SS-'Tanhayee-An Emptiness'update pg-51&52 (9 june) - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: luvbalh

hey i just rea dthe update am loving it totally plz whats next whats coming up..


thnks dear... glad that u liked the stry... next update will be up soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: tasshuu

please please our princess deservs the best treatment not this treatment how could her family do this to her...

if she does so much sacrifice for her family cant they atleast prepare dinner for her...

oh god fell like killing those people who are respinsible for priyas such condition...

yeah... i too felt that was way to much... but vat to do... my mind and hands are out of my control... 😉😉
well abt her family many thngs are yet to disclosed... which even i dnt knw...
😲😲😲u want to kill her family members now... then i wonder vat u'll do as the story proceeds
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sss283

Starting mein hi rula diya na..!!!...can't see priya in this state...pls kuch karo na...
i was expecting 3 pages...par mujhe ek hi mila..😭😭...cheating😉
jaldi update karo na next part...next 2 parts...
btw it was a superb one...

awww my dear... sry for making u cry... but u trust me... if yes than gud if not then too gud bcoz even i dnt trust my mind... its getting weird ideas for the end of this SS...
and abt the 3 page i have already commented that it was 3 page in word with 1.5 line spacing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Anamika163


lol Neel ! Kakul ko pakadna mushkil hi nehi na mumkin hai😆

😲😲😲 Anu dear ne toh mujhe DON bana diya... jisko pakadna na mumkin hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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FOr all other comments i'll comment later sorry in a hurry...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
PArt 1 - pg 4
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Part 2

At airport

We see Vikram, Rishab and a girl waiting desperately for someone…after some time a man comes and says,

Man: Vikram sir, the flight is delayed by 30-40 minutes. They are saying some other flight is about to land so…

But before he could complete his sentence…

Girl: how dare they… how could they do this with my Prince… how??? I want his flight to land asap… or else it won't be good neither for them nor for you…

Vikram: Doll cool… agar usse pata chal gaya tum naraaz hui… toh…

Girl: yeah yeah I know…

Vikram to man: jao aur make it fast…

In Flight

We see a man sitting and looking outside the plane, just then

Aditi (his assistant)- Sir, we'll be going to office or…

The Man turns to look at his assistant and we see he is our RAM KAPOOR

Ram: Aditi yaha se office… never, I'm sure my princess must be waiting for me at airport… its almost 1 month since I met her… so office… !!!

Jab tak woh mujhse dil bhar ke baat nahi kar leti hai… office is not possible…

Aditi: ur princess!!! Ur daughter

Ram: No….

Aditi: hmmm I know… Ur wife

Ram: nods in negative, wife aur daughter hone ke liye shaadi bhi toh honi chaahiye

Aditi: then.. u have no sis…

Ram: my princess… Natasha Malhotra, u know Mr. Anand Malhotra

Aditi: yeah from Malhotra and associates, our lawyers

Ram: hmm, right actually he was very close to my father… so Natasha has always been close to me...

Soon the flight lands… and as expected by Ram, his princess was there to receive him…

In car

Natasha: Okay, so now when ur back, mujhe aapko 2 logo se milana hai…

Ram: okay mam…

Natasha: toh aaj raat ko 10pm humhe party mai jana hai, toh u better be ready by 9pm.

Ram:yeh mam… aur kuch

Natasha: yes, kal bhi aap apne ko free rakhiyega…

Vikram: par doll kal toh Board ofDirectors ki meeting… h…ai

(his words trails seeing the anger creeping on Natasha's face)

Ram: yes princess who toh jaruri hai…. Par haan shaam ko free hu…

Natasha: shaam ko!!! Okay then I'll confirm that program later… okay

Ram: okay… anything else my princess

Natasha (still thinking deeply) mmm…. No… abhi ke liye toh itna hi..

Ram: okay… (looking at Aditi) sab note kar liya na… varna yeh mujhe nikalegi job se aur mai tumhe…)

Aditi: yes sir sab note kar liya hai…

Natasha: Hi aditi sorry voh CK kea age mujhe kuch dikha hi nahi… anyways do get scare… kuch galat bhi hua toh CK ka toh pata nahi par tumhari job ko kuch nahi hoga… so chill

And (looking towards Ram) CK u better not portray me as a cruel person…

Do comment good or bad... and hit "LIKE" if u like the part...
I know this is not that good... sorry for that next part will be much better...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
plz story ko jaldi aage karo other wise its nice and intersting story
Edited by viny_queen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
hmm so mr.ram kapoor ka entry hogaya so meet them soon .. and next update i want both ram and priya ..pllzzz thanks for the pm ...
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
It's not good...But it is very very very very Good...❤️
Very very well written..
Update soon!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

expected a bit longer update :(

anyways, the story is very interesting :D now plz update soon ;)

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