First FF -Zindagi na milegi dobara Pt17 Pg 59 updt

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Afnaan Hussain

@dayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Take A bow Angie ji for those expressive dialogues by Ram

btw yes dhivehi is the native language of Maldives

Edited by dayabhi - 13 years ago

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Wow Angie, 👍🏼Amazing Ram, this is what I wanted from Ram, I am so...😭 so beautiful.. Please update soon.. waiting..

Edited by fanraya - 13 years ago

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azk92

@azk92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: fosla

Oh how can I forget that? You are my twin sis who resides in IF!!😆

It's becoming longer than I expected. Damn..Hope to finish it before 5 parts now.

Awww thanks for all the kind words girl!! You sure know how to motivate me to write... But nope.. Not happening!!

Glad you are loving it!!

LOL hahaa

OHMYGOD JUST READ PART 3!! You got me teary girl!! 😭

What is this some sort of revenge?

I'm speechless! Really have no words!!

It's too good!

Post as many parts as you want! hahaha :) we'll keep reading!

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musiquelover

@Musiquelover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

angie kya baat hai ...amby ek dam gussa nikal rahi hai angie tho ... wah take a bow baby...

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nandinimp

@nandinimp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: fosla

This is RK's attempt and I have no part in it.

RK : Kya hua Nandini? Itna dil ko zor mat dena.. All is well baby.. Say it with me.
Can't hear it.. Try again baby!!
I hear ya.. PK will be dealt by all you guys in your writings..

Now smile and wait for the Jr Goli to rock. Cheer up!

thanks angie.. that made me smile indeed.. and when i see a smiling Ram kapoor, i smile too..

thanks again

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azk92

@azk92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Sreearabhi
angie kya baat hai ...amby ek dam gussa nikal rahi hai angie tho ... wah take a bow baby...

not even entire gussa! she took the emotional blackmail instead of the raging bull route!! which is why i love it!! LOL

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Nancy

@NancyNuts

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

wow m pleasantly shocked, Angie Di, aap toh chupi rustam nikli😆

u can write so good, i mean first attempt and u nailed it!👏

such emotional dialogues for Ram, OMG, u left me with tears😭, exactly expressed the pain he is going thru😭

and don't u say "first and last OS"😲, u are to write more for us,warna..😈😈(accha let it be to vent out ur anger on PK😆)

eagerly waiting for the next part Angie Di😳

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fosla

@fosla

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

PART 4

R : Tum hain kya faraq padta hai Priya? Tum toh chod ke jaane waali ho. Mera parwa kyun karegi?

P : Aap ko aisa lagta hai Ram?

R : Itne din jo tum nautanki kar rahi thi naah Priya usko main khatam karoonga.

Priya is shocked. She is worried about how things were moving in the reverse direction. She has never felt as helpless as this before. Ram places his finger on his mouth and asks for her to stay quiet. Tum hari baat karne ka aur mera zindagi ke saath khel na ka waqt khatam hogaya Mrs. Priya Ram kapoor.

R : Har pal main yahi sochta tah ki main tumhari duniya main kushiyan kaise la sakhoon. Tumhare liye main toh apna suit ko bhi bye boldiya tah. Jis suit sirf naha ne ke waqt mere saath nahi hote the, woh mere liye ajnabee ban gaye the. Kyunki tum hari baat ko maan rakne keliye. Meri zindagi ko yahan tak badal diyi thi tu ne. Sab kuch dediya maine..Aur yeh sab karte hue mujhe sirf khushi mili. Mujhe laga ki hum dono ek doosre ko kami poori kardenge. Aur jab parpota ka baat lekhe Dadi aayi thi, hamari zindagi ka sabse bada faisla lena pada. Maine vikram Neha ke bacchon ko bhi tum hare bolne ke wajah se baby sitting kiya tha.

Aur jab hum ne bacche ki baat decide kiye the, my happiness was unlimited. Even multifold than the times we became one. This was our one nanni munni jaan who would be brought in this world. It would be a part of us. An extension of ourselves. Maine ek minute main us choti si gudiya ki poori zindagi dekhliya tah. Yaad hai tum he jab choti maa bann ne waali thi Priya, main kitna khush hogaya tah. Yakeen mano.. iss baar meri khushi uss se bhi zyaada. Mere bapuji ki khwaish bhi poori ho ja sakta tah. Aur uss din maine tumhare aakhon main bhi woh sapne dekha. Tum hare khushi bare chehra aaj bhi mujhe yaad hai.. Uske saath woh adhoora hug..

Waqai main humare zindagi ka accha pal bhi adhoora hi rehgaya..Aur aaj main itna akele kabhi nahi mehsoos kiya.. Jab meri maa mere se door gayi.. dukh hua.. bahut gussa bhi.. par aaj woh sab main feel kar raha hoon Priya woh duniya ke saare shabd ki keha nahi payenge. I have never felt more incomplete.

Ram closes his eyes and breathes a sigh.

Priya drops on her knees not able to handle the weight of emotions falling on her. She knew she had caused the damage. She knew it was her hopes for securing Ram's future that has overriden her concern of the hurt she was causing in the present. It was all happening like a bad dream. She wished she could close her eyes and wake up to find them false.

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fosla

@fosla

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Nancy_NUTS
wow m pleasantly shocked, Angie Di, aap toh chupi rustam nikli😆
u can write so good, i mean first attempt and u nailed it!👏
such emotional dialogues for Ram, OMG, u left me with tears😭, exactly expressed the pain he is going thru😭
and don't u say "first and last OS"😲, u are to write more for us,warna..😈😈(accha let it be to vent out ur anger on PK😆)

eagerly waiting for the next part Angie Di😳

Awww!! Thanks Nancy the super writer!! Iam glad you felt it was good!!

Main toh har cheez main chupi rushtam hoon.. ab tak toh tum he pata chal na chahiye naah😉😆

Yes.. This is an attempt to initially cover up the hurt part or like I say Ram's perspective(if ever he had a heart not as big as the one projected!) Thanks a ton! It makes me super happy that you felt the pain.. That's my takeaway if I could make that true!

Part 4 is here!