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luvbalh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

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just read all part in one go... u have written v beautifully... loved each & every scene... glad to knw that ram has a collection of so many pics of priya... & i'm also happy to knw that in ur ff priya is with kk... pls want next update soon... thank u & sorry 4 late comment... update asap !!!

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haribol79

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Hey.. read all 4 parts in one in go...story is really moving nicely... liked the description of places too...

continue soon.

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Lavanya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Hey.. Sry fr the late reply..
That was really awesme.. WAiting fr more..:-)

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Karamjit kaur Sekhon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

wow wonderful its just awesome Keep it up

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fosla

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Nandini

Wow!!! I read the 4 parts in one go girl.. It was definitely a fiction that I would bookmark to read. Short and crisp parts and making the viewer glued to their seat for the next part.

The intro of the changed Ram was mindblowing. Loved how you brought that out. The lone man in the shore was beautiful. The hurt was evident naah with PK's letter revealing things and the disappearance after the divorce. Love how you kept the man still in love post all this. The portraits of a smiling Priya was another hit. Dadi and Rishabh are gonna be crucial in this atleast. hopefully they are more than silent spectators.

The mutual pain and the feeling of happiness at the new arrival was splendid. Can't wait for things to unfold and Ram to find his Priya.

Why has he still spared the evil family and let them enjoy the benefits of KM?

You are a fabulous writer girl. Keep it up! I think we should chuck Sita Gita productions and start Eena Mina Tina productions!!😉

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SriB

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Amazing, awesome, fantastic, fabulous Nandini. You are a great writer. You brought out Rams and Priyas connection so well. The heart to heart connect was so evident that it brought tears to my eyes. You brought the letter in so well leaving everything to imagination that it was heart wrenching that letter mein kya Hoga. Rams new avatar speaks volumes about the turmoil in his heart. You are a superb writer.please keep writing and giving us quick updates dear

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nandinimp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: fosla
Nandini

Wow!!! I read the 4 parts in one go girl.. It was definitely a fiction that I would bookmark to read. Short and crisp parts and making the viewer glued to their seat for the next part.
The intro of the changed Ram was mindblowing. Loved how you brought that out. The lone man in the shore was beautiful. The hurt was evident naah with PK's letter revealing things and the disappearance after the divorce. Love how you kept the man still in love post all this. The portraits of a smiling Priya was another hit. Dadi and Rishabh are gonna be crucial in this atleast. hopefully they are more than silent spectators.
The mutual pain and the feeling of happiness at the new arrival was splendid. Can't wait for things to unfold and Ram to find his Priya.
Why has he still spared the evil family and let them enjoy the benefits of KM?

You are a fabulous writer girl. Keep it up! I think we should chuck Sita Gita productions and start Eena Mina Tina productions!!😉

thanks angie, We all know that Ram must have been furious after the break up but then he is such a wonderful person that he knows to look for and find the larger picture and has never ever been bothered about short term goals... That is why his love still lives strong and proud...

that is what i set out to portray...