FF: Gori teri aankhein kahein Updt P17 Pg71 on29/9 - Page 22

Originally posted by: salsaly

so beautiful... lovely... ❤️... u knw sumthing... today i played that song bolna halke halke... wow... i love that song... 😳... thanks dear... 🤗

continue asap... precap looks v interesting... 😳

Originally posted by: veena23

wooow super update...love it...👏👏

"Har pal aisa kuchh na kuchh kyun ho jata hai jisse tum yaad aa jati ho? Main janta hoon.. ye sab tum hi kar rahi ho. Tum chahti ho na ki main zindagi bhar aise hi yaadon mein jeeta rahoon? sazaa de rahi ho na mujhe?" pain clouded his eyes.

ufff so much painfull bt vry required & well executed...

⭐️ love the update

Originally posted by: Pinkjali

It was chumeshwari update. I almost gaved an heart attack to my fellow room mate by my shouting in excitment when ram taped priya shoulder. Pls pls pls update soon.

Originally posted by: fanraya

👏Wow, so emotional, really lovely,Awesome update. Please update soon, can't wait for the next one..

Originally posted by: IndYa4u

Ma'am. You sure know how to keep us on the edge.

hehehe.. just wanted to have some fun with you all.. 😉

Fantastic chapter. Loved the part "Main janta hoon.. ye sab tum hi kar rahi ho. Tum chahti ho na ki main zindagi bhar aise hi yaadon mein jeeta rahoon? "

And Priya's Covo with photo frame . ""Kya ye aap hi kar rahe hain Ram? Main jaanti hoon ki ye aap hi hain kyunki aisa ehsaas, aisi bechaeni mujhe aapke siwa koi nahi de sakta."

Awesome touch my friend... 👏

thanks MP! I really love soppy dialogues.. lol! But seriously, wanted to give them a connect, hence this.

Ram and Priya's meeting/eyelock was great.. and "Mumma"... wow.. 😛

😳

DK in the story opened up so many doors of imagination now. WHo? What? Why? When? and back to WHO the heck is DK. 😲 😲

haha...

😃 hahaha.. things going to unroll soon..

Can't wait for the next chapter girl.


Will update soon!

Originally posted by: maris08

Punya beautiful.. Loved the ay you have proceeded to the future..Evil trio was mentioned in just a paraand that sums it up well...

Thanks Maris! I was having 'fuse bulb moments' with the Eviltrio track. Then thought of taking the easiest way and wrapped the whole track like this. Was sure none of you'll all be interested in reading about them.. hihihi..

Priya's attire is different and I like the way Ram was taken aback by the kid calling her mumma..

Now am tearing my head over who is DK..Getting an idea, but dont want to spoil youyr suspense..😆

Hmmm.. kya tum bhi wahi soch rahi ho jo main soch rahi hoon...LOL!

Now lets see how things so about..Very nice; continue..

Hey, thanks for reading and liking! Will update soon!

Originally posted by: PunyaS

hey Saly,

Thanks for reading.

whoa! Thats called telepathy.. hahaha..

Those lines from the song just popped up involuntarily while I was thinking about their chance meet. Glad you liked them.

and thanks for the pic.

Originally posted by: love4raya

omg!!! awsum... pls continue soon.. i was so engrossed i reading k i forgot that part 7 ended.. :) now whoz this DK?? i just hi\ope ram doesnt think hez P's husband or something..