh.(Takes her hands close to his nose & smells deeply with closed eyes) She remains stunned by his tantalizing presence which is accompanied by child like excitement for Mehendi on her hands. She waits for him to open his eyes. He takes a deep breath & opens his eyes.

Priya: Aap ka naam bhi hai uss mein.

Ram: (Traces the design with his index finger) Itna 'miss' kar rahi thi tum mujhe (Looks into her eyes, kisses the palms softly)

Priya: Hunn (Nods in agreement, then holds her hands in front of him) Aap bhi agar mujhe bahot miss kar rahein thai toh aapka naam kahan hain woh aap pehechan paaogey (Challenges with bubbly smile)

Ram: Uss mein naam dhoondney ki kya jarurat hain woh toh mein tumhey aiseyhe bataa sakta hun (winks & brings her closer by wrapping arms around her waist, shoulder by framing her & with intense eyelock)

She starts surrendering into his solid grip by resting her head against into his chest.

Priya: Aapko Mehendi itni acchi laggti hai? (Runs her fingers trough the hairs on his chest)

Ram: Acchi laggi…tumharey haatho per. (Starts kissing softly all over her face)

Priya: Humari shaadi hui thi tabb bhi banayi thi meray haatho pe. (Teases)

Ram: Lekin tumney tabb mujhe dikhayi bhi nahi( Busy in kissing her)

Priya: Sab logoney mujhe bahot 'Tease' kiya tha Mehendike rang se (She somehow manages to speak)

Ram: Kya 'Tease' kiya tha? (Starts nuzzling her face, neck)

Priya: 'Mr. Kapoor' tumse pyaar nahi kartey hai kya? Mehendi kitni fikki lagg rahi hain.'

Ram: (Laughs) I know, yeh colour ka kuch toh relation hota hain na 'Pyaar' se. Ek din Neha mujhse Vikram ke complain kar rahi thi.Dekho na, Ram yeh Vikram mujhse bilkul pyaar nahi karta, meri 'Mehendi' ka colour kitna light hain. Bechaara Vikram.Neha ekdam pagal hain.Tumney kya kahan phir sabse.

Priya: Mein kuch nahi boli per jabb 'Pagg pheray ke rasam' ke waqt sabney meray haath dekh ke, toh kahein laggey , 'arre do dino mein Mr. Kapoor ka itna pyaar aagaya tumpe toh phir aagey kya hoga.Laggta hain inka pyaar waqt ke saath badhneywala hain'

Ram: Bilkul theek kaha tha sabney, abb dekho 'Maroonse almost black colour ho chukka hain' tabb toh 'Red' tha. (The kisses getting more passionate as he moves down from her face to nape, collar bone)

Priya: Matlab aapne tabhi itna observe kiya tha. (Shouts, Shocked looks into his eyes)

Ram: (Winks) Laggta hain tumhey batana hoga ke mein "Naahe kabhi 'Golu' tha , naahe aaj hun, naahe kabhi rahunga.. (He kisses her deeply still Priya grasps for air to breath, both dazed)

Priya: Khaana thanda ho jaayega Raam (Still her hands wrapped around the back of his neck)

Ram: I am not hungry (Making the eye lock more intense, holding her waist by arms)

Priya: Woh Towel toh theekse rakh deti hun.

Ram: Ek kaam kartey hai, hum dono theek se settle ho jaatey hai.

Priya: Mein samjhi nahi( Looks into his eyes)

Ram: Abhi samjhata hun.(Lifts her in his arm & heads towards their bed)

xxx

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay! Me first!!! At last!😛
Aww such a romantic update!
Loved the way Ram surprised Priya!! 😳
Ram noticing Priya's mehendi is so cute!!
Thanks a lot for the PM trupti! 🤗
Edited by balhfan22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very romantic one please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww dear what a start of beutiful morning with your wonderful update...
Its just soothening our minds ,superb and slowly the track turning into rajat kapur side
hmm its intresting and about mehandi awesome lines ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
age kya hua...

totally liked it..

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Posted: 12 years ago
wooowww.great one...ram is very romantic...priyas heart goes out by hs actn...wtng fr further romance betn them
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Posted: 12 years ago
😳😳😳...how sweet...
ram noticed her mehendi color before...wow...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww.. That was so cute and a romantic update yaar... Jealousy in a relationdhip is needed but only to some extent otherwise it can spoil a relationship... Anyways loved the way priya is always thinking abt ram and ram is always on ways to surprise priya... Just love them both... And loved their convo on mehndi... Thanks for PM... Please update soon...

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