FF:'Yet Unknown.'Part-30 up. on pg.104(14/02/13) - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: leena04

awesome saniaa... loved this Part so our Golu is in nuaghty mood but Priya still in sad mood but i know Golu will monofy his gudiya very soon even he started it at the end... so waiting for the next do update it soon very very soon...

Thanks a lot dear for liking & commenting.You have said it all..Will try to update soon.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Siacutie

ram manged her very well luved their dialogues i thought there wud be a big fight but thank gud that dint happen so now golu is in romantic mood lets see what happens

continue soon😊

Thank you so much Sia for liking it, commenting...& for those beautiful, lovely hearts.😃🤗Will try to update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: tasshuu

awesome work cont soon

Thanks tasshu, I am glad you liked it. Will try to update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Swati.😊 Will try to update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: balhfan22

Sorry for the late comment..

Loved the update! It was awesome!!😃
Poor Ram, Priya ko itna gussa kyun aata hai?!😆 Ram was so cute!!😳
Amazing update yaar.. Can't wait for the next part!

Thanks balhfan, I was waiting for your comment.Embarrassed I am glad you liked it.😃🤗
Priya ka 'Gussa' will try to clarify in next update.😊 Thanks yaar...will try to update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: saniya9919

Thanks balhfan, I was waiting for your comment.😳I am glad you liked it.😃🤗

Priya ka 'Gussa' will try to clarify in next update.😊Thanks yaar...will try to update soon.


Aww thanks a lot! 😳 You can call me Suman! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-5 - Flashback IV:

'You just can't stop thinking about me. Don't you?' kisses deeply.

They got this moment after a long time, standing there kissing each other more intensely as if wanting to accomplish each moment which they missed together in past few days. Both remained dazed when their lips apart, holding her back by his right hand to support, Ram removed her hair clip & smoothly allows her falling hairs through his fingers.

Ram: I love your hair. They are smooth like silk. (Smelling, he looks at her.)

She is still mesmerized by him, hand on his chest…other still on his neck…moving through his hairs.

Ram: I love your Bindi. It reminds me that imperfectness can be so enchanting sometimes. (Keeping lips on her forehead & bindi.)

A cute, naughty smile spreads on her face…he is loving imperfectness is exceptional case. Remembers his irritation to her 'tedhi bindi'(sometimes deliberately done by her).

Ram: I love your magnetic eyes they just pull me towards you when I look at you. (Looking in her eyes & breathing deep, drops soft kisses on her eyes, his already intense eyes getting more passionate.)

She is drowning into him more & more with each word each move …

Ram: 'I love the taste of your lips' kissing softly on her lips. 'Aloo parathe se bhi tastey'

(Bites his tongue, he realizes he could have complimented with better use of words. He curses himself for blurting out the word 'Aloo Paratha' at this moment.)

She is wondering but actually loves the compliment. She loves his innocence. She bursts into laugh, blushingly buries her head in his chest

Priya:Ram, aapne aise baatein karna kahase sikha?(Hugging him slowly she asks.)

He too is laughing now, feels relaxed seeing her laughing, puts his chin on her head. He gets her close by holding her waist by one hand & other on her head.

Ram: Kyon, tumhe accha nahi lagga?( Smiling)

Priya: Mujhe toh aapki har cheez acchi lagti hai, par aaj aap alag lagg rahey ho. (She replies with soft, genuine smile.)

Ram: Alag matlab?

Priya:Yeh sab baatein karna… jaise Lohriwali raat Vikramse pucch ke aaye thai kay woh Nehako kaise manata hai?

Ram: Nahi toh, yeh sab mai ek ladkise sikh ke aaya hun.(With naughty smile.)

Priya: Kya?

Ram: Yahi ke 'how to make feel special to someone special.

Priya: Huhh.

Ram: Itna gussa kyon Priya?

Both are still hugging, after some silence.

Priya: I feel insecure Ram. (She breaks the silence in trembling voice. Ram feels the tear drops on his chest)

Ram: Shhh…please stop. Don't cry. (Hugging her more tightly, wipes up her tears.)Ok if you feel better while fighting with me, you can fight but please stop crying (Pleading her)

Priya: Aapko majak lagg raha hai?

Ram: I can't see you crying. For God's sake tell me why do you feel insecure?

Priya: Aap jabhi gussa hotey hai, mujhe 'apaney Papake ghar jaa sakti ho bol detay ho'.Jab Kartik-Natasha ka jhagda hua..aapney mujhe Papake ghar jaake raheny ko kaha.Uss din mainey galtise 'Krishuji' ka naam liya aapney 'Divorce paper' ki baat yaad dila di.( In shaky voice, pouring out her fears)

Ram: Haa.. But I didn't mean it. Mai jab bhi gussa hota hun, control nahi kar pata hun. Kuchbhi bol deta hun.Sorry, mujhe tumse aise baat nahi karni thi.

Priya: Meray saath baatbhi nahi kar rahey thai. Aise lag raha tha ki aap mujhse dur rahena chahtey ho. Hum donoka rishta itna kamjor kaise ho sakta hai Ram.

Ram: Haa yeh sach hai kay mai tumpe gussa tha. Mujhe nahi accha lagga tha, tumney uss aurat ka naam liya. She had already done a lot to suffer me, my family. I don't even want to hear her name.Aur yeh bhi sach hai ki meri jindagi adhuri hai tumharey bina. You are my life Priya'. (Kissing on her forehead)

Priya: Me too sorry Ram, aapse rudely behave karney ke liye aur mujhe sochna chahiye tha aapko jis baatse itna dukh hota hai woh nahi karni chahiye thi. (Clinging to him)

Their hearts were beating on the same rhythm now, on the same musical note.

Ram: Priya tumney apni 'Maa' ki wish puri ki..meray liye khana bananey ki.

Priya: Haa..toh

Ram: Tum daadi ki wish kab puri karogi? (Teasing her)

Priya: Tum nahi hum. (With naughty smile, she is back in her cheerful mood, knows that Ram has been pulling her leg since morning)

Ram: Waise tumney kabhi socha hai baccho ke baarey mai peheley.

Priya: Yes, I wanted to have half dozen. (Happily)

Ram: It's not like eating an apple & you will have a kid Priya….half dozen. (Laughs out loudly)

Priya: Uss mai kya hai.I love kids. (Teasing him)

Ram: Tumney school ya college mai seekha toh rahega na.Bacche paida kaise hotey hai.Tumhey itna toh GK hoga na?( Asking worriedly, does she really have any idea?)

Priya: Obviously…(Pinches him, she is enjoying it now)

Ram: But our age. Tum theek ho na?

Priya:Haa . Aap theek kahey rahey ho, sochna hoga.(Making worried face) Problem ho sakti hai na, isliye four will be fine.Waise aapney suna toh hoga na science kitna advance ho gaya hai.newspaper ya magazine mai?Itni toh GK hai na aapko? (Smiling naughtily)

Ram:Tum theek ho na Priya. Are you ok? Mujhe toh ek baccha soch kay he tension ho rahi hai aur tum char soch rahi ho? (He is really nervous now, sweating)

Priya: Itna paseena kyon aa raha hai aap ko?( Takes the pallu of her dupatta to wipe up his sweat.)

The door bell rings. He was about to move to open the door. Priya stops him by holding his hand.

Priya: Aapko sambhalna char baccho ko sambhalney jaisa hai. (She wipes up his sweat; lipstick on his mouth…corrects his hair.)Don't worry Ram; you & two more will be fine. (Winking at him, teasingly)

XXX

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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
awww it was so sweet 😍 Ur lips r more tasty than aloo ka parath 😆 nyc comparison.
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so sweet :)..plz upd8 soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
So sweet update.. Agar priya na hoti to ram ka kya hota...? Do update soon

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